讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)寫作指導(dǎo) 講義-高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)寫作指導(dǎo)講義閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen?Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk?Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked?Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow?JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff*shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.第一步通過〃四讀〃，理清文章脈絡(luò).讀標(biāo)題（或首句）通過標(biāo)題和首句可知，本文為記敘文，中心人物為一對雙胞胎和媽媽，主要事件是這對雙胞胎在母親節(jié)給媽媽一個驚喜。.讀要素

WhenonMother*sDayWhereathome,inthekitchen,inthebedroomWhothetwinsJennaandJeff,theirmotherandfatherWhattomakebreakfastfortheirmotherWhytogiveherasurpriseHowTheyhadtroublewhencooking.ThemainideaInordertogivetheirmotherasurprise,thetwinsJennaandJeffmadebreakfastfortheirmother,buttheyhadtroublewhencooking.3.讀結(jié)構(gòu)注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；Para.1Thetwinsplannedtogivetheirmotherasurprise.（事件的開端）Para.2OnthemorningonMother'sDay,thetwinsstartedmakingbreakfast.（事件的發(fā)展）Para.3Unfortunately,theyhadsometroublewithcooking.（事件的發(fā)展）續(xù)寫段1當(dāng)雙胞胎失望地環(huán)顧四周時，他們的父親出現(xiàn)了。（事件的高潮）續(xù)寫段2雙胞胎把早餐端到樓上，叫醒母親。（事件的結(jié)局）2.請按如下格式作答。Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.4.讀情感變化本文中，作者的心情變化可以用以下表格來表示:CluesEmotionchangeThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprise...（Para.1）excitedJennapanicked.??ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.（Para.3）disappointed續(xù)寫第一段可推斷，續(xù)寫第一段的情感應(yīng)該是hopeful,續(xù)寫第二段的情感應(yīng)該是proudo續(xù)寫第二段第二步關(guān)注“三點(diǎn)〃，續(xù)寫契合美文1.根據(jù)首句關(guān)鍵信息，設(shè)計故事情節(jié)續(xù)寫第一段的首句為Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.這句話要引出接下來的續(xù)寫內(nèi)容，需要我們認(rèn)真分析。此句中的關(guān)鍵信息是theirfatherappeared,再結(jié)合續(xù)寫第二段的首句，我們展開合理想象，本段內(nèi)容應(yīng)該是在父

親的幫助下，這對雙胞胎順利做完了早餐，并準(zhǔn)備一份送到媽媽的臥室。續(xù)寫第二段的首句為Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.這句話承接上文，可以想象到媽媽看到早飯時的心情是既高興又驚訝的，并且會夸贊這對雙胞胎。并且父親會表現(xiàn)出不知情的樣子。.依據(jù)情感變化，烘托故事氣氛在整個故事中,這對雙胞胎的情感變化為excited-disappointed—hopeful-proudo在續(xù)寫的后兩個自然段中，可充分利用這條情感線來烘托故事氣氛，使內(nèi)容更加飽滿。.依據(jù)語言特點(diǎn)，選擇恰當(dāng)詞句本篇短文的語言特點(diǎn)如下表所示：式結(jié)構(gòu)長句并不多，使用了較多的并列句。法結(jié)構(gòu)使用了狀語從句、定語從句、動詞不定式作目的狀語、動詞ing形式作賓語補(bǔ)足語等。匯選擇使用了大量的短語，如befilledwith,throw???into???,putout,turnoff,cleanup等。體印象語言描寫生動，語言充分體現(xiàn)了母子之間的親密關(guān)系。選材描述了一個母親節(jié)活動，結(jié)合上表語言特點(diǎn)分析，續(xù)寫時可用love,care,company,encouragement,trust,gratitude等詞體現(xiàn)親子之間的親密關(guān)系。參考范文：theirfatherSeeingtheirhelpedthemanddidasAsthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,appeared.Onelookandheknewwhattheywereupto.downcasteyes,hetoldthemtocleanupthekitchenwhilehemakebreakfastfortheirmother.Thetwinscheereduptold.Withinanhour,thekitchenwascleanedup,andthefathermadesomeeggsandwichesandcookedsomeoatporridge.Thenhesneakedbacktobed.Thetwinspreparedthebreakfasttray,andaddedacardtheyhadmade.theirfatherSeeingtheirhelpedthemanddidasThetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Theyhuggedtheirmothertightlyandyelled,“HappyMother'sDay,dearMummy!”Themotherhuggedthetwins.Hereyeswidenedatthesightofthebreakfasttray.Sheshookfatherwhowaspretendingtosnore.Hea