2023年安徽中考英語(yǔ)總復(fù)習(xí)二輪專(zhuān)題：熱點(diǎn)材料寫(xiě)作：習(xí)慣養(yǎng)成

良好的習(xí)慣對(duì)于青少年的成長(zhǎng)與成功發(fā)揮著重大的作用。某英文網(wǎng)站正在就此話(huà)題在同學(xué)中展開(kāi)調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇不少于80詞的英語(yǔ)短文，向該網(wǎng)站投稿，描述你的一種或兩種個(gè)人習(xí)慣，并談?wù)勊▊儯┙o你的成長(zhǎng)與成功帶來(lái)怎樣的影響。（文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名）

例文：Developingagoodhabitplaysanimportantpartinourdailylife.Everyonehashisownhabit.Thereisnoexceptionforme.Myhabitisreading.Asasayinggoes,readingmakesafullman.Ireadbookshalfanhoureveryday.EverytimeIreadabook,it’slikeIamgoingonajourney.Therearetwoadvantagesasfollows.Readingcanopenupmyeyes.Meanwhile,readingisalsoagreatwaytoimprovewritingskills.Allinall,nothingismorebeneficialthanreading.Let’stakeactiontostartagoodreadinghabit.

【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題為話(huà)題作文，要求以“良好的個(gè)人習(xí)慣”為主題寫(xiě)一篇短文，敘述它們對(duì)個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)與成功的積極影響。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)用第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)根據(jù)事情的不同發(fā)生時(shí)間采用相應(yīng)的時(shí)態(tài)。文章開(kāi)頭應(yīng)鮮明點(diǎn)出自己的一（兩）個(gè)好習(xí)慣，然后敘述該習(xí)慣養(yǎng)成的好處，最后向讀者發(fā)出養(yǎng)成該習(xí)慣的倡議。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)做到層次分明，思路清晰，不要出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫(xiě)或語(yǔ)法時(shí)態(tài)使用錯(cuò)誤?！緦?xiě)作要求】養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣和學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣，對(duì)于我們每一位學(xué)生成長(zhǎng)很有幫助。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇詞數(shù)90左右的短文，發(fā)表在學(xué)校網(wǎng)站上。提示要點(diǎn)：（一）良好的生活和學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣包括：1）在生活方面：①健康飲食②經(jīng)常鍛煉

③利用好時(shí)間2）在學(xué)習(xí)方面：①課前預(yù)習(xí)②認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講

③獨(dú)立作業(yè)（二）良好習(xí)慣帶來(lái)的益處包括1）幫助我們更好的學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)2）使我們提高技能，學(xué)會(huì)自我控制。（三）談?wù)勀愕母惺茏魑囊螅?、表達(dá)中必須包含所給提示要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。2、詞數(shù)90左右，開(kāi)關(guān)已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3、表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。AGoodHabit,aSuccessfulSchoolLifeAhabitissomethingthatyoudooftenorregularlyalmostwithoutthinking,especiallysomethingthatishardtostopdoing．____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【優(yōu)秀滿(mǎn)分范文】AGoodHabit,aSuccessfulSchoolLifeAhabitissomethingthatyoudooftenorregularlyalmostwithoutthinking,especiallysomethingthatishardtostopdoing．Inourdailylife,weoughttokeepahealthydiet．Also,it’snecessaryforustoexercisealot．Andweshouldlearntomakegooduseofourtime．Inourschoollife,weshouldpreparewellforeachlesson．Inclass,wemustlistentotheteachercarefully．Besides,it’simportantforustodoourhomeworkonourown．Inaword,goodhabitscanhelpuslearnthingsbetterandimproveourskills．Wecanlearntocontrolourselvesifwehavegoodhabits．Ithinkgoodhabitsarereallygoodforourmindandbody．假如你是李華，在生活中你看到過(guò)各種浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象，比如：浪費(fèi)時(shí)間、浪費(fèi)食物、浪費(fèi)資源等等。為了培養(yǎng)同學(xué)們的節(jié)約意識(shí)，學(xué)校和某英文網(wǎng)站共同以“節(jié)約×××”為題征文。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪袘?yīng)該節(jié)約的某種東西，為什么應(yīng)該節(jié)約它以及如何節(jié)約。提示詞語(yǔ)：population,limit,time,reuse,callon提示問(wèn)題：?Whatshouldwesave??Whyshouldwesaveit??Whatdoweusuallydotosaveit?經(jīng)典范文：Inmypointofview,allofusshouldsavewater.Peoplecan'tlivewithoutwater.Buttherealsituationisthattheshortageofwaterisbecomingaseriousprobleminmanypartsoftheworldduetogrowingpopulationandthepollutionoftheriversandlakes.Todealwiththewaterproblem,wecandosomethingtoavoidwastingwaterinourlife.Firstly,weshouldremembertoreusewater.Forexample,thewaterleftoverafterwashingvegetablescan

beusedtowaterplantsortocleanthefloor.Secondly,wehadbetterlimitourshowertime.Also,wecancallonmorepeopletosavewaterindifferentways.Inshort,waterholdsgreatvaluetohumanbeings.Let'sdoasmuchaswecantosavewater.假如你是康康，你很健康，你是如何保持健康的？從個(gè)人生活習(xí)慣角度談?wù)勀愕谋＝》椒ā２簧儆?0詞。

【短語(yǔ)/句型】keep

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IamKangakang.Iamgladtotalkabouthealth.

Inevergotoschoolwithoutbreakfast.Ithinkbreakfastcankeepusactiveallday.IalwayshavemealsathomeandIseldomeatout.Idon’tlikefastfood.Mumsaysitisunhealthy.

Ilikedoingsports.BeforebreakfastIrunforhalfanhour.Iplaybasketballwithmyfriendsafterschool.OfcourseIalsodosomeothersports.Iexerciseatleasttwohourseveryday.

Iplayedcomputergamesalotbefore,butnowIfindmyselfandIamlivingahealthyandhappylife.Whataboutyou?

假設(shè)上周六晚上，你們?nèi)以谝患绎埖昃筒?。?qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，描述事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò)，并適當(dāng)加以評(píng)論。要點(diǎn)提示：1.鄰桌年輕人大聲說(shuō)話(huà)、吸煙。2.你請(qǐng)他們不要那樣做。3.他們不聽(tīng)，反而嘲笑你。4.你認(rèn)為：①他們?cè)诠矆?chǎng)所那樣做是不對(duì)的。②年輕人是祖國(guó)的未來(lái)，應(yīng)該......參考詞匯：嘲笑laughat要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右，短文開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。2.要點(diǎn)齊全，行為連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?！緝?yōu)秀滿(mǎn)分范文】LastSaturdayevening,allmyfamilyhaddinnerinarestaurant.

Weenjoyedourselveswhilewewereattable.However,someteenagerssittingbesideourtablebegantotalkandlaughloudly.What’sworse,theybegantosmokeintherestaurant,whichmadeusangry.Afterawhile,Istoodupandadvisedthemtostopsmokingandbehavethemselves.Tomysurprise,theydidn’tfollowmysuggestions.Instead,theylaughedatme,sayingthatIwastooyoungandtoonaive.Inmyopinion,it’swrongtodothatinpublic.Thefutureofourcountryliesinteenagers,whoshouldnotonlyobeytherulesinpublicbutalsomakecontributionstothesociety.為配合我市“禮儀宜賓（CharmYibin）”活動(dòng)的開(kāi)展，某學(xué)校開(kāi)展以“Howtobehavewell”為主題的英語(yǔ)作文，請(qǐng)你以一名中學(xué)生的身份寫(xiě)一篇60-80詞的短文參賽。內(nèi)容包括：1.守時(shí)，不說(shuō)臟話(huà)；2.禮貌待人，熱心助人；3.遵守交通規(guī)則，不亂扔垃圾；4...注意：1.文中不能出現(xiàn)校名和自己的姓名；2.內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充?！緝?yōu)秀滿(mǎn)分范文】HowtobehavewellAsastudentinYibin,weshouldbehavewell.

First,Ithinkit’sveryimportanttodoeverythingontimeandkeeppromises.Neverlietoothersorsaydirtywords.Nextweshouldbepolitetoothersandreadytohelppeopleinneed.Thenwe’dbetternottalkloudlyinpublic.Don’tthrowlitterorspitabout.Andremembertoobeytrafficrules.Finally,learntoworkwithothers.Weneedgoodteamworkinourlife.良好的習(xí)慣讓人受益終身。如何培養(yǎng)良好的習(xí)慣?請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示,以“HowToDevelopAGoodHabit"為題,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文,可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。要點(diǎn):(1)堅(jiān)持鍛煉,不要熬夜,睡眠充足;(2)多吃水果蔬菜,少吃垃圾食品:(3)努力學(xué)習(xí),廣泛閱讀:(4)體貼父母,多做家務(wù);......注意:(1)要點(diǎn)齊全,條理清晰,語(yǔ)句通順,不需逐條翻譯;(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)姓名、校名等真實(shí)信息:(3)短文不少于80詞。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：HowtodevelopagoodhabitIt’sveryimportantforustodevelopgoodhabits.Asteenagers,whatshouldwedo?Inmyopinion,weshouldlistentotheteachercarefullyandtakenotesiftheyarenecessaryforus.Itisagoodhabittofinishtheschoolworkontimeeveryday.Insparetime,wehadbetterreadsomebookstogetmoreknowledge.Also,weshouldeatmorefreshfruitandvegetablesandlessjunkfood.It’snecessaryforustotakeexerciseforthreeorfourtimesaweek.What’smore,togetenoughsleep,weshouldgotobedearlyandshouldn’tstayuplate.Alwaysremembertowashourhandsbeforemealstokeepclean.Exerciseisfunandrelaxing.It’shealthyforthemindandbody.Healthylifestylehelpsusgetgoodgradesandlivehappily.Lastbutnotleast,whenwehavetime,weshouldhelpourparentsdosomehousework.Weshouldbeconsiderateofourparentsbecausetheyworkhardeveryday.Goodhabitswillmakeourstudytwicetheresultwithhalftheeffort.Let’sformgoodhabitstogether!【詳解】1.題干解讀：文章是一篇話(huà)題作文，主要以“Howtodevelopagoodhabit”為話(huà)題展開(kāi)討論，要根據(jù)題目中所給出的要點(diǎn)描寫(xiě)，把每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)清楚寫(xiě)具體即可，要注意語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)要清楚。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章采取三段描寫(xiě)。第一段總體指出好習(xí)慣的重要性并提出該如何做；第二段分別從幾個(gè)方面具體描寫(xiě)要養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣；第三段總體概括好習(xí)慣會(huì)事半功倍。整個(gè)文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整思路清晰，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流暢，意思明確易懂。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：in

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more；lastbutnotleast。句型：if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句；It’sadjforsbtodosth；when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句；動(dòng)詞原形開(kāi)頭的祈使句。英國(guó)作家薩克雷曾說(shuō)：“播種習(xí)慣收獲性格，播種性格收獲命運(yùn)”。在生活中，一定有好的習(xí)慣伴隨你的成長(zhǎng)。請(qǐng)你以Goodhabitsmakeme_____為題寫(xiě)篇短文(詞數(shù)80-100)。步驟與要點(diǎn)如下：1.確定主題，并在文中說(shuō)明原因；2.圍繞主題，進(jìn)行敘述；3.寫(xiě)出具體計(jì)劃，也可以講述一段與主題有關(guān)的故事或經(jīng)歷。要求：1.補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題(參考詞匯：better,happier,healthier,stronger等)；2.字跡工整，內(nèi)容完整連貫，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確規(guī)范；3.鼓勵(lì)寫(xiě)出真情實(shí)感，對(duì)緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)輝不予扣分。短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.作文中可以寫(xiě)出具體計(jì)劃內(nèi)容，也可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，但要注意時(shí)態(tài)的運(yùn)用；如果參照短文中的內(nèi)容，不可以直接引用短文中的句子；5.作文中不要出現(xiàn)考生和相關(guān)人物的真實(shí)校名和姓名。Goodhabitsmakeme___________Goodhabitsareimportantinourlives.Theyinfluenceusalotinmanyways.Ithink_____________________________________________________________________________________【答案】GoodhabitsmakemehappierGoodhabitsareimportantinourlives.Theyinfluenceusalotinmanyways.Ithinkreadingisagoodhabitofmine.Everyday,Ireadbooksforatleasthalfanhour.BeforeIgotobed,Iwillreadsomebooksfirst.Ithinkreadingcanbroadenmyhorizon.ItcanalsohelpmelearnsomeknowledgewhichIcan’tlearninclass.Readingbringsmehappinessandconfidenceandthesemakemeabetterperson.Tokeepthisgoodhabit,Iwilljoinareadingclubinthefuture.IthinkreadingisreallyagoodhabitandI’llkeepitforever.【詳解】這是一篇話(huà)題作文，話(huà)題是Goodhabitsmakeme_____為題寫(xiě)篇短文。首先要根據(jù)參考詞匯補(bǔ)全題目。題目補(bǔ)全了之后，主題也就確定了。第二步圍繞主題，進(jìn)行敘述；第三根據(jù)主題寫(xiě)出具體計(jì)劃，也可以講述一段與主題有關(guān)的故事或經(jīng)歷。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)。注意寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。【高分句型一】Ithinkreadingisagoodhabitofmine.我認(rèn)為讀書(shū)是我的一個(gè)好習(xí)慣。這是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句。句子很短，但是表達(dá)很豐富。是我們熟悉的句子?！靖叻志湫投縄tcanalsohelpmelearnsomeknowledgewhichIcan’tlearninclass.它還能幫助我學(xué)習(xí)一些我在課堂上學(xué)不到的知識(shí)。whichIcan’tlearninclass.是由which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。說(shuō)明知識(shí)點(diǎn)和語(yǔ)法功底扎實(shí)?！靖叻志湫腿縏okeepthisgoodhabit,Iwilljoinareadingclubinthefuture.為了保持這個(gè)好習(xí)慣，我將來(lái)會(huì)加入一個(gè)讀書(shū)俱樂(lè)部。Tokeepthisgoodhabit,是動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)。養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣和學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣，對(duì)我們每一位學(xué)生成長(zhǎng)很有幫助。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇詞數(shù)90左右的短文，發(fā)表在學(xué)校網(wǎng)站上。提示要點(diǎn)：（一）良好的生活和學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣內(nèi)容包括：1）在生活方面：①健康飲食，②經(jīng)常鍛煉，③利用好時(shí)間。2）在學(xué)習(xí)方面：①課前預(yù)習(xí)，②認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講，③獨(dú)立作業(yè)。（二）良好習(xí)慣帶來(lái)的益處內(nèi)容包括：1）幫助我們更好地學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)。2）提高技能使我們學(xué)會(huì)自我控制。（三）談?wù)勀愕母惺埽ㄕ?qǐng)結(jié)合自身認(rèn)識(shí)，給出一至兩點(diǎn)）。作文要求：1．表達(dá)中必須包含所給提示要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。2．詞數(shù)90左右。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3．表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AGoodHabit,aSuccessfulSchoolLifeAhabitissomethingthatyoudooftenorregularlyalmostwithoutthinkespeciallysomethingthatishardtostopdoing.Inourdailylife,weoughttokeepahealthydiet.Alsoit’snecessaryforustoexercisealot.Andweshouldlearntomakegooduseofourtime.Inourschoollife,weshouldpreparewellforeachlesson.Inclass,wemustlistentotheteachercarefully.Besides,it’simportantforustodoourhomeworkonourown.Inaword,goodhabitscanhelpuslearnthingsbetterandimproveourskills.Wecanlearntocontrolourselvesifwehavegoodhabits.Ithinkgoodhabitsarereallygoodforourmindandbody.Let'sformgoodhabitsandhaveahealthylife.【詳解】試題分析：本題要求根據(jù)所給的提綱材料，談?wù)勷B(yǎng)成良好的習(xí)慣對(duì)我們成長(zhǎng)的幫助。要求從良好的學(xué)習(xí)、生活習(xí)慣的內(nèi)容、給我們成長(zhǎng)帶來(lái)的好處以及自己的感受幾個(gè)方面來(lái)表達(dá)。短文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，用第一人稱(chēng)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：短文第1自然段對(duì)“習(xí)慣”下了一個(gè)定義；第2自然段從生活習(xí)慣上進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作；第3自然段寫(xiě)的是學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。后面談的是自己的感受。層次分明，包含了提綱材料的所有要點(diǎn)。短文中所使用到的keepahealthydiet,makegooduseofourtime,prepareforeachlesson等等結(jié)構(gòu)；it’snecessaryforustoexercisealot.it’simportantforustodoourhomewo