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Unit1FestivalsandcelebrationsReadingforWritingWriteaboutyourfestivalexperienceLeadinInourlastlesson,wecantalkaboutourfestivalexperiences.Canyousharearecentfestivalexperiencewithus?1.Whatfestivalorcelebrationhaveyouexperiencedrecently?2.Whatactivitiesdidyoudoduringthatfestivalorcelebration?3.Whatwereyourfeelingsduringandafterthefestivalorcelebration?LeadinWhichpartofafestivaldoyoulikebest:theactivities,themusic,thesights,orthefood?Date:Fallsonthe15thdayoftheeightmonthofthelunarcalendarActivities:·Haveafamilyget-together·Admirethebrightfullmoon·Enjoymooncakes·Hangupthelanterns·WatchtheTidalBore(觀潮)…Feelings:delighted;excited;tired…Now,canyouwriteaboutyourfestivalexperience?Today,let'sreadthearticleMyAmazingNaadamExperiencetolearnhowtowriteyourfestivalexperience.ReadingReadthediaryentryandanswerthequestions.P811.Whatfestivaldidtheauthorexperience?Where,whenandhowlong?2.Whatdoes“Naadam”mean?Whicheventsdoesitinclude?3.WhatNaadamFestivalcustomsdidyoulearnabout?4.Whatinyouropinionisthemostimpressivethingaboutthefestival?5.Whatelsewouldyouliketoknowaboutthefestivalandthewriter'sexperience?Checkyouranswers.1.Whatfestivaldidtheauthorexperience?Where,whenandhowlong?NaadamFestival.Fallsonthe4th
dayofthesixthmonthofthelunarcalendarInChina'sInnerMongoliaAutonomousRegion內(nèi)蒙古自治區(qū)LastsforthreedaysWhere?When?Howlong?2.Whatdoes“Naadam”mean?Whicheventsdoesitinclude?Naadammeans“games”inMongolian,anditincludeshorseracing,wrestling,andarchery.horseracingarcherywrestling3.WhatNaadamFestivalcustomsdidyou
learnabout?Wrestlingandhorseracing.4.Whatinyouropinionisthemostimpressivethingaboutthefestival?Possibleanswer:Thehorseracingisthemostimpressive,asitinvolvedlittlechildren.5.Whatelsewouldyouliketoknowaboutthefestivalandthewriter'sexperience?Possibleanswer:Thewriterdidnottalkaboutfoodormusic,butsurelytheyshouldhavebeeninterestingpartsofthefestival.Inwhatorderdidtheauthorwritethediary?Andhowdoyouknowthat?TimeorderTip:
Tomakeourarticlemoreorganised,wecanfollowthetimeorderwhenwriting.Whatactivitiesdidtheauthorexperience?(1)openingceremony(2)wrestlingcompetition(3)archery(4)horseracingAnalysingStudytheorganisationandlanguagefeatures.Readthediaryentryagainandanalyseitsstructure.Statethetopic(e.g.where,whenandwithwhomyoucelebratedthefestival,andalsoyourmainfeelings).OpeningParagraphFirstBodyParagraphDescribethestartofthefestivalandthesurroundings.SecondBodyParagraphDescribeindetailthefestivalactivities.ThirdBodyParagraphDescribeindetailthefestivalactivities.Closing
ParagraphGiveabriefsummaryoftheexperience.Readthesentencepatternsbelowandusethemtorewritetheopeningsentenceofthearticle.P92
Thiswasmyfirsttimespending…anditwasanenjoyableandexcitingexperienceforme.
I'llneverforget…because…
I'llalways…because….Possibleanswer:Thiswasmyfirsttimespending
myholidayinChina'sInnerMongoliaAutonomousRegiontocelebratetheNaadamFestival,
anditwasanenjoyableandexcitingexperienceforme./I'llneverforgettheNaadamFestivalinChina'sInnerMongoliaAutonomousRegionbecauseitwasanenjoyableandexcitingexperienceforme./I'llalwaysremembertheNaadamFestivalinChina'sInnerMongoliaAutonomousRegionbecauseitwasanenjoyableandexcitingexperienceforme.Underlinethesentencesthatdescribethewriter'sfeelingsandemotions.P92Iwasquitemovedby…Iabsolutelyenjoyedthearchery…butthehorseracesweremyfavoritepart.Iwassurprisedtoseethat…Iwasalittleworriedaboutthechildren’ssafety.feelingreallytired…wastotallyworthit.Ican’twait!…,whichareallsoexcitingtowatch!WritingUsewhatyouhavelearnttowriteaboutafestivaloracelebrationyouhaveexperiencedrecently.Makenotesofyourideasinthetableandthenwriteyourdraft.OutlineThenameofthefestival/celebration:______________MainideaofeachparagraphDetailsFeelings1Thetopicandmyfeeling2HowIpreparedforthefestival/celebration3Thefestival/celebrationactivities4Asummaryofmyfestival/celebrationexperienceP93Usewhatyouhavelearnttowriteaboutafestivaloracelebrationyouhaveexperiencedrecently.1Makenotesofyourideasinthetableandthenwriteyourdraft.OutlineThenameofthefestival/celebration:_____________...,withahistoryof...,isoneofthemostimportanttraditionalfestivalsin......iscelebratedon......ishavingagoodtime,singinganddancing....isexcitingandnoisy....was/werefilledwith...Exchangedraftswithapartner.Usethechecklisttogivefeedbackonyourpartner'sdraft.P93Isthewritingwell-organised?Isthereanopeningsentenceinthefirstparagrpah?
Doeseachparagraphincludethenecessarydetails?Doesthewriterdescribehis/herfeelingsandemotions?
Doesthewriterusethe-ingformcorrectlyinthewriting?Arethereanygrammar,spelling,orpunctuationerrors?Getyourdraftbackandreviseit.Putupyourwritinginyourclassroomorreadittotheclass.P94SampleWritingJuly4,2018TodaywasmyfirstfourthofJulycelebration,andI'llalwaysrememberitbecauseitwassowonderful.ThefourthofJulyisIndependenceDayintheUS-theanniversaryofthedaytheUnitedStatesbecameitsowncountryin1776.Ibeganthedaybypackingmyswimmingsuitandatowel.ThenIwentwithmyhostfamilytoasupermarkettoloaduponfoodanddrinks.Afterthatwewereofftoafriend'sranchoutinthecountryforabarbecueandpoolparty.Itwasallsoamazing!Whiletheadultscookedfoodonthebarbecue,weplayedinthepool.Thenweallateandateuntilwewerecompletelystuffed.Ourfriendshadsomeoldicecreamchurners,soafterlunchwealltookturnschurninghomemadeicecream.Sincethetemperatureoutsidewasaround40degrees,itseemedliketheicecreamtookforever!Iwouldturnthehandleonthechurnuntilmyarmwassore,andthensomeoneelsewouldtakeover.Butitwasallworthit,becausewhenwewerefinisheditwasthemostfantasticicecreamIhaveevereaten!Then,someoneaskedmeifIwouldliketotryhorsebackriding.Iwasafraidatfirst,buttheygavemeaverygentlehorse.Itwassopeacefultoridethehorsethroughthefieldsandforest.Finally,whenitgrewdark,wehadathrillingfireworksdisplay.NowI'mbackhomewithmyhostfamily.ThoughI'mtired,Ithinkthishadtobethemostexcitingdayofmylife!Ican'twaitfornextyear!一、審題定調(diào)本寫作任務(wù)要求記述一次自己的節(jié)日經(jīng)歷,屬于記敘文。在介紹節(jié)日經(jīng)歷時(shí),可以按照時(shí)間順序或事件發(fā)展的順序?qū)?jié)日經(jīng)歷或慶?;顒?dòng)展開敘述。
二、謀篇布局第一部分:點(diǎn)明節(jié)日并表明自己的感受;
第二部分:具體敘述節(jié)日前的準(zhǔn)備和節(jié)日中的活動(dòng);第三部分:總結(jié)節(jié)日經(jīng)歷。MyExperienceDuringtheDoubleNinthFestivalAsoneofthemostpopulartraditionalfestivalsinChina,theDoubleNinthFestivalisobservedonthe9thdayofthe9thlunarmonth,whichisagreatoccasiontoshowrespectfortheelderly.IstillremembermyfamilyclimbingMountSongshantocelebratetheDoubleNinthFestivallastyear.Ittookusanhourtogettherebycar.Westoppedatthefootofthemountainandstartedclimbing.Sinceourgrandfatherisinhissixties,wewalkedslowlytomakesurehewasnottootired.Werelaxedourselvesalongthewaybychattingwitheachotherandtakingphotos.Afterwereachedthetop,wehadagoodrest.Thenwetookthecablecars(纜車)downthehill,whichallowedustoenjoytheamazingsights.
ThetriptoMountSongshanhelpedmetorealizethatitisimportanttohavefamilytripssothatwecancommunicatewitheachotherandhavefuntogether.1.
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