-2023年5月Z20名校聯(lián)盟2023屆高三第三次聯(lián)考讀后續(xù)寫講義-2023屆高三英語寫作三輪沖刺

2023年5月Z20名校聯(lián)盟2023屆高三第三次聯(lián)考

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1試題原題·SHITIYUANTI·其次節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫〔總分值25分〕閱讀下面材料，依據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

“SAIBABA!SaiBaba!SaiBaba!Hahahaha!〞

“TodayisShimla’sbigday!Wehaveacelebrityvisitingourcity!Hahahaha!〞Rani’scheeksburnedwithembarrassmentandtearsstunghereyesassheelbowedherwaytotheexitthroughthecrowdofteasingboysinthepackedschoolbus.Itwasn’tthefirsttimeshe’dbeencalledSaiBaba,afterthefamousHinduholyman〔印度圣人〕she’dseenonTVwithhistrademarkafro〔爆炸式卷發(fā)〕toweringoverhishead.

Butthistimehadtobetheworst.Ranijumpedofftheschoolbus,angrythoughtshoveringinsideRani’sheadasshemarchedhomeinthedrizzlingrain.Whydidherhairhavetocurllikeagiantcottoncandyballoonjustwhenshewantedittobehave?Why,why,why,fumedRaniassheturnedthebackdoorkey.

“Rani,isthatyou?〞

Mamacalledfromthefamilyroom.SuddenlyRani’scousins,AmitandSumit,camechargingtowardher.“HowmanyeggsdoesRanihaveinthatnestonherhead?〞screamedAmit.“Letmegetthatwig〔假發(fā)〕offRani’shead!〞

shoutedSumit.Beforeshecouldthink,Ranihadfledoutthedoorandwentbackuptheroadshe’dwalkeddownminutesbefore.Halfwayup,sheslidunseenbehindagreencurtainofbamboo.Tearingthroughthewildgrowth,shemadeherwaydownanarrowmudpathintoaclearing〔空地〕.Shethrewherschoolbagonthegroundandbreathedhard.

“Ihatemyhair!〞shecried.Collapsingonherschoolbag,shebitterlyrememberedthetimeshe’dspenttryingtosmoothherhairinvain.Beforelong,shefellintoafitfulsleep.

“RANI!RAAAANI!〞

RaniwokeuptoMama’scalls.Shesoundedanxious.“I’llnevergohome,〞

shepromisedherselfdarkly.MamaletAmitandSumitmakefunofme.Papawouldneverhavedonethat.Hewouldlistentomeandstandbymyside.Theminutesworeon.Aloneinhersecrethideout,RaniwatchedtheshadowofMamnagetlongerandbegintodisappearasduskfell.留意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。

Suddenly,leavesrustling,someoneorsomethingwasmakingitswayintotheclearing.

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2試題分析·SHITIFENXI·●寫作分析1.主要人物〔角色〕：①Rani:“Ihatemyhair!〞②Mama:MamaletAmitandSumitmakefunofme.③Papa:Papawouldneverhavedonethat.Hewouldlistentomeandstandbymyside.2.主題：人與自我——如何正確熟悉自我Rani由于她的頭發(fā)，常常被人欺侮笑話。有一天最終忍無可忍，被稱贊后，她逃到一個隱藏的地方躲避并思索自己的問題。最終，在父親的關(guān)心下，她對自己有了全新的熟悉，走出了心理的“逆境〞。

3.續(xù)寫情節(jié)支配：●第一段：Suddenly,leavesrustling,someoneorsomethingwasmakingitswayintotheclearing.

①〔與開頭句連接〕當時的心情：可怕？懊悔？......②但想到之前的經(jīng)受，預備連續(xù)隱藏③〔與下文開頭句連接〕在感到特別無助的時候，父親消失了●其次段：ThenextmomentPapawassittingbesideher.

①〔與開頭句連接〕父親怎樣挑起開導的話題？②與父親怎樣溝通③最終在父親的關(guān)心下走出了頭發(fā)的“陰影〞Part

3·XIASHUIZUOWEN·●下水作文

Suddenly,leavesrustling,someoneorsomethingwasmakingitswayintotheclearing.Sofrightenedwasshethatherheartbeatfast.Fearaswellasabitregret,shekeptstill,notknowingwhatwouldhappennext.Indeed,whatsheexperiencedintheverydaycontributedtoherdeterminationthatshewouldnevergohome.However,asthesoundofthestepsapproached,therecameafamiliarfigure.ItwasPapa,holdinganumbrellawithanxiousexpressions.Ranicouldn’twaittorushoutofhersecrethideoutbeforePapaknewit.Shedashedoverandhuggedhimtightly,burstingoutcryingwithgreatsadness.ItseemedtobedecadesbeforeRanicalmeddown.(101words)

ThenextmomentPapawassittingbesideher.WhatsurprisedhermostwasthatnoblamecamefromPapa.Instead,Papa’swarmwordsmelther“frozen〞

heart.“Iamhereforyou,Rani!〞

Papasaidasifnothinghadhappened.“FromMama,Iknowwhatoccurredtoyou.Ireallyunderstandyouruniquehair,whichapparentlyhasbroughtyousomuchtrouble.Butletitgo!You’realwaysagiftedgirlinourhearts!Itisyourgoodperformanceandtalentthatshowwhatyouare!Cheerup,mygirl!...〞

Onthatgloomyday,nothingwasbetterthansuchwordsfullofloveandunderstandingthatgavehercouragetofacelifewithconfidence.(108words)參考范文：Suddenly,leavesrustling,someoneorsomethingwasmakingitswayintotheclearing.Ranifroze.Sheknewaboutthedangerousanimalsthefoxesandsnakesandevenmaneaterleopardsthatlurkedinthelushjungles.Ashiverwentdownherspine.Huggingherselfclose,shecrouchedlower,notdaringtomoveamuscle.Tinynightbugsbitintohersoftfleshandhungerpangswrackedherbelly.Raniwastorturedbysuchadisastrousday!Sheheldherbreathastherustlinggrewlouder,hereyesscanningthebushesfrantically.Suddenly,thethickleavesparted,andadarkformsteppedintotheclearing.Rani'sheartleapingwithfear,sheopenedhermouthtoscream.(99words)ThenextmomentPapawassittingbesideher.ReliefandjoyfloodedthroughRani.SheflungherarmsaroundPapaandclungtohim.“Rani!What'swrong?〞avisiblyrelievedPapaasked.Ranihesitatedatfirstbutthenbrokedownintears,“ihatemyhair!〞Shepouredouteverythingaboutteasing.“Andthat'snotall,Ranisobbed.“MamaevenletAmitandSumitgetawaywithit.〞Papasighed,strokedherdisheveledhairandplantedasoftkissonherforeh