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Issue內(nèi)容分析流程關(guān)注原因型4.Scandalsareusefulbecausetheyfocusourattentiononproblemsinwaysthatnospeakerorreformerevercould.assumesthat(scandalsfocusourattentiononproblemsinwaysthatnospeakerorreformerevercould)willresultintherealitythat(scandalsareuseful).It’sessentiallyimperativethatthe(reasonandresult)shouldbethoroughlyyzedbeforewereachtheconclusion.Theremightbeseveralexnationsoftheassumption(s)oftheclaimedreason.Tobeginwith,thereasoninthestatementmightnotholdtrueinsomescenarios.Inaddition,withtheprovisothatthereasontakesceincertainsituations,itwillbringaboutconsequencesirrelevanttotheclaimedresult.What’smore,undertheconditionthatthereasonprovespartofthecausestotheresult,itisfarfrombeingsufficienttoreachtheresultunquestionably.Unlessthecoreconceptofthecauseissystematicallyexamined,theconclusiondrawnoutofwhichwillproveinadequateandineffective.Inmypointofview,(Iholdtheopinionofgeneraldisagreementtowardsthestatement).Myopinionwillbegreatlystrengthenedbythefollowing第二段{Admittedly, acknowledgethetruththatthisclaim,although ings,inpossessionof somevaluesprincipallyinsomedistinctcasesinwhichtheembeddedreasoningcomplywithourcommonsenseandunderstandingashumanbeings,hence,ispartiallyindisputable.Afterall,Onecouldeffortlesslyimaginethescenario,in((thescandalsofPrimeMinisterBerlusconiandPrimeMinisterGordonBrownwill,toextent,arouseourattentiontothemisbehaviorofcorruption)Accordingly,Itendtoconcedethatwhenitcomestosomecertaincircumstancesitispartiallyappropriate.}However,asopposedtotheallegedresult,thereasoninthestatementmightnotholdtrueinsomescenariosinthesensethatsegregationandracialdiscriminationinthe1950sand1960shelpedconvincemanywhiteAmericanstosupportthecauseofsegregationandracialdiscriminationinthe1950sand1960shelpedconvincemanywhiteAmericanstosupportthecauseofcivilrightsisnottruethatscandalsfocusourattentiononproblemsinwaysthatnospeakerorreformerevercould:MartinLutherKing,oneoftheprincipalleadersoftheAmericancivilrightsmovementandaprominentadvocatetheUnitedStates.Itisundeniablethatspeechspeaksmuchlouderthanmanyforgedscandals.)Unlessthereasonprovesvalidandreasonable,theconsequenceswillnottake第四段{Inaddition,insteadofleadingtotheassumedconsequence,(scandals)mightgenerateadivergent ethat(doesn’tgetourseriousconcerns),whichisirrelevantforthecauseof(beinguseful).(MarilynMonroedidreportedlyhaveanaffairwith JohnF.KennedyandhisbrotherSenatorRobertKennedy.It’shighlyassumedthattheKennedysareassociatedwiththedeathofMonroe.SincethemurderwasnotconvictedandKennedywasabletoimprovetheeconomicconditioninAmericatoagreatextentatthetime:TheeconomyturnedaroundandprosperedduringtheKennedyadministration.GDPexpandedbyanaverageof5.5%fromearly1961tolate1963,whileinflationremainedsteadyataround1%andunemploymenteased;industrialproductionroseby15%andmotorvehiclesalesleaptby40%.ThisrateofgrowthinGDPuntilaround1966,andyettoberepeatedforsuchasustainedperiod nationalherothanacriminal).unconfirmedscandalswillnotbeeffectiveandscandalsmustprovevalidwithsolidevidenceandconviction.Inaddition,thesocietyisamajorlylaw-abidingcommunityratherthanoneinchaosandturmoilwheresurvivalscandalsmustprovevalidwithsolidevidenceandconviction.Inaddition,thesocietyisamajorlylaw-abidingcommunityratherthanoneinchaosandturmoilwheresurvivalisprimaryconcernsforallits第六段Fromtheaforementionedyses,simplybasedontheinadequateassumptionthat(scandalsfocusourattentiononinwaysthatnospeakerorreformerevercould),itisirrationaltoreachanagreementthat(theyareuseful),inthesensethatonlywhenthecausecanbeassociatedwithotherrelevantfactors,willtheresultundeniablytakece.Ontheotherhand,thecausemightaswellarriveatadirectiondivergentfromtheallegedresult.Withoutelucidatedprerequisitesandsufficientevidencementionedabove,anyinferenceandsuppositionseeminglyfromitwillbeincongruousandirrational.755words2.Tounderstandthemostimportantcharacteristicsofasociety,onemuststudyitsmajorcities.Issue內(nèi)容分析流 第一段Asisdescribedintheissue,inorder(tounderstandthemostimportantcharacteristicsofasociety),theauthorproposethatitisnecessary(one)to(studyitsmajorcities).It’sessentiallyimperativethattheproposalandpurposeshouldthoroughlyyzedbeforewereachtheconclusion.Theremightbeseveralexnationsofthepuroseof(themostimportantcharacteristicsofasociety).Tobeginwith,itshouldbeyzedwhethertheproposalInaddition,adequateattentionmustbepaidtotheintentiontowhichtheproposalismade目的的具體分析.What’smore,itcanbe,tothepopularmind,describedinapossiblescenarioinwhichtheproposalwillnotbeabletofulfilltheassignment建議的不可行.Furthermore,undertheconditionthatthesuggestionprovespartofthecausestotheclaimedpurpose,itisfarfrombeingnecessarytoreachtheresultunquestionably建議不必要.Unlessthecoreconceptissystematicallyexamined,theconclusiondrawnoutofwhichwillproveinadequateandineffective.Inmypointofview,(Iholdtheopinionofgeneraldisagreement).Myopinionwillbegreatlystrengthenedbythefollowingdiscussion.第二段{Admittedly,itisshrewdtoacknowledgethetruththatthisproposal,althoughdisadvantagedbysomediscernable ings,inpossessionofsomevaluesprincipallyinsomedistinctcasesinwhichtheembeddedreasoningcomplywithourcommontechnologicalinnovationcausedbyeconomiesandtrade;sharingofinformationcausedbytradeandcompactedliving;improvingoflivingtechnologicalinnovationcausedbyeconomiesandtrade;sharingofinformationcausedbytradeandcompactedliving;improvingoflivingconditionsmajorcitiesrepresentbyalloftheabove)Accordingly,Itendtoconcedethatwhenitcomestosomecertaincircumstancesitispartiallyappropriate.}第三段However,asopposedtotheallegedresult,(studyingmajorcities)mightgenerateanunrelatedeffect:(Withtheglobalization,citiesindistinguishwhethertheyareinTokyo,shanghai,SanPauloorNewYork.Undoubtedly,themodernizationseemstocontradictthosemajorcitiesintheirdistinguishwhethertheyareinTokyo,shanghai,SanPauloorNewYork.Undoubtedly,themodernizationseemstocontradictthosemajorcitiesintheircountrieswiththeirnativecultures;andthecitizensofthesecitiesarealmostthesame,nomatterinthelifestyleorincountriescommunicatewitheachothermuchmorefrequentlythananytimebefore;meanwhile,thestudyamongthemisalsouninterrupted.Facingsosimilarthetoweringskyscrapers,theorderlysquares,theviewofvalue.).(給出具體的例子支持上述可能性)第四段{Inadditioninsteadofleadingtotheassumedconsequence,(studyingmajorcities)mightgeneratea e:(alotoffamouscitiesinthetheytheycanhardlyAcaseinpointytheirnation'scultural.Asoneofthecentersintheworld, 'sstatusisundoubtedlyin .Nevertheless,150yearswasnomorethanacoonfishingvillageinsouthof.SinceitbecamethecolonyoftheGreatBritain, hasdevelopedgraduallyand Althoughtheyarethemajorcitiesoftheir Meanwhile, byhadtodevelop yaccordingto eventually.So,fromitshistory,peoplecannotresidents,whoinclinedtopreserveneitherpreservesresidents,whoinclinedtopreserveneitherpreservestraditionalcultureownhabitsandmores;andnow,asaalterstotheBritishculture,itismorelikeaproductformedbytheinterweavingofbothcultures.).thestudyisirrelevantforthecauseofthe(major(給出具體的例子支持上述可能性第五段Furthermore,inspiteofthefactthatstudyingmajorcities)maypossiblyresultin(understandingthemajorcharacteristicsyetitisnottheonlyapproachtoreachtheconclusion.Itisundeniablethatothermethodswillcorrespondinglyleadtothesameresult.(Therich,industrializedcountriestendtobethehighlyurbanized.InTheNetherlands,forexample,89percenthighlyurbanized.InTheNetherlands,forexample,89percentofthepopulationisurban,comparedtoonly13percentinEthiopia,amuchpoorercountry.Inrecenthistory,thedegreeofurbanizationhasbeenrelativelylowinAfricaandAsiacomparedtoEuropeandNorthAmerica.ItisimpossibleforustostudythemajorruralareasincountrieslikeEthiopiaisnolessefficientthanstudyingurbanareasintermsofmajorsocial第六段Fromtheaforementionedyses,simplybasedontheinadequatepurpose(tounderstandthemostimportantcharacteristicsofasociety),itisirrationaltoreachanagreementthat(onemuststudyitsmajorcities)isnecessary,inthesensethatonlywhennootherfactorscanleadtotheresult,willtheproposal enecessary.Ontheotherhand,theproposalmightaswellarriveatadirectionfromtheallegedpurpose.Withoutelucidatedprerequisitesandsufficientevidencementionedabove,anyinferenceandsuppositionseeminglyfromitwillbeincongruousandirrational.902wordsNo.41Thegreatnessofindividualscanbedecidedonlybythosewholiveafterthem,notbytheircontemporaries.論斷型Ithasalwaysbeenacomplexandcontroversial towards towardsit.Myviewwillbefurtherstrengthenedinofwhetherthegreatnessofindividualscanbedecidedonlybythosewholiveafterthem,notbytheircontemporaries.Peopleholdvariedopinionsdue 文中作者基本Admittedly,therearecertainfieldsinwhichthedevotionsofindividualsinvolvedaresofar-reachingthattheyareunlikelytobeevaluatedorevendetectedtheseindividualshastowaittobediscoveredanddecidedbythosewholiveafterthem.Evidencesofthiskindinthehistoryarenotrare.Forinstance,whoisvaluedhighlyasasageandwhosegreatnessisnowwhoisvaluedhighlyasasageandwhosegreatnessisnowwell-acknowledgedthroughouttheworld,hasonlyreachedsuchahighstatusposthumouslywithhiscollectionofteachingsbeingcompiledmanyyearshisdeath.Theredoexistmanygreatsouls,thosepossessingparticular icgenius,whosegreatnesswasnotquitecomprehensibleforpeoplelivingcontemporarilyandtherefore,hastobebybypeoplelivingafterthem.Thisfacthelpstowhysomanypeoplearetemptedtosupporttheissuethatthegreatnessofindividualscanonlybedecidedbytheirdescendantsinsteadoftheircontemporaries.Itendtoarguethatthisassertionasispresentedintheissueisneitherconvincingnorappropriate,notgreatnessgreatnessofindividualsworkinginsomefieldsteachingandmanaginga canbewelldecidedbytheircontemporaries.Thesecertainfieldsallthecommonfeature,thatis,thecontributionsofthedevoteeswillbeinfluentialwithinashortperiodoftime.ascertainedwiththesuperioracademicandascertainedwiththesuperioracademicandalitiesoftheirstudents.Soisitthebusinessindustrywhereamanager’sgreatnessisvaluedbythesuccessofthecorporation,likeBillAlsoAlso,somegreatdeedssuchasenforcingalegislationby andsavingadinglifebyadoctorcanbedecidedimmedia yaftertheyareputintopractice.Tociteamostrepresentative electedinafullydemocraticelection,isstillleadingasalubriouslifewithhighly-recognizedreputation.Asisdiscussedabove,Ihavetoconcedethatwhencomestosomecertaincircumstances,theissueispartiallycorrect.However,theauthorunnecessarilyextendsthisbroadassertiontoanirreversibleextremewhilecomestosomecertaincircumstances,theissueispartiallycorrect.However,theauthorunnecessarilyextendsthisbroadassertiontoanirreversibleextremewhileoverlookscertaincompellingfactorsimpactingtheissue.Inmy alsense,Iholdmydisagreementtowardstheissuethatthegreatnessofindividualscanbedecidedonlybythosewholiveafterdisagreementtowardstheissuethatthegreatnessofindividualscanbedecidedonlybythosewholiveafterthem,insteadoftheircontemporaries.525wordsNo.62LeadersarecreatedbythedemandsthatcedcedonAstotheissueofwhetherleadersarecreatedbythedemandscedonthem,peopleholdvariedopinionsduetotheirrespectivewaysoflookingatthisissue.Accordingtome,it’shardtodecidewhatinspecificcreatesleaders,whetheritisthedemandscedonIIdon’tagreethatleadersarecreatedbyasinglefactor,butbyanamalgamationofdifferentones.Myviewwillbefurtherstrengthenedinthefollowingdiscussion.Undoubtedly,beingaleaderisalwaysunderpressureofdemandsfromallaspects.Itiscruciallynecessarythataleaderisrequiredtopossesscertainalities.Themostbasic alityofaleaderistobeamicablewhichfacilitatescommunicationamongcolleaguesandpreventsemployeesfromdrasticactions.Anotheruniquequalityiscateringforemployees’specialneedsrangingfromfinancialissues,familyplight,allthewaytopsychologicalproblems.Considerationistheprerequisitetoensurethataleaderiswhole- edbyemployees.Furthermore,aleaderhastoworkhardandatthesametime,efficiently.Tosetupapositiveexampleforemployeestomodel,aleaderhastobetrulydiligent,whichisnotlikelytopretendforalongtime.Also,inasocietyfraughtwithcompetition,diligencealoneisfarfromenough.Whatmattersmoreisefficiency.Byfulfillingthesameassignmentinashorterperiodoftime,aleaderwillsavemuchmoretimeforotherbusinessandthusgaininggreateropportunitiesforbetterdevelopment.Notonlyaretheredemandsfor alitiesoftobeydealtwithbyaleaderwithinsightrequirementsforaleadertotackle.Theyhavetosolvecontentions,forexample,ofdrugreform,tosustainastableand e,tosolvehazards,totobeydealtwithbyaleaderwithinsightrequirementsforaleadertotackle.Theyhavetosolvecontentions,forexample,ofdrugreform,tosustainastableand e,tosolvewellasIt’sundeniablethatleadersareburdenedwithkindsofdemands.However,itisalsoindisputablethatsomekindsofdemands.However,itisalsoindisputablethatsomeleadersarenotcreatedbythesedemands,butbytheirownincentives.Tociteawell-known,stoodouttosupportthecase,stoodouttosupportthecaseof through encounteredwithsetbacks,hethrewhimselfintostrugglestruggleforelementaryrightsnswithnofromotherAccordingly,IhavetoconcedethatwhenitcomestoAccordingly,Ihavetoconcedethatwhenitcomestorefertoleadersasbeingrefertoleadersasbeingcreatedbycedthem.However,toextendthisbroadassertiontoanirreversibleextremewhileoverlookscertainhistoricalevidencewouldbeunconvincingandirrational.Onbalance,aftertakingsomecompellingfactorsintogroundforabetterresolution,thatisleadersarecreatedbyanamalgamationofvariousfactors,Ithasalwaysbeenacomplexandcontroversialissuewhethernationsshouldpasslawstopreserveanyremainingwildernessareasintheirnaturalstate,especiallywhenitcomestosomeareasthatcouldbedevelopedforeconomicgain.DifferentpeopleholdIthasalwaysbeenacomplexandcontroversialissuewhethernationsshouldpasslawstopreserveanyremainingwildernessareasintheirnaturalstate,especiallywhenitcomestosomeareasthatcouldbedevelopedforeconomicgain.Differentpeopleholdvariedopinionsduetotheirrespectivewaysoflookingatthisissue.Astome,Istronglysupportsupportthevalidityandrationalityofthisissue.Myviewwillbefurtherstrengthenedinthe ernment.ernment.Ifthebasicphysiologicalneedsofnationcouldneverbeneglected,asthecommon instance,instance,inEthiopia,wherepovertyisandpeoplearestrivingforsurvival,itmaypopulationhaveyettobesatisfied,itisunlikelythe preservingtheextinctionanimalsand nts.ItItisundeniablethatwildernessyindispensibleroleinpreservinganimalsandnts.Wildernessareasarethemajorhabitatsforanimalsandnts,especiallythoseinscarceamount.Forexample,mostofthe Arakan Turtleliveinwildernessareas.Theseendangeredspeciesarenecessarilycrucialforoneareainthatthey,nomatteranimalsornts,representaspecificculturewhichdistinguishoneareafromanother,andalsohelpmaintainacertainkindofnaturalbalanceintheecosystemofthatarea.However,importantastheyare,theyarefacinganextremelyhighriskofextinctionintheimmediatefuture.Therefore,itisurgentforanynationtopreserveremainingwildernessareasinordertoprovidetheseendangeredspecieswithabettercetoliveandprolifrate.Morethanthat,protectingthewildernessareaswillalsofacilitatethelocalresidentsthere.preservingpreservingthesandfreshwater,asasprotectingtheanimalsand nts,theresidentswillsurelyinreturnbenefitmuch.havemoreaccesstothegoodsandservicestheyprovideandleadasalubriouslifewithabetterprovisionofcleanairanddrinkingwater.Also,havemoreaccesstothegoodsandservicestheyprovideandleadasalubriouslifewithabetterprovisionofcleanairanddrinkingwater.Also,couldimplementsustainableland-use nningtoprovidethemselvesaswellaspeoplefrom Providedthattheconservationofwildernessareaswillnotimperilthebasicdemandsofhumanliving,butmoreover,willeventurntobebeneficialtotheculturalandfinancialimprovement,thereisnoexcusestoinhibittheprotectionofwildernessareas.Asisdiscussed,accordingtome,itsagacioustosupporttheissuethatnationsshouldpasslawstopreserveanyremainingwildernesssagacioustosupporttheissuethatnationsshouldpasslawstopreserveanyremainingwildernessbedevelopedforeconomic 475No.81AllParentsShouldBeRequiredtoVolunteerTimetoTheirChildren’sSchoolsTheissueofwhetherallparentsshouldberequiredvolunteertimetotheirchildren’sschoolsisacomplexandcontroversialone.Differentpeopleholddifferentopinionsduetotheirrespectivewaysoflookingatthisissue.Inmy alsense,however,Iholdthegeneraldisagreementtowardthisissue.Myviewwillbefurtherstrengthenedbythefollowingdiscussion.volunteertimetotheirchildren’sschoolsisacomplexandcontroversialone.DifferentpeopleholddifferentopinionsduetotheirrespectivewaysoflookingatthisAdmittedly,itmaysoundpersuasiveforsomepeopletoarguethatparentsvolunteeringtimetoschoolswillcontributegreatlytotheacademicprogressoftheirchildren.Withparents’participation,toholdthesupportivepositiontowardtheissuetoholdthesupportivepositiontowardtheissueofrequiringallparentstovolunteertimetotheirarelesslikelytoskipclassandtendtobemoreactiveandattentiveinclasses.Theclimbinclass-attendanceandaswellasattentivenesswillprimarilyimprovetheaveragelearninggradesofthesechildren.Andsinceschooleducationisofindispensibleimportancemyoppositiontotheissueisthatmostparentsaretakingfull-timejobsandmanyofthemdon’thaveflexibilitytotakeoffwhenevertheirchild’sclassneedsthem.myoppositiontotheissueisthatmostparentsaretakingfull-timejobsandmanyofthemdon’thaveflexibilitytotakeoffwhenevertheirchild’sclassneedsthem.Forinstance,thoseworkingasdoctorshavetobeavailableforawholedaytotakegoodcareoftheirpatients,andthosewhoworkinfieldslikesciencetechnologyarealwaysbusywiththeirresearchprogramswithoutmuchtimetosquanderinvolunteeringtotheirchildren’s undeniablefactthatsomeparentsarenotfinanciallyandtheyvaluetheirjobsinordertoendsendsmeet.Oncetheydto rinsurvivalcedinthefirstand importantthananythingelse.Withoutthebasicrequirementbeingmet,itisimpossibleoftheparentstobuildupasalubriousenvironmentforthegrowthofthebasicneedoftheirfamilyintermsofdailyexpenditurewillinevitablybedissatisfied.AsismentionedfrequentlyinMaslow’shierarchyofneeds,whicharephysiologicalneeds,safetyneeds,loveandbelongings,esteemandself-actualization,socialtheirdepressionandpressurewillceandevenThisantipathywillnotonlybringnobenefittothesechildren,butonthecontrary,mayprovecounterproductiveinthatitmayleadtoBesidesdepressionandpressurewillceandevenThisantipathywillnotonlybringnobenefittothesechildren,butonthecontrary,mayprovecounterproductiveinthatitmayleadtoAllowingforalltheabovefactors,accordingtome,itisirrationaltorequireallparentstovolunteertimetotheirchildren’sschools.455words總述錯誤Merelybasedontheunsoundreasoning,theauthorhastilymakesthefallaciousandabsurdconclusion(),Thedeductionresultsfromthefollowingmajorreasonstheauthormakessuchegregiousflawsascauseandeffect,falseogy,insufficientinvestigationandyses.提出因果錯誤Theauthorcommitsthe“causeandeffectfallacy.It’sarbitraryfortheauthortodrawtheconclusionthat(原因)willinevitablyresultin結(jié)果Nevertheless,otherrelevantreasonsmighthavecausedtheeffectaswell.Forexample(給出其他原因).Moreover,it’shighlypossiblethattheaforementionedreasonhasnothingtodowiththeallegedresult. 數(shù)量不充分Inaddition,thereisasevereweaknessinthestatisticalinvestigation.Theamountofthesampleisnotampleenoughtosupportthe yses.數(shù)字can rlyrepresenttheentire情況3.2)數(shù)據(jù)不確切What’smore,thevaguelyusageof“many,alargeamount”istoosubjectivetoinsinuatealargeproportionofthesample.It’shighlypossiblethattheyinvestigated6000,howevertheentire…isaround6million.Thegeneralysisoftheinsufficientsampleisnotenoughtoadumbratethelocalcharacteristics.Itmightbeeffectivethatthescenariointhislocalphenomenonisdrasticallydifferent.3.3如何進(jìn)行:3.3.1)選項(xiàng)問題Ontheotherhand,it’simperativethatweshouldpayattentiontothecarriageoftheinvestigation----whetherthequestionnairerepresentstheinvestigators’subjectivepropensity.Forinstance,hemighthaveonlyputoneortwochoicesinfavorofhisjudgmentleavinglittlespacefortheobjectiveselections.Maybethechoiceisjustwhetheryoursleetimeexceeds6hours.Fortheconcernsof alinterest,hetwisted/obscuredthetruth.3.3.2)是否問題Besides,itismomentousthattheproceedingshouldbeconductedinanunbiasedformatForexample,providedthattheinvestigationisnotanonymous,thecredibilityoftheresultsmustbehighly提出錯誤類比Theauthorhastilymakestheconclusionbyfalselymakingtheirrationalogybetween...,ignoringthegapsofvarioussituationsbetweenthetwoincludingthelawsandregulations,citizens’consciousness,technologyanditsapplication,充分必要條件Itisassumedthat,inthereasoning,AwillresultinB.However,afterprofoundconsideration,onlyundertheconditionthatwhenAisassociatedwithBCD,theresultwilllikelytakece.Morethanthat,it'sseverelydoubtfulthatAiseventhenecessaryconditionfortheconsequenceofB.一成不變錯誤ItistakenforgrantedthatAremainedunchangedoverthe()years.However,duetothe(geographic,economic,cultural,technologicalal tion),thescenariocouldbeseverelymodified.Tenyearsago,thescenarioswere(),whileitcouldhavechangedto().兩種選擇Itisillogicalthattheauthorcommitsthe"limitedalternative"fallacy.Otherthantheaforementionedandrestrictedalternatives,it'sconceivablethat()will()錯誤It’segregiousthatintermsofarequiredlogicalreasoning,theauthor,basedonthedeductionmerelyof"commonsense".Itcouldhavebeenthat()結(jié)尾Tosumup,theconclusionintheargumentlackscredibilitysincetheevidencecitedintheysisdoesnotlendstrongsupporttowhatthearguerclaims.Tomaketheargumentmoreconvincing,thearguershouldprovidemoreinformationconcerning…tobetterevaluatetheargument,weneedmoreconcreteevidencethat…otherwisetheargumentislogically表示錯誤的形容詞fallaciousmistakenmisleadingerroneousdeceptivefalse表示邏輯錯誤的形容詞irrationalillogicalunreasonableridiculousabsurdsenselessgroundlessunsoundnonsensical表示邏輯正確的形容詞rationalsensiblelogicalrealisticconvincingcompellingpersuasivelogicalrationalcredibletrue-to-lifeflawless表示武斷的形容詞assertiveself-assuredindiscriminatearbitrarydogmatic錯誤的名詞mistakeflawinexactitude表示導(dǎo)致resultin;cause;bringabout表示由于。。。導(dǎo)致arisefrom;ariseoutof;becausedby;stemfrom;comefrom錯誤類型英文表達(dá)causeand ogy;statisticalinvestigation;sufficientandnecessarycondition;partandwhole;stayingunchanged;restrictedalternatives;CommonsenseMerelybasedontheunsoundreasoning,theauthorhastilymakesthefallaciousandabsurdconclusionthattoreducethenumberofon-jobaccidentsatQuiotandtherebyincreaseproductivity,weshouldshorteneachofourthreeworkshiftsbyonehour.Theauthormakessuchegregiousflawsascauseandeffect,falseogy,insufficientinvestigationandyses.Itissaidinthestatementthatduringthepastyear,QuiotManufacturinghad30percentmoreon-the-jobaccidentsthanatthenearbyPanoplyIndustriesnt,wheretheworkshiftsareonehourshorterthantheother.TheauthorhastilymakestheconclusionbyfalselymakingtheirrationalogybetweenQuiotManufacturingandPanoplyIndustriesnt,ignoringthegapsofvarioussituationsbetweenthetwoincludingthelawsandregulations,employees’consciousness,technologyanditsnatureofproduction,etc.ItispossiblethatPanoplyIndustriesntcarriesonsuchhigh-techintensiveproductionsassoftwareprogrammingorarchitecturaldesigningwhereon-thejobaccidentsmaynotlikelytakecewhileQuiotManufacturingtakeslaborintensiveassignmentsmoredangerousthaninIndustriesnt.Itisundeniablethat,therefore,theaccidentspossibilitiesaremuchhigherinQuiotInaddition,thereisasevereweaknessinthestatisticalinvestigation.Theamountofthesampleisnotampleenoughtosupporttheyses.30percentinthepastyearcanhardlyrepresenttheentiresituationovermanyyears.Itmighthavebeenadifferentsituationforalongtimeseverelyopposedtotheoccurrencelastyear.Forexample,thetruthmightprovethatQuiotManufacturinghadmuchlesson-the-jobaccidentsthanatPanoplyIndustriesntwithonlyoneexceptionmentionedinthereport.What’smore,thevaguelyusageof“manyon-the-jobaccidentsarefatigueandsleepdeprivation”istoosubjectivetoinsinuatealargeproportionofthesample.It’shighlypossiblethattheyinvestigated,say,60cases,howevertheentirenumberofaccidentsisaround6000.Thegeneralysisoftheinsufficientsampleisnotenoughtoadumbratethelocalcharacteristics.Itmightbeeffectivethatthescenariointhislocalphenomenonisdrasticallydifferent.Eventhoughitmayprov

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