人教版九年級英語中考作文講解課件

大家好大家好1（三）評分檔次1.第一檔（13-15分）信息完整，表達流暢，無語言錯誤或基本無語言錯誤。2.第二檔（10-12分）信息基本完整，表達較流暢，有少量錯誤，但不影響意思表達。3.第三檔（7-9分）能傳遞部分信息，表達不夠流暢，但句子基本可讀。4.第四檔（4-6分）只能傳遞少量信息，表達不通順，只有少量句子可讀。5.第五檔（1-3分）只能傳遞個別信息，表達不清楚，只有個別句子可讀。（三）評分檔次1.第一檔（13-15分）2五、書面表達（15分）

閱讀使人明智，閱讀使人充實。某英文報為了了解中學(xué)生課外閱讀情況，向廣大中學(xué)生做調(diào)查，請根據(jù)下面圖表信息寫一篇短文，介紹課外閱讀的益處、你的課外閱讀情況及你的閱讀計劃。

提示：1.短文應(yīng)包括圖表中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫；

2．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；3．詞數(shù)不少于80，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

五、書面表達（15分）

閱讀使人明智，閱讀使人充實。某英文報3評分意見：（一）總體原則考查學(xué)生綜合運用語言的能力，注重語言表達的意義和流暢性。（二）內(nèi)容要點1.benefit2.whatWhatkindofbooksdoyoulikereading?Why?3.habitDoyoureade-books?Whyorwhynot?Whendoyouusuallyread?Howlongdoyoureadadayoraweek?4.plan評分意見：（一）總體原則4ReadingOutsideClass

Asweallknow,Readinghasalotofbenefit.___________________________

ReadingOutsideClass

A5

Asweallknow,readinghasalotofbenefit.Itcanopenupoureyesbecausebooksarefullofknowledge,anditmakesuswiserandricherinlife.Ilikereadingnewspapersandmagazines,fromwhichIgetlotsoffunandlearnaboutwhat'sgoingonaroundtheworld.Ialsoreadstorybooksandnovelsinmysparetimewhichmakemerelaxedandhappy.Iseldomreade-booksbecausethey'rebadforeyes.Onweekends,Iusuallyspendawholeafternoonreadinginthelibrary.AndIalsoreadforabouthalfanhourbeforegoingtobedeverynight.Summervacationiscoming.Iplantodomorereading.IamgoingtoreadmoreclassicsandmoreEnglishbookstoimprovemylanguageskills.I'msurereadingcanmakeafifferencetomylife.ReadingOutsideClassAsweallknow,readin6

英文有句諺語“East,wast,home’sbest.”某英文報以此為標(biāo)題，向廣大中學(xué)生征文。請根據(jù)下面圖表信息寫一篇短文，介紹你家的情況。內(nèi)容包括：你家的居室及居住環(huán)境、家庭成員及家庭成員之間的關(guān)系，并談?wù)勅绾巫屇愕募腋篮谩?/p>

提示：1.短文應(yīng)包括圖表中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫；

2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；

3.詞數(shù)不少于80，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。英文有句諺語“East,wast,home’sbe7評分意見：（一）總體原則考查學(xué)生綜合運用語言的能力，注重語言表達的意義和流暢性。（二）內(nèi)容要點1.居室2.居住環(huán)境3.家庭成員4.家庭成員之間的關(guān)系5.如何讓你的家更美好評分意見：（一）總體原則8

Thereisanoldsaying,“East,west,hone’sbest.”Iliveinahouseinthecountryside.There’sabiglivingroom,threebedrooms,akitchenandawashroominit.There’resometreesandflowersaroundmyhouse.Theairisreallyclean.AndIoftenhearbirdssinging.There’refourpeopleinmyfamily.They’remyparents,mysisterandI.We’rehelpfulandfriendly.Andwealwaysgetonwellwitheachother.I’mhappyIhaveagoodfamily.IwilldowhatIcantohelpdomorehouseworkandfarmwork.I’llstudyhardersothatIcanmakemoremoneyinthefuture.Withoureffort,I’msuremyhomewillbebetterandbetter.East,wast,home’sbest

Thereisanoldsaying,9

Thereisanoldsaying,“East,west,home’sbest.”Iliveinanapartment.Thereisasittingroom,adiningroom,twobedrooms,awashroom,akitchenandastudyinit.Thankstomymother,myhomeisalwayscleanandtidy.Theflowersinthesittingroomlooklovely.Myapartmentisnotbig,becausethereareonlythreepeopleinmyfamily,myfather,mymotherandI.Sometimesmyparentsargue,butusuallytheygetonverywell.TheylovemeandIlovethem,too.Everyoneneedsagoodhome.I’lldomybesttomakemyhomebetter.I’llstudyhardertomakemyparentshappierandI’lldowhatIcantoimproveourlivingenvironment.East,west,hone’sbest

Thereisanoldsaying10六、書面表達（15分）書包伴我學(xué)習(xí)，伴我成長，某英文報以“MySchoolbag”為題，舉辦中學(xué)生征文活動。請根據(jù)下列圖表信息，寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：書包的外形特征、用途和書包背后的課業(yè)問題以及課余你期望做的事情。提示：1.短文應(yīng)包括圖表中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫，段落分明；2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；3.詞數(shù)不少于80，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。六、書面表達（15分）書包伴我學(xué)習(xí)，伴我成長，某英文報11人教版九年級英語中考作文講解課件12MySchoolbag

Ihaveaschoolbag.Itisusedforcarryingtheschoolthings,suchasbooks,pensandsoon.Itlookslikealuggagewhichalwaysaccompaniesmeintheworldofknowledge.Myschoolbagisalwaysbymyside.However,italsobringsusmanyproblems.Wehavetodosomuchhomeworkthatwecannotgetenoughsleep.Insteadofenjoyingthewonderfulweekends,weareforcedtohaveextraclasseswithit.Ifwehavemoresparetime,wecantakepartinsportsandactives.Besides,wecandevelophobbiesandinterestaswell.Asamiddleschoolstudent,Ihopemyschoolbagcansharemyjoyandhappinessratherthanbecomeaburden.luggage行旅箱accompany陪伴MySchoolbagluggage行旅箱accom13Example：ShoppingontheInternet網(wǎng)購利弊

隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展和普及，網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物在中國也變得越來越普遍了，甚至已經(jīng)成了我們?nèi)粘Ｉ畹囊徊糠至?相信同學(xué)們身邊一定有不少同學(xué)已經(jīng)通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)進行購物了，比如*****網(wǎng)，京東商城等;但是網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物究竟有何利弊呢?請寫一篇短文，談?wù)劸W(wǎng)上購物的好處與壞處。提示詞匯：網(wǎng)上購物shoppingontheInternet(onlineshopping)，京東商城360Example：ShoppingontheInte14Recently，wetalkaboutadvantagesanddisadvantagesofshoppingontheInternet.Somepeoplethinkthatitisveryeasyforustogoshoppingonline.TheshopsonInternet,forexample,360areopenforalmost24hoursaday,sowecanbuysomethingwewantatanytimeifwelike.What'smore,weneedn'ttowaitforalongtime.

However,othersbelievethatwecanonlyseethepicturesontheInternetandcannottouchorseethem,Itisdifficulttosaywhetheritisgoodorbad.Wewillhavemoreproblemswhenthethingsarenotgood.Besides,itisnotagoodnewsforsomegirlsbecausetheyenjoygoingshoppinginthemarketwiththeirfriends.Recently，wetalkaboutadvant15Howtolivealow-carbonlife(如何低碳生活)假定你是李華，最近你們班就“低碳”生活方式進行了討論，你的美國朋友Jack來信向你詢問討論情況，請你用英語寫封回信，簡單參照作文地帶介紹的以下討論結(jié)果：1.節(jié)水節(jié)電;2.垃圾分類;3.少用紙巾，重拾手帕;4.步行，騎自行車或乘坐公交車。參考詞匯：低碳lowcarbon，紙巾tissue，垃圾分類sortoutrubbishes，手帕handkerchief，電electricityHowtolivealow-carbonlife16DearJack,Thankyouforyourletteraskingaboutourdiscussiononlowcarbonlifestyle.Hereissomethingaboutit.Everyoneknowsthatwecandoalotofthingsinordertolivealow-carbonlife.Firstly,weshouldsavewaterandelectricity.Secondly,wehadbettersortoutrubbishes,whichincluderecyclableandnon-recyclablerubbishes.Thirdly,wecouldre-pickupourhandkerchiefs,andusetissuesaslittleaspossiblesowecanstopmoretressfromcuttingdown.Lastbutnotleast,pleasetrytowalkifyouhavemorefreetime,andridebikesortakebusesasoftenaspossible.Bestwishes,LiBingDearJack,172017年中考英語作文萬能句子諺語Everycoinhastwosides.每個硬幣都有兩面，比喻事物的兩面性。Thewinteriscomingandthespringisnotfar.冬天已經(jīng)臨近了，春天還會遠(yuǎn)嗎？Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失敗是成功之母。Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.事實勝于雄辯。Afallintoapit,againinyourwit.吃一塹，長一智。Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的開端是成功的一半。Don'tputofftilltomorrowwhatshouldbedonetoday.今日事，今日畢。Timeandtidewaitfornoman.時不我待。2017年中考英語作文萬能句子諺語Everycoinha18大家好大家好19（三）評分檔次1.第一檔（13-15分）信息完整，表達流暢，無語言錯誤或基本無語言錯誤。2.第二檔（10-12分）信息基本完整，表達較流暢，有少量錯誤，但不影響意思表達。3.第三檔（7-9分）能傳遞部分信息，表達不夠流暢，但句子基本可讀。4.第四檔（4-6分）只能傳遞少量信息，表達不通順，只有少量句子可讀。5.第五檔（1-3分）只能傳遞個別信息，表達不清楚，只有個別句子可讀。（三）評分檔次1.第一檔（13-15分）20五、書面表達（15分）

閱讀使人明智，閱讀使人充實。某英文報為了了解中學(xué)生課外閱讀情況，向廣大中學(xué)生做調(diào)查，請根據(jù)下面圖表信息寫一篇短文，介紹課外閱讀的益處、你的課外閱讀情況及你的閱讀計劃。

提示：1.短文應(yīng)包括圖表中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫；

2．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；3．詞數(shù)不少于80，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

五、書面表達（15分）

閱讀使人明智，閱讀使人充實。某英文報21評分意見：（一）總體原則考查學(xué)生綜合運用語言的能力，注重語言表達的意義和流暢性。（二）內(nèi)容要點1.benefit2.whatWhatkindofbooksdoyoulikereading?Why?3.habitDoyoureade-books?Whyorwhynot?Whendoyouusuallyread?Howlongdoyoureadadayoraweek?4.plan評分意見：（一）總體原則22ReadingOutsideClass

Asweallknow,Readinghasalotofbenefit.___________________________

ReadingOutsideClass

A23

Asweallknow,readinghasalotofbenefit.Itcanopenupoureyesbecausebooksarefullofknowledge,anditmakesuswiserandricherinlife.Ilikereadingnewspapersandmagazines,fromwhichIgetlotsoffunandlearnaboutwhat'sgoingonaroundtheworld.Ialsoreadstorybooksandnovelsinmysparetimewhichmakemerelaxedandhappy.Iseldomreade-booksbecausethey'rebadforeyes.Onweekends,Iusuallyspendawholeafternoonreadinginthelibrary.AndIalsoreadforabouthalfanhourbeforegoingtobedeverynight.Summervacationiscoming.Iplantodomorereading.IamgoingtoreadmoreclassicsandmoreEnglishbookstoimprovemylanguageskills.I'msurereadingcanmakeafifferencetomylife.ReadingOutsideClassAsweallknow,readin24

英文有句諺語“East,wast,home’sbest.”某英文報以此為標(biāo)題，向廣大中學(xué)生征文。請根據(jù)下面圖表信息寫一篇短文，介紹你家的情況。內(nèi)容包括：你家的居室及居住環(huán)境、家庭成員及家庭成員之間的關(guān)系，并談?wù)勅绾巫屇愕募腋篮谩?/p>

提示：1.短文應(yīng)包括圖表中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫；

2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；

3.詞數(shù)不少于80，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。英文有句諺語“East,wast,home’sbe25評分意見：（一）總體原則考查學(xué)生綜合運用語言的能力，注重語言表達的意義和流暢性。（二）內(nèi)容要點1.居室2.居住環(huán)境3.家庭成員4.家庭成員之間的關(guān)系5.如何讓你的家更美好評分意見：（一）總體原則26

Thereisanoldsaying,“East,west,hone’sbest.”Iliveinahouseinthecountryside.There’sabiglivingroom,threebedrooms,akitchenandawashroominit.There’resometreesandflowersaroundmyhouse.Theairisreallyclean.AndIoftenhearbirdssinging.There’refourpeopleinmyfamily.They’remyparents,mysisterandI.We’rehelpfulandfriendly.Andwealwaysgetonwellwitheachother.I’mhappyIhaveagoodfamily.IwilldowhatIcantohelpdomorehouseworkandfarmwork.I’llstudyhardersothatIcanmakemoremoneyinthefuture.Withoureffort,I’msuremyhomewillbebetterandbetter.East,wast,home’sbest

Thereisanoldsaying,27

Thereisanoldsaying,“East,west,home’sbest.”Iliveinanapartment.Thereisasittingroom,adiningroom,twobedrooms,awashroom,akitchenandastudyinit.Thankstomymother,myhomeisalwayscleanandtidy.Theflowersinthesittingroomlooklovely.Myapartmentisnotbig,becausethereareonlythreepeopleinmyfamily,myfather,mymotherandI.Sometimesmyparentsargue,butusuallytheygetonverywell.TheylovemeandIlovethem,too.Everyoneneedsagoodhome.I’lldomybesttomakemyhomebetter.I’llstudyhardertomakemyparentshappierandI’lldowhatIcantoimproveourlivingenvironment.East,west,hone’sbest

Thereisanoldsaying28六、書面表達（15分）書包伴我學(xué)習(xí)，伴我成長，某英文報以“MySchoolbag”為題，舉辦中學(xué)生征文活動。請根據(jù)下列圖表信息，寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：書包的外形特征、用途和書包背后的課業(yè)問題以及課余你期望做的事情。提示：1.短文應(yīng)包括圖表中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫，段落分明；2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；3.詞數(shù)不少于80，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。六、書面表達（15分）書包伴我學(xué)習(xí)，伴我成長，某英文報29人教版九年級英語中考作文講解課件30MySchoolbag

Ihaveaschoolbag.Itisusedforcarryingtheschoolthings,suchasbooks,pensandsoon.Itlookslikealuggagewhichalwaysaccompaniesmeintheworldofknowledge.Myschoolbagisalwaysbymyside.However,italsobringsusmanyproblems.Wehavetodosomuchhomeworkthatwecannotgetenoughsleep.Insteadofenjoyingthewonderfulweekends,weareforcedtohaveextraclasseswithit.Ifwehavemoresparetime,wecantakepartinsportsandactives.Besides,wecandevelophobbiesandinterestaswell.Asamiddleschoolstudent,Ihopemyschoolbagcansharemyjoyandhappinessratherthanbecomeaburden.luggage行旅箱accompany陪伴MySchoolbagluggage行旅箱accom31Example：ShoppingontheInternet網(wǎng)購利弊

隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展和普及，網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物在中國也變得越來越普遍了，甚至已經(jīng)成了我們?nèi)粘Ｉ畹囊徊糠至?相信同學(xué)們身邊一定有不少同學(xué)已經(jīng)通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)進行購物了，比如*****網(wǎng)，京東商城等;但是網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物究竟有何利弊呢?請寫一篇短文，談?wù)劸W(wǎng)上購物的好處與壞處。提示詞匯：網(wǎng)上購物shoppingontheInternet(onlineshopping)，京東商城360Example：ShoppingontheInte32Recently，wetalkaboutadvantagesanddisadvantagesofshoppingontheInternet.Somepeoplethinkthatitisveryeasyforustogoshoppingonline.TheshopsonInternet,forexample,360areopenforalmost24hoursaday,sowecanbuysomethingwewantatanytimeifwelike.What'smore,weneedn'ttowaitforalongtime.

However,othersbelievethatwecanonlyseethepicturesontheInternetandcannottouchorseethem,Itisdifficulttosaywhetheritisgoodorbad.Wewillhavemoreproblemswhenthethingsarenotgood.Besides,itisnotagoodnewsforsomegirlsbecausetheyenjoygoingshoppinginthemarketwiththeirfriends.Recently，wetalkaboutadvant33Howtolivealow-carbonlife(如何低碳生活)假定你是李