2023年南京中考英語總復(fù)習(xí)精美實(shí)用教案：書面表達(dá)（三）

課程主題：書面表達(dá)（三）2023年南京中考英語總復(fù)習(xí)精美實(shí)用教案

1.掌握10個(gè)書面表達(dá)話題的常用句型；

學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)

2.能夠利用所學(xué)句型進(jìn)行實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練

教學(xué)內(nèi)容

【進(jìn)門測試】

翻譯下列句子。

1.為了保持健康，我們別無選擇，只有加強(qiáng)鍛煉。

2.老師對(duì)我們的學(xué)習(xí)要求嚴(yán)格。

3.現(xiàn)在越來越多的人意識(shí)到空氣污染對(duì)人的害處。

4.現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物變得越來越流行。

5.學(xué)校為我們提供了一個(gè)良好的學(xué)習(xí)場所。

6.除非你馬上起床，否則你要遲到了。

7.對(duì)于初三學(xué)生來說，熬夜準(zhǔn)備考試是否有必要?

【答案】

1.Tokeepfit,wehavenochoicebuttotakeexercise.

2.Ourteachersarestrictwithusinstudy.

3.Nowmoreandmorepeopleareawareoftheharmofairpollutiononpeople.

4.Nowshoppingonlineisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.

5.Theschoolprovidesuswithagoodplacetostudy.

6.Youwillbelateunlessyougetupatonce/rightnow.

7.IsitnecessaryforGrade9studentstostayuplatetopreparefortheexams?

【多元導(dǎo)學(xué)】

同學(xué)們，你們可以用四句話分別描述一下這四幅圖么？

批注：根據(jù)對(duì)季節(jié)的描述，引出本次課的第一個(gè)主題季節(jié)。

【互動(dòng)精講】

書面表達(dá)常見話題（11-20）

【知識(shí)梳理】

話題十一：季節(jié)

IbetyouMllookcoolandfeelcoolwithnotingon.

Itisthebesttimetoplayfootballoutside.

Winterdaysarefullofsnow.

Whataperfecttimetoflyakite!

Beesandbutterfliesplayamongflowers.

Thememoriesof...areabout...

Autumnleavesfallintopilesupontheground.

Asthedaysareshorterandthetemperaturedrops,...

Itwillbeanewyearonceagain.

Thetemperaturewilldropbelowzero.

Thehightemperaturemakespeoplesleepyintheafternoon.

Theyliketohaveashorttriparoundthecityattheweekend.

Everyonehastowearthickwarmclothes.

Everythingiscoveredindeepwhitesnow.

Wethrowsnowballsateachother,screamingandlaughing.

Ilovespring/summer/autumn/winterbecause...

Thetemperatureisusually...

Itisoftensunny/windy/rainy...

Duringthisseason,youcan/cannot...

話題十二：自然災(zāi)害

Iwasdoingsomeshoppingwhentheearthquakestarted.

Atfirst,Ifeltaslightshakingthroughmybody.

ThenIheardaloudnoiselikethunder.

Peoplelookedateachotherinfear.

Somepeoplescreamedbecausetheywereveryfrightened.

Peopleraninalldirections.

Itriedmybesttorunouttothestreet.

Peoplewererunningwildlywhilepiecesofglassandbrickswerefallingdown.

Icouldnotbelieveitwasover.

I'mtrapped.

Amomentoffearwentthroughmymind.

ItoldmyselftocalmdownsinceIwasstillalive.

Iwastryingtofindmywayout.

Thetemperatureisgoingtodrop.

Hiscarcrashedintoatreewhilehewasdriving.

Therewasaheavystormwiththunderandlightening

Herschoolcaughtfirebecauselighteninghitit.

WelostourbalanceinthewindandInearlyfellover.

話題十三：變遷

Thetownhaschangedalotovertheyears.

Weonlyhad...yearsago.

Nowthegovernmenthaso...

Therewasonce...near...

Thegovernmentrealizedtheproblemandtookactiontoimprovethesituation.

Theriverismuchcleanernow.

Lifeisbetternow.

It'sreallyniceto...

Ilhasbecomeimpossibleforusto...asoftenasbefore.

Iusedto...

It'sgoodtoseetheamazingchangesinthetown.

話題十四：慈善

I'mtrainingtobeavolunteerfor...

It'smeaningfultodosomethingfor...

Homelesspeopledon'thavetheirownplacestolive.

Theycanprovidespecialplacesforhomelesspeopletostay.

Hethinksitwasthemostamazingexperienceofhislife.

...give...achanceto...

...giveuptheirsparetimefor...

Itwasnecessaryfor...to...

Themostimportantthingisnottowinagoldorasilver,buttotakepart.

...feellikepartofonebigfamily

Moremoneyisneededforcharity.

Ithelpsbuildabetterworldfbreveryone,especiallychildrenallovertheworld.

Manypeopledon'thavemoneyfbrmedicaltreatment.

...can'taffordtogotothehospital,sowehavetogotothem.

Bydoing...,wehopetohelpmorepeople.

Duringmylastvisit,150patientswereoperatedon.

I'mproudtohelppeopleseeagainandimprovetheirlives.

Wehopemorepeoplewillsupportus.

Ilearnaboutanorganizationfor...

Itcollectsoldclothesfromalloverthecountry.

Ourgovernmenthasmanylawstoprotecttheenvironment.

Wearenotallowedto...Otherwise,wewillbepunished.

Itwedroplitterinapublicplace,wewillbefinedbythepolice.

Therearealsolawstolimit...

Itisimportantforustoprotectitwisely.

Thesenewtypesofenergycostverylittleandwillneverrunout.

Everyonecandosomethingtomakeadifference!

話題十五：星座

Ayearisdividedinto12differentstarsigns.

Yourdateofbirthdecidesyourstarsign.

Somepeoplebelievethatpeoplebornunderthesamestarsignsharesimilarcharacteristics.

Youareenergeticandactive.

Youarestrongandconfident,

ahard-workingperson

liketobealeader

donotlikechange

donotgiveupeasily

acuriousandcleverperson

changeeasily

worrytoomuchattimes

payattentiontodetails

liketoarguewithothers

powerfulpersonandhavelotsofenergy

Itissillyofyounottoforgiveothersfortheirmistakes.

lovetravellingtodifferentplaces

Youaregenerous,kind,gentleandeasy-going.

Youarealsocreativeandimaginative.

liketodreamabouteverything

話題十六：顏色

rdratherwearbluethanpink.

Bluelooksgoodonyou.

There'snothingwrongwithpink.

Weliveinaworldfullofcolours.

Doyouknowthatcolourscanaffectourmoods?

Colourscanchangeourmoodsandmakeusfeelhappyorsad,energeticorsleepy.

Thewallswerepaintedblue,acalmandpeacefulcolour.

createafeelingofharmony

Wearingblueclothesorsleepinginablueroomisgoodforourmindandbody.

feelblue

thecolourofpurity

feelstressed

Manywomenliketobeinwhiteontheirweddingday.

Giveyouahappyandsatisfiedfeeling.

createawarmandcomfortablefeeling

bringyousuccessandcheeryouup

Itcanremindyouofawarm,sunnyday.

Greencangiveyouenergy,asitisthecolourofnatureandrepresentsnewlifeandgrowth.

Itisalsothecolourofenvy.

Whenwesaysomeoneisgreenwithenvy...

Inneedofphysicalormentalstrength...

havedifficultymakingadecision

話題十七：青少年問題

Whatproblemsdoyouhave?

I'vegotaproblem.

knowhowtodealwith...

handitinontime

Ihardlyhaveanysparetimeformyhobbiessuchas...

Ioftendoubtwhetheritisworthworkingsohard.

offermesomesuggestions

Theywillbeofgreatvaluetome.

hearfromyousoon

mydreamistobe...

havemyparents9support

advisemehowtoachieveabalancebetweenmyhomeworkandmyhobbies

【例題精講】

例1.

假如你是青少年輔導(dǎo)員LiHua,你的英國筆友Millie來信向你求助。請(qǐng)根據(jù)信的內(nèi)容，用英語給她回復(fù)。

DearLiHua,

I'mMilliefromSunnyMiddleschool.

Examtimeisthemoststressfulperiodofthisterm.Iamgoingtotakepartintheentranceexamtosenior

highschool.ButnowIhavesomeproblems.IfeelverystressedovermyexamsandI'mafraidoffailure.Ihave

toomuchhomeworktodoeverydaysothatIhavenotimeformyhobbies.SometimesIarguewithmyparents

andthatmakesthemverysad.

Canyougivemesomesuggestions?I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

Writesoon!

Yours,

Millie

注意：

1.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

2.語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

3.詞數(shù)80左右，開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearMillie,

Thanksfbryourtrust.Tveknownyourproblemsfromtheletter.

Ihopeyouthinkmysuggestionsareworthtaking.

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

Onepossibleversion：

DearMillie,

Thanksforyourtrust.Tveknownyourproblemsfromtheletter.

Ifscommonforstudentstofeelstressedwhenexamsarecoming.Takeiteasyandbelievethatyoucan

achieveyourdreamifyouputyourheartintoit.Don'tbeafraidoffailure,asthesayinggoes,^Failureisthe

motherofsuccess.95

Manystudentshavedifficultyachievingthebalancebebveenhomeworkandhobbies.You'dbetterchoose

hobbiesyoucandoaccordingtothefreetimeyouhave.Don'targuewithyourparentsbecausetheyarethe

personswholoveyoumost.Whynotcommunicatewiththeminaproperway?I'msureyoucangetonwell

withthemifyouarepatientandpolite.

Ihopeyouthinkmysuggestionsareworthtaking.

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

話題十八：電視TV

TheTVprogrammescoverdifferentsports,suchas...

Youmightfindthisweek'sprogrammeabitboring.

anumberofinterviewswithsomefamousfootballplayers

becoveredlive

Asyouarewatchingtheshow,writedownyouranswersandsendtextmessagesto...

wintwofreeconcerttickets

Ahorrorfilmdirectedby...

fullofhorrorandmystery

enjoysolvingmysteries

takeacloselookat...

話題十九：電影明星和名人

mournthelossofagreatbeauty

putmostofhereffortintoballettraining

theperfectgirltoplaytheleadroleintheplay

Itwasabigsuccess.

makeherfinalappearance...

Shetookherlastwalk.

passawaypeacefully

話題二十：未來生活

Howdoyoulike...?

ManypeoplebelievethatwewillliveontheplanetMarsbytheyear...

buildabetterworldonMars

tooslowtocarrylargenumbersofpeopletoMars

travelathalfthespeedofthelight

Therewillbevariousdesignsforsettlerstochoosefrom.

comparedwith...

Manypeoplebelievethatrobotswilldomostofourworkandthatwewillhavemoretimeforourhobbies.

TherewillprobablybenoschoolsonMars.

ThejourneytoMarsmaybeveryuncomfortable.

Ineedtocomplaintotherobotshop.

Iamwritingacomplaintletter...

stayinbedforanextrahoureveryday

causealotofproblems

movearoundthehouseandknockthingsover

書面表達(dá)答題指導(dǎo)

【知識(shí)梳理】

I.普遍扣分情況：

1.審題不清，遺漏信息點(diǎn)。

2.生搬硬套，時(shí)態(tài)亂用。

3.語法錯(cuò)誤較多，使用中文式表達(dá)。

4.不做檢查和修改潤色。

5.忽視書寫，卷面不整潔。

II.專家建議解題技巧：

1.看清提示，確定時(shí)態(tài)。

2.注意謂語動(dòng)詞的確定。

3.開頭、結(jié)尾句要能緊扣文章中心，注意組織句子結(jié)構(gòu)。

4.在草稿上列出要點(diǎn)及主要句式，連成句子。語句要簡短、通順。

5.修改潤色，注意上下銜接。

6.檢查字?jǐn)?shù)、要點(diǎn)，修改好后整潔譽(yù)寫到答卷紙上。

III.中考書面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

評(píng)分細(xì)則

先根據(jù)文章整體內(nèi)容和語言表達(dá)確定檔次，然后在該檔次內(nèi)評(píng)出分?jǐn)?shù)。

第五檔(15—13分)

完全符合題目要求，表達(dá)清楚，信息完整，語言通順，語意連貫，字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)標(biāo)，基本或完全沒有語言錯(cuò)誤。

第四檔(12—10分)

符合題目要求，表達(dá)基本清楚，信息較完整，語言基本通順，語意基本連貫。有少量語言錯(cuò)誤，但不影響整體

理解。

第三檔(9—7分)

基本符合題目要求，表達(dá)不夠清楚，信息不夠完整，語言欠通順，有部分語言錯(cuò)誤，影響整體理解。

第二檔(6—4分)

部分內(nèi)容符合題目要求，內(nèi)容不完整，表達(dá)不清楚，信息不完整，有較多語言錯(cuò)誤，所寫內(nèi)容難以理解。

第一檔(3—0分)

與題目有關(guān)的內(nèi)容不多，不能表達(dá)自己的思想。只是簡單拼湊提示詞語。

IV.英語書面表達(dá)常用短語、連接詞：

I、用于描述過程，讓你的文章更富有條理性：

1)First,...Second,...Third,...Finally,...

2)First,...Next,...Then,...Finally,...

3)First,...Then,...Then,...Finally,...

4)First,...Lateron,...Afterthat,...Last,...

2、用以下句型，是你的文章層次分明：

1)First,...Besides,...Inaddition,...Also,...Finally,...

2)Myfirstreasonis,...Mysecondreasonis...Then,...Again,...Finally,...

3)Firstofall,...Also,...Finally,...

4)Onereasonis...Anotherreason...Afinallyreasonis...

5)Oneimportant...Anotherimportant...Themostimportant...

6)Somethinkthat...Ontheotherhand,(另一方面來說)…Butothersthink...

7)It'struethat....,However,...

8)Itisimportant(necessary)todo(or:That)

9)Weshouldpayspecialattentionto.,(or:Specialattentionshouldbepaidto)

10)Wehavemademucheffort,thereisstillmoreweneedtomake(eg.Wehavelearntalot,thereismuchmorewe

needtolearn...)

3、結(jié)尾常用詞：

Asaresult/Inmyopinion...Ithink....Inaword(總之；簡而言之)…Fromtheabove(mentioned)綜上所述

Ihope....If...

4、表示上下關(guān)系的常用短語與連詞：

1)Asaresult

2)becauseof(this)

3)therefore因此，所以

4)asIhavesaid如我所說

5)sothat

6)However然而，可是，不過

7)inorderthat;inorderto(do......)

8)ontheotherhand另一方面來說

9)aboveall最總要的是;尤其是

10)anyway/anyhow無論如何，總之

11)inotherwords換句話說

12)luckily

13)indeed真正地

14)moreover止匕夕卜，而且

15)generally通常，普遍地

16)infact事實(shí)上

17)inshort簡言之；總之

18)what'smore另夕卜;再說

范文歸類：

1.關(guān)于環(huán)境保護(hù)問題(熱點(diǎn))環(huán)境保護(hù)問題是中考熱門話題，出現(xiàn)頻率高，必須掌握。

典型句子

I.Ifsourdutytosavewater./It*sourdutytoloveandprotectourenvironment?

2.Asweknow,waterisveryimportanttoman./wecan'tlivewithoutwater.

3.Theamountofwaterwhichissuitabletodrinkislessandless.

4.Itisveryimportanttotakecareofourenvironment./

5.Butsomepeopledon'tcareaboutit./Theywastealotofwaterintheirdailylife.

6.Manyriversandlakesareseriouslypolluted./Somethingmustbedonetostopthepollution.

7.Weshouldplantmoreandmoretreesinordertolivebetterandmorehealthilyinthefuture.

8.Treesareveryhelpfulandimportantforus./Weshouldplantmoreflowersandtreeso

9.Weshouldnotthrowlitterontotheground./

10.Weshouldnotspitinapublicplace/cutdownthetrees.

11.Wemustpickupsomerubbishandthrowitintoadustbin

12.Ifeveryonemakescontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.

13.Onlyinthiswaycanwelivehappily.

14.Evenworse,theypourdirtywaterintorivers.

15.Ifwedon'tsavewater,thelastdropofwaterwillbeatear-dropofus.(如果我們不節(jié)約用水，那么最后一滴水

也許會(huì)是我們?nèi)祟惖难蹨I。)

2.新生事物評(píng)價(jià)(熱點(diǎn))

這類文章的特點(diǎn)是寫作難度大，因此需要學(xué)生掌握方法，和基本句式，以做到考試時(shí)心中不亂。

典型例句：

1.Computerisbecomingmoreandmoreimportant.

2.Weshouldmakegooduseofit.

3.Ofcourse,studentsshouldstudy,butweshouldkeepaproperbalancebetweenworkandrest.

4.Wecandolotsofthingswithit.

5.Itmakesourlifeeasier.

6.Nowmobilephonesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularamongthemiddleschoolstudents.

3.健康問題（熱點(diǎn)）健康問題是中考?？嫉脑掝}，出題形式多樣，有必要下苦功掌握。

典型例句：

1.Itisveryimportanttokeephealthy./Howcanwekeephealthy?

2.Weshouldeatthefoodhealthily./Weshoulddomoreexercise.

3.1believethatkeepinghealthyisthemostimportantthingintheworld.

4.Thereisanoldsaying:"Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.”

5.Eitherstudyorworkisbasedonstrongbody.身體是革命的本錢

6.Weshouldachieveabalancebetweenstudyandexercisestokeepushealthy.

7.Exerciseonehouraday,keepillnessaway.

8.Doingsportseverydayhelpsushealthyandenergetic.

9.Healthisveryimportanttousteenagers.

10.Ofcourse,studentshavetostudy,butweshouldkeepaproperbalancebetweenworkandrest.

11.Healthisfarmoreimportantthanmoney.

12.Goodhealthcanhelpusenjoyourlifewhilepoorhealthleadstonothing.

13.Stayinguplateatnightisbadforourhealth.

4.語言學(xué)習(xí)（熱點(diǎn)）這是中考中的老話題，近幾年?？迹问蕉鄻?。

典型例句

1.MyfavoritesubjectisEnglish.

2.MorethanthreequartersoftheinformationontheInternetisinEnglish.

3.Itisusedbytravelersandbusinesspeopleallovertheworld.

4.ChinahasjoinedtheWTOandtheWorldExpowillbeheldinChina.Englishbecomesmoreandmoreuseful.

5.SoEnglishisveryimportantandIlikeEnglishverymuch.

6.WehavealotoffunintheEnglishclass.

7.OurEnglishteacheroftenmakesushappyintheEnglishclass.

8.IhopeIcangoabroadoneday,andthenIcanspeaktoforeignersinEnglish.

9.IlikeEnglishandtrymybesttolearnit.

VIIK書面表達(dá)可用的重點(diǎn)句型：

1.It,sadjforsbtodo做…對(duì)某人來說…

2.so...that...such...that...如此…以至于...too...todo太...而不能…

3.not...until...直至U…才...例：Ididn'tgotobeduntilmymothercameback.

4.Thereasonwhy+句子isthat+句子...的原因是…

Thereasonwhyhegotangrywasthatshetoldhimalie.（他生氣的原因是她對(duì)他說了謊。）

5.Thatiswhy+句子那是…的原因

6.Thatisbecause+句子那是因?yàn)椤?/p>

7.Itissaidthat+句子據(jù)說…Itisreportedthat+句子據(jù)報(bào)道…

8.Thereisnodoubtthat+句子毫無疑問…

9.Itgoeswithoutsayingthat+句子不言而喻，毫無疑問

10.Thereisnoneedtodo沒必要做...

11.Thereisnopointindoing做某事毫無意義

12.asisknowntoall,+句子眾所周知asweallknow,+句子據(jù)我們所知

itisgenerally/publiclyknown/consideredthat...,眾所周知

【課堂檢測】

“自我保護(hù)”是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要求，以“HowtoKeepMyselfSafe”為題，寫一篇

短文。

YOUROPINIONSAREWANTED!

Hi!I'mLisaSmith,theeditor（編輯）ofTeensmagazine.

Ourmagazinehassetupacolumn（專欄）aboutteenagers'self-protection.Weknowyouhavesomethingto

say.

注意：L對(duì)所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2.詢80左右，文章的開頭己經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3.短文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

HowtoKeepMyselfSafe

Asateenager,Ithinkitisimportantformetokeepmyselfsafefromdanger.

【答案】

Onepossibleversion:

HowtoKeepMyselfSafe

Asateenager,Ithinkitisimportantformetokeepmyselfsafefromdanger.

Inmydailylife,Ialwayskeepinmindthatsafetycomesfirst.Forexample,whenIcrosstheroad,Iwill

becarefulenough.Ifthetrafficlightisred,Iwillstopandwaituntilitturnsgreen.Inmysparetime,Ilearn

aboutsomesafetytipstoguardagainstanypossibledanger.

IfIamindanger,suchasafire,firstofall,Iwillcalmdownassoonaspossible.Then,Iwillaskforhelp.I

thinkcalling119atonceisoneofthemosthelpfulwaystosavemyself.

Inaword,withpositiveattitudesandsufficientpreparations,Iwillbeabletoprotectmyself.

假如你是LiHua,上周接受了一次問卷調(diào)查。請(qǐng)根據(jù)問卷內(nèi)容，用英文寫一份題為Good

RidingE-bikes的倡議書，向你校英語報(bào)刊投稿。

ASurvey

1.WhatareagainstthetrafficruleswhileridingA....runtheredlights...

e-bikes?B....rideonthedriveway（快車道）…

A....

2.Whatactionshasthegovernmenttaken?

B....

3.Asastudent,whatshouldyoudo?

要求：

1.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

2.語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

3.詞數(shù)80左右，開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：非機(jī)動(dòng)車道non-motorwayn.

GoodMannersWhileRidingE-bikes

Dearclassmates,

Inordertokeepourselvessafe,wearesupposedtofollowtrafficruleswhileridinge-bikes.

Inaword,itishightimethatweshouldstartfromourselvesandreducetheriskoftrafficaccidents.

Yours

LiHua

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GoodMannersWhileRidingE-bikes

Dearclassmates,

Inordertokeepourselvessafe,wearesurposedtofollowtrafficruleswhileridinre-bikes?

Inourtown,therearemanye-bikes.Sometimes,peoplewhoridethemrunredlights.What'smore,they

oftenrideonthedriveway.It'sdangerous.

Nowthegovernmenthasmadelawstopreventthesebehaviors.Ifpeopledon'tfollowtrafficrules,theywill

bepunished,suchasbeingfined.Moreover;thegovernmenthasorganizedmanyactivitiestohelppeoplelearn

moreaboutroadsafety.

Asastudent,It