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Butforthesakeofourchildrenandourfuture,wemustdomoretocombatclimatechange.Now,it’struethatnosingleeventmakesatrend.Butthefactisthe12hottestyearsonrecordhaveallcomeinthelast15.Heatwaves,droughts,wildfires,floods--allarenowmorefrequentandmoreintense.WecanchoosetobelievethatSuperstormSandy,andthemostseveredroughtindecades,andtheworstwildfiressomestateshaveeverseenwerealljustafreakcoincidence.Orwecanchoosetobelieveintheoverwhelmingjudgmentofscience--andactbeforeit’stoo辦法辦法Now,thegoodnewsiswecanmakemeaningfulprogressonthisissuewhiledrivingstrongeconomicgrowth.IurgethisCongresstogettogether,pursueabipartisan,market-basedsolutiontoclimatechange,liketheoneJohnMcCainandJoeLiebermanworkedontogetherafewyearsago.ButifCongresswon’tactsoontoprotectfuturegenerations,Iwill.(Apuse.)IwilldirectmyCabinettocomeupwithexecutiveactionswecantake,nowandinthefuture,toreducepollution,prepareourcommunitiesfortheconsequencesofclimatechange,andspeedthetransitiontomoresustainablesourcesofenergy.Fouryearsago,othercountriesdominatedthecleanenergymarketandthejobsthatcamewithit.Andwe’vebeguntochangethat.Lastyear,windenergyaddednearlyhalfofallnewpowercapacityinAmerica.Solet’sgenerateevenmore.Solarenergygetscheaperbytheyear--let’sdrivedowncostsevenfurther.Aslongascountrieslike keepgoingallinoncleanenergy,somust劃線句直接使用：Nowthegoodnewsiswecanmeaningfulprogressonthisissuewhiledrivingeconomicgrowth.Inmyview,legislationbranchandthe ernmentdepartmentcangettogethertopursueamarket-basedsolutiontoclimatechange.Butif ernmentdepartmentswon’tactsoontofuturegenerations,thelegislationThenaturalgasboomhasledtocleanerpowerandenergyindependence.Weneedtoencouragethat.Andthat’swhymyadministrationwillkeepcuttingredtapeandspeedingupnewoilandgaspermits.ButIalsowanttoworkwiththisCongresstoencourageresearchandtechnologythathelpsnaturalgasburnevencleanerandprotectsourairandourwater.讀多了，才能創(chuàng)：SotonightIproposeweusesomeofoilandgasrevenuestofundanEnergySecurityTrustwilldrivenewresearchandtechnologytoshiftourcarsandtrucksoffoilforgood.讀多了，才能創(chuàng)：SotonightIproposeweusesomeofoilandgasrevenuestofundanEnergySecurityTrustwilldrivenewresearchandtechnologytoshiftourcarsandtrucksoffoilforgood.Everydollarweinvestinhigh-qualityearlyeducationcansavemorethansevendollarslateron--boostinggraduationrates,reducingteenpregnancy,evenreducingviolentcrime.2）boostgraduationrates（提高畢業(yè)率），holdajob（找到工作），formmorestablefamiliesoftheirown（組成更為穩(wěn)定的家庭），reduceviolentcrime（降 ）Thepointis,therearemillionsofpeople,whoaretiredofpoliticalarguments,butaremovingthisgreatnationforward.Theybelievethatsuccessshoulddependnotonaccidentofbirth,butthestrengthofworkethnicsandscopeofourdreams.Thatishowateacher estheCEOofthelargeston-lineshop 師最終成了中國最大購 的CEO。（你猜是誰呢 怎么寫成功：Americahasnevercomeeasy.OurdomourdemocracyhasneverbeeneasySometimeswestumble;wemakemistakes;wegetfrustratedordiscouraged.Butformorethantwohundredyears,wehaveputthosethingsasideand cedourcollectiveshouldertothewheelofprogress（把上段的American和dom,democracy變成success，其余不動）怎么寫美好未來：TheAmericawewantforourkidsarisingAmericawherehonestworkisplentifulandcommunitiesstrong;whereprosperityiswidelysharedopportunityforallletsusgoasfarasourdreamsandtoilwilltakeus（把America變成 怎么寫希望：Butifweworktogetherifwewhatisbestinus,withour ntedfirmlyintodayoureyescasttowardstomorrowIknowit'swithinour 變動句子結(jié)構(gòu)：Changethesentence 替換：passivevoiceinsteadofactivevoicesynonymsthatarelessinformaloraremorelikethestyleofyourown4）以 為依據(jù)，刪除那些不太重要的信息：cutoutunimportantinformationforthepurposeofyourpaper.對段落進行總結(jié)：briefthewholeparagraphYoursonsanddaughtersneverbelongtoyou.TheyarethechildrenofLifeitself.Theylivewithyou,buttheyarenotyourpossession.Parentscanofferlovetotheirchildren,however,thisbehaviorbringschildrenoverprotectionratherthantheirownideas.Parentscanbringuptheirchildren,butitisdifficulttoteachthemhowtothink.Parentscanraisetheirchildren,butcannotenrichtheirsouls,whichstayhidinthehouseoftomorrow.Parentscanshowtheirbestlove,butneverexpecttheirchildrentodothesametothem.Thechildrenhavetheirownfuture,whichisoutofthescopeofparents’reach.Ifthechildrenwerearrows,theirwerethearchers,withbowsinthehands.Arrowscangoalongwaynevercomeback,justlikethechildrenwhonevercomeback.Sowhatparentsdoistowatchtheirchildrengrowup,withexpectationandhappiness,butwithoutover-expectationanddisillusionment. israpidly inrecentyears.Accordingtoeconomicdataby ernment,ourcountryhaschangeddramaticallythanbefore.Sowithitfollowedthereareaphenomenoncalled“ hot”inmanyothercountries,thatis, foreignersarepopularwithtravelto ,wearingtraditional costume,eatingdiet,even andBeijingOpera.However,isthepicturelsus?Certainlynot.TheAmericangirlisnotonlywearinga costume，butexpressing traditionalculturalsign.Furthermore,thispictureabovedoesconveyatruththatthenationalcultureisinternationalculture,andthatiseasytoTheimplicationofthepictureisinformative,instructiveandprovoking.Someyoungpeoplefailtorealizethattakingcareofparentsisnotonlytheirduty,butalsotheirobligation.Tobeginwith,butforourmotherandfather,wecouldnothavebeenahealthyadult,letalongmakinganyachievements.Thosepeoplewhoabusetheirparentsshouldbepunished.What’smore,everyonewillbeoldsoonerorlater,ignoreelderisafoolishactionthatneverthinkaboutfurther.Butforparents,wecouldnothavebeengrownup,letalonebeingdeliciousfood,comfortable Asisshownabove,itisofgreat(importance)toadvocatefilialpietyinthetraditionalculturalideology. y/Satirically),irresponsiblefamilymembersseldomhavethismoralawarenessofrespectingtheelders.Here,I’dliketomentionsomeoftheirmisconductsastypicalexamplesformyinterpretationofthisForonething,theyrefusetosupply(provide)theiragedparentswithsuchimportantdailynecessitiesasfoodandclothes.Foranotherthing,thesesonsordaughtersseldomaffordtheseoldinsurance(tuitionfee).Inthisprocess,familyresponsibilityisnevereffectivelyperformed,norismoralobligationfulfilled.Underthesecircumstances,itisalmostbeyondpossibilitythattheoldpeoplereceivematerialsupport,spiritualcomfortandconsideratecare,becausenoneoftheirchildreniswillingtolookafterthem.Asisshownabove,sincereloveisofgreatimportanceinthe society.Soitisessentialthatthismoralawarenessshouldbedevelopedamongvarioussocialgroups.Here,I’dliketocitetheexperiencesofmanykindcitizenstypicalexamplesformyunderstandingofthispicture.Forthing,theyoftensupplythoselonelyelderswithfoodandclothes.Foranotherthing,thesewarm-heartedpeoplealsoprovidetuitionfeetomanypoorchildreninremotearea.Inthissituation,thesocialresponsibilityiseffectivelyperformed.Whenmoralobligationisfulfilled,thedisadvantagedgroups,especiallyeldersandchildren,areobtainingmaterialsupport,spiritualcomfort,andthemostimportantofall,acomfortablelife.DearMyAsthechairmanofStude