高考英語寫作分類訓(xùn)練：感謝信（含答案）

感謝信/祝賀信1．假定你是學(xué)生李華，你在學(xué)校組織的第三屆用英語講中國(guó)故事挑戰(zhàn)賽(“StoriesofChinaRetoldinEnglish”Challenge)中獲得冠軍。請(qǐng)撰寫一封英語郵件給外教David，分享這一喜訊并感謝他在賽前給予你的幫助。內(nèi)容包括：1.告知喜訊;2.回憶外教提供的幫助并表達(dá)感謝。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearDavid,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua2．假定你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，學(xué)生會(huì)舉辦的首屆生活技能云端展示活動(dòng)(WorkCreatesaBetterLife)得到了外教Patrick的大力支持?；顒?dòng)已經(jīng)圓滿結(jié)束，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封感謝信。內(nèi)容包括：1.表示感謝；2.外教的幫助；3.活動(dòng)的反響。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearPatrick,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua3．假定你是李華，在你們班英國(guó)交換生Chris的幫助下你獲得了學(xué)校舉辦的“溫暖春日”主題攝影競(jìng)賽活動(dòng)的一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示感謝;2.回顧他對(duì)你的幫助;3.邀請(qǐng)他參加下次攝影展。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為100左右。DearChris,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua4．假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)好友Jack在學(xué)校籃球比賽中被評(píng)為MVP，請(qǐng)你給他寫封祝賀信。要點(diǎn)如下：1.表示祝賀；2.肯定他的付出；3.希望學(xué)習(xí)他的籃球技術(shù)。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80詞左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假定你是李華，昨天在學(xué)校不慎丟失錢包。今天你接到學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)的電話，稱外教Mr.Smith撿到你的錢包并上交學(xué)校，讓你速去認(rèn)領(lǐng)。請(qǐng)你給Mr.Smith寫一封電子郵件表示感謝，內(nèi)容包括：1．表示感謝的原因；2．丟失的過程和物品；3．對(duì)Mr.Smith作出評(píng)價(jià)。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMr.Smith,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua6．假定你叫李華，你和你的團(tuán)隊(duì)即將結(jié)束在新西蘭某中學(xué)的文化交流活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)代表團(tuán)隊(duì)準(zhǔn)備一篇答謝辭在答謝會(huì)上致辭，內(nèi)容包括：1.感謝；2.收獲；3.愿望。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．畢業(yè)之際，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語給你的一位老師寫封信，感謝他多年來給予你的教育和幫助。要點(diǎn)包括：1．寫作的目的；2．老師給予你的教育和幫助；3．你所取得的成績(jī)。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．信件的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，請(qǐng)接著往下寫；3．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使文章過渡自然。DearMr.Li,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua8．假如你是李華，目前在愛爾蘭進(jìn)行交流學(xué)習(xí)。上周末你受當(dāng)?shù)貙W(xué)生Chris邀請(qǐng)參加了“愛爾蘭傳統(tǒng)音樂節(jié)”活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你寫一封郵件給Chris，內(nèi)容包括：1)感謝邀請(qǐng)；2)分享你的活動(dòng)收獲；3)表示期待。注意：1.詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假如你是班長(zhǎng)李華，你們班舉辦了以“ProtectOurEarth”為主題的班會(huì)活動(dòng)，并邀請(qǐng)了王教授給同學(xué)們做了講座，請(qǐng)你在活動(dòng)結(jié)束后給王教授寫一封信表示感謝。內(nèi)容包括：1.表達(dá)感謝；2.活動(dòng)的反響和同學(xué)們的收獲；3.再次表達(dá)感謝。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearProfessorWang,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua10．假定你是李華，你的外國(guó)朋友Alex給你推薦了一部英文電影。你觀看后收獲很大，因此想給他寫一封信表示感謝，內(nèi)容包括：1．表示感謝；2．介紹你的收獲；3．希望獲得更多推薦。注意：1．詞數(shù)應(yīng)為100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1．OnePossibleVersion:DearDavid,Fullofjoy,Ican’twaittosharewithyouthisexcitingnews!Ihavebeencrownedwiththechampionshipinthethird“StoriesofChinaRetoldinEnglish”Challengeinmyschool.Mygratitudeforyouisbeyonddescription.WhenIwasrackingmybrainsforthedraft,itwasyouwhohelpedmepolishitandcorrectgrammarmistakescarefully.Withthedraftcompleted,itwasyouwhohelpedmerehearsethespeechandkindlypointedouthowtopauseandarticulateinabetterway.Inthetryout,whenIstutteredduetoextremeanxiety,itwasyouwhoencouragedmetocontinue.Withoutyourconstantencouragement,mymoralewouldhavebeendampened.Thanksagainforyourgeneroushelpandwishyouallthebest.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生撰寫一封英語郵件給外教David，分享自己獲得學(xué)校組織的中國(guó)故事挑戰(zhàn)賽的冠軍這一喜訊并感謝他在賽前給予你的幫助。【詳解】1.詞匯積累令人激動(dòng)的：exciting→thrilling感激：gratitude→appreciation初稿：draft→sketch完成：complete→accomplish2.句式拓展同義句原句：Withthedraftcompleted,itwasyouwhohelpedmerehearsethespeechandkindlypointedouthowtopauseandarticulateinabetterway.拓展句：Whenthedraftwascompleted,itwasyouwhohelpedmerehearsethespeechandkindlypointedouthowtopauseandarticulateinabetterway.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】WhenIwasrackingmybrainsforthedraft,itwasyouwhohelpedmepolishitandcorrectgrammarmistakescarefully.(運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句式)【高分句型2】Withthedraftcompleted,itwasyouwhohelpedmerehearsethespeechandkindlypointedouthowtopauseandarticulateinabetterway.(運(yùn)用了with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)和強(qiáng)調(diào)句式)2．DearPatrick,IamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourkindhelpintheWorkCreatesaBetterLife,whichhasturnedouttobeanamazingsuccess.Itissoniceofyoutohaveofferedusavarietyofpresentationskillsandcreativesuggestionsonourshow.Itwasunderyourprofessionalguidancethattheparticipantsshowedtheirskillsofcooking,gardening,etc.Theirimpressiveperformancesdefinitelyfueledtheirpassionfordailylifeskills.Mostimportantly,thisactivityhelpedstudentsreceivewideadmirationandgaintheirtremendousconfidence.Manythanksforyourtimeandsupport.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封感謝信，感謝外教Patrick對(duì)學(xué)生會(huì)舉辦的首屆生活技能云端展示活動(dòng)的大力支持?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累衷心的：sincere→heartfelt感激：gratitude→appreciation驚人的：amazing→fascinating提供：offer→provide2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Theirimpressiveperformancesdefinitelyfueledtheirpassionfordailylifeskills.拓展句：Theirperformanceswhichimpressedpropledefinitelyfueledtheirpassionfordailylifeskills.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]IamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourkindhelpintheWorkCreatesaBetterLife,whichhasturnedouttobeanamazingsuccess.(which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Itwasunderyourprofessionalguidancethattheparticipantsshowedtheirskillsofcooking,gardening,etc.(itis...that強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)3．DearChris,I’mgladtotellyouthatIhavewonfirstplaceincurschool’s“WarmSpring”PhotographyCompetition.I’mwritingtoexpressmygratitudeforyourhelp.WhileIwaspreparingforthecompetition,youtaughtmewhatmakesagoodphoto.Besides,Ilearnedhowtoadjusttheshootingmodesandchoosethebestsettingsforagoodphotofromtheshortvideosyourecommendedtome.Asaresult,Iwonthecompetition.Ihopeyoucantakepartinthenextphotographycompetition.Ibelieveyouwilldefinitelybethewinner.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國(guó)交換生Chris寫一封郵件，感謝他對(duì)自己參加攝影競(jìng)賽活動(dòng)的幫助。內(nèi)容包括：1.表示感謝；2.回顧他對(duì)你的幫助；3.邀請(qǐng)他參加下次攝影展?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累感謝：gratitude→thanks為……做準(zhǔn)備：preparefor→makepreparationsfor此外：besides→what’smore參加：takepartin→participatein2.句式拓展運(yùn)用形容詞作狀語合并句子原句：I’mgladtotellyouthatIhavewonfirstplaceincurschool’s“WarmSpring”PhotographyCompetition.I’mwritingtoexpressmygratitudeforyourhelp.拓展句：GladtotellyouthatIhavewonfirstplaceincurschool’s“WarmSpring”PhotographyCompetition,I’mwritingtoexpressmygratitudeforyourhelp.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】WhileIwaspreparingforthecompetition,youtaughtmewhatmakesagoodphoto.（運(yùn)用了while引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句以及what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）【高分句型2】Ilearnedhowtoadjusttheshootingmodesandchoosethebestsettingsforagoodphotofromtheshortvideosyourecommendedtome.（運(yùn)用了“疑問詞how+動(dòng)詞不定式”作賓語）4．參考范文：DearJack,I’mveryexcitedtoknowthenewsthatyouwereawardedMVPinthebasketballmatchheldinschoollastSunday.Ishowmycongratulationssincerely.Thisisagoodevidencetoshowwhathardworkyou’vedevotedtopracticingandimprovingyourskills.Whenyoufirstlearnedtoplaybasketball,youwereatalossaboutthebasicskillsandfeltembarrassed.Butitwasn’tlongbeforeyoucaughtupandbecameanexcellentplayer.ThatyouwereawardedMVPshowsyourgreatdeterminationandpainstakingeffortsinpractisingbasketball.Ihopethatonedaywecanhaveagameofbasketball,sothatIcanlearnfromyou.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給美國(guó)好友Jack寫一封祝賀信，祝賀他在學(xué)?；@球比賽中被評(píng)為MVP。【詳解】1.詞匯積累興奮的、激動(dòng)的：excited→thrilled表達(dá)祝賀：showcongratulations→expresscongratulations/extendcongratulations致力于：devotedto→committedto提高：improve→enhance2.句式拓展同義句原句：ThatyouwereawardedMVPshowsyourgreatdeterminationandpainstakingeffortsinpractisingbasketball.拓展句：ThefactthatyouwereawardedMVPshowsyourgreatdeterminationandpainstakingeffortsinpractisingbasketball.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】I’mveryexcitedtoknowthenewsthatyouwereawardedMVPinthebasketballmatchheldinschoollastSunday.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句)【高分句型2】Ihopethatonedaywecanhaveagameofbasketball,sothatIcanlearnfromyou.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句)5．DearMr.Smith,I’mLiHua,astudentofNo.2HighSchool.Itakethisopportunitytoexpressmyappreciationforyourreturningmywallet.Herearesomedetails.Firstandforemost,onmywayhometotheschooldininghall,Ilostmywalletduetomycarelessnessyesterday.Inthewallettherewassomemoney,myIDcardandstudentcard.Asyouknow,myIDcardandstudentcardareveryimportanttome.Iwasveryworriedandevensleepless.Moreover,IwasstillfeelinganxioustodaywhenIwasinformedtogototheStudentUnionandtakebackwhatIhadlost,whereIlearnedthatitwasyouwhopickedupmywalletandkindlyhandeditintimely.ItwassuchapleasantsurprisethatI’dliketoexpressmythankstoyou.Whatagoodexampleyouhavesettometolearnfrom!Bestwishes!Yourssincerely,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本文是應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外教Mr.Smith寫一封感謝信，感謝他撿到你的錢包?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累機(jī)會(huì)：opportunity→chance感謝：appreciation→thanks歸還：return→giveback而且：Moreover→what’smore2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Firstandforemost,onmywayhometotheschooldininghall,Ilostmywalletduetomycarelessnessyesterday.拓展句：Firstandforemost,whenIwasonmywayhometotheschooldininghall,Ilostmywalletduetomycarelessnessyesterday.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Asyouknow,myIDcardandstudentcardareveryimportanttome.（由As引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Moreover,IwasstillfeelinganxioustodaywhenIwasinformedtogototheStudentUnionandtakebackwhatIhadlost,whereIlearnedthatitwasyouwhopickedupmywalletandkindlyhandeditintimely.（由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句，what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，where引導(dǎo)的定語從句，that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和who引導(dǎo)的強(qiáng)調(diào)句型結(jié)構(gòu)）6．OnePossibleVersion:Goodevening!Dearfriends,I’mverypleasedtostandhereonbehalfofmyteamtoaddressyou.Firstly,I’dliketoexpressoursinceregratitudetoyouforyourthoughtfulcareofus.Yourkindnesshasleftadeepandbeautifulimpressiononus.Secondly,fromtheculturalexchangeactivities,eachofushasgainedalot.We’reheretospreadourtraditionalChineseculture,suchasPekingOpera,andyou’refondofthem,whichmakesusextremelyproud.Meanwhile,you’vealsoshowcasedusyourexcellentculture,whichhasbroadenedourhorizons.Finally,Ihopeourfriendshipwilllastforever.IalsosincerelyinviteyoutoChinaandonceagainexperienceourexcellentculture.Thankyouall!【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假定你叫李華，你和你的團(tuán)隊(duì)即將結(jié)束在新西蘭某中學(xué)的文化交流活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)代表團(tuán)隊(duì)準(zhǔn)備一篇答謝辭在答謝會(huì)上致辭。【詳解】1.詞匯積累代表：onbehalfof→represent首先：Firstly→Firstofall喜歡：befondof→bekeenon極好的：excellent→wonderful2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：IalsosincerelyinviteyoutoChinaandonceagainexperienceourexcellentculture.拓展句：IalsosincerelyinviteyoutoChina,whereyoucanexperienceourexcellentcultureagain.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】We’reheretospreadourtraditionalChineseculture,suchasPekingOpera,andyou’refondofthem,whichmakesusextremelyproud.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Meanwhile,you’vealsoshowcasedusyourexcellentculture,whichhasbroadenedourhorizons.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）7．Onepossibleversion:DearMr.Li,I’mgoingtoleavethisschoolsoon.SoI’mwritingthislettertoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetoyouforwhatyouhavedoneformeinthepastthreeyears.WhenIfirstcametothisschool,IwaspoorinmyEnglish.Withyourpatientteachingandtimelyguidance,IhavebecomeoneofthetopthreestudentsinEnglishintheclass.What’smore,IevengotthefirstprizeintheEnglishspeechcontestinthecitylastterm.Withoutyourhelp,Iwouldn’thavemadesuchgreatprogress.Thankyouagainforwhatyouhavedoneforme.Bestwishes.

Yours，LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本文是應(yīng)用文寫作。要求考生用英語給自己的一位老師寫封信，感謝他多年來的教育和幫助?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累表達(dá)：express→extend衷心的：heartfelt→sincere在……不好：bepoorin→beweakin另外：what’smore→inaddition2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：What’smore,IevengotthefirstprizeintheEnglishspeechcontestinthecitylastterm.拓展句：What’smore,IevengotthefirstprizeintheEnglishspeechcontestwhichwasheldbythecitylastterm.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]SoI’mwritingthislettertoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetoyouforwhatyouhavedoneformeinthepastthreeyears.(運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)賓語從句)[高分句型2]WhenIfirstcametothisschool,IwaspoorinmyEnglish.(運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句)8．DearChris,ThankyouforinvitingmetotheIrishTraditionalMusicFestivallastweekend.ItwasanamazingexperienceandIthoroughlyenjoyedspendingtimewithyou.ThefestivalleftmewithadeeperappreciationforIrishmusicandculture.Whatimpressedmemostwerethetalentofthemusiciansandthelivelyatmosphereoftheevent.OldIrishmelodiesgentlytouchedmysoul,mypressuremeltingaway.Iamsogratefulforthechancetohaveaclosetasteofthelocalculture.AndIamlookingforwardtomoreopportunitiestoexploreIrelandwithyouinfuture.Bestregards,Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給愛爾蘭當(dāng)?shù)貙W(xué)生Chris寫信感謝他邀請(qǐng)你參加了“愛爾蘭傳統(tǒng)音樂節(jié)”活動(dòng)并分享收獲?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累令人驚訝的：amazing→surprising活潑的、生動(dòng)的：lively→vivid感激：begratefulfor→bethankfulfor期盼：lookforwardto→expect2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：AndIamlookingforwardtomoreopportunitiestoexploreIrelandwithyouinfuture.拓展句：AndIamlookingforwardtomoreopportunitiesthatcanhelptoexploreIrelandwithyouinfuture【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Whatimpressedmemostwerethetalentofthemusiciansandthelivelyatmosphereoftheevent.（運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的主語從句）【高分句型2】Iamsogratefulforthechancetohaveaclosetasteofthelocalculture.（運(yùn)用了不定式作后置定語）9．DearProfessorWang,I’mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourkindhelpinourclassmeeting“ProtectOurEarth”.Yourlectureissuchagreatsuccessthatwearedeeplyimpressedbyit.Theactivityhasfueledourpassionforourearth,andraisedourawarenessofprotectingtheenvironment.Realisingthegreatharmcausedbythesmogandtheimportanceoftheenvironment,manyofourstudentshavetakenimmediateactionsuchasplantingmoretreesandvolunteeringtoeducatethepublictolearnrecyclingtoprotecttheearth.Manythanksforyourtimeandsupport,andwe’lldoourparttomakeourearthbeautiful.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給王教授寫一封感謝信，并告知活動(dòng)的反響和同學(xué)們的收獲?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累真誠(chéng)的：sincere→honest/frank/earnest增強(qiáng)：fuel→enhance/streng