寫作專題：第6周-非謂語動詞的寫作

第六周非謂語動詞的寫作眾所周知，作文中出現(xiàn)過多的簡單句會讓人覺得單調(diào)乏味，句子與句子之間的關系顯得松散；而文章中過多地出現(xiàn)復合句又顯得累贅，讀起來費勁。恰當?shù)剡\用非謂語動詞對簡單句和復合句進行轉換，不僅句型多樣，句子活潑，而且讀起來結構緊湊，言簡意明。一、運用非謂語動詞轉換簡單句寫作時，我們可以利用非謂語動詞對兩個簡單句進行轉換，使其成為較高級的表達方式。轉換時可采用三步法。eq\x(\a\al(第一步：寫出兩個簡單句。,第二步：找準兩個簡單句的對接點，讓一個句子作為主干，另一個句子用非謂語動詞進行改寫。,第三步：判斷應用何種非謂語動詞，把握好時態(tài)和語態(tài)，最后連接起來。))[示例]第一步：寫出兩個簡單句。①Ifeelquitesorryforthat.②Ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp.第二步：讓句②作主句，用非謂語動詞改寫句①。第三步：句①表示原因，其動詞feel與主語I之間為主謂關系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞短語作原因狀語。Feelingquitesorryforthat,Ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp.(2013·陜西高考滿分作文)其他幾個轉換的例子如下：1．另一方面，我將幫著建立英語角，提供給我們學生一個練習英語口語的平臺。Ontheotherhand,IwillhelpsetuptheEnglishcorner.IwillprovideusstudentsaplatformtopracticeouroralEnglish.→Ontheotherhand,IwillhelpsetuptheEnglishcorner,providingusstudentsaplatformtopracticeouroralEnglish.(2013·天津高考滿分作文)(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)2．這兒的人都喜歡湯姆寫的那本小說。Allthepeopleherelikethenovel.ItiswrittenbyTom.→AllthepeopleherelikethenovelwrittenbyTom.(過去分詞作定語)3．我們應該多講英語。我們認為這是很重要的。WeshouldspeakmoreEnglish.Wethinkitisveryimportant.→WethinkitveryimportanttospeakmoreEnglish.(it作形式賓語，不定式作真正賓語)[即時演練]運用非謂語動詞轉換簡單句1．Weweretouchedbytheteacher'swords.Wedecidedtoworkhard.(用過去分詞作狀語)Touched_by_the_teacher's_words,_we_decided_to_work_hard.2．Ididn'treceiveherletter.Ihadtowriteagain.(用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)Not_having_received_her_letter,_I_had_to_write_again.3．Theboycametoschoollateagain.Thismadetheteacherveryangry.(用動名詞作主語)The_boy's_coming_to_school_late_again_made_the_teacher_very_angry.4．Theboysweremakingthemostoftime.Theywantedtofinishtheworkearlier.(用不定式作目的狀語)The_boys_were_making_the_most_of_time_(so_as)_to_finish_the_work_earlier.5．Isawanoldgranny.Shelayontheground.Iwentovertohelpher.(用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)Seeing_an_old_granny_lying_on_the_ground,_I_went_over_to_help_her.二、運用非謂語動詞轉換復合句用非謂語動詞轉換復合句比轉換簡單句要容易一些，因為需轉換的一般是從句部分，這時只需要判斷用何種非謂語動詞，再把握好時態(tài)和語態(tài)即可，所以只需兩步。[示例]第一步：寫出復合句。Afterwehadpracticedplayingbasketballforalmosttwomonths,westronglydesiredtobethewinner.第二步：把after引導的時間狀語從句轉換為非謂語動詞，practice與we之間為主謂關系，且表示完成，故用現(xiàn)在分詞的完成時作狀語?！鶫avingpracticedplayingbasketballforalmosttwomonths,westronglydesiredtobethewinner.(2013·湖南高考滿分作文)其他幾個轉換的例子如下：1．驚詫于他們的熟練程度，我決心要像他們一樣好。BecauseIwasamazedathowskillfultheywere,Ideterminedtobejustasgood.→Amazedathowskillfultheywere,Ideterminedtobejustasgood.(2013·浙江高考滿分作文)(過去分詞作狀語)2．看到一輛車朝她而來，我伸出手把她拉了回來。WhenIsawacarrunningtowardsher,Ireachedmyhandoutandpulledherback.→Seeingacarrunningtowardsher,Ireachedmyhandoutandpulledherback.(2013·安徽高考滿分作文)(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)3．這里曾有一家化肥廠，位于城市的南邊。它每天釋放出大量有毒氣體，污染環(huán)境。Therewasalargefactory,whichproducedfertilizer.Everydayitgaveoutalotofpoisonousgas,whichpollutedtheenvironment.→Therewasalargefactory,whichproducedfertilizer.Everydayitgaveoutalotofpoisonousgas,pollutingtheenvironment.簡析：“原句”中分別由which引導兩個定語從句，重復且單調(diào)，將第二個定語從句轉換為現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語后，不僅表達多樣，而且言簡意明。4．由于老師的幫助，我的英語進步很大。因為我的英語進步很大，我確信我能考上更好的大學。Becausemyteacherhelpsme,myEnglishhasgreatlyimproved.BecausemyEnglishhasgreatlyimproved,I'msureIwillgotoabetteruniversity.→Withmyteacherhelpingme,myEnglishhasgreatlyimproved.BecausemyEnglishhasgreatlyimproved,I'msureIwillgotoabetteruniversity.簡析：“原句”兩處重復出現(xiàn)由because引導的從句，讀起來很別扭。換用“with＋現(xiàn)在分詞的復合結構”后，讀起來給人的感覺大不一樣。[即時演練]運用非謂語動詞轉換復合句1．Assoonastheysawafewpeoplestillintheburninghouse,theyrushedintoittosavethemwithouthesitation.→On_seeing_a_few_people_still_in_the_burning_house,_theyrushedintoittosavethemwithouthesitation.2．Wethinkitisnecessarythatmiddleschoolstudentsshouldlearnaforeignlanguageandwealsothinkthatitispossiblethattheycanmasterone.→Wethinkitisnecessarythatmiddleschoolstudentsshouldlearnaforeignlanguageandwealsothinkit_possible_for_them_to_master_one.3．Itookpartinthemeeting,whichwasheldinBeijinglastFriday.Itwasveryinstructive,whichwashostedbyamanagerwhocametoourcompanyyesterday.→Itookpartinthemeetingheld_in_BeijinglastFriday.Itwasveryinstructive,whichwashostedbyamanagercoming_to_our_companyyesterday.4．Motherwenttoworkinahurry,andshedidn'thavebreakfast.Shewasasbusyasabeethesedaysandcamebackhomeverylate.→Motherwenttoworkinahurrywithout_having_breakfast.Shewasasbusyasabeethesedays,coming_back_home_very_late.三、運用非謂語動詞轉換短文(根據(jù)一般表達寫出該短文的高級表達)北京市有大量的出租車司機，他們每天全心全意地為乘客服務，對北京市的交通發(fā)揮著重要作用。他們起早貪黑，賺錢養(yǎng)家糊口。有一次，我下車時不小心把手機忘在了車上，但當我和司機同志聯(lián)系上之后，他立即開車把手機送到了我的家門口，讓我感動不已。一般表達：TherearealargenumberoftaxidriversinBeijing.Theyservepassengersheartandsoul.TheyplayanimportantpartinthetrafficofBeijing.Theymakesomemoney.Theyworkfromdawntillnight.Oneday,IleftmycellphoneinthetaxiItook.Igotintouchwiththedriver.Hedrovetomyhomeandgaveitbacktome.Iwasveryexcited.高級表達：TherearealargenumberoftaxidriversinBeijing,servingpassengersheartandsoulandplayinganimportantpartinthetrafficofBeijing.Inordertomakesomemoneytosupporttheirfamilies,theyworkfromdawntillnight.Oneday,IgotoutofthetaxiinahurrywithmycellphoneleftinthetaxiItook.Onhearingwhathadhappened,thetaxidriverdrovetomyhomeasfastaspossibleandgavethecellphonebacktome.Seeingmycellphoneagain,Iwastooexcitedtosayaword.[即時演練]運用非謂語動詞轉換短文大城市里高樓大廈林立，房價越來越高。一方面，很多人無房居住，另一方面，大量房子卻賣不出去。不少人即使買了一套住房，恐怕也要一輩子辛辛苦苦工作來還銀行貸款。我們希望政府采取措施，關心這些收入不高的人群。一般表達：Therearemoreandmoretallbuildingsinbigcities.Theirpricesaregoingupdaybyday.Ononehand,therearestilllotsofpeople.Theyhavenohousestolivein.Ontheotherhand,manyapartmentsarehardtobesoldout.Evenifyoubuyanapartment,I'mafraidyouhavetopayoffthemoneyyouborrowfromthebank.Youwillworkharddayandnightallyourlife.Idohopeourgovernmentcantakestrongmeasurestosolvethehousingproblemandtakecareofthepeople.Theirincomesarelow.高級表達：Therearemoreandmoretallbuildingsinbigcities,withtheirpricesgoingupdaybyday.Ononehand,therearestilllotsofpeoplehavingnohousestolivein.Ontheotherhand,manyapartmentsarehardtobesoldout.Evenifyouhaveboughtanapartment,I'mafraidyouhavetotrytopayoffthemoneyborrowedfromthebank,workingharddayandnightallyourlife.Idohopeourgovernmentcantakestrongmeasurestosolvethehousingproblem,showinggreatconcernforthepeoplewhoseincomesarenothighenough.[綜合演練提升]請按以下內(nèi)容要點寫一篇英語短文，盡可能多地使用非謂語動詞。1．在陰歷1月1日慶賀中國的陰歷(lunar)年，也被稱作春節(jié)，受到全世界所有中國人的喜愛。2．像世界上許多其他人一樣，中國喜歡慶賀他們傳統(tǒng)的節(jié)日和春天的到來。3．在春節(jié)，大部分中國人更愿意待在家里，吃大餐、與家人聊天；其他一些人可能會去走訪朋友或者度長假。4．另外，人們會在新年的到來之際說“新年快樂”以表達良好的祝愿。5．這也是孩子們的節(jié)日，