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bars/piecesofcandytakingacandybagContinuationwritingWhatisthestoryabout?“Please,Chad,”Zoebegged.“Fine.”Therewouldbemychanceforfunandcandy,Ithought.Later,ZoewalkedtothefirsthousewhileIhungback.“Idon’twantanyonetoknowthatI’mtakingyoutrick-or-treating,”I’dsaidtoher.I’dtoldmyfriendsthatIcouldn’thangoutwiththemtonight,butdidn’ttellthemwhy,beingafraidofbeinglaughedat.Whatisthestoryabout?ChadunwillinglytookhissisterZoe’strick-or-treating,afraidofbeingdiscoveredandlaughedat.Washediscovered?Wouldhefeeldifferent?Washelaughedat?

“Trickortreat!”shesaidatthenextdoor.Thedooropened.Awomansteppedout.“Youaresocute,butareyoualone?”Sheasked,lookingaroundworriedly.“No.”Zoepointedatmyhidingplace.Ohno,Ithought.She’sgoingtoannouncemetotheworld.“Canhehaveacandybar,too,please?”Zoeaskedinstead.Thewomanlaughed.“Catch!”Acandybarsailedtowardme.“Thanks,”Icalled.IthankedZoe,too.“That’swhatangelsdo,”Shesaid.Andshealwaysaskedforcandyformeateveryhouse.afraidofbeingdiscoveredandlaughedatPara1:

“Trickortreat!”shesaidatthenextdoor.Thedooropened.Awomansteppedout.“Youaresocute,butareyoualone?”Sheasked,lookingaroundworriedly.“No.”Zoepointedatmyhidingplace.Ohno,Ithought.She’sgoingtoannouncemetotheworld.“Canhehaveacandybar,too,please?”Zoeaskedinstead.Thewomanlaughed.“Catch!”Acandybarsailedtowardme.“Thanks,”Icalled.IthankedZoe,too.“That’swhatangelsdo,”Shesaid.Andshealwaysaskedforcandyformeateveryhouse.Howwouldhefeelnow?thankedalwaysformeeveryPara1:

“Trickortreat!”shesaidatthenextdoor.Thedooropened.Awomansteppedout.“Youaresocute,butareyoualone?”Sheasked,lookingaroundworriedly.“No.”Zoepointedatmyhidingplace.Ohno,Ithought.She’sgoingtoannouncemetotheworld.“Canhehaveacandybar,too,please?”Zoeaskedinstead.Thewomanlaughed.“Catch!”Acandybarsailedtowardme.“Thanks,”Icalled.IthankedZoe,too.“That’swhatangelsdo,”Shesaid.Andshealwaysaskedforcandyfor

meateveryhouse.afraidofbeingdiscoveredandlaughedatatmyhidingplaceOhno,Ithought.She’sgoingtoannouncemetotheworld.touchedWhatcausedthechange?“Canhehaveacandybar,too,please?”ZoeaskedinsteadnaturaldialoguesverbsmentalactivityphysicalexpressionactsreactionsfeelingstheplotParagraph2:Onourwaytothecar,weranintomyfriendJeffonthesidewalk.feelings?theplot?Dothefeelingschangenaturally?Doestheplotgologically?characters?(verbs)Agoodstoryshouldbelogicalandvivid.Homework:Trytofurtherimprove