讀后續(xù)寫之感激感動講義-高考英語作文備考

01—亮點好詞：表“感激感動”形容詞thankful/grateful/moved/touched/relieved/warm名詞gratitude/touch/relief/warmth/appreciation名詞多用于“介詞+名詞”結(jié)構(gòu)中（置于句尾，表狀態(tài)）with

relief/

gratitude/pride02—亮點短語:表“感激感動”流下感激的淚水shedtearsof

gratitude感動的落淚bemovedtotears對......深表感恩haveadeepgratitudetowards...松了一口氣breathe

a

sighof

relief/sighwithrelief/

toone'srelief/gaspwithrelief哽咽的withalumpin

one'sthroat為了感謝in

gratitudefor

...

03—亮點好句:表“感激感動”動作/語言描寫+情感詞匯感激的淚水順著臉頰流下，皮特緊緊地抱著格林。Withtearsofgratituderolling/streamingdownhischeeks,PeterhuggedGreentightly.

(with復合結(jié)構(gòu)）我非常感動，喉嚨哽咽，更大聲地鼓掌。Touched

deeply

andfeelingalumpinmy

throat(非謂語）,Iclapped

myhands

evenmore

loudly.看到陌生人之間這般彼此關(guān)照，實在令人感動。（結(jié)尾的感悟）Itis

verymovingtoseehowmuch

strangers

cancarefor

eachother.我終于坐下來哭了起來，心中滿是溫暖和寬慰。I

finallysatdown

andcried,

amixtureof

warmthandrelief

flooded/washedoverme.我們爬上了直升機，松了口氣。（脫險后情感）We

climbedintothehelicopter,

gaspingwithrelief/

breathing

asighof

relief.(非謂語）神態(tài)描寫+情感詞匯他在寒冷的天氣里感到溫暖，相信處處都有好心人。He

feltwarm

inthecoldweather,andbelievedthere

was

kindnessineverycorner.他們彼此凝視，心中一陣寬慰。Theylookedat

eachother,andfelt

awaveof

relief

went

through

/floodedover/washedover

them.我被震撼了，心中滿是對這個勇敢男孩的驕傲和愛。I

was

blownaway

andmyheartwasfullofprideandloveforthe

braveboy其他感動的句子①Toucheddeeply/immensely,we…被深深感動，我們……②Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.她熱淚盈眶，表示衷心的感謝。③Withtearsstreamingdownherface,she...淚水順著她的臉頰流了下來，……④Ifeelcontentabout…我對某事感到滿足。⑤Ifeelsatisfactoryabout..我對某事感到滿意。⑥Thatit’sthosesmalldailyhappeningsthatmakelifesospectacular.就是一些生活的瑣碎讓生命壯麗。⑦Theexplanationisasatisfactory/satisfyingone.這是一種令人滿意的解釋。⑧Myheartsurge,likethetinywavesfromamirrorofthelake.Foralongtime,myheartisfilledwithgratitudeandjoy.我心潮騰涌，就像平如鏡的湖泊泛起層層的微波，半晌，心里都是感激和喜悅。⑨Atthistime,myheartislikeadryriverbedslowlymoistenedbyatrickleofwater.此時，我的心像是斷流的河床被涓涓的細流慢慢滋潤⑩Thereseemstobeawarmcurrentshuttlinginthesmallatriumintheheart.心里似乎有一股暖流在小小的心房中穿梭。?Tearsflowedfrommyeyesandslippedgentlytomymouth.ButIsmiled,tastingthesweettears.淚水從眼眶中流出，輕輕地滑落到嘴邊，可是，我嘗嘗這甜甜的淚，笑了。?Itislikeahotspring,flowingintomyheartslowlyandrunningallovermybody.它猶如一股溫泉，慢慢地流入我的心田，流遍我的全身。?Mynosebeingverysour,Iputonthegloveswithtearsrestrainedfrommyeyes.Janewassmilingknowingly.我的鼻子酸酸的，忍著想要奪眶而出的眼淚，帶上了手套，Jane會心地笑了。?Forhim,itmayhavebeenajoke,butitmovedmetotearsinaflash.對他來說，也許這是調(diào)侃的，但剎那間使我感動到熱淚盈眶。?Lookingatthe"soaked"motherandherkindface,Ifeelawarmflowinmyheart.Icannothelpbutcryagain.望著“落湯雞”似的媽媽，望著她那親切的面孔，我感到一股暖流淌在我的心田，我不禁又哭了起來。?Ifeltawarmupsurgeinmyheart.Tearscouldnothelpflowingdown.我感到一股暖烘烘的熱潮涌上心頭，淚水不由自主的流淌下來。?Itwasaneventthathappenedintheschoollastyear.Butitisnowstillfreshinmymindandkeepsmetouchedallthetime.那是去年發(fā)生在學校的一件事，卻讓我記憶猶新，至今令我感動不已。04—微續(xù)寫:表“感激感動”境操請根據(jù)所給情節(jié)，嘗試續(xù)寫人物感激、溫暖的情節(jié)。利用動作、神態(tài)和語言描寫等表現(xiàn)人物的感激和如釋重負。ona

coldmorning,

Peter

wasnearly

knocked

down

bya

passingcarwhenapasser-by

pushedhim

tosafety...參考版本W(wǎng)ithtearsofgratitudehanginginhiseyes,

hethankedthepasser-by

withalumpinhisthroat,

"Thankyousomuch!"Butthepasser-by

justsmiledwarmly.Peterfeltwarminthecoldweather,believing

therewaskindnessineverycorner.

Itwasverymovingtoseehow

much

strangerscouldcareforeachother.

Toucheddeeply,

thecrowdclappedtheirhandsloudly.

Later,

knowingwhathad

happened,

Peter's

mother

gasped

withrelief,

and

shedtears

ofgratitude.05練習①翻譯：“看到我的成績單，媽媽笑了?！?、用最基本的句型概括描述。______________________________________2、請在概括描述的基礎(chǔ)上增加細節(jié)描述，使句子變得豐滿。注意邏輯關(guān)系以及語意的合理性。1）_______________________________________2）_______________________________________3）_______________________________________②填入漂亮的表達。1.(他的臉笑開了一朵花)__________________________ashesawherstandingthere,safeandsound.2.(他朝我咧嘴笑了笑)_______________________,letgoofmyhandandwalkedaway.答案：1.Lookingatmyreportcard,mymothersmiled.2.1)Lookingatmyreportcard,mymothersmiledwithsatisfaction.2)Lookingatmyreportcard,mymotherwassohappythathermouthwaslikeablossomoflotusflowernevergoingtoclose.3)Lookingatmyrepor