專(zhuān)題04新聞報(bào)道-2023屆新高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作精講+寫(xiě)作模板(課件)

新聞報(bào)道——新高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作精講+寫(xiě)作模板【典題解讀】(2020·新高考全國(guó)I卷)假定你是李華，上周日你校舉辦了5公里越野賽跑活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為校英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括：

1.參加人員；2.跑步路線：從校門(mén)口到南山腳下:3.活動(dòng)反響。注意：1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ACross-CountryRunningRace____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【解讀】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作之新聞報(bào)道。要求考生就上周日學(xué)校舉行的5公里越野賽活動(dòng)寫(xiě)一篇新聞報(bào)道。內(nèi)容包括：參加人員；跑步路線：從校門(mén)口到南山腳下；活動(dòng)反響。題干所給的要點(diǎn)比較籠統(tǒng)，需要考生增加細(xì)節(jié)。有哪些人員參加：各班派出的選手。跑步路線：從校門(mén)口到南山腳下，需要增加全程的長(zhǎng)度；對(duì)越野賽的簡(jiǎn)單過(guò)程(選手們的表現(xiàn)，沿途啦啦隊(duì)的表現(xiàn)等)、結(jié)果要有敘述，這也是本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)的重中之重。最后對(duì)活動(dòng)的反響用一兩句話(huà)概括一下就行。【答案】ACross-CountryRunningRace

LastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycross-countryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.

Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthecompetition.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromourschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessarilyhelpaswellasencouragement.Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarrivethefinishline,receivingcheersfromallthedirections.

Theactivitywashighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydiditprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsobroughtusclosertogether.【寫(xiě)作點(diǎn)撥】

新聞報(bào)道是記敘文的一種，其特點(diǎn)是以事實(shí)為依據(jù)，對(duì)人的經(jīng)歷或事實(shí)給予明確的、實(shí)事求是的報(bào)道。其目的是為人們提供最新的信息。寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中要注意：表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確、條理要清楚，語(yǔ)言要簡(jiǎn)煉、重點(diǎn)要突出?！緦?xiě)作點(diǎn)撥】新聞報(bào)道的寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu)一般分為四個(gè)部分：標(biāo)題：濃縮概括全文的中心實(shí)質(zhì)問(wèn)題，提煉要點(diǎn)，吸引讀者。第一段(導(dǎo)語(yǔ))：揭示事件的核心內(nèi)容(what事件，when時(shí)間，where地點(diǎn)和who人物)。第二段(主體)：消息的主要部分，它用充足的事實(shí)表現(xiàn)主題，是對(duì)導(dǎo)語(yǔ)內(nèi)容的進(jìn)一步展開(kāi)和闡釋(要補(bǔ)充事件的過(guò)程和細(xì)節(jié)，往往包括why目的或原因和how具體過(guò)程)。第三段(結(jié)語(yǔ))：一般是最后一段話(huà)或一句話(huà)，是對(duì)全文內(nèi)容的概括性總結(jié)?！境Ｓ盟夭摹縄nordertocelebrate...,apartywasheld.為了慶祝……，舉行了一個(gè)晚會(huì)。...witnessed/saw/held/organizeda“...”activityfrom...to...從……至……，……舉辦/組織了“……”活動(dòng)。Inorderto/Aimingtoenrich/encourage/enhance/raise...,anactivity.為了豐富/鼓勵(lì)/增強(qiáng)/提高……，舉行/組織了一次活動(dòng)。Inordertoencouragethestudentstogetclosetonature/toenrichourschoollife,ourschoolorganizedamountain-climbingactivity.為了鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生們走近大自然/為了豐富我們的學(xué)校生活，我們學(xué)校組織了一次登山活動(dòng)。Theactivitywassopopularwiththestudentsandteachersthatitattractedhundredsofthem.這個(gè)活動(dòng)在師生中很受歡迎，吸引了幾百人。Asscheduled,theactivitystartedat8amonSaturdaymorninganditlastedforthreehours.活動(dòng)如期于周六上午8點(diǎn)舉行，持續(xù)3個(gè)小時(shí)。Alloftheteachersandstudentstookanactivepartintheactivity.所有的老師和學(xué)生都積極參加了此次活動(dòng)。Allthestudentsaswellasourteachersparticipatedinit.所有的學(xué)生和我們的老師都參加了此次活動(dòng)。...tookanactivepartin/activelyparticipatedintheactivity/attendedtheparty.……積極參加了這次活動(dòng)/出席了這次晚會(huì)。Theactivityprovidedaplatformforallthestudentsto...該活動(dòng)為所有學(xué)生提供了一個(gè)……的平臺(tái)。Itwasaniceday.At8:00am,wegatheredatthefootof...andsetoutfor...inhighspirits.今天天氣真好。早上8點(diǎn)，我們?cè)凇哪_下集中，興高采烈地向……出發(fā)。Asscheduled,weassembledoutsidetheschoolgateat8:00a.m.andheadedforthedestinationinhighspirits.按照計(jì)劃，我們?cè)缟?點(diǎn)在學(xué)校大門(mén)外集合，興高采烈地前往目的地。Allthewaywewerechatting,singingandlaughing,enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.一路上，我們聊天、唱歌、大笑，享受著新鮮的空氣和美麗的風(fēng)景。Thereareaseriesofactivities/labortasks.有一系列的活動(dòng)/勞動(dòng)任務(wù)。Itwasnotuntilhalfpastsixintheeveningthattheactivitycametoanend.直到晚上6點(diǎn)半，活動(dòng)才結(jié)束。Theactivitybenefitedusalot./Theactivitywasofgreatbenefittous./Theactivitywasverybeneficialtous.這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)使我們受益匪淺/這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)對(duì)我們非常有益/這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)對(duì)我們非常有益。Fromthisactivity,welearnedhowtocooperatewitheachotherandcametorealizetheimportanceofteamwork.通過(guò)這次活動(dòng)，我們學(xué)會(huì)了如何相互合作，并逐漸意識(shí)到團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的重要性。Undoubtedly,thiseventcannotonlyenrichourschoollife,butalsoofferusopportunitiestolearnmoredailypracticalskills!毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，這次活動(dòng)不僅可以豐富我們的學(xué)校生活，還可以為我們提供學(xué)習(xí)更多日常實(shí)用技能的機(jī)會(huì)！Theactivitywashighlyspokenofbecausenotonlydiditenrichourschoollifebutalsoitimprovedourinterest...這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)受到了高度評(píng)價(jià)，因?yàn)樗粌H豐富了我們的學(xué)校生活，而且提高了我們對(duì)……的興趣。Theexhibitionturnedouttobeagreatsuccess.Notonlyhasitbroughtjoytousbutalsobroadenedourhorizons.Everyparticipantexpectsanotherone.展覽取得了巨大的成功。它不僅給我們帶來(lái)了歡樂(lè)，也開(kāi)闊了我們的視野。每個(gè)參與者都期望有另一個(gè)。Whattheydidhasnotonlybroughtjoytoothersbutalsoenrichedtheirownlives.Theysaiditwassuchabeautifuldaythattheywouldrememberitforever.他們所做的不僅給別人帶來(lái)了歡樂(lè)，也豐富了自己的生活。他們說(shuō)這是如此美好的一天，他們會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)記住。With...activeparticipation

and...enthusiasticsupport,theactivity/thepartywasundoubtedlyasuccess.在……的積極參與和……的熱情支持下，這次活動(dòng)/聚會(huì)無(wú)疑是成功的。Thisactivitybenefited...alot.這次活動(dòng)使……受益匪淺。Notonlycanthisactivity/eventenrich...,butalsooffer...opportunitiesto...這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)不僅可以豐富……，還為……提供……的機(jī)會(huì)。Notonlydiditget...closetonatureandgive...relaxationfromheavy...,italsopromotedthefriendshipamong...它不僅讓……親近大自然，讓……從繁重的……得到放松，還促進(jìn)了……之間的友誼?！灸０鍢?gòu)建】模板一_______(標(biāo)題)_______(活動(dòng)組織者/單位或時(shí)間)saw/witnessed_______(活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目).Aimedat_______(活動(dòng)目的),thisactivitywaswellreceivedin________(地方)._______(參與者)tookanactivepartintheactivity.Theactivityprovidedaplatformfor_______(參與者)to_______(活動(dòng)內(nèi)容一).Mostimpressively,_______(活動(dòng)內(nèi)容二).With_______(參與者的)activeparticipation

and_______(其他人的)enthusiasticsupport,notonly_______(好處一)but_______(好處二).Itwasundoubtedlyasuccess.

或者：Thisactivitywashighlyspokenofbystudents,foritmotivatedthemto________(影響).或者：Undoubtedly,notonlywillthisactivity________,butalso________(活動(dòng)的意義).【模板應(yīng)用】一

(改編自2022·全國(guó)高三專(zhuān)題練)假定你是學(xué)校英語(yǔ)雜志社記者,上周你校開(kāi)展了給貧困地區(qū)學(xué)生捐贈(zèng)“愛(ài)心包裹”的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇新聞報(bào)道。

內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)時(shí)間與地點(diǎn)；

2.活動(dòng)過(guò)程；

3.活動(dòng)意義。

注意：1.詞數(shù)120詞左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】LovingParcelsforStudentsinNeedLastweekwitnessedour“LovingParcels”donationactivityatourschool.Aimedathelpingthestudentsinthepoverty-strickenareas,thisactivitywaswellreceivedinthewholeschool.Alloftheteachersandstudentstookanactivepartintheactivity.Theactivityprovidedaplatformforallthestudentstodonatetheirclothes,booksandschoolbagstothestudentsinneed.Mostimpressively,theyalsowrotedownthebestwishesoncards,whichwouldbecollectedanddeliveredtotheschoolsinthepoorareas.Withthestudents’activeparticipationandteachers’enthusiasticsupport,thedonationwasundoubtedlyasuccess.Undoubtedly,thisactivitywillnotonlyhelpchildreninthepoverty-strickenareasrealizetheirdreams,butalsostimulateourourpassionforpublicwelfareactivities.【模板構(gòu)建】模板二_______(標(biāo)題)Inorderto/Aimingtoencourage_______to_______(活動(dòng)目的)_______(活動(dòng)組織者/單位)organizeda_______(活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目)on_______(活動(dòng)時(shí)間).Hundredsof_______tookpartinit./All______aswellas_______participatedinit.Itwasaniceday.At_______(具體時(shí)間),_______(參與者)gatheredat_______(地點(diǎn))andsetoutfor_______(目的地)inhighspirits._______(具體活動(dòng)過(guò)程).About_______hourslater,_______allarrived.Bathedinsunshine,_______jumpedandcheeredwithjoy.

或者：Asscheduled,_______(參與者)assembledoutside_______(地點(diǎn))at_______(具體時(shí)間)8:00a.m.andheadedfor_______(目的地)inhighspirits._______(具體活動(dòng)過(guò)程).Theactivitybenefitedusgreatly/alot.Notonly_______(意義/評(píng)論一)but_______(意義/評(píng)論二).【模板運(yùn)用】二1

(改編自2022·黑龍江高二學(xué)業(yè)考)星光中學(xué)(XingGuangHighSchool)近期舉行了一次登山活動(dòng)。假定你是學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)記者，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇短文，報(bào)道此次活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括：1.時(shí)間與地點(diǎn)：12月11日，西樵山；

2.活動(dòng)的過(guò)程；

3.你對(duì)于這次活動(dòng)的評(píng)論。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Inordertoencouragethestudentstotakeoutdoorexercise,ourschoolorganizedamountain-climbingonDecember11.Hundredsofustookpartinit.Itwasaniceday.At8:00am,wegatheredatthefootofXijiaoMountainandsetoutforthetopinhighspirits.Allthewaywewerechatting,singingandlaughing,enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.Whensomefellbehind,otherswouldcomeandofferhelp.About2hourslater,weallreachedthetop.Bathedinsunshine,wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy.Theactivitybenefitedusalot.Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork,italsopromotedthefriendshipamongus.【寫(xiě)作實(shí)踐】一

(改編自2022·江蘇高二專(zhuān)題練)新華中學(xué)近期組織了校園勞動(dòng)周(CampusLaborWeek)活動(dòng)。假定你是學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)記者，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇簡(jiǎn)短的英文報(bào)道。

內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)的時(shí)間與地點(diǎn)；

2.活動(dòng)的過(guò)程；

3.你的評(píng)論。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】CampusLaborWeekOurschoolwitnesseda“CampusLaborWeek”activityfromMay15thto19th.Aimedatenhancingstudents’physicalquality,thisactivitywaswellreceivedinthewholeschool.Alloftheteachersandstudentstookanactivepartintheactivity.Theactivityprovidedaplatformforustoappreciatelecturesonlaborskillsgivenonthefirstday,fromwhichwebenefitedalot.Mostimpressively,varietiesofotherlaborprojects,suchascuttingtreesandwateringflowers,gaveusunforgettableexperiences.Undoubtedly,notonlycanthiseventenrichourschoollife,butalsoofferusopportunitiestolearnmoredailypracticalskills!【寫(xiě)作實(shí)踐】二

(改編自2022·遼寧朝陽(yáng)高一期末)假定你是李華，為了豐富學(xué)生的課余生活和鍛煉學(xué)生的意志力，上周末，你校組織了一次四十五公里的遠(yuǎn)足活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你在校英語(yǔ)報(bào)上寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道。

內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)的目的；

2.活動(dòng)的情況；