新目標(biāo)初三英語寫作課課件

2021/5/91Writing2021/5/922021/5/93DescribethepictureSheisusedtousingasmart-phonebeforegoingtobedeveryday.Sheusesasmart-phonebeforegoingtobed.智能手機(jī)beforegoingtobedDangerbebadfor傷身體描述圖片2021/5/94DescribethepictureManypeopleusesmart-phoneswhentheycrossthestreet.Manypeopleusesmart-phoneswhentheyridebikes\driveacar\walk.causetrafficaccidents2021/5/951.eatwithfamilyeatwithfamilyDescribethepictureSomepeopleusesmart-phoneswhentheyeatwithfamily.Somepeopleusesmart-phones.Theyeatwithfamily.Dangerinfluencetherelationshipwith2021/5/96Opinions1.好好利用手機(jī)。（makegooduseof）2.面對面的交流勝過網(wǎng)上交流。（face-to-faceconversation）

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Inmyopinion…Ithink/believe…We’dbettermakegooduseofsmart-phones.Face-to-faceconversationisbetterthanchattingonline.WecanusethematpropertimeandpropersituationsDiscussion小組討論發(fā)表你們的觀點：(firstly,secondly,besides,what'smore,finally…Ontheonehand,ontheotherhand…notonly…butalso)2021/5/97（2015，煙臺）隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，智能手機(jī)（smart-phone）已被廣泛使用。我們身邊的“低頭族(phubber)”隨處可見。請根據(jù)圖中所示，結(jié)合表格所提供的信息,以“Refusetobephubbers”寫一篇120詞左右的短文。2021/5/98要求：1.短文須包含所有信息，語句通順、意思連貫,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.題目與開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：1.eatwithfamily2.causetrafficaccidents3.face-to-faceconversation4.makegooduseofRefusetobephubbersWiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,smart-phonesarewidelyusedamongpeople.Phubberscanbeseenhereandthere.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2021/5/99Beforewriting小組討論，完成以下任務(wù)

1.認(rèn)真審題，理清思路。

2.列出提綱，初步成形。

本篇文章應(yīng)分為幾段，每段都寫什么？應(yīng)選用哪種時態(tài)？第幾人稱？需要用到哪些句式結(jié)構(gòu)？2021/5/910（2015，煙臺）隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，智能手機(jī)（smart-phone）已被廣泛使用。我們身邊的“低頭族(phubber)”隨處可見。請根據(jù)圖中所示，結(jié)合表格所提供的信息,以“Refusetobephubbers”寫一篇120詞左右的短文?，F(xiàn)象弊端觀點2021/5/911選出每段主題句：Inmyopinion,weshouldlearntouseoursmart-phonesproperly,andweshouldrefusetobephubbers

2.WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,smart-phonesarewidelyusedamongpeople.3.Beingphubbershassomedisadvantages..1.現(xiàn)象2.弊端3.觀點Whilewriting2021/5/912Whilewriting幾點建議：Don’teatfast.Don’teat,fast!IloveChina.Ilovechina(瓷器).IverylikeEnglish.(×)IlikeEnglishverymuch.(√)Heisveryyoung.Heknowsalot.(Good!)

Heknowsalotalthoughheisveryyoung.(Better!)1.注意標(biāo)點和字母大小寫.2.注意句子的結(jié)構(gòu)正確。3.注意遣詞造句，爭取文采。2021/5/913RefusetobephubbersYouropinions(1.makegooduseof2.face-to-faceconversation,)

現(xiàn)象Phenomenon

(1.eatwithfamily2.gettogetherwithfriends3.bebusydoing\crossthestreet）DisadvantagesInmyopinion,

Weshould…We’dbetter…Ithink/believe…4.therelationshipwith5.causetrafficaccidents6.bebadfor/getinthewayof…2021/5/914Exchangeyourarticlewithyourpartner,thenunderlinethebeautifulsentencesandcirclethemistakes.Groupwork2021/5/9151.用最熟悉、最有把握的句型，短語。2.用英語思維來表達(dá)。3.語句要通順，層次要清楚，上下連貫很重要。RememberSomeadviceforyou!2021/5/916Putdownthephones,givemoretimetoourfamilie