讀后續(xù)寫練習指導 講義（附試題分析及范文3篇）-2023高考英語二輪復習寫作備考

讀后續(xù)寫練習指導原題閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Ifthere'sonethingIcan'tstandpeoplesaying,itis“I'mnogoodatanything"or"Idon'thaveanytalent”,andIjustdon'tbuythatatall.Tome,everyonehasatleastonetalent,whichitsometimestakesyoualifetimetofind,anditdoesexist.TherewasatimewhenIdidn'tbelievethat.Whatchangedmymindwasseeminglysmalleventthattookplacein1953.AtthattimeIwasahighschoolstudent.Iwasafunny-lookingskinnyboynamedEugeneMauriceOrowitz,whoweighedbarely100pounds,andIwasagoodstudent,butasfarasIwasconcerned,injustabouteveryotherdepartmentIwasaloser.Iwantedtofitin,tobesomeoneanddosomethingwell.ButIhadn'tfoundanythingIwasgoodat.Onesunnyafternoon,ourgymclasswentouttotheschooTsrunningtrack.Theteachertaughtusallvarioustrackandfieldevents.Iwasaloserinallofthem.Thencamethejavelin（標槍）.Suddenlysomethinginsidemebegansaying,“Tryit!Tryit!”Ihadtowaitmyturn,though,tryingnottolooktooeager.Finally,wheneveryonehadhadachancetothrowthejavelinwiththebestthrowgoingabout30yards,Ilookedattheteacher.“Hey,Orowitz,doyouwanttotry?”heasked.Embarrassed,Ilookeddown,butmanagedtonodmyhead.“Well,comeonthen,“hesaidimpatiently,andhandedmethejavelin.BehindmeIcouldhearsomeofmyclassmateslaughing.AsIgraspedthejavelininmyhand,Iwasseizedwithastrangefeeling—anew-foundexcitement.Forsomecrazyreason,IwasrelaxedoverwhatIwasabouttodo,eventhoughI'dneverdoneitbefore.Iraisedthejavelinovermyhead,tooksixquickstepsandletthethinggo.Thesamevoicethathadurgedmetothrowitnowtoldmeitwasagoodthrow.注意：.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；.請按如下格式作答。Iwatchedasthejavelintookoff.ThatnightItookthejavelinhomewithme.試題分析1.人物：theteacher:“Well,comeonthen」hesaidimpatiently,andhandedmethejavelin.classmates:BehindmeIcouldhearsomeofmyclassmateslaughing.:AtthattimeIwasahighschoolstudent.Iwasafunny-lookingskinnyboynamedEugeneMauriceOrowitz,whoweighedbarely100pounds,andIwasagoodstudent,butasfarasIwasconcerned,injustabouteveryotherdepartmentIwasaloser.Iwantedtofitin,tobesomeoneanddosomethingwell.ButIhadn'tfoundanythingIwasgoodat.Embarrassed,Ilookeddown,butmanagedtonodmyhead.AsIgraspedthejavelininmyhand,Iwasseizedwithastrangefeeling-anew-foundexcitement.Forsomecrazyreason,IwasrelaxedoverwhatIwasabouttodo,eventhoughrdneverdoneitbefore.Thesamevoicethathadurgedmetothrowitnowtoldmeitwasagoodthrow..前文主要情節(jié)：雖然是個好學生，但因為相貌長的滑稽瘦骨嶙峋，我經常被同學們笑話，自己對自己也沒什么信心。但也一直想找到自己擅長之處，無奈未果。有一天，體育老師帶我們到田徑場上教了我們各種各樣田徑項目，我都沒什么好的表現(xiàn)，終于在標槍項目的時候，所有的人都投擲了以后，發(fā)覺最遠也就30yards（約27米左右），于是，我不太自信地看了看老師，在老師詢問后，我拿起標槍準備投擲。雖從未投擲過標槍，但感覺上非常放松，內心有一個聲音激勵我投擲出去并告訴我投的相當不錯。…….主題：“人與社會”“人與自我”如何發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的“潛能”，突破自我Tome,everyonehasatleastonetalent,whichitsometimestakesyoualifetimetofind,anditdoesexist..續(xù)寫安排：第一段：Iwatchedasthejavelintookoff.①（與前一句銜接）標槍飛出去后，最終結果如何？②出乎意料的結果讓老師和同學們都感到驚訝，紛紛跑上來祝賀③我的感想？第二段：ThatnightItookthejavelinhomewithme.①為什么要把標槍帶回家？（與前一句銜接）②把今天發(fā)生的事情告訴了父母。父母又給我怎樣的鼓勵？③我對今天所發(fā)生的事情的內省？（點出主題）下水作文Iwatchedasthejavelintookoff.Justastheinnervoiceforetold,itflewforwardbeautifully,drawinganelegantcurveintheair.Tomygreatsurprise,thejavelinlandedontheground20yardsmoreaheadofthebestthrow!Sounexpectedwastheresultthatitlefttheteacherandmyclassmateswildjoy.Theycameoverandhuggedmecrazilywithheartfeltcongratulationsandcheers.Afeelingofexcitementsweptoverme.NeverdidIknowthatIcouldprovemyselfinsuchanunintentionalway.（83words）ThatnightItookthejavelinhomewithme.It'samarvelousawardthatmyteacherofferedme.Myparentsfeltpuzzledwhenseeingit.Isharedwhathadhappenedinthegymclasswiththem.Theypraisedmeformyexcellentperformance,sayingthatoneneverknewwherehistalentlaywithouttryingtograspthechance.Forthefirsttime,Ihadanewlookatmyself-Iwasn'taloserandIalsocoulddosomethingbetterthanothers.Thankstothatseeminglysmallevent,whichindeedchangedmylaterlife.(85words)參考范文參考范文1:Iwatchedasthejavelintookoff.Myheartquickenedconstantlyasthejavelindrewabeautifulcurveinthebluesky.“31yards!”theteacherastonishedvoicehitmyeardrumdirectly,makingallthesoundsfadeintototalsilence.Contrarytotheirpreviouslaughs,myclassmateslookedatmewithadoration.Itwasthebestthrowthatputmetothetopofthelist.Theteacherannouncedexcitedly,€tIfithadn'tbeenforthejavelin,theskinnyboywhonamedOrowitzwouldneverhavefoundhistalent/9Whentheteacherdecidedtosendithomewithmeasagift,Igavehimabighug,screamingwithexcitement.(104words)ThatnightItookthejavelinhomewithme.Lyinginmybed,Istaredatthemarvelousstuff,sleepless.NosoonerhadthesportsmeetendedthanIwaschosentobeamemberofthetrackteam.Butthefloodofexcitementwasstillsofresh,makingmesuddenlyrealizethetruth:one'stalentisalwaysthere,waitingforyoutotrywithcourage.Fromthatdayin1953,decadeshavepassedyetIstilltreasurethesewordsinmind.Itriedeverything,desiringtoexplorenewpossibilitiesofmylifetrack,andtheresultturnedouttobefruitful.Doremember:everyonehashisownjavelinjustgiveitathrow.(105words)參考范文2：Iwatchedasthejavelintookoff.MyheartquickenedasIsawitcontinuetosail,drawingabeautifulcurveinthebluesky.30yards,then40yards.Asitwentpast50-yardmark,itwasstillgoing.Foramomentnothingwassaid.Thensomeonewhispered,“HolyCow!”andothersbegancheering.“51yards!”thencametheteacher'sastonishedvoice,makingallthesoundsfadeintototalsilence.NobodycouldbelievewhatlittleJackJoneshadjustdone.Underthegazeofmyclassmates,Itookthejavelinbacktotheteacher."Justkeepit."hesaid,stillshakinghisheadinwonder.Inodded,straighteningmyselfwithexcitement.(106words)ThatnightItookthejavelinhomewithme.Holdingittightly,TstaredattheskinnyboyinthemirrorandtoldmyselfIwasdefinitelybornforit.ThenextdayIbeganpracticingwithit,andeverydaythatsummerIwouldthrowitonthetrackandeventuallymypracticepaidoff.NowIamaprofessionaljavelinthrower.Lookingback,Iwillneverforgetthatafternoon,whichenabledmetoapproachmyowntalentandgainmyconfidence.SoIwouldsaythereisnosuchpersonwithnotalent.Ifyouarestilltrappedintheworry,donotbedepressedbutletthethinggoandtrytochallengeyourselfrightnow,justlikemyfirstflyingjavelinintheazuresky.(121words)參考范文3：Iwatchedasthejavelintookoff.MyheartquickenedasIsawitsailing,30yardsout,then40yar