2020年山東新高考卷 2020年全國I卷 -2022-2020近三年英語真題作文深度點評與滿分作文賞析（附10篇）

2020年山東新高考卷&2020年全國I卷【試題再現(xiàn)2020年山東新高考1卷】假定你是李華，上周日你校舉辦了5公里越野賽跑活動。請你為校英文報寫一篇報道,內(nèi)容包括：1.參加人員；2.跑步路線：從校門口到南山腳下；3.活動反響。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答?！驹囶}解讀】題目分析主題語境 人與社會/文學、藝術(shù)與體育 話題 越野賽跑比賽的報道 題目概況 本題是一篇報道，要求以李華的身份，為英文報寫一篇報道，詳細介紹 華學校上周日舉辦的5公里越野賽跑比賽情況，包括參加人員，跑步路線和活動反響。寫作類型 活動報道 基本寫作要點 1.參加人員 2.跑步路線;從校門口到南山腳下3.活動反響基本寫作要求 考生要完全覆蓋所給內(nèi)容提示，并可以作適當發(fā)揮，使用適當?shù)脑~匯，連 接詞和高級句型表達所給要點。寫作時注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用，主次分明，詳略得當，語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順字安排好材料。同時適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！緷M分范文欣賞1】ACross-CountryRunningRacePara.1:明報道的事件 LastSundayourschoollaunchedacampaigncalledthe5-thousandcross-countryrunningrace. Para.2:活動參加人員和活動路線Anystudentsandteachersthatwereinterestedwereinvolvedintheactivity.Thenumberofthemwasmorethan100,includingfiveprofessionaljudgeswhogavetheirfairjudgment.Allparticipantssetouttorunfromtheschoolgateandendedatthe footoftheSouthMountain.Thefirsttop10runnerswhocametothedestinationwereawardedtheprizesandthecertificates. Para.3:活動反響Itturnedouttobeagreatsuccess.Notonlywastheactivitywellreceivedbyparticipantsbutalsohighlypraisedbytheneighbourhood.Meanwhileitalsostrengthenedourhealth. 亮點說明高級詞匯:launchvt.發(fā)射(導彈、火箭等):發(fā)動:開始campaignn.運動:活動:戰(zhàn)役，軍事行動awardvt.把(某物)授予(某人):把(合同、傭金)給(人、組織)well-receivedadj.受到歡迎的;受到款待的;strengthenvt.加強;鞏固固定短語:beinvolvedin包括……中，被卷入……中;涉及到……setouttodosth打算，著手，開始出發(fā)亮點句式:1)LastSundayourschoollaunchedacampaigncalledthe5-thousandcross-countryrunningrace[分析]called過去分詞作后置定語，修飾名詞campaign，意為“被稱之為……”相當于定語從句whichiscalledthe5-thousandcross-countryrunningrace2)Anystudentsandteachersthatwereinterestedwereinvolvedintheactivity[分析]that引導定語句，先行詞為anystudentsandteachers，先行詞被any修飾所以用連詞that。3)Thenumberofthemwasmorethan100,includingfiveprofessionaljudgeswhogavetheirfaijudgment.[分析]including現(xiàn)在分詞加名詞，可視為介詞:who引導的定語從句，先行詞為judges?！緷M分范文欣賞2】ACross-CountryRunningRaceLastSunday,ourschoolhelda5kmcross-countryrace,therouteofwhichstartedfromourschoolgatetotheSouthMountain.About300studentsfromallgradesparticipatedintherace.At8:30am,therefereeannouncedtherulesoftheraceandtheteachergaveussomeinstructionsonhowtoprotectourselvesfrominjuryduringtherace.Then,theracebeganat9:00amanditlastedaboutanhour.Mostoftheracersfinishedthewholecourse.Challengingastheactivitywas,everyoneenjoyeditandalltheparticipantsbenefitedalotfromit.【滿分范文欣賞3】ACross-CountryRunningRaceLastSunday,ourschoolhelda5kmcrosscountryrunningrace,whichattractedmanyenthusiasticparticipants,includingbothstudentsandteachers.TheroutewentfromourschoolgatetothefootoftheSouthMountain.Thewholecoursewasextremelydifficult,especiallythepartnearthemountain,narrowandrough.Howeverdifficultitwas,noparticipantsgaveuphalfway.Alltheracersheldontothefinishline.Theracewasofgreatbenefittotheparticipants,physicallyandmentally.Therefore,weallthinkhighlyofit,andexpectmoreactivitieslikethisinthefuture.【滿分范文欣賞4】ACross-CountryRunningRaceWiththepurposeofimprovingstudents'fitness,ourschoollaunchedthe5-kilometercross-countryrace,whichfinishedsuccessfullylastSunday.Theplayers,mainlyconsistingofthestudentsselectedfromdifferentclassesandgrades,attendedtheracevigorously.Thecompetitionwasfierce.Thepavementsbesidetherunningroute,whichwasfromtheschoolgatetothefootofSouthHill,werepackedwithstudentsandteacherswhogaveloudcheersandapplausetotheplayers.Thoughtiredandexhausted,theplayersallregardedthiscompetitionasagoodwayofboostingphysicalquality.【滿分范文欣賞5】ACross-CountryRunningRaceWiththepurposeofimprovingstudents'fitness,ourschoollaunchedthe5-kilometercross-countryrace,whichfinishedsuccessfullylastSunday.Theplayers,mainlyconsistingofthestudentsselectedfromdifferentclassesandgrades,attendedtheracevigorously.Thecompetitionwasfierce.Thepavementsbesidetherunningroute,whichwasfromtheschoolgatetothefootofSouthHill,werepackedwithstudentsandteacherswhogaveloudcheersandapplausetotheplayers.Thoughtiredandexhausted,theplayersallregardedthiscompetitionasagoodwayofboostingphysicalquality.【試題再現(xiàn)2020年全國I卷】你校正在組織英語作文比賽，請以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題，寫一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)容包括：1.人物簡介;2.尊敬和愛戴的原因。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.短文題目和首句已為你寫好。ThepersonIrespectTherearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【試題解讀】【滿分范文欣賞1】ThepersonIrespectTherearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.Asforme,ThepersonIrespectmostismymother.Bornandraisedinasmallcity,mymotherisadoctorwholovesherworkandherpatientsverymuch.WhentheepidemicstartedtospreadfromWuhan,shecanceledherholidayandreturnedtoworkinhospital.Fromdaytonight,sheworkedveryhard,achievedalotinherwork,andrespectedbyhercolleagueandpatients.Afterwork,shewouldalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanypositivethingsaboutherwork.Whenfacedwiththeproblemsoflearning,Isometimeswereencouragedtoovercomethedifficultieswiselyandbravely.So,inmymind,herdignityanddevotionmakesmehowrespectableawomansheis.【滿分范文欣賞2】ThepersonIrespectWehavealotofrespectablepeoplearoundus.Theymaybeourteachers,parentsoroneofourelders.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmost.Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.Heachievedalotinhisworkandwasrespectedbyhisstudents.So,inmymindmyfatheristhepersonIrespectmostandIlovehimdeeply.【滿分范文欣賞3】ThepersonIrespectWehavealotofrespectablepeoplearoundus.Thepersondeservingmygreatrespectismymom,anEnglishteacherworkinginoneofourlocalseniorschools.Andwhatimpressedmemostisherattitudetoworkandherdevotiontome.Asaseriousandresponsibleteacher,sheisalwayssparingnoeffortstohelpherstudentsdealwiththeirdifficultiesinstudyandlife.Oncetherewasastudentinherclasssufferingfromgreatpressureinstudyandwantingtodropoutofschool.Learningaboutthis,shetriedeverymeanstoenlightenthestudentwithherknowledgeinpsychologyandofferedtohelpwithhisstudy,whichcontributedtohisgreatprogressandmadehimconfidentagain.Asadevotedmother,nomatterhowbusy,sheisalwaystheretogivemecareandsupportwhenIamfacedwithchallenges.It’smylucktohavesuchamother.Andmyrespectforherisfromthebottomofmyheart.Ihope,oneday,tobecomeapersonlikemydearmom.【滿分范文欣賞4】ThepersonIrespectTherearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.AndthepersonthatIrespectmostismyfather--agood-looking,devotedandhelpfulman.Witharoundfaceandhighnosebridge,Dadlookshandsome.Butwhatreallyimpressesmeishisqualities.Hegetsupat5everymorningtodohouseholdchores.Afterthat,heoccupieshimselfwithhisjobinahighschool,workingasamathsteacherandClassTutorfornearly30years,educatingandinspiringth