讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)-Joey讓帽+講義 高三英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)原文中文Joeywassoexcitedhecouldhardlywaittogettothestore.HewalkedsofastthathissisterBethhadtorun.“Doyouhavetohurrylikethat?”shepuffed.OnhiswayfromschoolhehadseenthatbaseballcapinRogersstorewindow.Onlyadollarandthiswasthelastcap!Joeyhadlookedatthecapalongtime.Hewanteditmorethananything.Everyboyatschoolhadone.喬伊非常興奮，簡(jiǎn)直等不及要去商店了。他走得如此之快，以至于他的妹妹貝絲不得不跑起來(lái)。"你真的需要這么快嗎？"她氣喘吁吁地說(shuō)。放學(xué)回家的路上，他在羅杰斯商店的櫥窗里看到了那頂棒球帽。只要一美元，而且這是最后一頂了！喬伊看著那頂帽子看了很久。他比任何事都想要這頂帽子。學(xué)校里的每個(gè)男孩都有一頂。Joeythoughtofhispiggybank,intowhichheputeverycoinforrunningerrandsforhisfamilyandneighbors.喬伊想到了他的存錢(qián)罐，他把為家人和鄰居跑腿所賺的每一枚硬幣都放進(jìn)去。Joeyracedhome,notstoppingforanything.Heheldthefatironpig,openeditcarefullyandpouredoutthecoins.Ten...twenty...thirty...ninetycents.Ifonlyhehadonemoredime!喬伊一路飛奔回家，什么也沒(méi)顧上。他拿起那個(gè)胖胖的鐵豬，小心翼翼地打開(kāi)它，倒出了硬幣。十分...二十分...三十分...九十分。要是他再有一枚十分硬幣就好了！Lostinthought,

Joeystaredoutthewindow.(第一次沉思+凝視)“What’swrong,Joey?”askedMother.Joeytoldaboutthemoneyandthecap.“Ifyougivemewhatyouhave,I'lladdadime,”Mothersaid,handinghimadollarbill.“I’llhavesomeerrandsforyoutomorrow.”喬伊陷入沉思，凝視著窗外。"喬伊，怎么了？"媽媽問(wèn)。喬伊把錢(qián)和帽子的事告訴了媽媽。“如果你把你的錢(qián)給我，我再加上一枚十分硬幣，”媽媽說(shuō)著，遞給他一張一美元的鈔票?！懊魈煳視?huì)讓你做一些事。”Joeyjumpedup.“Ohthanks,Mom.That’sgreat!”AndawaywentJoeyandBethtothestorewiththedollarbillinJoey’spocket.喬伊跳了起來(lái)?！芭叮x謝，媽媽。太好了！”喬伊和貝絲帶著喬伊口袋里的一美元鈔票去了商店。Theyturnedthelastcorner.Aheadwasagroupofboysandgirls,talkingheatedlyandlookingdownatthesidewalk.他們拐過(guò)最后一個(gè)拐角。前面是一群男孩女孩們一邊激烈交談一邊低頭搜尋著人行道。OneofthechildrenwasRonny,anewboywhohadbeeninthistownonlyashorttime.Ronny’sfatherhadbeensick,sotherewasn’tmuchmoneyforextras--likeabaseballcap.其中一個(gè)孩子是羅尼，一個(gè)剛來(lái)這個(gè)小鎮(zhèn)不久的新男孩。羅尼的父親一直生病，所以沒(méi)有多余的錢(qián)來(lái)買(mǎi)額外的東西——比如棒球帽?！癢hat’sthematter?"Bethasked,anxiously."怎么了？"貝絲焦急地問(wèn)?！癐t’sRonny,"answeredSusan.“He’sbeenworkingandfinallysavedupawholedollar,andnowit'slost!”"是羅尼，"蘇珊回答說(shuō)。"他一直在工作，終于攢夠了一整美元，可現(xiàn)在丟了！"JoeywentovertoRonny.喬伊走到羅尼跟前?！癢e'llallhelplook.We'llfindit!”"我們都會(huì)幫忙找的。一定會(huì)找到的！""RonnywasgoingtogetthatlastcapinRogers'window,"putinBilly."羅尼本來(lái)打算買(mǎi)羅杰斯櫥窗里那最后一頂帽子的，"比利插嘴說(shuō)。"Iwanteditalot.Iwanttojointhem."Ronnysaidslowly."我真的很想要。我想加入他們。"羅尼緩緩地說(shuō)。續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段：Joey

staredattheground,thinkinghard.(第二次沉思+凝視)喬伊盯著地面，苦苦思索。續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段：Forcingasmile,JoeyshowedBeththeemptypocket.喬伊強(qiáng)顏歡笑，向貝絲展示了空空的口袋。文本分析文本大意：?jiǎn)桃量瓷狭藱淮袄镆豁敇?biāo)價(jià)一美元的帽子，因?yàn)榘嗬锼泻⒆佣加幸豁斊恋陌羟蛎?。店里僅剩最后一個(gè)。他的存錢(qián)罐只有90美分，向媽媽借了10美分，湊夠1美元。路上遇到了可憐的男孩羅尼，他丟了自己辛苦攢的1美元，正在傷心地哭泣?？吹酱饲榇饲?，喬伊陷入了深深的思索。五要素分析：Who:Ronny,Joey,mymom,Susan,mysister---BethWhen:onedayWhere:onthestreettothestoreWhat:Joeyintendedtobuythebaseballcapwithhis1dollar.Why:JoeymetRonnywholosthis1dollarforthebaseballcap.How:JoeywaslostinthoughtandtriedtofigureoutawaytohelpRonny.續(xù)寫(xiě)情節(jié)：Para1:喬伊在內(nèi)心開(kāi)始糾結(jié)---衡量自己的欲望和羅尼的需要---他明白棒球帽對(duì)兩人的意義---也看到了羅尼的失望----他做了一個(gè)決定---偷偷將1美元丟在路上----假裝發(fā)現(xiàn)了這1美元---羅尼開(kāi)心地?fù)炱鹑ベI(mǎi)最后一頂帽子---妹妹貝絲建議我們?nèi)e的商店買(mǎi)棒球帽P(pán)ara2:他向妹妹解釋把錢(qián)給了羅尼---妹妹一臉驚訝---但他明白哥哥的心理---雖然存錢(qián)罐空了，哥哥的心非常充實(shí)---幫助朋友比擁有一頂棒球帽更有意義試水作文：Joeystaredattheground,thinkinghard.

Abattlewagedwithinhim,weighinghisowndesireforthecapagainstthe

needsofRonny.

Heknewhowmuchthebaseballcapmeanttoboth

ofthem,butseeingthedisappointmentonRonny'sface

tuggedat

hisheart.

It'snotjustaboutthecap,it'saboutbeingpart

ofsomethingbigger.

HelookedatRonny,andmadeadecision.

Withoutanyonenoticing,Joeydroppedthedollarbillonthegreenbelt."Hey,look!"heexclaimed."Isthisthedollaryoulost,Ronny?"Ronny'seyeslitupashepickeditup.

EveryoneburstintocheersandwenttobuyRonnythelastcap.

"Brother,let'sgotofindthecapthatyouwantedinotherstores,Ibelievewecanfindone."said

Beth.Forcingasmile,JoeyshowedBeththeemptypocket.

HequietlyexplainedthathehadgivenhisdollartoRonny.Bethlookedathim,hereyeswidewithsurprise,thenadmiration.

SheunderstoodthesacrificeJoeyhadmade.TheywatchedasRonnywalked

outof

Rogers'storewith

hisdreamcap

onthehead,hisfacelightingupwithjoy.

HelpinganewfrienddidmakeJoeyfeelgoodinside.Although

hispiggybankwasempty,hisheartwasfull.Thereweremoreimportantthingsinlifethanmoneyorevenbaseballcaps.Joeyhaddiscoveredthat.附：官方參考范文Joeystaredattheground,thinkinghard.ThatcapwouldmakeRonnyfeelhereally

belongedtothefellowgroup.Buthehimselfhadlongedforitsomuch.Hebithislowerlips,with

hishandtightlyclutchingthedollar.Ronny’swordsconstantlyflashedthroughhismind.Ithithim

thatheshoulddosomethingniceforRonny.Hebentdownandgaveashout“Look!Lookhere!”

Theyallcrowdedaround.Therealmosthiddenintheleaveswastheunmistakablegreenofa

dollarbill!Overwhelminglyexcitedanddelighted,Ronnypickedupthebill.“Comeon!”

someoneshouted.andtheythenmadeadashforthestore.“Whynotcometogetherandget

somethingelsewithyourdollar?”BethaskedJoey.Forcingasmile,JoeyshowedBeththeemptypocket.Eyeswideopen,Bethutteredin

surprise,“Joey,youdidn’treallyfindRonny’sdollar.Itwasyours.”Joeynoddedabroadsmile

flickeringacrosshisface.Heexplainedinacalmtonethatthebaseballcapmatteredalotmoreto

Ronny.Withthecap,hethought,Ronnywouldfeeliteasiertofitinwithothers.