專題29應(yīng)用文寫作之從微觀把握-低檔作文華麗升級(jí)

專題29從微觀把握—低檔作文華麗升級(jí)目前，對(duì)于很多同學(xué)來(lái)說(shuō)，都處于三檔作文，好點(diǎn)的處于四檔作文水平，從高考閱卷來(lái)看，這兩個(gè)檔次的考生人數(shù)也最多，短期內(nèi)如何讓你的作文由三級(jí)作文升級(jí)到五檔作文呢？體裁命題形式寫作主題2022新高考I卷應(yīng)用文邀請(qǐng)信寫郵件邀請(qǐng)外教進(jìn)行一次訪談II卷應(yīng)用文邀請(qǐng)信寫郵件邀請(qǐng)外教進(jìn)行一次訪談全國(guó)卷乙卷說(shuō)明文投稿利用填表調(diào)查結(jié)果給報(bào)社投稿甲卷應(yīng)用文投稿以世界海洋日為主題向英文征文比賽投稿2021新高考I卷應(yīng)用文投稿?？痽outh慶祝十周年，向?？磉_(dá)自己經(jīng)歷，并送上祝福II卷應(yīng)用文投稿?？痽outh慶祝十周年，向?？磉_(dá)自己經(jīng)歷，并送上祝福全國(guó)卷乙卷應(yīng)用文發(fā)言稿以“besmartonlinelearners”為主題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽甲卷應(yīng)用文征求建議征求外國(guó)朋友建議，哪些中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國(guó)友人2020全國(guó)卷I卷應(yīng)用文投稿寫一篇以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題投稿參賽II卷應(yīng)用文日記寫一篇英文短文介紹上周末采摘活動(dòng)III卷應(yīng)用文求助信給外教寫一封信，請(qǐng)幫忙指導(dǎo)『命題專家談高考』【考綱解讀】1.寫作文體文體不再拘泥于書信體，報(bào)道、通知等各種應(yīng)用文體，其他文體都有可能涉及。2．命題形式命題類型是半開放類，漢語(yǔ)提示簡(jiǎn)潔，要點(diǎn)明確，任務(wù)具體，學(xué)生的可發(fā)揮性強(qiáng)。3．寫作主題主題涵蓋學(xué)校生活、社會(huì)生活、參觀旅行、人物介紹、課外活動(dòng)和日常生活等方面，其中有關(guān)學(xué)校(學(xué)習(xí))生活和社會(huì)生活的主題比重最大。主題場(chǎng)景性和真實(shí)性突出，體現(xiàn)中外交流和“正能量”。【備考建議】1.復(fù)習(xí)話題還是側(cè)重于社會(huì)關(guān)愛、友誼和親情中。以情感類話題復(fù)習(xí)為主，最好側(cè)重于學(xué)生的生活實(shí)際，反應(yīng)積極向上的社會(huì)主體即可。另外，個(gè)人的自我品德和修養(yǎng)提升也是復(fù)習(xí)的重點(diǎn)，這些都是和學(xué)生的生活息息相關(guān)。2.把握短文關(guān)鍵信息和語(yǔ)言特點(diǎn)的能力，重視開頭語(yǔ)的提示作用。段落開頭語(yǔ)的前后和上下銜接也很重要，考生需要注意整篇的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)續(xù)寫構(gòu)思，理順上下文邏輯關(guān)系，短文內(nèi)語(yǔ)句要連貫、有序。3.注重細(xì)節(jié)，尤其是注重寫作視角。不能把平時(shí)背誦的心理描寫、環(huán)境描寫等好的句子照搬，要根據(jù)具體實(shí)際來(lái)選擇用哪種敘述方式。策略一練好衡水字體——五檔作文成功的保證書寫美觀是你達(dá)到五檔作文的先決條件，只有真正練好你的書寫，才能為高考作文高分打好基礎(chǔ)。字跡潦草、亂涂亂畫的作文是永遠(yuǎn)得不了高分的。策略二要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容充實(shí)——打開思維、增加細(xì)節(jié)的技巧高考書面表達(dá)的題目，除了簡(jiǎn)短的文字說(shuō)明外，要求包括幾個(gè)主要內(nèi)容，也就是幾個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞。題目要求增加具體細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。在內(nèi)容擴(kuò)展上，目前存在的主要問(wèn)題有：1．細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容與應(yīng)用文所要求的主要內(nèi)容無(wú)關(guān)，明顯跑題；2．打不開思維，沒(méi)有具體的細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容。針對(duì)這些問(wèn)題，可以通過(guò)增加修飾成分及舉例等手段來(lái)打開思維，適當(dāng)增加相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容。主要有以下幾種方法幫助你擴(kuò)展句子，寫出內(nèi)容充實(shí)的應(yīng)用文。當(dāng)然，在同一要點(diǎn)下，可以用到多個(gè)方法增加細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容。eq\a\vs4\al\co1(通過(guò)列舉或舉例)1．a(chǎn)s.../like...as.../like...例：其次，帶一個(gè)小禮物是個(gè)好主意。Second,itisagoodideatobringasmallgift，suchasabunchofflowersoraboxofchocolateiftheyhaveyoungchildren.2．forexample/instance例：如今，我們中的一些人在校園里養(yǎng)成了一些壞習(xí)慣。Nowadays,someofushaveformedsomebadhabitsoncampus.Forinstance,somestudentsleavethelightsoninthedaytime;someleavemuchfoodonthetableaftereating.3．...aswellas...例：這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)一定會(huì)幫助我們反思三年的學(xué)校生活。Theactivitywillsurelyhelpusreflectonthethreeyears’schoollifeaswellaslookforwardtoabetterjourneyinthefuture.(2021·昆明市“三診一?！备呖寄M)eq\a\vs4\al\co1(增加狀語(yǔ)成分)1．增加目的狀語(yǔ)例1：我們學(xué)校今天在表演中心舉行了一場(chǎng)音樂(lè)會(huì)。InordertoenrichthelifeofteachersandstudentsaswellaswelcomethecomingofSpringFestival,ourschoolheldaconcertintheperformancecentertoday.(2021·焦作市三模)例2：想試一試的請(qǐng)速報(bào)名。Whoeverwantstohaveatry,pleasesignupquicklysothatyoudon’tmissthechanceofbeingthewinner.(2021·西安中學(xué)高三第九次模擬)2．增加結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)例1：我得花很多時(shí)間做家庭作業(yè)。IhavetospendsomuchtimeonmyhomeworkthatIhardlyhavetimetotakesports.(2021·西安中學(xué)高三第六次模擬)例2：將安排一系列與環(huán)保相關(guān)的講座。Aseriesoflecturesrelatedenvironmentalprotectionwillbearranged,thusarousingpeople’sawarenessoflivingalow－carbonlife.(2021·濟(jì)寧三模)3．增加原因狀語(yǔ)例：我從小就夢(mèng)想當(dāng)老師。IhavedreamedofbeingateachersinceIwasachild,becauseIthinkteachingisasacredprofession.(2021·甘肅省第二次高考診斷)4．增加方式狀語(yǔ)Bydoing...，...例：但是，我們?cè)S多人都忽略了良好生活習(xí)慣的重要性。However,manyofusignoretheimportanceofgoodlivinghabitsbyeatingjunkfoodandstayinguplate.(2021·湘潭市一模)5．增加動(dòng)詞－ing形式作狀語(yǔ)例1：歡迎對(duì)影片提出意見。What’smore,everyoneofyouwillbewelcometoparticipateinit，enjoyingmovie,havingaheateddiscussionafterwardsandgivingyourowncomments.例2：分享畢業(yè)典例活動(dòng)細(xì)節(jié)。Knowingyou’reinterestedinourcominggraduationactivity,Iwouldliketosharethedetailswithyou.(2021·三明市“三診一?！备呖寄M)6．增加with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作狀語(yǔ)例：表達(dá)希望WiththeChineseCultureCommunicatingEventapproaching,IdohopeyoucanhaveabetterknowledgeofChinesetea.eq\a\vs4\al\co1(增加定語(yǔ)成分)例1：介紹名人故事Besides,thestoriesofworld－famouspeoplearealsoattractivetome，whichhelpmelearnalotfromthem.例2：課前準(zhǔn)備，介紹唐朝歷史You’dbettermakefullpreparationsbeforeclassandhaveabriefunderstandingofthehistoryofTangDynasty，whichhelpsyoulearnmoreaboutChinesetraditionalculture.eq\a\vs4\al\co1(增加個(gè)人感受、評(píng)價(jià)、希望、倡議等)1．增加個(gè)人感受例：雖然這個(gè)暑假我覺(jué)得很累，但我為我所做的事情感到很高興。AlthoughIwasverytiredthissummerholiday，IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdidbecauseIgotaknowledgeoffarmingexperience.2．增加評(píng)價(jià)例：我想這樣的活動(dòng)是必要的和有意義的。Ithinksuchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful，fromwhichIlearnthatweshouldhelppeoplewhoareintroubleifpossible.3．增加希望例：我堅(jiān)信這是我一生中最難忘的午餐。(2021·焦作市第四次模擬)Iholdthefirmbeliefthatitwasthemostunforgettablelunchinmylife，becauseitmademeenjoythepleasureoflabor.4．增加倡議例：我從這次經(jīng)歷中學(xué)到的是，愛護(hù)和保護(hù)我們的社區(qū)是我們的責(zé)任。WhatIlearntfromthisexperienceisthatitisourdutytoloveandprotectourcommunity.SotheChairmanofourschoolsuggestsourschoolholdaseriesofactivitiestocallonstudentstotakeactiontodoit.(2021·高三英語(yǔ)重慶全真模擬)【即時(shí)訓(xùn)練1】根據(jù)提示增加相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)1．AsfarasIknow,Chinesetraditionalculture,includingpapercutting,guzhenandsoon,hasitsuniquecharacteristics.(including)(2021·全國(guó)甲卷)2．WhenIcamebackhome，Isharedmyexperienceswithmyparents.Andtheywereveryproudofme．(評(píng)價(jià))3．AndthereisawidevarietyofactivitieslikethedragondanceduringtheSpringFestivalhere．(like列舉)4．Atlast,IhopetoplayChinesechesswithyousothatwecanmakeprogresstogether．(添加結(jié)果)5．Asforme,I’mpassionateaboutbasketballsinceithasbeengivingmestrengthtoconfrontthechallengesinmylife．(添加原因)6．Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,refusetousesingle－useproductsandsaveenergy．(forexample)7．WeholdthefirmbeliefthatthevisitorswillknowmoreaboutChinesetraditionalculture，soIhopewestudentsshouldreadmorebooksaboutChinesetraditionalcultureinoursparetime．(so引導(dǎo)狀語(yǔ)從句)8．YuanLongping,anagriculturalscientistknownas“FatherofHybridRice”，developedtheworld’sfirstsuccessfulhybridricevarieties,whichincreasedriceproductioninChina．(which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)(2021·西安中學(xué)高三第五次模擬)eq\a\vs4\al()策略三詞匯升級(jí)——學(xué)會(huì)運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第五檔次的要求中提到，“詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致”。高級(jí)詞匯就像一顆顆耀眼的明珠，為作文增添光彩，從而使考生穩(wěn)拿高分。eq\a\vs4\al\co1(具體化原則)所謂詞義具體化原則是指，寫作中盡量避免使用意義寬泛、模糊的詞，而要根據(jù)語(yǔ)境使用具體生動(dòng)的詞。SogooddotheylookthatIthinkyoucouldbeinterestedinthem.→SoattractiveandalivedotheylookthatIthinkyoucouldbeinterestedinthem.(全國(guó)卷Ⅱ滿分作文)eq\a\vs4\al\co1(晚詞優(yōu)先原則)為了表現(xiàn)自己的語(yǔ)言功底，吸引閱卷老師的眼球，盡量用高年級(jí)階段學(xué)到的詞匯代替低年級(jí)階段學(xué)到的詞匯。Eventually,IwanttoknowwhichaspectsofChinesetraditionalculturearouseyourcuriositymost.→Eventually,IamstronglyeagertoknowwhichaspectsofChinesetraditionalculturearouseyourcuriositymost.(2021·全國(guó)甲卷滿分作文)eq\a\vs4\al\co1(短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則)用短語(yǔ)代替不僅會(huì)使文章增加亮點(diǎn)，而且如果關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻思維短路，用短語(yǔ)湊字是一個(gè)很好的選擇。(1)形容詞變短語(yǔ)的方法：of＋同根名詞Furthermore,guzhengisverysignificanttoChinesefolkmusicleadingyoutoafantasticworldofmusic.→Furthermore,guzhengisofgreatsignificancetoChinesefolkmusicleadingyoutoafantasticworldofmusic.(2021·全國(guó)甲卷滿分作文)(2)動(dòng)詞變短語(yǔ)的方法：同義短語(yǔ)替換know/realize→beawareofhelpsb→givesbahand/dosbafavouruse→makeuseof/takeadvantageofunderstand→figureout/makesenseofIfanyonehelpsyou，youshouldexpressyoursinceregratitudetohimorher.→Ifanyonegivesyouahand,youshouldexpressyoursinceregratitudetohimorher.【即時(shí)訓(xùn)練2】用高級(jí)詞匯替換加黑詞語(yǔ)1．Surroundedbygreentrees，thefarmisatthefootofthehillnearourschool.→Surroundedbygreentrees，thefarmis__located__atthefootofthehillnearourschool.(2020·全國(guó)卷Ⅱ滿分作文)2．Aimedtohelpustoknowtheimportanceofworking，anactivitythemed“Workingisthemostbeautiful”washeldlastweek.→Aimedtohelpustobe__aware__oftheimportanceofworking，anactivitythemed“Workingisthemostbeautiful”washeldlastweek.(2019·北京卷滿分作文)3．Iwouldreallyappreciateitifyoucouldconsidermyapplication.→Iwouldreallyappreciateitifyoucouldtake__my__application__into__consideration．(2019·全國(guó)卷Ⅰ滿分作文)4．Rememberthatyoushouldavoidgettinghurtduringthetrainingandkeepabalanceddiet.→Keep__in__mindthatyoushouldavoidgettinghurtduringthetrainingandkeepabalanceddiet.(2019·全國(guó)卷Ⅱ滿分作文)5．Therestandsabigstadiuminourschool，wheremanysportsactivitiesareheldthere.→Therestandsabigstadiuminourschool，wherea__large__number__ofsportsactivitiesareheldthere.(全國(guó)卷Ⅲ滿分作文)6．Ibelievethatourcountrywillbecomestrongerandstronger.→I__am__convinced__thatourcountrywillbecomestrongerandstronger.eq\a\vs4\al()策略四句式升級(jí)——學(xué)會(huì)運(yùn)用高級(jí)句式高考時(shí)，一篇書面表達(dá)中的句子如果都采用簡(jiǎn)單句，肯定不能得高分，精彩句式的合理使用會(huì)使文章讀起來(lái)抑揚(yáng)頓挫。固定句式(如with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)、強(qiáng)調(diào)句型等)、定語(yǔ)從句、現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)等都屬于較復(fù)雜的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)。這些結(jié)構(gòu)的正確使用，可以使文章的語(yǔ)言充滿層次感，從而較好地反映寫作者的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。eq\a\vs4\al\co1(學(xué)會(huì)使用高級(jí)簡(jiǎn)單句)1．運(yùn)用介詞短語(yǔ)IntheSpringFestivalof2021,ManypeoplechosetospendSpringFestivalincitieswheretheyworkinsteadofreturningtotheirhometownstoreducetheriskofCOVID－19transmission.(介詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ))(2021·許昌高三第二次質(zhì)量檢測(cè))為了降低COVID－19傳播的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)，2021年春節(jié)，很多人選擇在工作的城市過(guò)春節(jié)而不是回到家鄉(xiāng)。2．運(yùn)用不定式短語(yǔ)ItprovidesuswithagoodopportunitytohaveabettercommandoftraditionalChineseculture.(不定式短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ))(2021·淄博二模)它為我們更好地了解中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化提供了一個(gè)很好的機(jī)會(huì)。3．運(yùn)用分詞短語(yǔ)Youthcoversawidevarietyoftopicstoattractseniorstudents,leadingusintotheouterworld.(現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ))(2021·新高考卷Ⅰ滿分作文)《青年》題材廣泛，吸引高年級(jí)學(xué)生，帶領(lǐng)我們走進(jìn)外面的世界。Onarrivingatthefarmlocatedinthesuburbofourcity,seaofvegetablescameintooursight,whichincludedcucumbers,tomatoesandsoon.(過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ))(2021·濱州市二模)一到我們城郊的農(nóng)場(chǎng)，蔬菜的海洋就映入眼簾，有黃瓜、西紅柿等。eq\a\vs4\al\co1(學(xué)會(huì)使用高級(jí)復(fù)合句)1．a(chǎn)s和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句定語(yǔ)從句有多種形式，引導(dǎo)詞也有若干，但最容易掌握、最常運(yùn)用的是as和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。(1)表達(dá)“正如……”這一含義時(shí)，我們常用as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，它常放在主句之前，有時(shí)也可放在主句之中或主句之后。常見的句式有：·Asweallknow.../Asisknowntoall...眾所周知……·Asthefamoussayinggoes...正如名言所說(shuō)……Asweallknow，ourfriendslendusahelpinghandwhenweneedhelpandtheyhelpusgetthroughdifficultsituations.眾所周知，在我們需要幫助的時(shí)候，我們的朋友會(huì)伸出援手，并且他們會(huì)幫助我們渡過(guò)困境。(2)which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句which在引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句時(shí)，可以指代某個(gè)單詞，也可以代指整個(gè)主句，在從句中可以作主語(yǔ)或賓語(yǔ)。TointroduceChinesetraditionalculture,ourschoolwillholdathemeclassmeeting,whichwillbeexhibitedontheEnglishwebsite.(2021·全國(guó)甲卷滿分作文)為了介紹中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化，我們學(xué)校將舉辦一次主題班會(huì)，并在英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站上展示。2．what和that引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句名詞性從句包括主語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句、表語(yǔ)從句和同位語(yǔ)從句。其中what，that所引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句是寫作中常見的高級(jí)表達(dá)方式。what在名詞性從句中作主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)、表語(yǔ)或定語(yǔ)，而that在從句中不作任何成分，只起連接作用。IsincerelyhopethatYouthcanmakenewprogressandthatmorereaderswillparticipateintheinteractionandsharetheirownstores.(2021·新高考卷Ⅰ滿分作文)我真心希望《青年》能有新的進(jìn)步，更多的讀者參與互動(dòng)，分享自己的店鋪。Whatyoutoldmeaboutyourcountrybroadenedmyhorizonsandarousedmyinterestinforeignculture.(主語(yǔ)從句)(2019·浙江卷滿分作文)你告訴我的關(guān)于你的國(guó)家的事情開闊了我的視野，激發(fā)了我對(duì)外國(guó)文化的興趣。eq\a\vs4\al\co1(學(xué)會(huì)使用特殊句式)1．強(qiáng)調(diào)句型強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的使用是為了突出強(qiáng)調(diào)句子的某一部分，它是一種比較容易掌握的高級(jí)表達(dá)方式。其構(gòu)成：Itis/was＋被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分＋that/who＋其他。Wecreatedaharmoniousatmospherewithsincerityandfaithfulness.→Itwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwecreatedaharmoniousatmosphere.2．倒裝句在寫作中倒裝句應(yīng)用比較廣泛，涉及的句型也比較多，包括部分倒裝和全部倒裝。常見的有：(1)“only＋狀語(yǔ)”置于句首時(shí)，句子用部分倒裝。Inconclusion,onlybybeingsmartonlinelearnerscanwetrulyenjoythebenefitsofmoderntechnology.(2021·全國(guó)乙卷)總之，只有成為聰明的在線學(xué)習(xí)者，我們才能真正享受現(xiàn)代技術(shù)的好處。(2)none，neither，nor，not，never，hardly，little，seldom等否定詞，以及由no或者not構(gòu)成的否定短語(yǔ)，如notonly...butalso...，atnotime，bynomeans等置于句首時(shí)，句子用部分倒裝。Duringthewalk，notonlydidwebreathethefreshairbutalsoappreciatedthefantasticsurroundingviews.(2021·南陽(yáng)高考模擬一)在散步的過(guò)程中，我們不僅呼吸了新鮮空氣，而且欣賞了周圍的美景。(3)在so/such...that...結(jié)構(gòu)中，當(dāng)so/such...位于句首時(shí)，其后的句子用部分倒裝。IntheForestPark，soattractivewasthelandscapethatallourstresswasrelieved.(2021·咸陽(yáng)市高考模擬一)在森林公園里，風(fēng)景如此迷人，我們的壓力都減輕了?！炯磿r(shí)訓(xùn)練3】用高級(jí)句式升級(jí)下列句子1．Forexample，therearehugeamountsofreferencebooks.Iamoftenconfusedtochoosefromthem.(定語(yǔ)從句)→Forexample，therearehugeamountsofreferencebooksfromwhichIamoftenconfusedtochoose．2．IrealizedtheimportanceofEnglishwhenIenteredseniorhighschool.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句)→ItwaswhenIenteredseniorhighschoolthatIrealizedtheimportanceofEnglish.3．Theenvironmentwillneverimproveuntileverybodytakescareofit.(倒裝)→Notuntileverybodytakescareofitwilltheenvironmentimprove.4．Therearealotoftreesandflowersinourschoolandourschoollookslikeabiggarden.(with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))→Withalotoftreesandflowersinourschoolourschoollookslikeabiggarden.5．Theydidn’trealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectionuntilallthefishintheriverdiedout.→Notuntilallthefishintheriverdiedoutdidtheyrealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection.(倒裝句)→Itwasnotuntilallthefishintheriverdiedoutthattheyrealizedtheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句)精做高考真題1．（2022·浙江·統(tǒng)考高考真題）假定你是李華，你校圖書館新開設(shè)“小組學(xué)習(xí)室”，請(qǐng)你給你的留學(xué)生同學(xué)Michael寫一封信，邀請(qǐng)他一同體驗(yàn)，內(nèi)容包括：1.位置與開放時(shí)間；2.室內(nèi)設(shè)施和功能。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMichael,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考答案】DearMichael,Goodnews!Recently,anewly-furnishedsection,consistingofeightGroupLearningRooms,hasbeenopentousstudentsinourschoollibrary.Locatedonthethirdfloorbesidetheonlinereadingrooms,itcanbeaccessiblefrom8amtill9pmthroughouttheweekdays.Thoseroomsareequippedwithmodernelectronicfacilities,allofwhicharelinkedtotheInternet.It’sreallyconvenientforustodosomegroupprojects.Whynotaskourgroupmemberstogoandexperienceit?Earlyreplyandwecanreserveoneroomforourproject.Yours,LiHua【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，假定考生是李華，你校圖書館新開設(shè)“小組學(xué)習(xí)室”，請(qǐng)你給你的留學(xué)生同學(xué)Michael寫一封信，邀請(qǐng)他一同體驗(yàn)。【詳情解析】1.詞匯積累由……組成：consistof→bemadeupof位于：belocatedon→besituatedon與……相連接：belinkedto→beconnectedto預(yù)定：reserve→book2.句式拓展合并簡(jiǎn)單句原句：Recently,anewly-furnishedsection,consistingofeightGroupLearningRooms,hasbeenopentousstudentsinourschoollibrary.拓展句：Recently,anewly-furnishedsection,whichconsistsofeightGroupLearningRooms,hasbeenopentousstudentsinourschoollibrary.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Thoseroomsareequippedwithmodernelectronicfacilities,allofwhicharelinkedtotheInternet.（ofwhich引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）[高分句型2]Locatedonthethirdfloorbesidetheonlinereadingrooms,itcanbeaccessiblefrom8amtill9pmthroughouttheweekdays.（過(guò)去分詞作狀語(yǔ)）2．（2022·全國(guó)·統(tǒng)考高考真題）假定你是校廣播站英語(yǔ)節(jié)目“TalkandTalk”的負(fù)責(zé)人李華，請(qǐng)給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請(qǐng)她做一次訪談。內(nèi)容包括：1.節(jié)目介紹；2.訪談的時(shí)間和話題。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearCaroline,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【參考答案】DearCaroline,ThisismyfirsttimethatIhaveinvitedyoutoattendourprogram—TalkandTalk.ItistenyearssinceTalkandTalkwasestablished.Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.IfyouareavailableonthisSunday,ItogetherwiththewholeTalkandTalkstaffamwaitingforyourcoming.I’dappreciateitifyoutakemyinvitationintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封郵件邀請(qǐng)你的外教Caroline來(lái)你校的廣播站英語(yǔ)節(jié)目“TalkandTalk”做一次訪談。【詳情解析】1.詞匯積累參加：attend→participatein建立：establish→setup幫助：aid→assistance許多：plentyof→alotof2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.拓展句：Youareourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,whoseaidcanhelpusalot.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.(運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.(運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句的省略結(jié)構(gòu))3．（2022·全國(guó)·高考真題）你校將以六月八日世界海洋日為主題，舉辦英語(yǔ)征文比賽，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.保護(hù)海洋的倡議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.短文的題目和首句已為你寫好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】Whenitcomestoocean,itspollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.WorldOceanDay,fallingonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.Oceanplaysakeyroleinourworld.Notonlydoesoceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.Thus,itisimperativetoprotectocean.Firstofall,whatwecandoistoplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.Forexample,garbagecan’tbethrownintoocean.What’smore,wecanalsohandoutleafletstocallonmorepeopletoprotecttheocean.Themorepeopleareinvolved,thebettertheoceanenvironmentis.Allinall,itishightimethatwedevotedourselvestoprotectingocean.Toprotectoceanistoprotectourselves.【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，就世界海洋日為主題向英文征文比賽投稿，闡述海洋的重要性并提出一些建議。【詳情解析】1.詞匯積累越來(lái)越：moreandmore→increasingly重視：placeimportanceon→attachimportanceto重要的：key→significant此外：what’smore→furthermore2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：WorldOceanDay,fallingonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.拓展句：WorldOceanDay,whichfallsonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Notonlydoesoceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.(運(yùn)用了部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu))[高分句型2]Whenitcomestoocean,itspollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.(使用了固定句型)[高分句型3]Firstofall,whatwecandoistoplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.(使用了主語(yǔ)從句)挑戰(zhàn)名?？碱}1．（2023·四川南充·統(tǒng)考一模）假定你是李華,你的英國(guó)好友Peter準(zhǔn)備參加“元旦漢語(yǔ)詩(shī)歌朗誦比賽”,向你咨詢建議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示給他回復(fù)郵件。內(nèi)容包括：1.朗誦選材;2.朗誦技巧;3.其他注意事項(xiàng)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;；2.可以運(yùn)當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearPeter,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考答案】DearPeter,IamdelightedtohearthatyouaregoingtoparticipateintheChinesepoetryrecitationcontesttobeheldinourschoolonNewYear’sDay.Iamwritingtooffersomeadvice,whichIhopemaybeofgreathelptoyou.ConsideringthatthecomingcontestisrelatedtoNewYear,you’dbetterchoosesomeChinesepoetrywiththethemeofbiddingfarewelltotheoldyearandwelcomingthenewyear.Whenitcomestorecitationtechniques,youaresupposedtospeakstandardMandarinandpayattentiontousingproperpronunciation,stress,intonationandspeed.Inaddition,practicemakesperfect.Therefore,youcan’tpracticetoomanytimesinadvance.Bytheway,Ihavecollectedsomeclassicpoemsthatfeatureblessingsforthenewyearandattachedthemtothemail.Ifthereisanyproblem,don’thesitatetocontactme.Hopeyoucantakemyadviceintoconsiderationandlookforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給英國(guó)將準(zhǔn)備參加“元旦漢語(yǔ)詩(shī)歌朗誦比賽”好友Peter寫一封郵件給出建議，其內(nèi)容包括朗誦選材、朗誦技巧和其他注意事項(xiàng)?！驹斍榻馕觥?.詞匯積累建議：advice→suggestion期待：hope→expect幫助：help→assistance而且：Inaddition→what'smore2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Inaddition,practicemakesperfect.拓展句：Inaddition,itisknowntousallthatpracticemakesperfect.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】IamdelightedtohearthatyouaregoingtoparticipateintheChinesepoetryrecitationcontesttobeheldinourschoolonNewYear’sDay.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Iamwritingtooffersomeadvice,whichIhopemaybeofgreathelptoyou.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）2．（2023·全國(guó)·一模）假定你是李華，美國(guó)“漢語(yǔ)橋(ChineseBridge)”網(wǎng)上冬令營(yíng)組織方正在網(wǎng)上征集活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，歡迎網(wǎng)友獻(xiàn)計(jì)獻(xiàn)策。請(qǐng)你給組織方寫一封建議信，內(nèi)容包括：1.你建議的活動(dòng)(至少兩項(xiàng))；2.你的理由；3.你的希望。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Dearcommitteemembers,I’mgladtoknowthat_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考答案】Dearcommitteemembers,IamgladtoknowthatyouaremakingacallforeventsforyourChineseBridgeonlinewintercamp.First,I’dliketorecommendyouashortvideoabouttheoriginationoftheChinesecharacters.Fullofgreatfun,thevideowillarouseforeigners’interestinChinesecharacters.Secondly,youcanholdastorytellingcompetitiontospreadChineseculture.Thiscanfurthercampers’understandingofChina,buildingagoodbridgebetweenChinaandtheoutsideworld.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給美國(guó)“漢語(yǔ)橋(ChineseBridge)”網(wǎng)上冬令營(yíng)組織方寫一封建議信，內(nèi)容包括：1.你建議的活動(dòng)（至少兩項(xiàng)）；2.你的理由；3.你的希望?！驹斍榻馕觥?.詞匯積累首先：first→firstofall充滿：befullof→befilledwith想要做某事：wouldliketodosth.→feellikedoingsth.舉辦、組織：hold→organize2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Fullofgreatfun,thevideowillarouseforeigners’interestinChinesecharacters.拓展句：Thevideoisfullofgreatfun,whichwillarouseforeigners’interestinChinesecharacters.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Thiscanfurthercampers’understandingofChina,buildingagoodbridgebetweenChinaandtheoutsideworld.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ))【高分句型2】Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.(運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句)3．（2023·四川德陽(yáng)·統(tǒng)考一模）假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Mark發(fā)電子郵件告訴你，他最近容易發(fā)脾氣，嚴(yán)重影響學(xué)習(xí)和生活，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他回復(fù)，內(nèi)容如下：1．表示理解并給予安慰；2．提出建議并說(shuō)明理由。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMark,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考答案】DearMark,Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Actually,itiscommonforpeopletohaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong.Soyoudon’thavetoworrysomuch.HereI’dliketogiveyousomeusefultips.First,youcantalktosomeoneyoutrustabouthowyoufeel.Itisagoodwaytoletyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second,gooutdoorsandplaygameswithyourfriends,forphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofbadfeelings.Third,keepoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Suchapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.Ihopeyou’llsoonfeelcalmerandcarryonasnormal.Yours,LiHua【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國(guó)筆友Mark發(fā)電子郵件就他最近的情緒問(wèn)題表示理解、給予安慰并提出建議?！驹斍榻馕觥?.詞匯積累建議：tips→suggestions擺脫：getridof→remove提高：lift→improve繼續(xù)：carryon→goon2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Itisagoodwaytoletyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.拓展句：Itisagoodwaythatyoucanletyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Actually,itiscommonforpeopletohaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong.（運(yùn)用了it做形式主語(yǔ)以及關(guān)系副詞when引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Suchapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.（運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)做賓語(yǔ)）4．（2023·湖南岳陽(yáng)·統(tǒng)考一模）假設(shè)你是中學(xué)生李華，在英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)，擔(dān)任學(xué)校中國(guó)語(yǔ)言與文化社社長(zhǎng)。近期，校學(xué)生會(huì)發(fā)布了舉辦“國(guó)際文化節(jié)”的通知，參加活動(dòng)會(huì)有一個(gè)攤位進(jìn)行宣傳，請(qǐng)寫一封郵件申請(qǐng)一個(gè)攤位。內(nèi)容包括：1.你的攤位名稱：中國(guó)茶藝展；2.具體活動(dòng)安排。參考詞匯：攤位booth注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearStudentUnion,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerelyyours,LiHua【參考答案】DearStudentUnion,IamLiHua,presidentofChinalanguageandCultureSociety.IamgladtoknowthattheannualInternationalCulturalFestivalistobeheldsoon.Iamwritingtoapplyforabooth.ThenameoftheboothisChineseTeaArtShow,wherewewillintroducedifferentkindsofChineseTeaanditsbenefits.Chineseteaisconsideredasthemostbeneficialdrinkwithalonghistoryofplanting.Ithasbecomeagreen,healthyandpopulardrinkinourdailylife,throughwhichwecanenjoyahealthyandpleasantlife.BesidesstudentsvisitingourboothwillenjoydrinkingvariousChinesetea.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucantakemyapplicationintoaccount.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Sincerelyyours,LiHua【語(yǔ)篇解讀】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。學(xué)校將舉辦“國(guó)際文化節(jié)”，要求考生給學(xué)生會(huì)寫信申請(qǐng)一個(gè)攤位對(duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化進(jìn)行宣傳?！驹斍榻馕觥?.詞匯積累開心的：glad→delighted種類：kind→sort被認(rèn)為是：beconsideredas→beregardedas考慮：oaccount→oconsideration2.句型拓展合并句子原句：Chineseteaisconsideredasthemostbeneficialdrinkwithalonghistoryofplanting.Ithasbecomeagreen,healthyandpopulardrinkinourdailylife,throughwhichwecanenjoyahealthyandpleasantlife.拓展句：Consideredasthemostbeneficialdrinkwithalonghistoryofplanting,Chinesehasbecomeagreen,healthyandpopulardrinkinourdailylife,throughwhichwecanenjoyahealthyandpleasantlife.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]IamgladtoknowthattheannualInternationalCulturalFestivalistobeheldsoon.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）[高分句型2]ThenameoftheboothisChineseTeaArtShow,wherewewillintroducedifferentkindsofChineseTeaanditsbenefits.（運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語(yǔ)從句）5．（2023·四川涼山·統(tǒng)考一模）假定你叫李華，下周六你班要做義賣捐贈(zèng)活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給你的外籍老師Chris寫封郵件，邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)目的；2.活動(dòng)安排(時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)及內(nèi)容)；3.期待他的參加。注意：字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。參考詞匯：acharitysale義賣DearChris,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考答案】DearChris,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinacharitysaleinourschool.Withthepurposeofhelpingchildreninremotemountainousareas,weplantodonatesomeusefulstudyingitemstocovertheshortageoftheirstudyingmaterials.ThecharitysaleisscheduledonourschoolplaygroundnextSaturdayfrom8:00amto11:00am.Ourclassmatesintendtosellsomeusedclothesandshoesonthatday.Afterthesale,we’llgiveawaythemoneytothechildrenfordifferentschoolsupplies,whichincludebooks,stationeryandlearningmaterials.Knowingthatyouareawarm-heartedperson,passionateabouthelpingothe