2010.12英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

2010.12英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)LtD2010.12英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：2分……條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。5分……基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。8分……基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫;語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。11分……切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。14分……切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性好?；旧蠠o(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。(注:白卷,作文與題目毫不相關(guān),或只有幾個(gè)孤立的詞而無(wú)法表達(dá)思想,則給0分。)常見(jiàn)寫作錯(cuò)誤一、主語(yǔ)錯(cuò)誤1.主語(yǔ)缺失1)Inourcountryfeelsveryfree.Peoplefeelfreeinourcountry.2)Inmyhometownaren’tverybusy.Peopleinmyhometownareverybusy.2.非名詞主語(yǔ)1)Richdoesn’tensureahappylife.Theysuggestthatweshouldchooseonlygoodbookstoreadandnevertouchbadones.四、代詞錯(cuò)誤1.偷梁換柱1)Animportantthingforthestudenttorememberisthatwhenwritingapaper,youshouldnotplagiarize.Animportantthingforthestudenttorememberisthatwhenwritingapaper,heshouldnotplagiarize.2)Ifwecheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone.Ifwecheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveusandtheywillleaveusalong./Ifyoucheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone.2.指代不明1)Hegaveareasonfornotattendingthemeeting,whichnobodybelieved.Hegaveareason,whichnobodybelieved,fornotattendingthemeeting./Hegaveareasonfornotattendingthemeeting,areasonwhichnobodybelieved.2)Sometimesteachershavetoinformthestudentsoftheheavyburdentheyhavetobear.Sometimesteachershavetoinformthestudentsoftheheavyburdenstudentshavetobear.五、形容詞、副詞錯(cuò)誤1)Whatismore,thechangeoftheweatherwillmaketheplacelookdifferently.Whatismore,thechangeoftheweatherwillmaketheplacelookdifferent.2)Surprisingenough,hefacesthefailureverybravely.Surprisinglyenough,hefacesthefailureverybravely.六、分詞誤用1)Comparingwithothercountries,Chinapayslittleattentiontotheenergyproblem.Comparedwithothercountries,Chinapayslittleattentiontotheenergyproblem.2)Thosespiritswerejustlikeanindispensablepartofthewholepicturewhenviewingthroughmycamera.Thosespiritswerejustlikeanindispensablepartofthewholepicturewhenviewedthroughmycamera.七、修飾語(yǔ)誤置1)SpokenEnglishisanimportantpartforlearningEnglishpeople.SpokenEnglishisanimportantpartforpeoplelearningEnglish.2)Tokeeptheairclean,wemustmovethefactorieswhichgiveoffpoisonousgasestothecountryside.Tokeeptheairclean,wemustmovetothecountrysidethefactorieswhichgiveoffpoisonousgasestothecountryside.八、垂懸修飾語(yǔ)1)Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,people’slivingstandardhasbeengreatlyimproved.Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,peoplehavegreatlyimprovedtheirlivingstandard.2)Totellmyfriendthegoodnews,theletterwaspostedatonce.<br>Totellmyfriendthegoodnews,Ipostedtheletteratonce.九、平行錯(cuò)誤<br>1)Whilewereducethenumberofvehicles,thespeedoftrafficcanbeincreased.<br>Whilewereducethenumberofvehicles,wecanincreasethespeedoftraffic.<br>2)BeforeIselectedthenewcourse,myteacherwarnedmeofthedifficultyofthecourseandhowlongitlasted.<br>BeforeIselectedthenewcourse,myteacherwarnedmeofthedifficultyandlengthofthecourse./BeforeIselectedthenewcourse,myteacherwarnedmehowdifficultthecoursewasandhowlongitlasted.十、搭配錯(cuò)誤<br>1)Inthepastthepriceofmeatwassoexpensivethatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.<br>Inthepastthepriceofmeatwassohighthatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.<br>2)Crowdedtrafficinsomelargecitiesisabigproblemforcitydwellers.Heavytrafficinsomelargecitiesisabigproblemforcitydwellers.十一、破句<br>1)Nowadays,ifyouwanttofindajob.Thenyoumustpassthejobinterview.<br>Nowadays,ifyouwanttofindajob,youmustpassthejobinterview.br>2)