鄂爾多斯作文講評(píng)

ImproveourwritingLearningaim:LearnsometipsonhowtoimproveandpolishourEnglishwriting.書面表達(dá)

假如你是美國(guó)的Mike，你的朋友張平打算到國(guó)外留學(xué)，他寫信詢問你什么樣的中國(guó)學(xué)生最受國(guó)外高校青睞。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給對(duì)方寫一封回信：1.語言是道硬門檻2.適應(yīng)能力很重要3.興趣愛好被看重4.要有社會(huì)責(zé)任感注意：詞數(shù)100左右

DearZhangPing,

I’mgladtohearthatyouwanttostudyabroadinyourletter.HereiswhatIknowaboutwhatkindofChinesestudentsarefavoredinforeigncollegesanduniversities.AsfarasIknow,thelanguageabilityisessential,whichhelpsyoucommunicatewithothersandmakesiteasierforyoutounderstandthecourses.Besides,youshouldhavetheabilitytoadaptquicklytothenewenvironment.What’smore,yourinterestisvaluedaswell,forithasalottodowithsuccess.

Lastbutnottheleast,thosewhoarewillingto

shouldersocialresponsibilityareespeciallyrespectedandwelcomed.Thisissomeofmyadvice,andIhopeitcanbeofsomehelptoyou.Mayyousucceed!Bestwishesandgoodluck.YoursMike

漂亮規(guī)范的書寫是寫作得分的亮點(diǎn)Tip1：作文的卷面和書寫Tip2：人靠衣裝，文靠詞裝

詞匯的選擇靈活新穎，出奇制勝1.詞性的轉(zhuǎn)化Important–beresponsibleforsociety---benefityoualot----isofgreatbenefitisbeneficialtobeofgreatimportance

socialresposibility2.同義、近義表達(dá)attractive---moreandmorepeople---moreandmoreimportant---appealing/fascinating/invitinganincreasingnumberofpeopleincreasinglysignificant3.激活高級(jí)詞匯重要性---

isimportant----isofgreatimportance/significanceplayanimportantroleinattachgreatimportancetomakeabigdifferenceto

haveagreateffect/influence/impactonFoodsafety重要的表達(dá)方式：1.Havingagoodcommandofthelocallanguageisamust.2….playsanindispensiblerole/partin…attachgreatimportanceto….Wecannotemphasizetoomuchtheimportanceof…WhatisthemostimportantisthatyoucanspeakEnglishfluently,withoutwhichyoucan’tliveacomfortablelife.6.Itisimportant/essential/vitalthat…7.Thereisnodoubt/denyingthat…8.Itis…thatcounts/matters.9.Itcan’tbedeniedthat…(2).忙于---bebusyin----

beabsobedinbeburiedinbeoccupiedinbeengagedinbeinvolvedinbedevotedtobeappliedto(3).緩解壓力relievestress/anxietyreleasetensiongetridofstressgetawayfromanxietyfreesb.ofanxietyrefreshoneself(4).渴望

beeagertodo---bethirstytodobehungrytodobegreedytodobedyingtodohaveadesiretodo

can’twaittodo

高級(jí)詞匯使用策略1.詞性的轉(zhuǎn)化2.同義、近義表達(dá)的使用3.激活高級(jí)詞匯句式多變（三階段)

１．對(duì)?。玻茫。。常睿。。ip3.多變句式,脫穎而出當(dāng)他聽到這個(gè)消息，他非常高興．Whenheheardthenews,hewasveryhappy.Hearingthenews,hewasfullofhappiness.Immediately/Themomentheheardthenews,hewaswildwithjoy.Practice1.用不同句式翻譯:…的重要性…Itisimportant/essential/vitalthat…Thereisnodoubt/denyingthat…Itis…thatcounts/matters.Itcan’tbedeniedthat…Ican’temphasizetheimportanceof…toomuch.肯定不如雙否好2翻譯：為了……，我有如下建議。Inorderto/soasto…Inorderthat/sothat…Withthepurpose/aim/intentionof…Inthehopeof/that…3.翻譯：提建議…Isuggestthat…Mysuggestionisthat…WhatIsuggestisthat…主動(dòng)不如被動(dòng)巧Itissuggestedthat…Itisgenerallyacknowledgedthat…

4.翻譯：聽取了這些建議后，你一定會(huì)…

Take…,andyouwill…If…,youwill…Onlywhenyoutaketheadvice,canyou…Havingtakentheacvice,youareboundto…陳述不如倒裝妙，非謂語也少不了非謂語動(dòng)詞從句特殊句式注意：切記勿堆砌與濫用。使用多變句式狀語從句，名詞性從句(主、賓、表、同位語從句)倒裝句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句，虛擬語氣，感嘆句，doing，donetodo，with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，獨(dú)立主格定語從句Tip4：行文的流暢上下貫通、一氣呵成1.正確而巧妙地使用好連接詞、插入語.2.體會(huì)語言的交際功能，自然，流暢。IfpossibleIfanyTip5：省略Let'spractise!Practicemakesperfect!語不驚人寫不休！假設(shè)你是某英文報(bào)社編輯，高三學(xué)生李華,針對(duì)高考臨近，高三學(xué)生忙于學(xué)業(yè)，越來越多的學(xué)生渴望緩解壓力而不知所措的現(xiàn)狀，向你征求建議。你給出如下建議：1.積極心態(tài)很重要。2.鍛煉身體與平衡膳食必不可少。3.勞逸結(jié)合，寓學(xué)于樂。注意：1.字?jǐn)?shù)不少于1202.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。高考臨近忙于學(xué)業(yè)渴望緩解壓力建議很重要翻譯：鍛煉身體，平衡膳食必不可少…isamust.…aswellas…/notonly…butalso……equallyimportant…翻譯：勞逸結(jié)合，寓學(xué)于樂strikeabalancebetweencombine…with…DearLiHua,IknowtheCollegeEnteranceExaminationiscoming.Manystudentslikeyouareundergreatpressure.Theyareeagertoreleasetheirstressbutdon’tknowhow.Thefollowingaremysuggestions.Positiveattitudeisveryimportant.Havingsportsandabalanceddietarenecessary.Youshouldcombinelearningandentertainmenttogether.Ihopeyoucantakemyadvice.Yourssincerely,Editor

DearLiHua,AstheCollegeEntranceExaminationisapproaching,buriedinendlesshomeworkandvariousexams,anincreasingnumberofstudentsfeelstressed.Iamwritingtoofferyousomeadviceinthehopeofhelpingyourelieveyouranxiety.

Firstly,

itcan’tbedeniedthathavingapositiveattitudeisofgreatsignificance,withoutwhichyoucouldn’tmakeprogress.Inaddition,takingexercisingregularlyandabalanceddietareequallyimportant

sothatyoucankeepfitandfeelenergetic.

Lastbutnotleast,itisstronglysuggestedthatyoushouldstrikeabalancebetweenstudyingandrest.Onlywhenlearningiscombinedwithentertainment,isittheeffectivewayo