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----來自一條有想法的Somepeoplethinksuccessinlifecomesfromhardworkanddetermination,butothersthinktherearemoreimportantfactorslikemoneyandappearance.Discussbothsidesandgiveyourownopinion.STEP1確定A勤奮C成功/A外貌C成功（此外：外貌、金錢都要寫，錢=externalfactors、inheritafortunefromtheirparents,grandparents、moneyandtheownershipofproperties1、Somepeoplethinksuccessinlifecomesfromhardworkanddetermination,butothersthinkotherfactorsareimportant.Discussbothsidesandgiveyourownopinion.ACCA2、Somepeoplethinkonlypeoplewhohavequalitiessuchashardworkanddeterminationcancontributetosociety,butothersthinkotherfactorsareimportant.Discussbothsidesandgiveyourownopinion.A努力CA自己想CSTEP2思考觀舉例子（今日話題分類在46話題（成功的素質(zhì)和能力）goodstrong（好強(qiáng)、competitive（好勝）ambitious、in

STEP3寫開Howwork=industry,diligent,willingtoworkDetermination=asenseofcommitment,dedication,Success=achievesuccess,leadafulfillinglife,Money=wealth,fortune,financialresources,1.賓主替換2.It 【換題目】Itissometimesarguedthattherearepeoplewhohaveachievedsuccessbecausetheyarediligentanddeterminedtowin.(7)【個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)】Iagreewiththisopinionalthoughsomegood-lookingwealthypeoplecanhaveagoodchanceofsucceedingintheirlivesaswell.(7)思【老顧說】不要寫完思路再開始文章，因?yàn)樘煲押趡~ABCA-B有沒有跳躍、怎么A努力和艱辛的磨 B不斷進(jìn)步，提升技 C成（wh,how（解釋B-C提升技能為啥能成功A+C有錢和漂亮的人B 人脈更好C更容易成功解釋（A-B）：有錢的人有機(jī)會(huì)參加社交B2-A努力和有決心B遇到和挫折不放 C成容易放棄）why不放棄很重要（成功來之不易、時(shí)間的積累，舉例：蘋果）STEP4【主體段落（第一段A努力和艱辛的磨 B不斷進(jìn)步，提升技 C成注意：12連接詞3觀點(diǎn)4把C寫前面，A和B寫到后面Somepeoplearestrongadvocatesoftheviewpointthatindustriousnessandpainstakingeffortsarethedeterminantsofsuccesssincepeoplecanmakeprogressandupgradetheirskillstofinallyliveasuccessfullife.【老顧】Somepeoplelayemphasisonhardworkanddeterminationbecausetheycanmakeprogressandimproveskillscontinuously.（6.5-7）注意：1連接（詞重復(fù)、代詞、連接詞）23扣題4前后一【某同學(xué)句子】Becausewelivedinanskillsemphasisedareessentialto（11句型）success.(6.5-7)注意：1連接2扣題3前后一致【某同學(xué)句子】Withproperskills,itismorelikelyforthemtocopewithvariouscomplexissuesandmaketothetopofcertainindustries.【老顧】Byworkinglonghours扣題thesepeoplecanimprovetheirabilitytohandlecomplexproblemsandreachthetopinrespectiveindustries.(6.5)注意：1連接2扣題3前后一致【某同學(xué)句子】incontrast,thosewhohavewealthandbeautymaygetproudandsatisfiedeasily【老顧】Incontrast（連接）,peoplewho（定語從句）areproudoftheirphysicalappearanceandwealthmaynotshowthesamedetermination e（對應(yīng)）inaspecificfieldbecause(解釋)theycansurviveandgainrecognitionwithoutthis. 【主體段落（第二段A+C有錢和漂亮的人 人脈更好C更容易成注意：12連接詞3觀【某同學(xué)句子】Ontheotherhand,peoplewhoarewealthyand tendtosuccessfulforthereasonthattheyhavebetterpeoplearemorelikelytosucceed（C）withgoodsocialconnections（B）.注意：1連接2扣題3前后一致socialnetworkingevents.【老顧的進(jìn)階版】Thosefromwell-offbackgroundsnormallyhavemoreopportunitiestoattendsocialnetworkingeventsinwhichtheycanmeetreputablebusinesspeopleandhigh-rankingernmentofficials.B2注意：1連接（并列：meanwhile,inthe ,inaddition）2扣題3前后一【某同學(xué)句子】otherwisepeoplewithprettyfacearelikelytoleaveadeepimpressiontoothers.meawile,）（有的）peopletomakeastrongfirstimpressionon【老顧的進(jìn)階版】Meanwhile,itiseasyforglamorouspeopletomakenewfriendsinbusinesssettingsorintheworkplacesincetheirappearancecanmakeastrongfirstimpressiononothers.注意：1連接2扣題3前后一致【某同學(xué)句子】Therefore,thesepeoplemayhavemoresuggestionstotheiropportunitiesofinvestmentand【老顧】ocialnetworksenablethemtosucceedastheycangainadvice,financialsupportandotherresourceseasily.(6.5)【主體段落（第三段A努力和有決心B遇到和挫折不放 C成注意：12連接詞3觀點(diǎn)4把C寫前面，A和B寫到后面連接詞inmyview,inmyopinion,frommy al,i allybelievethat,iwouldarguethat, allybelievethatpersistenceandstrongdeterminationareessentialforustoapproachsuccess. allybelievethathardworkanddeterminationholdthekeytosuccessfaceofimportant注意：1連接2扣題3前后一致【某同學(xué)的句子】Itisundeniablethatpeoplecouldnotachievegoalswithoutskills,repeatingpractices,pickingupcourageagainandagain,noneofwhichdoesn’tneedresolutedeterminationandgivingsweetdayandnight.【老顧】Nothingcan plishedwithouttrialand（how注意：1連接2扣題3前后一致【某同學(xué)的句子】Therefore,thosepeople（指代不清）shouldkeepthinkingandfinding（找到..lookfor,searchfor,seek）solutionstoallprolemstoreach【老顧】Peoplewhohavethefightingspirit（有斗志的人）willreflecton（）theirweaknesses,whateverchallengestheyface,andsearchforsolutionsuntiltheyreachtheirgoals.注意：1連接2扣題3前后一致opportunitiestoachievesuccess.（confusing）【老顧】Thisqualitymaynotbepossessedbyrichpeople,forthesimplereasonthattheyhavenumerousoptionsanddonotfeeltheneedtosticktoanyofthem.【老顧的簡單版】Inmyview,hardworkanddeterminationholdthekeytosuccessbecausepeoplewiththesequalitieswouldshowperseveranceinthefaceofadversity.achievementsdonotcomeeasily,andsuccessrequirestrialanderror.Peoplewhoaredeterminedtosucceedwillthinkabouttheirproblemsandmakeanefforttolookforsolutions.Bycomparison,richpeoplemaychoosetogiveupbecausetheyhavemanyotherchoices.（6.5）#完整版本Itissometimesarguedthattherearepeoplewhohaveachievedsuccessbecausetheyarediligentanddeterminedtowin.Iagreewiththisopinion,althoughsomegood-looking,wealthypeoplecanhaveagoodchanceofsucceedingintheirlivesaswell.Somepeoplelayemphasisonhardworkanddeterminationbecausetheycanmakeprogressandimproveskillscontinuously.Theyliveinasocietywhereskillsandexpertiseareessentialtosuccess.Byworkinglonghours,thesepeoplecanimprovetheirabilitytohandlecomplexproblemsandreachthetopinrespectiveindustries.Incontrast,peoplewhoareproudoftheirphysicalappearanceandwealthmaynotshowthesamedeterminationto eexpertsinaspecificfieldbecausetheycansurviveandgainrecognitionwithoutthis.Ontheotherhand,opponentsarguethatwealthy,good-lookingpeoplearemorelikelytosucceedwithgoodsocialconnections.Thosefromwell-offbackgroundsnormallyhavemoreopportunitiestoattendsocialnetworkingevents.anditiseasyforglamorouspeopletomakeastrongfirstimpressiononothers.S