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試題原題第二節(jié)(滿分25分)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

SunlightfloodedthroughthewindowwhenTomaswassittingatthekitchentable,strugglingwithaliteraryclassic.Streamersofcloudsdriftedbyhighaboveinthesky.Notfaraway,thehugenewtowerblockslinedtheroad.Thefaintsoundofcarswasdimlyheard.

Hismotherwaschoppingtomatoesfortheirdinnerasusual.Suddenlyshesaid,“Youknow,thethingImissmostiscookingareallyhotsalsa（辣番茄醬）,withfreshpeppersstraightfromthegarden.”Shesighed.“That’swhatImissmostaboutMérida.”

Tomaslookedupfromhisbookinsurprise.Hismotherhadnevertalkedlikethisabouttheiroldlifebefore.Hestudiedhernow.Shelookedalittlesad,butthenshesmiledathimandsweptthepileofchoppedtomatoesintothecookingpot.

“ButI’vealreadylearnedalotaboutthisnewcountry,Tomas,”shesaid.“Forastart,I’velearnedthatthere’smorethanonewaytomakeasalsa!”Shewavedapacketofchilispicepowderathim,andtheybothlaughed.

Watchinghismotherbusyinthekitchenpreparingdinner,Tomasthoughtabouttheinsighthismotherhadgivenhimintoherfeelings,andherealizedthathefeltthesamewayaboutleaving.

Sure,ithadbeengreatforhisfathertogetthisgoodjob,butithadalsobeenhard.Tomasmissedhisoldhome—especiallythesunandthebeach.AndhismothermissedMérida,too.Shehadlovedworkinginhermarketgarden,sellingthefreshvegetablesthatshehadgrownherselfandthencominghometocookuphuge,tastymealsforherfamily.Tomas’sstomachrumbledatthememories.

Hethoughtabouthowdifferentthingswereforthemnow,livinginthislarge,grayapartmentblockwheretherewasnogardenandnofriendsdroppingbytosharetheirdeliciousmeals.Hesighed.AtleasttheywerestillabletospeakregularlyeverynightafterdinnerwithhisgrandmotherbackinMexicooverthecomputer—Grandmother!Abuela!注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。SuddenlyTomashadanidea.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________Aweeklater,aboxarrivedfromMexico._________________________________________________________________________________________________________

試題分析1.試題分析：（1）人物：?Tomas:兒子，因?yàn)榘职衷谒麌业搅艘环莶诲e(cuò)的工作，跟著爸爸媽媽移居他鄉(xiāng)?Tomas’smother:從墨西哥移居他鄉(xiāng)?Grandmother:留在墨西哥（2）前文情節(jié)：遠(yuǎn)在他鄉(xiāng)，思念之情油然而生。Tomas無意間注意到一天晚飯前，媽媽說起了思念家鄉(xiāng)Merida及家鄉(xiāng)用剛從菜園采摘的辣椒做的辣番茄醬。Tomas開始不解，后來經(jīng)過思量，也了解了媽媽的話意。他也開始想念家鄉(xiāng)了，特別是家鄉(xiāng)的陽光和沙灘。為了生計(jì)，現(xiàn)在移居他鄉(xiāng)，多少有點(diǎn)失落，沒有大大的菜園，沒有朋友的歡聚。但是，至少還能通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)與遠(yuǎn)在墨西哥的奶奶說說話。于是，Tomas就……2.主題：人與社會(huì)，人與自我如何解媽媽的思鄉(xiāng)之情？3.情節(jié)設(shè)計(jì)：●第一段：SuddenlyTomashadanidea.①?zèng)Q定給媽媽一個(gè)驚喜②與奶奶交流③奶奶決定給Tomas寄新鮮的辣椒過來●第二段：Aweeklater,aboxarrivedfromMexico.①打開包裹②送給媽媽③主題升華——

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SuddenlyTomashadanidea.“ItwasapparentthatIcan’tgotoMexico,butatleastIcanenjoythetastyfoodfromit,”hethoughttohimself,wearinganexpressionofexcitement.Thinkingofthedeliciousfoodrangingfromhotsalsatofreshvegetables,hefeltasifhehadtastedallofthem.Tomaswastednotimeturningonthecomputeranditdidn’ttakemuchtimetogetintouchwithhisgrandmother.Theychattedwitheachothercheerfully,sweetmemoriescrowdingin.Hishandssweatingandheartpounding,hebrieflyexplainedhisintention.Itwasnosurprisethathisgrandmotheragreedwithoutanyhesitation.(104words)

Aweeklater,aboxarrivedfromMexico.NosoonerhadTomasreceivedtheboxthanheopenedit.Whatespeciallyastonishedhimweresomemarvelousfreshpeppers,aswellasphotosattachedtothebox,enablinghimtorecallthewonderfulsunandbeautifulbeach.ThenhetookittoMom,hopingtogiveherasurprise.Thrilledasshewas,sheturnedbacktoTomasandhuggedhimtightly,“Ihavenoideathatmysonissuchaconsiderateboy!”Withabrightsmilebeamingonherface,Momwastooamazedtofindahotsalsa.Tearsrolleddownherfaceinseconds.ItwasthenthatTomasrealizedhowbothofthemmissedMerida!(111words)

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SuddenlyTomashadanidea.WhynotturntoAbuelaforhelp?Seizedbytheincreasingeagernesstocontacthisgrandmother,hewolfedhissupperonceitwasready.Rightafterdinner,Tomasracedtothecomputerbeforehehadevenhadhisfavoritedessert,leavinghismotherincuriosity.Themomenthegotthroughtohisgrandmotherviathevideochat,heloweredhisvoice,whispering,“Abuela,Ineedyourhelp!”AfterTomaspouredouthisidea,Abuelaclappedherhands,promising,“Excellent!You’llreceivewhatyouwant!”Besidehimselfwithjoy,TomaswavedgoodbyetoAbuela,expectantlywaitingforthepackage.

Aweeklater,aboxarrivedfromMexico.Bubblingoverwithexcitement,Tomasinvitedhismothertoopentheboxtogether.Unfoldingbeforetheireyeswereasealedpackageofdriedhabaneropeppersandacolorfulpacketofseeds.“That’swhatImissmost!AtastefromHOME!”,blurtedouthismother,herlipscurvingintoabroadbeamandeyesglittering