2023學年完整公開課版讀后續(xù)寫2

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫之一——動作描寫ActionsinContinuationWritingSelfstudyFindoutthesentencesusingvividdescriptionsofactions1.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal.2.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase3.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoslowdown.4.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,he’dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf’steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.5.Abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike..Task1AppreciatethedescriptionsofactionsTip1Selectspecificverbstomakeactionsvivid.1.Shepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream.(2016)2.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.

3.Thecolorofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetreesandthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.(2018)4.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwovenblanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.(2018)DescriptionsofBodyMovementsBuildupyourvocabulary

與眼睛有關的動作描寫1.看見

catchsightof

2.抬頭看

lookup3.眨眼睛

blink/wink/twinkleone’seyes4.怒視

glareat

5.環(huán)視

look/glancearound;castalookaround6.注視著/盯著看

stareat/gazeat/fixone’seyeson7.各種哭cry/sob/weep/burstintotears/burstoutcrying/fight/holdbacktears抑制住淚水

與手部有關的動作描寫1.抓住catch

2.松開loosen3.輕拍

tap/pat4.擦wipe/mop/rub5.拍手clapone’shands6.牽手takesb.bythehand

7.緊緊握住某人的手

grasp/hold/seize/catchone’shandtightly

8.擁抱某人

givesb.ahug/hug/embrace/holdsbinone’sarms

與腿部有關的動作描寫1.滑倒slip

2.追趕

runafter

3.跳起來jumptoone’sfeet

4.沖向

rush/dash/race/stormoutof5.掙扎著站起來struggletoone’sfeet

6.從......上跳下來jumpoff/jumpdownfrom7.后退

makeastepback/stepback8.漫游，徘徊wanderabout/around

與嘴（說）有關的動作描寫嘟囔：

whisper/mumble/grunt/murmur結結巴巴地說：stutter/stumble/stammer宣布：announce/declare

保證：promise/assure建議：propose/suggest；

問與答：ask/answer/reply喊叫：cryout/shout/scream/yell/howl/exclaim其他的說：add/continue/retort/explain/state/protest/agree/comfort/blurtout/insist/apologize

Anoldmanwasknockeddownbyacarwhichfledaway.

Theoldmangotinjuredontheleftlegand_________painfully,whilesomepassers-bystoodasideand____________toeachother.

“Getoutoftheway,please”,

oneyoungpioneer_______and___________theoldman.

Hecalledtheambulanceandlifteduptheoldmanwho_________

asifsayingthankstotheboyandlaterwassenttohospital.howledwhisperedblurtedoutcomfortedmurmured…Janewalkedaway…

Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.2016年10月高考讀后續(xù)寫Tip2Describethe

process

and

details.

...Janejustwalkedonforalongtime.Aftershehadclimbed

toahighplace...She

turnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Shesawnothingbutforest...

1.動作鏈的表達可用狀語從句，如when，while，as，before，after,themoment引導的時間狀語從句來體現(xiàn)。

eg.Astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.(2017)2.動作鏈的表達可用并列謂語動詞來體現(xiàn)，即AandB或者A，BandC。MydadandI______ournewcowboyhats,______ourhorses,and_______slowlytowardsthemountains.(2018)putongotonheaded3.動作鏈的表達可用非謂語來體現(xiàn)。⑴A-ing，B或者A，B-ingeg.

ToMac'srelief,itfellback,_______________⑵AandB,C-ing或者A，B-ingandC-ing或者A-ing，B，C-ing①Thefarmer

pickedupthedogandkneltdown,saying,“It'syoursnow.”②Thestudentscamein,_________________.③________________________,mysisterandIcriedbitterly,______________________talkingandlaughingUponhearingthebadnewsnotbelievingitwastrue.shakingitshead.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,mybrotherandIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Tip3

Add

adv.

tomaketheactionimpressive.casuallyunwillingly

2017年11月高考讀后續(xù)寫aimlesslybravely1.可以添加介詞短語或者副詞來修飾動詞。①with+情感名詞的搭配：withdelight/excitement/pleasure/happiness/joy/satisfaction/pride_________________________她的眼睛中閃爍著興奮的光芒。②with+身體部位：withitshungryredeyes/itssharpteeth/hershakyhand/herpalelipsTheferociouswolfstaredatMacwithitshungryredeyes.ShekissedOliverwithherpalelips.Hereyesshonewithexcitement③in+名詞insilence/anger/shock/secret/fearinalow/sweet/loud/weak/chockedvoice用..的嗓音

eg.shelookedaroundinshock,unwillingtobelievewhatshehadseen.④副詞suddenly/immediately/instantly/rapidly/firmly/slowly/angrily/happily/excitedly/

eg.Hecarefullyjumpedoverthebrokenglasses.高分表達：Carefully,hejumpedoverthebrokenglasses.Summary:skills

todescribeactions1.Selectspecificverbs,usingbodyparts2.Describetheprocess

anddetails3.Addadv./介詞短語/非謂語…Task2Applythelanguageand

writingskillsintopractice

情節(jié)動作描寫例句被狼追趕Macheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasn’tadogatall..與狼相擊Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf...

奮力逃生Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcars.寫身體部位(耳、眼)加修飾語(adv)寫動作過程寫身體部位(手、腳、嘴)2017年6月高考讀后續(xù)寫

主題：騎行遇狼，奮力逃生

？？？Polishtheunderlinedsentences路人相助，化險為夷Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.(1)Macgotintothecar.(2)Paulstartedthecar.(3)Macsawthewolfwasjustbythedoor.(4)Thewolfranaway.(5)Macsighed.Reminder:1.Describetheprocessanddetails2.Writebodyparts3.Addadj./adv./非謂語/...

SHOWTIMEHomeworkFinishthesecondpartofthecontinuationwriting.Paragraph2:Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.ThankYou!

與頭有關的動作描寫1.抬頭

raiseone’shead2.點頭

nodone’shead3.搖頭

shakeone’shead4.低頭

hang/drop/lower/bowone’shead5.撓頭

scratchone’shead6.埋頭

buryone’shead續(xù)寫：路人相助，化險為夷Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim

.gotintothecarMacwolfPaulhelpedrangetoffthebicycle→runtowardsthecar→getonthecar→closethedoor→sit→→see..openthedoor→startthecar...catch→shout→runaway...

Describetheprocessanddetails

Usebodyparts寫身體部位

手腳腿的動作：1.Hejumpedoffthebicycle.2.Hedashedtowardsthecarwithfullspeed

.3.Withhisheartbeating

rapidlyandlegspumpingfuriously,heracedtowardsthecar.4.Paulopenedthedoorandstretchedouthishand.5.Macgrabbedhishand

withouthesitation,

leavinghisbicyclelyingontheroad.

Selectspecificverbs

精選動詞加修飾語(adv/介詞短語/非謂語)

getoffthebicycle→runtowardsthecar加修飾語加非謂語

加修飾語加修飾語加修飾語

腰身的動作：1.TheinstantMacsankintothebackseatand

shut

thedoor,Paulstartedthecar

inaflash.2.Watchingthewolfwasswallowedbytheroad,Maccollapsedintothebackseat,

stumpedforwords(張口結舌)and

paralysedwithfear(渾身癱軟).

Selectspecificverbs

精選動詞getonthecar→closethedoor→sit加修飾語(adj/介詞短語/非謂語)

adj加修飾語adj非謂語

耳(聽)狼叫

Thewolfwalkedaroundthecarandfuriouslyhowling(咆哮)atthem,but

invain.

眼(看)狼追到車門Hecaughtaglance/glimpseof(瞥見)thefierceeyesandhungrylookofthewolfbythedoor.

hear→see..加介詞短語/非謂語

介詞短語adv介詞短語shout→runawaySelectspecificverbs

精選動詞Summary

1.