2020中考英語(yǔ)作文熱點(diǎn)素材范文14-減負(fù)

2020中考英語(yǔ)作文熱點(diǎn)素材熱點(diǎn)14減負(fù)減負(fù)無(wú)疑是今年的火爆熱點(diǎn)之一，它給我們的生活帶來(lái)了很大的影響。今天，選擇的2020年中考英語(yǔ)寫作預(yù)測(cè)話題是：減負(fù)。d減負(fù)中國(guó)式6d減負(fù)中國(guó)式6'預(yù)測(cè)題目】一）假如你是李明，你的美國(guó)朋友Jack聽(tīng)說(shuō)中國(guó)的中小學(xué)正在減輕學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)，來(lái)信詢問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫一封回信，談一談減負(fù)給你的學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來(lái)的變化。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：過(guò)去課后常常做很多作業(yè)，甚至周末會(huì)上課，睡得很晚；現(xiàn)在有很多自由時(shí)間讀課外書，參觀博物館等；周末不上課，可做自己想做的事情晚上有時(shí)間看新聞，不必再熬夜；補(bǔ)充一兩點(diǎn)個(gè)人情況。書信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.詞數(shù)：60-80；3.內(nèi)容要連貫得體。參考詞匯：usedtov.過(guò)去常常freeadj.自由的museumn.博物館DearJack,Hownicetohearfromyouagain!Lovelyyours,LiMing參考范文】DearJack,Hownicetohearfromyouagain!YouwanttoknowwhatisgoingoninschoolsinChina?Inshort,thingshavechangedalot.Iusedtohavetodoendlesshomeworkafterclassandattendclassesevenonweekends.NowIhavemorefreetime.Icandosomereadingandvisitmuseumsandsoon.Onweekends,Icanfollowmyowninterestssuchasgoingforamovieandvisitingfriends.IntheeveningsIcanwatchmewsonTY.What'smore,Iinterestssuchasgoingforamovieandvisitingfriends.IntheeveningsIcanwatchmewsonTY.What'smore,Icangotobedearlier.LovelyyoursLiMing解析】本文是材料作文，關(guān)于中小學(xué)正在減輕學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)，文章的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給了出來(lái)，因?yàn)槭菍?duì)比減負(fù)前和減負(fù)后的情況，所以要注意時(shí)態(tài)，減負(fù)前用過(guò)去時(shí)，減負(fù)后用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描寫的時(shí)候要以時(shí)間為順序，選擇合適的單詞或短語(yǔ)、句型把要點(diǎn)的含義恰當(dāng)?shù)谋磉_(dá)出來(lái)，考生還需要用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞把各要點(diǎn)連接成流暢的文章，同時(shí)要變換使用各種句式，豐富文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。二)減負(fù)之后，同學(xué)們有了更多的課余時(shí)間。某校英語(yǔ)角就“如何讓課余生活更有意義？”展開了討論，大家各抒己見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下圖提示，以“HowToMakeOurSpareTimeMoreMeaningful?”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。注意：(1)短文應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫;詞數(shù)90左右，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。(4)參考詞匯：提升素養(yǎng)promoteliteracyHowtomakeoursparetimemoremeaningful?Nowadays,westudentshavemuchmoresparetimethaneverbefore,buthowtomakeoursparetimemoremeaningful?【參考范文】Nowadays,westudentshavemuchmoresparetimethaneverbefore,buthowtomakeoursparetimemoremeaningful?Myschoolmatesgivethefollowingsuggestions.First,it'sgoodtohelpourparentsdosomehouseworktoshowourloveforthem.Second,wewillknowmoreabouttheworldbyreading.Third,itisagoodchanceforustogetclosetonatureandrelaxourselves.Inmyopinion,wecandosomesportstomakeusstrongerandhealthier.What'smore,wecantakeanactivepartinsomesocialactivitiesasvolunteerstohelpthoseinneed.Inaword,let'smakefulluseofoursparetimeandpromoteourliteracy.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，要表達(dá)如何讓課外生活更有意義。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如agoodchancetodo,getcloseto,inmyopinion,what'smore,takeanactivepartin,inaword,makefulluseof,sparetime以及“比較級(jí)and比較級(jí)"等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。真題再現(xiàn)（一）為了促進(jìn)中小學(xué)生健康成長(zhǎng)，近日教育部印發(fā)了《中小學(xué)生減負(fù)措施》（減負(fù)三十條）。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你站在中學(xué)生的立場(chǎng)從下面幾個(gè)方面向你的英國(guó)筆友Mike簡(jiǎn)單介紹其中的內(nèi)容，并談?wù)勀阕约旱目捶?。作業(yè)方面：初中家庭作業(yè)不超過(guò)90分鐘；電子產(chǎn)品方面：嚴(yán)禁學(xué)生將手機(jī)帶入課堂；習(xí)慣方面：上課專心聽(tīng)講，課后主動(dòng)復(fù)習(xí)；4?你的看法注意：1.詞數(shù)80~100；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；4.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearMike,Inordertoimprovestudents'health,ourcountrycarriedout30rulestoreduce（減少）students'pressure（壓力）.Letmetellyousomethingaboutthem.Doyouhavesuchrules?Hopeforyourreply.Yours,LiHua參考范文】DearMike,Inordertoimprovestudents'heath,ourcountrycarriedout30rulestoreduce（減少）students'pressure（壓力）.Letmetellyousomethingaboutthem.Generally,itfallsintofourparts.AndIwillintroducetoyouthreeofthemwhichareclosetousstudents.Firstly,homeworkformiddleschoolstudentsshouldtakenomorethan90minutessothatwewillhavemoretimetorelax.Secondly,mobilephonesshouldn'tbeallowedtoappearinclassbecauseweareeasilyabsent-mindedfromthelesson.Thirdly,studentsareexpectedtolistencarefullyandgooverlessonsintimesothattheycanmastertherightmethodoflearning.Inmyopinion,theserulesarehelpfultousstudents.Ifwefollowthem,wecanimproveourstudyaswellashealth.Doyouhavesuchrules?Hopeforyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】題目解讀：本文是一篇書信作文，作文內(nèi)容是向筆友介紹《中小學(xué)生減負(fù)措施》，提示給出三個(gè)方面作業(yè)方面、電子產(chǎn)品方面和習(xí)慣方面。除介紹這三個(gè)方面外，還需要發(fā)表自己的看法。字?jǐn)?shù)控制在80-100字。根據(jù)提示可知，文章主要人稱是第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，題材為說(shuō)明文。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本例文采取多段式的寫法，第一段總領(lǐng)全文，以“Letmetellyousomethingaboutthem.”開頭，引出下文對(duì)措施的介紹，第二、三和四段采用分條分段的方式，分別從作業(yè)方面、電子產(chǎn)品方面和習(xí)慣方面三個(gè)方面介紹，第五段以“Inmyopinion...”開頭引出自己的想法。這樣分段條理清晰，表述明確。上下文的連接過(guò)渡詞使用得當(dāng)，文中多次應(yīng)用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、從句和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，為文章增色。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：beexpectedto；goover；intime；sothat；inmyopinion；behelpfulto；aswellas。句型：AndIwillintroducetoyouthreeofthemwhichareclosetousstudents.；Secondly,mobilephonesshouldn'tbeallowedtoappearinclassbecauseweareeasilyabsent-mindedfromthelesson.；Ifwefollowthem,wecanimproveourstudyaswellashealth.（二）最近,為了給學(xué)生減負(fù),部分地區(qū)出臺(tái)了一系列政策限制學(xué)生上各種各樣的補(bǔ)習(xí)班。對(duì)此,家長(zhǎng)和學(xué)生持有不同的觀點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)你以“Shouldparentsstoppushingtheirchildrenfromclasstoclass?'為題，參照表內(nèi)提供的信息,寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。ParentsideasYourideas?strengthen（鞏固）whatislearnedinclass2.begoodfortheirfuture2....3.learnalot3.…要求:1.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中家長(zhǎng)的觀點(diǎn)和你的至少三個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。詞數(shù):80詞左右。參考范文】Shouldparentsstoppushingtheirchildrenfromclasstoclass?Nowadays,someparentsstoppushingtheirchildrenfromclasstoclass,butsomedon't.Becausetheywanttopreparebetterlivesfortheirkids.Andtheybelieveitcanhelpthemlearnmore,whichisgoodfortheirfuture.Afterall,know-ledgeislife.However,Idontthinkso.Ontheonehand,westudentsneedorganizedactivities.Ontheotherhand,weareundertoomuchpressure,soweneedtimeandfreedomtorelaxourselves.Also,weneedtimetodothingsbyourselves.So,Ithinkparentsshouldgiveusabitmoretimetoourselves.【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目要求寫要不要給孩子上各種補(bǔ)習(xí)班，為什么家長(zhǎng)要給孩子上補(bǔ)習(xí)班，最后給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文通過(guò)對(duì)要不要給孩子上各種補(bǔ)習(xí)班，為什么家長(zhǎng)要給孩子上補(bǔ)習(xí)班，最后給出自己的觀點(diǎn)等一一講述。語(yǔ)句通順，條理清晰，詞組，短語(yǔ)，句型等運(yùn)用靈活。3.高分亮點(diǎn):stopdoing,preparefor,it做形式賓語(yǔ)；非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；afterall,諺語(yǔ)know-ledgeislife,OntheonehandOntheotherhand,byourselves等。（三）現(xiàn)如今很多學(xué)生都在抱怨學(xué)習(xí)壓力太大,以此為題,寫篇不少于80字的文章。【參考范文】AsastudentIamverypleasedtoseethattheburdenoflearninghavereduced.Endlesshomeworkandclassesmademecrazyandweallhatelearning,butwehavenochoicebuttoacceptthem.Nowdaystheburdenoflearninggraduallyreduce:weneednottogotoschoolsoearly,wehavefewerjobs,onweekendsandholidayswedon'tneedtoworryaboutmakingupamissedlesson.Wecanhavemorefreetimetoplaygamestogetherwithstudentsandfriends,havemoretimetorest,toseeourfavoritefilmsandtelevision,toreadsomeinterestingbooks.Haveagoodresthelpustomeetthelessonsmoreofspirit.Ofcourse,wecannotbecompletelystudyfreetimemeansthatwecanmakefulluseoftimetoimprovelearningwithinallitissurelythatreducingburdenbenefitallstudents.作為一名學(xué)生，我很高興看到學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)減輕了，沒(méi)完沒(méi)了的家庭作業(yè)和課堂作業(yè)讓我瘋狂，我們都討厭學(xué)習(xí)，但我們別無(wú)選擇，只能接受。現(xiàn)在學(xué)習(xí)的負(fù)擔(dān)逐漸減輕了：我們不必這么早就上學(xué)了，我們的工作更少了，周末和節(jié)假日我們不用擔(dān)心補(bǔ)課。我們可以有更多的空閑時(shí)間和同學(xué)們一起玩游戲，有更多的時(shí)間休息，看我們最喜歡的電影和電視，讀一些有趣的書。好好休息，幫助我們更多地吸取精神上的教訓(xùn)當(dāng)然，我們不能完全研究自由時(shí)間意味著我們可以充分利用時(shí)間，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率。所有這一切肯定是減負(fù)惠及所有學(xué)生。四）寫作要求：作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。面這幅照片展現(xiàn)了女兒為回家媽媽拿包的情景。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)這幅照片的理解用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。你的短文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：描述照片內(nèi)容，如情景、人物、動(dòng)作，等等；結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，談?wù)勀愕母邢?；舉例說(shuō)明你能為家長(zhǎng)減負(fù)做些什么?！緟⒖挤段摹縏heburdenofstudentshasbeenahottopicforyears,buttheloadofparentshasreceivedlittlaettention,especiallyfromtheirownchildren.Thepictureshowsusatouchingmomentwhenalittlegirlcomestogreetherworkingmom.Realizingmommustbeverytiredafteraday'swork,thegirlhelpstoremovethebagfromhershoulder.Inrespomomkneelsdowntoshowhowhappyandthankfulshefeels.Allthisremindsmeofmymotherwhohasbeendoingwhatevershecouldtoletmehavethebest.Butengagedinmyownstudy,Iseldompaymyattentiontowhatmotherneedsandfeels,andalwaysthinkstuwellistheonlythingIcoulddoinreturn.NowIknowIcandomybittohelpwiththeeverydaywashicleaning,oratleastpreparebreakfastmyself,soastosharemother'sdailyburden.Thepictureconvievenmoreimportanttobeagooddaughterthana"good"student.常用耒迖1.SoIthinkthisactivitybenefitsnotonlyourhealthbutalsoourstudy.2.Inmyopinion,wecandosomesportstomakeusstrongerandhealthier.What'smore,wecantakeanactivepartinsomesocialactivitiesasvolunteerstohelpthoseinneed.Inaword,let'smakefulluseofoursparetimeandpromoteourliteracy.Inthiswaywewillbeabletolearnmuchmoreandbemoreeffectiveinourstudies.Inanutshell,reducingthelearningburdennotonlygivesusmoretimetohavefunbutalsooffersafreedomtodeveloponourown.Middlemiddleschoolstudentswereheavilyburdenedwithallkindsofhomework.Weareyoungandwehaveyounghearts.Welovestudyaswellasamusements.Wehopethatthenumberofexercisesclasswillbereducedsowecantakepartinmoreafter-classactivities.Hownicetohearfromyouagain!YouwanttoknowwhatisgoingoninschoolsinChina?13.Inordertoimprovestudents'heath,ourcountrycarriedout30rulestoreducestudents'pressure.14.Ifwefollowthem,wecanimproveourstudyaswellashealth.15.RecentlyI'vemadeasurveyaboutthe“ReducingBurden”activitybeingcarriedinourschool．寫作模板Thetopicof①（主題）isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.SomepeoplesayAistheirfavorite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof②（支持A的理由一）Whatismore,③理由二）.Moreover,④（理由三）.WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.Firstly,（支持B的理由一）.Secondly（besides）,?（理由二）.Thirdly（finally）,?（理由三）.Frommypointofview,Ithink⑧（我的觀點(diǎn)）.Thereasonisthat⑨（原因）.JAsamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformerissurelyawise必背范文（一）你校為推進(jìn)素質(zhì)教育，進(jìn)行了教學(xué)“減負(fù)”活動(dòng)。假如你是學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)的學(xué)習(xí)部長(zhǎng)，對(duì)“減負(fù)”前后的情況進(jìn)行了調(diào)查，調(diào)查情況如下圖，請(qǐng)根據(jù)此圖寫一篇文章發(fā)表在校報(bào)上。

注意：1.短文必須包括圖表內(nèi)容；2.可適當(dāng)增加評(píng)注性語(yǔ)言；詞數(shù)100左右；文章的第一段已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。RecentlyI'vemadeasurveyaboutthe“ReducingBurden”activitybeingoocla．rr_i_e_d__i_n__o_ursch參考范文】RecentlyIhavemadeasurveyaboutthe“ReducingBurden”activitybeingcarriedinourschool.Wemiddleschoolstudentsusedtobeheavilyburdenedwithallkindsofhomework.Wespentmorethan6hoursintheclassroom.Athome,westillhadtospendover3hoursonourhomework.Sowehadlessthan7hourstosleep.Besides,wehadonlyabout3hour‘sfreetime.Asaresult,ourhealthwashardlydamaged.Nowthingsaregettingbetter,thankstotheactivity.Wecanonlyspendabout5hoursintheclassroomandhoursforhomeworkareshortenedtoabouttwohourssothatwehavetwomorehourstosleepandalsotwomorehoursforfreetime.SoIthinkthisactivitybenefitsnotonlyourhealthbutalsoourstudy.給學(xué)生“減負(fù)”成了當(dāng)前的熱門話題。那么，你認(rèn)為學(xué)生的負(fù)擔(dān)重不重？重在哪里？過(guò)重的學(xué)業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)會(huì)造成什么樣的后果？請(qǐng)你就這些問(wèn)題，結(jié)合你自己的實(shí)際情況談?wù)効捶?，并將你的看法寫成一篇因果說(shuō)明文【參考范文】Weareatseniorhighschool.Everyday,wehavemanyexercisesthatwecantcompleteandmanybooksthatwecantfinishreading.Theteacherscontinuallyrepeatthewordsthatwearealreadyabletorecite.Teachersandstudentsallworkhardinordertoimprovethepercentagesofthoseenteringcollege.Buttheburdenofworkinclassissoheavythatwehavelittletimetodosports,whichhasleftmanyofusinpoorhealth.What'sworse,manystudentshavelostinterestintheirstudiesaltogether.Itisknowntoallthatgoodhealthisasimportantasknowledge.Virtuessuchasbravery,disciplineandloveofourmotherlandcantbelearnedonlyinclasses,butshouldalsobelearnedthroughsocialpractice.Weshouldbegiventhetimeandopportunitytobeexposedtosocietysowecanlearnwhatcantbetaughtfrombooks.Weareyoungandwehaveyounghearts.Welovestudyaswellasamusements.Wehopethatthenumberofexercisesclasswillbereducedsowecantakepartinmoreafter-classactivities.Inthiswaywewillbeabletolearnmuchmoreandbemoreeffectiveinourstudies.本文第一段和第二段前半部分是擺學(xué)校課業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)重的事實(shí)，談的是原因。從第二段后半部分開始分析負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重帶來(lái)的結(jié)果。作者分析了四種結(jié)果，即負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重會(huì)影響身體健康，會(huì)使學(xué)生失去學(xué)習(xí)興趣，會(huì)使學(xué)生學(xué)不到社會(huì)公德，還會(huì)使學(xué)生失去娛樂(lè)活動(dòng)的機(jī)會(huì)。所以，本文是一因多果說(shuō)明文。三）給學(xué)生“減負(fù)”成了當(dāng)前的熱門話題，結(jié)合你自己的實(shí)際情況談?wù)効捶ǎ杂砂l(fā)揮，寫篇文早?！緟⒖挤段摹縈iddlemiddleschoolstudentswereheavilyburdenedwithallkindsofhomework.Inthepast,theyspent