英語人教新目標(biāo)七年級下冊My Unforgettable Trip

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yesterday.Itwassomuchfun.

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memories.

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IhadagreattimetakingatripinPingchang

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SoIwanttovisitPingchangagainoneday.Itbroughtmelotsofnice

memories.

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Later,IcametoPingchangMiddleSchool.

Then,Italkedwithsometeachershere.Theywerereallyhelpfulandfriendlytome.

Intheend,Iatehotpot.ItwasthemostpopularfoodinSichuan.SoIwantedtohaveatry.Thetastewasreallydelicious.

Allinall,thistripwaskindoftiringbutquiteexciting.

SoIwanttovisitPingchangagainoneday.Itbroughtmelotsofnicememories.

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擁有清晰的結(jié)構(gòu)框架（好的開頭與結(jié)尾）

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