2022-2023學(xué)年七年級英語下學(xué)期期中考點（外研版）：書面表達專練（解析版）

專題11書面表達專練一、話題作文1．（2022·青?！そy(tǒng)考中考真題）當(dāng)今，中國正迅速發(fā)展，在各方面都取得了令人矚目的成就。請你以“ChinainTenYears”為題，暢想并描述十年后的祖國。要求：（1）內(nèi)容積極向上，完整連貫；（2）邏輯清晰，表達準(zhǔn)確，書寫規(guī)范；（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)姓名、校名和地名；（4）詞數(shù)：80—100（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。ChinainTenYearsNowadays,ourcountryisdevelopingfast.Ithasmadegreatachievementsinmanyfields.WhatwillChinabelikeintenyears?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ChinainTenYearsNowadays,ourcountryisdevelopingfast.Ithasmadegreatachievementsinmanyfields.WhatwillChinabelikeintenyears?Iimaginemylifeintenyearswillbewonderful.IwillliveinShanghai.TheneighborhoodwhichIlivedinwillbeverycomfortable.Therewillbemanytreesandflowersaroundmyhouse.Alotofsubwayswillbebuiltinmycity.Itwillbeveryconvenientformetogoout.Asformyjob,Iwillbeadoctor.Iwillhelppeopleinneed.MaybeI’llgotoafamousuniversityforfurtherstudy.Myparentswillbetoooldtotakecareofthemselves.Sotakinggoodcareofthemwillbemyduty.IwillmakemoneytosupportmyparentsbecausetheygavemesomuchwhenIwasyoung.Inaword,mylifeintenyearswillbebetterthanitisnow.Iwilltrymybesttomakeitpossibletohaveabetterlife!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般將來時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出本文主題，暢想中國未來十年是什么樣子；第二步，從生活，工作，交通等方面暢想未來。[亮點詞匯]①alotof許多②asfor至于③takecareof照顧[高分句型]①TheneighborhoodwhichIlivedinwillbeverycomfortable.（which引導(dǎo)定語從句）②Therewillbemanytreesandflowersaroundmyhouse.（therebe句型）二、材料作文2．（2023春·八年級單元測試）請以“Mygoodfriend”為題寫一篇短文，向你的全班同學(xué)介紹一下你的好朋友SunLei。內(nèi)容提示：1.出生年月，來自地區(qū)；2.學(xué)習(xí)；3.外貌特征；4.興趣愛好等。參考詞匯：January6th,2006,Shenyang,begantostudyEnglishat5,shorthair,glasses,music,dance,sports,makefriends要求：1.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整。2.詞數(shù)80詞左右。（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）

MygoodfriendHello,everyone!_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MygoodfriendHello,everyone!Ihaveagoodfriend.HisnameisSunLei.HewasbornonJanuary6th,2006.

HecamefromShenyang.HebegantostudyEnglishattheageoffive.HestudiesEnglishverywell.Hehasshortblackhairandheoftenwearsapairofglasses.Helikesmusicverymuchwheneverhehastime.Helikeslisteningtomusic.Sometimes,healsolikesdancing.Helikessportstoo.Weoftenplaytogether.Heisveryfriendlytoeveryone,soIliketomakefriendswithhim.Ihopewewillbefriendsforever.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第三人稱為主。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹好朋友SunLei出生年月和地點；第二步，具體闡述他的學(xué)習(xí)以及外貌特征；第三步，最后表達他的興趣愛好。[亮點詞匯]①bebornon出生于②attheageof在……歲時③befriendlyto對……友好[高分句型]Hehasshortblackhairandheoftenwearsapairofglasses.（and連接兩個并列句）3．（2022春·內(nèi)蒙古包頭·七年級統(tǒng)考期中）沒有規(guī)矩，不成方圓。在我們的生活中，到處都有規(guī)則。同樣，家也會有家規(guī)。請談?wù)勀慵依镉心男┘乙?guī)，你認為它們合理嗎？你怎么看待它們？要點：1.Whatareyourfamilyrules?2.Whatdoyouthinkofthem?3.60詞左右。參考詞匯：washthedishes，makethebed，playwithfriends，watchTV，playcomputergames.FamilyRules________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：FamilyRulesTherearetoomanyrulesinmyfamily.EverydayIhavetogetupat6:00inthemorning.ThenIeatbreakfastquicklyandImustwashthedishes.IruntoschoolbecauseIcan’tbelate.Ican’tplaycomputergamesorwatchTVonschooldays.Afterdinner,Ican’trelaxbecauseImustreadbooks.AndIhavetobeinbedby10:00p.m.Also,Ihavetodosomehousework.Ifeelterrible.Therulesaretoostrict.WhatcanIdo?【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：考生需根據(jù)要點提示中的關(guān)鍵信息，談?wù)勛约杭依镉心男┘乙?guī)，是否覺得合理。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點題，說明有很多家規(guī)；第二步，介紹具體的家規(guī)；第三步，表達自己對這些家規(guī)的看法。[亮點詞匯]①haveto不得不②washthedishes洗碗③playcomputergames玩電腦游戲[高分句型]①ThenIeatbreakfastquicklyandImustwashthedishes.（and連接并列句）②IruntoschoolbecauseIcan’tbelate.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句）4．（2022春·廣西南寧·七年級統(tǒng)考期中）平時生活中，我們總是得到媽媽無微不至的關(guān)愛。母親節(jié)快到了，請你以“MyplanforMother’sDay”為題寫一篇英語小短文，談?wù)勅绾谓o媽媽度過一個有意義的母親節(jié)。寫作要點：1.買禮物，制作卡片2.幫忙做家務(wù)，做晚餐3.看電影，散步4.……5.你的期待寫作要求：1.內(nèi)容必須包括所給要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，增加細節(jié)；2.語篇完整，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不得透露個人信息，否則不予評分；4.詞數(shù)70左右。（開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總數(shù)）MyplanforMother’sDayI’mhappytheMother’sDayiscoming.Ihavesomeplansforit.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：MyplanforMother’sDayI’mhappytheMother’sDayiscoming.Ihavesomeplansforit.Firstofall,Iwilltalkwithher,becauseIneedtoknowwhatherfavoritethingsare.ThenIamgoingtobuyhergifts.Afterthat,I’llmakeacardandwritesomewordsonit.Mymotherwasreallytired,soI’llhelpherwiththehousework.IntheeveningI’llcookdinnerformymom.Afterdinner,wewillgotothecinema.ThenIwilltakeawalkwithmymom.Ofcourse,Ialsowanttohaveapartyforher.Ireallyhopeshewillbehappyonthatday!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般將來時”；③提示：寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點；注意適當(dāng)發(fā)揮、補充細節(jié)，使文章的內(nèi)容更加豐富。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點題，即針對母親節(jié)有一些計劃；第二步，具體介紹自己的計劃；第三步，總結(jié)全文，表達自己的希望。[亮點詞匯]①talkwithsb.與某人交談②helpwithhousework幫忙做家務(wù)③gotothecinema去看電影④takeawalk散步[高分句型]①Firstofall,Iwilltalkwithher,becauseIneedtoknowwhatherfavoritethingsare.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）②Ireallyhopeshewillbehappyonthatday!（省略that的賓語從句）5．（2022春·四川廣安·七年級統(tǒng)考期中）隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展，“網(wǎng)購”已經(jīng)非常流行。越來越多的學(xué)生也加入到網(wǎng)購的群體中，根據(jù)你對網(wǎng)購的看法寫一篇英語短文。要求：1.適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容或說明理由。2.字跡工整，書寫規(guī)范。70詞左右。Advantages足不出戶不受時間限制，節(jié)約時間Disadvantages在網(wǎng)上看不到實物網(wǎng)上支付不安全_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Onlineshoppingisanewwayofshopping.It’sverypopularwiththeyoungpeople.Onlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages.First,youcanbuysomethingsathome.Itcansavelotsoftime.Second,youcancomparethepricesofthesameproductandsavemoney.Butonlineshoppinghassomedisadvantages,too.Youcanonlyseepictures,butcan’tseetherealproducts.AndpayingovertheInternetisn’talwayssafe.Iloveonlineshopping,butIalsogotothesupermarkettobuysomethinginmyfreetime.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點表格中已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏表格中的信息，可適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，但要突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，直入主題，簡單介紹網(wǎng)購。第二步，具體介紹網(wǎng)購的利弊?？筛鶕?jù)表格中已給信息，從“利”和“弊”兩個方面客觀地介紹網(wǎng)購；第三步，表達對網(wǎng)購的看法。根據(jù)自己的情況，表達自己對網(wǎng)購的看法。[亮點詞匯]①bepopularwith受……歡迎②comparethepricesof…比較……的價格③savemoney省錢④inmyfreetime在我的空閑時間[高分句型]①Youcanonlyseepictures,butcan’tseetherealproducts.（連詞but表轉(zhuǎn)折）②AndpayingovertheInternetisn’talwayssafe.（動名詞短語作主語）6．（2018·四川瀘州·統(tǒng)考中考真題）暑期將至，我們都應(yīng)該制定合理的假期計劃。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示，以“MySummerVacationPlan”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。要點提示：1.放松自己：聽音樂，看電影，鍛煉身體等；2.陪伴家人：旅行，散步，與父母交流等；3.做志愿者：看望老人，贈送禮物，為他們唱歌等；4.努力學(xué)習(xí)：閱讀書籍，復(fù)習(xí)知識，為以后學(xué)習(xí)做準(zhǔn)備等；5.個人觀點：……。要求：1.詞數(shù)110詞左右（短文首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2.要點提示均須涉及，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容；3.字跡工整，卷面整潔，文意連貫，語言流暢；4.不用真實姓名、校名、地名。參考詞語：relaxmyself,spendtimewith…,volunteer,review,prepareforMySummerVacationPlanWiththesummervacationcoming,Iwillmakeaplanforit.First,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MySummerVacationPlanWiththesummervacationcoming,Iwillmakeaplanforit.First,I

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題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點及詞語，寫出自己的暑假計劃，從不同的方面描寫，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。2.

寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要與已給出的開頭融合起來，本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般將來時；在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。7．（2018·新疆烏魯木齊·統(tǒng)考中考真題）“建設(shè)美麗新疆，共圓祖國夢想”，所有新疆人正以此為目標(biāo)全力以赴建設(shè)大美新疆。作為生于新疆、長于新疆的中學(xué)生，我們又能為此做些什么呢？請從以下提示中選擇至少2點，寫一篇題為“WhatcanwedotohelpbuildXinjiang?”的英語短文，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。1.出行方式；2.環(huán)境保護；3.節(jié)約意識；4.與人相處。要求：1.80詞左右；2.文章中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.語法正確，語義連貫；字跡工整，書寫規(guī)范。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:WhatcanwedotohelpbuildXinjiangAsisknowntousall,peoplearedoingtheirbesttomakeXinjiangstrongerandmorebeautiful.AsstudentsbornandgrownupinXinjiang,whatcanwedotohelpbuildit?Firstly,wecanavoidthetrafficjamsandreduceairpollutionbyridingbikesorwalkingifwedon’tlivefarfromourschool.Secondly,weshouldn’tspitorlitterhereandthere.Inordertoprotecttheenvironment,wecanalsoplanttreesaroundourcity.Thirdly,wearesupposedtostopwastingresources.Inourdailylife,weshouldsavewater,electricityandpaperandsoon.Forexample,remembertoturnoffthetapandreusewater.Lastbutnotleast,it’simportantandnecessarytogetalongwellwithothers.Whenpeopleareintrouble,wehadbettergivethemahandandtrytohelpthemout.Inshort,ifeveryone,includingusstudents,makescontributions,ourhometownwillbebetterandbetter.Let’stakeactionnowtodowhatwecantohelpbuildXinjiang.【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點，從不同的方面描述如何讓新疆變得更美，包括出行方式、環(huán)境保護、節(jié)約意識以及與人之間的相處等，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。2.

寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要緊扣主題，本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱、第三人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時，提出建議可以多用情態(tài)動詞；在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。三、電子郵件8．（2022春·貴州畢節(jié)·八年級統(tǒng)考期中）假設(shè)你叫李華，你的筆友Tom發(fā)郵件說他打算暑假來你的家鄉(xiāng)畢節(jié)旅游。請你用英語給他回復(fù)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歡迎；2.詢問到達時間；3.你的接待安排(如參觀名勝古跡等)。注意：1.內(nèi)容必須包括所給信息；2.詞數(shù)80左右；3.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，不得出現(xiàn)個人真實信息。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：DearTom,I’mgladtohearthatyou’lltraveltoBijieduringyoursummervacation.WelcometoBijiefortraveling.WhenareyougoingtoarriveinBijie?Whenyoucomehere,I’llshowyouaroundsomeplacesofinterest.I’lltakeyoutoBailiDujuanNaturalPark.Youcanenjoydifferentcolorfulflowersthere.Iwillalsoshowyouaroundourcity.It’sconvenienttogetaroundourcity.Therearemanykindsoftransportherelikebuses,taxisandtrains.Andyoucantastedifferentkindsoffood.Alsothepeopleherearesofriendly.Lookingforwardtomeetingyouhere.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏已給出的內(nèi)容提示，寫郵件歡迎湯姆來畢節(jié)并詢問到達時間，談?wù)勛约捍蛩阍趺唇哟?。[寫作步驟]第一步，歡迎湯姆來畢節(jié)；第二步，詢問湯姆何時到達畢節(jié)并介紹自己將如何招待湯姆；第三步，表達期待和祝愿。[亮點詞匯]①summervacation暑假②arrivein到達③showsb.around帶某人參觀④placesofinterest名勝古跡⑤lookforwardtodoingsth.期待做某事[高分句型]①I’mgladtohearthatyou’lltraveltoBijieduringyoursummervacation.（that引導(dǎo)賓語從句）②Therearemanykindsoftransportherelikebuses,taxisandtrains.（therebe句型）9．（2022·上?！そy(tǒng)考中考真題）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根據(jù)以下情境寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格）你校將增設(shè)一間學(xué)生活動室（studentactivityroom），現(xiàn)有以下六種關(guān)于活動室用途的設(shè)想：讀者之家（Readingcorner）

勞技工坊（Miniworkshop）

藝體天地（Artsandsportscentre）義賣集市（Charitymarket）

科創(chuàng)小屋（High-techlab）

心靈驛站（Heart-to-heartroom）學(xué)校正通過校報了解學(xué)生的意向。假設(shè)你是李華，請給校報張老師寫封郵件，表明你最喜歡的一種設(shè)想，并說明理由。（注意：1.郵件中不得出現(xiàn)姓名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分。2.照抄閱讀語篇不得分。）______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMrZhang,

Iamwritingtoyoutosharemyideasabouttheuseofthestudentactivityroom.Iprefertomakeitaheart-to-heartroom.

Forsomestudents,theymayfeelhelplessanddepressedwhentheymeettroublesinlife,especiallythosewhoareshy.Theycanturntothisplaceforhelpifthereisone.Besides,studentsarelikelytosufferfrommentalproblems.Iftheseproblemsaren’tsolvedwell,theymaybringbadresults.Theheart-to-heartroomcanofferhelptothesestudentsintime.

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LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件。②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：首先選擇其中你最喜歡的一種設(shè)想，發(fā)郵件給校報張老師，并說明理由。[寫作步驟]第一步，點明主題，介紹自己喜歡的設(shè)想；第二步，介紹喜歡的理由；第三步，表示感謝。[亮點詞匯]①prefertodo更喜歡做某事②turnto求助于③sufferfrom遭受[高分句型]①theymayfeelhelplessanddepressedwhentheymeettroublesinlife,especiallythosewhoareshy.（含有when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語和who引導(dǎo)的定語從句）②Theycanturntothisplaceforhelpifthereisone.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）四、書信作文10．（2022春·廣西欽州·七年級浦北中學(xué)校考期中）家鄉(xiāng)是我們最親切的地方。假如你是李華，請根據(jù)提示，向你的朋友Tony介紹你的家鄉(xiāng)。提示：1.位置：欽州市2.一座古老的城市，每年很多旅游者來參觀。3.有很多鮮花和綠樹，可以享受新鮮空氣。每天可以聞到花香和鳥叫。4.當(dāng)?shù)厝撕苡押谩?.周末有很多好玩的地方可以去。我父母去看電影，我喜歡去體育中心跟朋友踢足球……注意：可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，字數(shù)70詞左右。DearTony,I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyhometown._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearTony,I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyhometown.MyhometownisChinzhou.Itisanoldcityandthousandsofvisitorscomehereeveryyear.Therearealotofflowersandgreentreeshere,sowecanenjoyfreshair.Andwecansmellthefragranceofflowersandthesingingofbirdseveryday.Thepeoplehereareveryfriendly.Whenyouneedhelp,theywillvolunteertohelp.Therearemanyinterestingplacestogoonweekends.Myparentsgotothemovies,andIliketogotothesportscentertoplayfootballwithmyfriends.Wearebothveryhappy.I’msureyouwilllikehere.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書信作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)題干中的提示要點介紹自己的家鄉(xiāng)，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題；第二步，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容詳細介紹自己的家鄉(xiāng)；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。[亮點詞匯]①thousandsof數(shù)千的②volunteertodosth.自愿做某事[高分句型]①Therearealotofflowersandgreentreeshere,sowecanenjoyfreshair.(so連接的并列句)②Whenyouneedhelp,theywillvolunteertohelp.(when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句)五、講稿11．（2021·廣東深圳·統(tǒng)考二模）假如你是李華，你所在的學(xué)校