高二升高三暑期計(jì)劃之應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作（十二）

高二升高三暑期計(jì)劃之應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作（十二）原文呈現(xiàn)針對(duì)校園浪費(fèi)糧食的現(xiàn)象，學(xué)校將舉行以“節(jié)約糧食”為主題的倡議活動(dòng)。假定你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席，請(qǐng)你代表學(xué)生會(huì)給全體同學(xué)寫(xiě)一封倡議書(shū)，內(nèi)容如下：1.活動(dòng)的意義；2.具體的做法；3.呼吁從我做起，節(jié)約糧食。注意：1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Dearfellowstudents,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________知識(shí)儲(chǔ)備詞組節(jié)儉：中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)美德：提醒某人：要執(zhí)行以下任務(wù)：一個(gè)擁有14億人的國(guó)家：發(fā)起運(yùn)動(dòng)：糧食來(lái)之不易：參考答案：bethriftonaChinesetraditionalvirtueputupremindsb.todosth.acountrywith1.4billionpeoplelaunchacampaigneverygraincomesafterhardtoil句式：節(jié)儉是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)美德。更重要的是，在大流行和自然災(zāi)害時(shí)期，拯救糧食對(duì)一個(gè)擁有14億人口的國(guó)家至關(guān)重要。學(xué)校將發(fā)起一項(xiàng)反對(duì)浪費(fèi)的運(yùn)動(dòng)。人們將張貼橫幅來(lái)提倡拯救食物。至于我們這些學(xué)生，請(qǐng)不要點(diǎn)我們吃不完的食物。此外，讓我們一直提醒對(duì)方清理盤(pán)子，或者把剩飯打包回家。記住，每一粒谷物都是經(jīng)過(guò)辛苦的勞作而來(lái)的。讓我們節(jié)省食物，從今天開(kāi)始吧！參考答案：BeingthriftonfoodisaChinesetraditionalvirtue.Moreimportantly,inthetimeofpandemicandnaturaldisasters,savingfoodisofvitalsignificanceforacountrywith1.4billionpeople.Theschoolistolaunchacampaignagainstfoodwaste.Bannerswillbeputuptoadvocatesavingfood.Asforusstudents,pleasedon’torderfoodthatwecan’tfinish.Furthermore,let’sremindeachothertocleartheplateallthetimeorpackleftovershome.Remember,everygraincomesafterhardtoil.Let’ssavefoodanddoitfromtoday!思路點(diǎn)撥本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫(xiě)一封以“節(jié)約糧食”為主題的倡議書(shū)，呼吁全體同學(xué)從我做起，節(jié)約糧食。第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法?總分法指把主題句作為總說(shuō)，把支持句作為分說(shuō)，并以這種方式安排所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容。要求：1.活動(dòng)的意義；2.具體的做法；3.呼吁從我做起，節(jié)約糧食。第二步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）bethrifton；aChinesetraditionalvirtue；putup；remindsb.todosth.第三步：連詞成句1.BeingthriftonfoodisaChinesetraditionalvirtue.2.Bannerswillbeputuptoadvocatesavingfood.3.let’sremindeachothertocleartheplateallthetimeorpackleftovershome.(根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。）第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表進(jìn)行舉例說(shuō)明：Forexample;Forinstance;suchas+n/doing2.表陳述事實(shí)：Infact,franklyspeaking3.表選擇：either…or…，or連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰。第五步：潤(rùn)色修改佳作展現(xiàn)Dearfellowstudents,BeingthriftonfoodisaChinesetraditionalvirtue.Moreimportantly,inthetimeofpandemicandnaturaldisasters,savingfoodisofvitalsignificanceforacountrywith1.4billionpeople.Theschoolistolaunchacampaignagainstfoodwaste.Bannerswillbeputuptoadvocatesavingfood.Asforusstudents,pleasedon’torderfoodthatwecan’tfinish.Furthermore,let’sremindeachothertocleartheplateallthetimeorpackleftovershome.Remember,everygraincomesafterhardtoil.Let’ssavefoodanddoitfromtoday!TheStudents'Union課后訓(xùn)練PassageA假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Jenny正在做一份關(guān)于中國(guó)移動(dòng)支付（mobilepayment）的問(wèn)卷調(diào)查（survey），你是她的重點(diǎn)采訪對(duì)象，你以郵件方式回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：1、你或你身邊的人在日常生活中使用移動(dòng)支付的情況；2、移動(dòng)支付帶來(lái)的好處；3、你的看法。參考詞匯：微信：Wechat支付寶：Alipay二維碼：QRcode注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右；2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________PassageB假設(shè)你是李華，你在美國(guó)夏令營(yíng)認(rèn)識(shí)的朋友Mike給你來(lái)信說(shuō)他最近沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)，難以控制，請(qǐng)你給他回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1、告訴他網(wǎng)癮可能會(huì)導(dǎo)致成績(jī)下降、健康狀況惡化、損害家庭關(guān)系等問(wèn)題；2、提出建議。注意:1、詞數(shù)不少于100字；2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：沉溺于be/becomeaddictedto網(wǎng)癮Internetaddiction___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ADearJenny,Howisyoursurveyonmobilepaymentgoing?I'mgladIcanhelpwithit.ItisgenerallybelievedthatChinaisthelargestmobilepaymentmarket.NowhereelseisthecashlesstrendmoreobviousthaninChina.MostofusareusedtopayingbyscanningQRcodeswhateverwebuy—books,clothes,andelectronicdevices,tonameafew,whichisaglimpseintothelifeofmostChineselikemeandmyfamily.Withthewidespreaduseofmobilepayment,WechatorAlipayisthemostconvenientandsafestwaytopay.Werarelyneedtocarryawalletorcashatall.Besides,neverwillweworryaboutgettingfakenotesorhavingtocountchange.Inshort,mobilepaymenthasgreatlychangedpeople'slifeinChina.Personally,Ithinkmobilepaymentshouldbeencouraged.First,ithaswonoverconsumerswithitsconvenience.Anotheradvantageisthatthereareoftendiscountsifyoumakemobilepayment,asmajoronlinepaymentplatformsarecompetingtohavemoreconsumersusetheirservice.Ihopemyexplanationcanbeofsomehelptoyou.Wishyougoodluck.Yoursfai