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training

facilitiesRecently

we

make

a

survey

of

the

people

on

physical

training.典型錯誤：1、percent

（無復(fù)數(shù)）35

percent

of

the

people

…The

percentage

of

the

people

reaches

//

comes

to

35%2、lack

（及物動詞，lacksth

名詞：

a/

the

lack

of

)People

lack

training

facilities.because

of

a//the

lack

of

training

facilities3、work

outdo

sports4、take

up（常用于健身房的鍛煉）/

take

exercises（占據(jù)時間與空間，不用于比例）make

up

35

percent5、equipment /

facilities（可數(shù)與不可數(shù)名詞）6、there

be (盡量不要用，很容易出現(xiàn)兩個謂語動詞）there

are

some

people

don’t

go

to

do

sports

…7、逗號不能連接兩個句子8、句子主謂一致9、句子的時態(tài)調(diào)查等一般都用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，發(fā)表議論可以用將來時態(tài)10、中文式翻譯表明自己的觀點(diǎn)：在文章中用say

表達(dá)不地道thinkbelievearguecomplain/admitclaimreckonbe

convinced

thathold

the

view

thatvoice

their

opinion

thatAs

the

survey

suggests/shows,

only

35%

of

the

peoplesurveyed

do

sports

on

a

regular

basis

while

the

rest

donot.From

the

survey,

I’m

shocked

to

find

that

about

two-thirds

of

people

surveyed

fail

to

take

exercise

regularly.Shockingly,

the

survey

shows

that

only

35%

of

thepeople

surveyed

take

regular

exercise,

while

themajority

of

people

do

not.When

asked

why

they

seldom

do

sports,

the

peoplesurveyed

give

various

reasons.The

reasons

for

people’s

failure

to

do

sports

are

listed

asfollows.The

following

are

the

reasons

why

most

people

seldom

dosports.The

result

is

beyond

all

expectations.Several

reasons

can

account

for

the

worryingphenomenon.The

reasons

for

people’s

failure

to

do

sportsare

listed

as

follows.The

following

are

the

reasons

why

most

peopleseldom

do

sports.A

main

reason,

as

53.9%

of

the

people

admit,

is

the

lack

oftime,

for

they

are

too

occupied

with

their

work

to

do

sports.53.9%

of

the

people

think

they

are

too

busy

to

spare

timefor

sports.Another

reason

is

that

training

centers

are

not

easilyaccessible

to

them,

discouraging

them

from

doing

sports.Some

people

think

it

is

the

shortage

of

training

facilities

inthe

neighborhood

that

discourages

them

from

taking

regularexercise.As

for

other

people,

the

inconvenience

caused

by

the

longdistance

from

their

home

to

the

training

center

results

intheir

failure

to

do

sports.Having

no

idea

how

to

exercise

properly,

quite

a

number

ofpeople

are

reluctant

to

do

sports.There

are

only

35%

of

people

who

ever

participated

in

physicaltraining,

which

came

as

a

great

shock

to

all

of

us.There

are

various

factors

contributing

to

this

worryingphenomenon,

in

which

the

shortage

of

spare

time

and

trainingfacilities

plays

a

vital

role.

In

addition,

the

inconveniencecaused

by

the

long

distance

and

the

lack

of

basic

knowledge

ofproper

training

methods

also

lead

to

that

to

some

extent.Confronted

with

the

current

situation,

I

urgently

call

on

all

of

usto

squeeze

out

more

time

from

our

busy

life

to

taste

thehappiness

and

joy

brought

by

regular

physical

activities.Furthermore,

our

government

is

supposed

to

focus

on

theconstruction

of

training

facilities

to

satisfy

citizens’

thirsts

and

get

more

people

involved

in

such

activities

by

further

promotion.Finally,

I

hope

that

more

people

will

be

aware

of

the

importanceof

physical

training

and

enjoy

it.And

the

results

turn

out

to

be

worrying,

with

only

35

percent

ofcitizens

having

ever

participated

in

physical

training.

While

theignorance

of

training

methods

and

the

inconvenient

access

tothe

far

training

areas

may

be

part

of

the

reason,

the

insufficientsupply

of

training

facilities

and,

in

particular,

the

lack

of

timeaccount

mostly

for

this

phenomenon,

reflecting

thegovernment’s

and

individuals’

neglect

of

the

significance

ofphysical

training.To

improve

the

current

situation,

we

suggest

methods

asfollowing.

To

begin

with,

the

awareness

of

physical

trainingshould

be

raised

and

habits

of

regular

exercise

ought

todeveloped.

As

for

the

government,

not

only

should

it

advertiseand

advocate

it,

but

establish

adequate

facilities

as

well.

Inaddition,

communities

can

also

set

up

relevant

courses

tospread

the

knowledge

of

physical

training.With

joint

effort,

we

do

hope

a

trend

of

physical

training

can

beset

and

both

the

physical

and

emotional

conditions

of

Chinesepeople

can

be

bettered.A

lack

of

time

contributes

53.9%

to

the

matter,topping

the

list,

followed

by

traini