戴云托福寫作

WHOAMI男,可以檢驗,有官方證明。Englishname:Tom人生態(tài)度:快樂\寬容\進取2000年加盟新東方。WHOAMI教授過下列課程:

寫作\閱讀\語法\口語\聽力\翻譯

OR高考\四六級\考研\(zhòng)實用英語\雅思\托福WHATCANIDOFORYOU新托?？荚囅嚓P(guān)知識寫作基本知識\訓(xùn)練方法\應(yīng)試技巧英語學(xué)習(xí)方法\建議\參考書推薦參考書俞敏洪

《托福詞匯詞根+聯(lián)想記憶法》張道真《實用英語語法》戴云《托福語法滿分精要》WHATCANIDOFORYOU留學(xué)申請相關(guān)知識如何奠定你留學(xué)申請的優(yōu)勢1.TOEFL和GRE，SAT，GMAT，

LSAT成績2.學(xué)校各門功課的考試成績（GPA）和排名3.個人陳述，讀書計劃和三封推薦信

4.發(fā)表的文章和著作5.獲得的獎勵和榮譽(教學(xué)科目，體育，文學(xué)，藝術(shù)等）6.領(lǐng)導(dǎo)和參加的學(xué)術(shù)研究和社會實踐項目（發(fā)明和專利，論文）7.學(xué)生會工作和社團工作成績8.國外學(xué)習(xí)生活和旅游經(jīng)歷9.令人震撼的人生經(jīng)歷和特質(zhì)參加出國考試,你能得到什么ScholarshipCertificateofEnglishproficiencyExperienceofchallengingyourlimitExperienceofovercominghardshipsFatalmeetingofyourlove\friendsWHATCANIDOFORYOU我的人生經(jīng)驗和教訓(xùn)(主要是教訓(xùn))社會科學(xué)和人文知識的極淺顯介紹我們的目標(biāo)是:

沒有蛀牙!WHOAREYOU你來自哪里?你想去哪里?為什么?你的目標(biāo)可以實現(xiàn)嗎?---我的諾貝爾夢想WHOAREYOU你有何準(zhǔn)備?你的優(yōu)點?你的缺點?你有信心嗎?

AllroadsleadtoRome?

Hardworkleadstosuccess?

Wherethereisawill,thereisaway?

你知道嗎?有一位偉大的科學(xué)家曾經(jīng)說過…理想與人生價值科學(xué)家------愛因斯坦文學(xué)------莎士比亞雜交水稻------袁隆平新東方------俞敏洪托福------戴云???-------親愛的你ToshowortoshowoffBethebestofall;orBethebestofthecrowd;orBethebestofyourselfToshowortoshowoffBethebestinonefield;orBethebestinonepoint;orBethebestofyourself磚頭的用途1---3種:建房子,墊腳,砸人4---10種10---20種21---560種ExploreandactivateyourpotentialBethebestofyourselfBeststructureBestsentences

Bestwords

Longestpossible——“黃金規(guī)則一”基本要求練習(xí)句型變換和擴充，每周兩個練習(xí)寫?yīng)毩⒆魑?每周兩篇。加強閱讀和聽力訓(xùn)練。

基本要求閱讀完教材:OFFICIALGUIDE

LONGMANPREPARATIONCOURSE

自編講義,尤其是范文，句型集及作文題庫

GeneralIntroductionto

iBTTOEFLReading:60---100minsListening:60---90minsBreak:10minsSpeaking:20minsWriting:55minsGeneralIntroductionto

iBTTOEFLTotaltime:4hoursTotalscore:120StartingTime:September,2006GeneralIntroductionto

iBTTOEFLWritingContent:integratedwritingandindependentwritingScore:rawscore:0~5scaledscore:0~30Time:Integratedwriting:20minutesReading：3mins\230—300wordsListening:2mins\230—300wordsindependentwriting:30minutesWordrange:Integratedwriting:150---225wordsindependentwriting:300words以上新舊托福分數(shù)對照表請看:重要分數(shù)的位置120---100115---99.5110---96.8105---93.6100---89.095---8590---79.785---73.180---66.275---59原始分數(shù)和最終分數(shù)換算表5303.5224.75293.25214.5283204.25272.75184252.5173.75242.2515重要分數(shù)的位置30---97.929---95.928---93.427---90.525---87.224---82.923---82.922---77.421---72.420---66.9學(xué)習(xí)新托福寫作須知美式英語或英式英語?詞匯課或語法課或?qū)懽髡n?字數(shù)重要嗎?結(jié)構(gòu)重要嗎?拼寫重要嗎?

學(xué)習(xí)新托福寫作須知(續(xù))

------書面語或口語?

PhotographTelevisionLaboratorydormitoryMathematics

學(xué)習(xí)新托福寫作須知(續(xù))

------書面語或口語?

&Eg.∵∴KidCan’t

學(xué)習(xí)新托福寫作須知(續(xù))

------語法重要嗎?

Peopleworkinginbigcompanyaresupposedtobeabletousecomputer.Thereisanevidencethatadvertisingprofoundlyaffectshumanbeingtheworldover.Apersonwithbroadandprofoundknowledgecanhaveabetterlifethanthepersonwhodoesnot?Themanbittenbythehomelessdoghasdied.Judgmentsmadeinmostofthebookarebelievable.ThemajorityofChinesearefondofwatchingTV.Alargeamountofpeoplegoabroadtolearnadvancedknowledge.Dinosaurshaveextincted.學(xué)習(xí)新托福寫作須知(續(xù))

------句子是文章的最基本單位句子訓(xùn)練方法三種句子訓(xùn)練方法(一)1.用多種方法表達同一句意.

例如:A對B很重要.1）AisimportanttoB.2）Aplaysanimportantrole\partinB.3）AisofimportancetoB.4）Bcannotlive\develop\grow\survivewithoutA.5）AistoBwhatthefoundationistoaskyscraper\wateristofish.6）Aisessential/significant/crucial/critical/vitaltoB.7）TheimportanceofAtoBcanneverbeexaggerated\denied\ignored.2.擴充句子.

將一個簡單句進行擴充,增加至15字,25字,35字,盡量使用不同的語法結(jié)構(gòu),如同位語,插入語,非謂語結(jié)構(gòu),各種從句,并列結(jié)構(gòu)等。（教主要求：文章里多于25字的句子至少有3句。）句子訓(xùn)練方法(二)句子訓(xùn)練方法(三)3.對句式進行各種變化。句子的變化句子的分類五大句型特殊句型（倒裝句，強調(diào)句，修辭問句，并列結(jié)構(gòu)，各種從句，插入語，同位語，等等）句子的變化方式句子的分類陳述句,疑問句,感嘆句和祈使句簡單句,復(fù)合句,復(fù)雜句和復(fù)合復(fù)雜句主動句和被動句五大句型S+ViS+Vt+OS+Vt+Oi+OdS+Vlink+CS+Vt+O+C句子的變化方式開頭的變化(名詞,不定式,介詞詞組,分詞…)結(jié)尾的變化長短句的變化主被動的變化各種句式的變化開頭的變化范例Cheatingontestsrepeatedlyinvitesself-defeat.Repeatedcheatingontestsinvitesself-defeat.Tocheatontestsrepeatedlyistoinviteself-defeat.Thefactthatyoucheatontestsrepeatedlyinvitesself-defeat.Foranyonetocheatontestsrepeatedlyistoinviteself-defeat.Whoevercheatsontestsrepeatedlyistoinviteself-defeat.Leadto＼resultin\inviteResultfromBecauseof\dueto\thanksto\owingto\byreasonof\onaccountof\Because\for\since\as因果關(guān)系的表達Asaresult\outcome\consequenceofInconsequence\intheend\consequentlyThe\effect\influence\impact…Affect\influenceSotherefore\thereby\hence\thus段落的實現(xiàn)比較對照法（整體\分項比較）整體比較：A：a1,b1,c1B：a2,b2,c2分項比較：a1,b1a2,b2a3,b3段落的實現(xiàn)分類法定義法例如：Parentsarethebestteachers.Playingagameisfunonlywhenyouwin.銜接手段使用連接詞和短語(表并列\(zhòng)轉(zhuǎn)折\遞進\因果\比較\對照\舉例)使用代詞使用語意的粘連精彩句型1Thelecturediscusses…whichdiffersfromthemainideainthereadingthat…精彩句型2

Theprofessormadethepointthat…Thereading,incontrast,heldadifferentview.Anotherimportantpointshowedinthelisteningmaterialisthat…butthereadingpresentsaconflictingideathat…Finally,theprofessorstatedthat...whichchallengesthestandpointmadebythewriterwhosaidthat...Ingeneral,theprofessordiscussedtheproblemof…thatthereadingviewedinacontrary\opposing\differentangle.精彩句型3

Accordingtothelecture…ontheotherhand\whilethereadingstatedthat…

精彩句型4Theprofessormadethepointthat…onthecontrary\incontrast\however,thewriterdemonstratedanideathat…

精彩句型5Thelecturesupports\illustratestheideathat…Thelecturecontradicts\refutes\iscontraryto\istheoppositeoftheideathat…

精彩句型6Contrarytothebeliefinthepassagethat…theprofessorsaysthat…Theprofessorrefutestheviewpointshowedinthepassagethat…bysayingthat…對材料的指稱Thespeaker\lecturer\professor\listeningmaterial\lecture\talkThewriter\author\readingmaterial\writing\passage時態(tài)的運用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)or一般過去時態(tài)注意框架部分時態(tài)的一致性and學(xué)術(shù)內(nèi)容的時態(tài)要根據(jù)上下文來確定重要人名舉例WilliamShakespeareGeorgeWashingtonThomasJeffersonFranklinRooseveltAbrahamLincolnBillGatesChristopherColumbusWinstonChurchillNeilArmstrong（astronomer）LouisArmstrong(singer）DwightD.EisenhowerMargaretMitchellMarilynMonroe

O.HenryPearlS.BuckJohnF.KennedyMarkTwainTheodoreRooseveltAlbertGore,Jr.ThomasEdisonAlexanderFlemingErnestHemingwayHenryFord

EzraPound

WaltDisney重要專用名詞舉例TheStatueofLibertyTheBostonTeaPartyTheYangtzeRiverTheMississippiRiverThePulitzerPrizeMountRushmoreNationalMemorialTheRockyMountainsMcDonald’sHarvard\Princeton\YaleUniversityshockingly\unusually\notably\noticeably\overwhelmingly\strikingly\awfully\exceedingly\dramatically\highlyimpressively\strongly插入語Anewfactorywouldcontaminatethelivingspaceofmostofourtown’sinhabitantstosomedegree.Anewfactorywould,tosomedegree,contaminatethelivingspaceofmostofourtown’sinhabitants.常用作插入語的副詞

indeed，surely，nonetheless，however，nevertheless，notwithstanding,admittedly,obviously，besides,furthermore,briefly,similarly,

honestly\frankly\generally(speaking)，

naturally，luckily\fortunately，astonishingly,conversely,undeniably,undoubtedly常見的作插入語的形容詞或短語

strangetosay，needlesstosay，mostimportantofall，worstofallinsum\short\summary，inotherwords，inasense，ingeneral，inmyview\opinion\judgment，

inconclusion，inthefirstplace，

inconsequence,inadditionOnthecontrary,incontrast常用作插入語的介詞短語

tomyjoy\delight\satisfaction\surprise\astonishment\amazement\regret\disappointment，

ofcourse,forinstance\example,infact,asamatteroffact常用作插入語的不定式短語

tobesure，tosumup，totellthetruth,tostartwith，插入句

Iamsure，

Ibelieve\wonder\suppose，itseems，asIseeit，whatisimportant(serious)，I’mafraid，itissaid明喻

1.使用明喻需要具備的條件：本體和喻體不能是同一類事物，并且是本質(zhì)不同的；本體和喻體必須有相似點（即可比性）；二者的相似點要能夠引起比喻聯(lián)系；喻體是形象的，具體的，人們熟悉的和常用的。2.明喻使用的特征詞匯3.喻體的選擇：注意中西方文化的差異使用明喻的標(biāo)志性詞匯as:Beautyisassummerfruit,whichiseasytocorruptandcannotlast…seem:Thegateofthebuildingseemstobetheentrancetoavasthiveofsixorsevenfloors.like:Lifewaslikeaboxofchocolate…asif/asthough:Itrainedasiftheflood-gatesofHeavenwereopened,pare/liken…to…:Shakespearecompared/likenedtheworldtoastage.as…as…:Hedrinksasmuchasafish.theway(inwhich):Ishouldsmellitthewayacatsmellsamouse.mightaswell…as:Youmightaswellthrowyourmoneyintotheditchasgiveittohim.nomore…than/notanymore…than:Scienceisbuiltwith…AistoBwhatCistoD/WhatCistoD,thatAistoB/AsCistoD,AistoB:Thegovernmentistoacountrywhattheheartistoaperson.中西方文化寓意相同的：ascoldasice（像冰一樣冷），asfatasapig（胖得像豬），ascunningasafox（像狐貍一樣狡猾），asstillasdeath（死一般沉寂），asgracefulasaswan（像天鵝一樣美麗），aschasteasice（冰清玉潔），asgreedyasawolf（像狼一樣貪婪），asloyalasadog（像狗一樣忠誠），ashandsomeaspaint（美麗如畫）中西方文化寓意不同的：toeatlikeahorse（像馬一樣能吃），todrinklikeafish（像魚一樣能喝），likeadrownedrat（落湯鼠一樣），likeapeacockamongsparrows（像孔雀站在麻雀里），likeahenonahotgirdle（像熱烤盤上的母雞），asdrunkasarat（爛醉如泥），asmerryasacricket（像蟋蟀一樣快樂），aspoorasachurchmouse（窮得像教堂里的耗子），asthinaslath（骨瘦如柴），ascloseasanoyster（像牡蠣一樣閉嘴），asstupidasagoose（愚蠢得跟鵝一樣）暗喻通常直接用喻體做句子的賓語或者定語等成分來實現(xiàn)比喻。常見的習(xí)慣用語：teachafishtoswim（教魚游泳——班門弄斧）featherone’snest（往自己的巢里弄羽毛——中飽私囊）beardthelioninhisden（在獅子的洞口拔它的胡須——虎口拔牙）addinsulttoinjury（給受傷的人以侮辱——雪上加霜）castpearlsbeforeswine（把珍珠放在豬面前——對牛彈琴）holdthecandletothedevil（為惡魔打火把——助紂為虐）cryupwineandsellvinegar（吆喝酒卻賣醋——表里不一）fishintheair（在空氣中釣魚——水中撈月）lockthestabledoorafterthehorseisstolen（馬被偷了后上鎖——亡羊補牢）killtwobirdswithonestone（一石二鳥）setafoxtokeepone’sgeese（讓狐貍看管鵝群——引狼入室）letsleepingdogslie（讓睡覺的狗躺著吧——不要打草驚蛇）kickagainstthepricks（朝刺上踢腿——以卵擊石）letthecatoutofthebag（讓貓爬出袋子——露出馬腳）holdawolfbytheears/takethebullbythehorns（抓住狼的耳朵/公牛的角——騎虎難下）aflashinthepan（火藥池的火光——曇花一現(xiàn)）sitontwochairs/standontwoboats/ridetwohorsesatthesametime（腳睬兩只船修辭問句

1.勿須回答2.起強調(diào)作用

修辭問句

舉例:Willanybodywhoisconcernedwiththeecologicalprotectionagreewiththeplantograbthealreadylimitedlandforthosepoorandenchantingendangeredspecies?頭韻Practicemakesperfect.Loveme,lovemydogs.Timeandtidewaitfornoman.Moneymakesthemarego.Cleanandclear;CocaColaAllroadsleadtoRome.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway