2024屆高考英語(yǔ)作文：慰問(wèn)信課件(共17張PPT)

第第頁(yè)2024屆高考英語(yǔ)作文：慰問(wèn)信課件(共17張PPT)(共17張PPT)

慰問(wèn)信

題型特點(diǎn)：

1.向遭遇不幸的人表示安慰或同情的信件。

2.寫(xiě)的及時(shí)，簡(jiǎn)明扼要，感情要真誠(chéng)，措辭要貼近

3.盡量以樂(lè)觀的口吻減輕他們的煩惱和痛苦，并鼓勵(lì)對(duì)方對(duì)日后的生活、學(xué)習(xí)、工作等充滿信心

寫(xiě)作思路

第一步：引出事實(shí)，表達(dá)惋惜和同情

第二步：安慰對(duì)方，鼓勵(lì)對(duì)方，預(yù)測(cè)未來(lái)

第三步：表達(dá)祝愿和祝福

慰問(wèn)信

必備短語(yǔ)：

1.have/showsympathyfor...

2.conveymysympathyto.../extendmysympathyto...

3.befullof.../befilledwith.../beconsumedwith...

4....easeone'sgrief

5.bedischargedfromthehospital出院

慰問(wèn)信

套用句式：“聽(tīng)聞……，我很傷心/震驚?！?/p>

1.Iamexceedinglysorry/sorrowful/grieved/saddened/shockedtolearnofthenewsthat+從句

2.Ijustcan'ttellyouhowsorry/shockedIwastolearnofyouraccident.

3.IwasdeeplyconcernedwhenIheardthat+從句

4.Uponhearingthebadnewsthat+從句,Ifeltseizedbyaburstofsadness/sorrow/grief.

慰問(wèn)信

套用句式：“如果有需要我的地方，請(qǐng)別猶豫”

1.DonothestitatetocontactmeifthereisanythingelseIcandonowandalways.

2.BeassuredofmyavailabilityandeagernesstohelpinanywayIcan.

3.Iwouldbedelightedtoserveyoutobestofmyability.

4.Iwouldbemorethanwillingtoshowyoumyhand.

4.IfIcanbeofanyassistancetoyou,Ihopeyouwillletmeknowimmediately/instantly/atonce.

慰問(wèn)信

套用句式：表示愿望

1.Ihopethatbythetimethisletterreachesyou,you'llbefeelingmuchbetter.

2.Wedohopeyouhaveaspeedyrecovery.

3.Iknowyouwillstandtoyourfeetbravely.

4.Wearehopingforyourquickreturntohealth.

5.Wearelookingforwardto(prayingfor)yourspeedyandfullrecovery.

慰問(wèn)信

DearJohn,

Knowing（非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞）thatyouhadyourlegseverelyinjuriedaccidentallyinthefootballmatch,Iamwritingtoextendsincerepityandcareforyou.

HowisyourlegYoumusthavesufferedfromtheunbearablepainwhentheaccidenthappened.Butyouwerebraveenoughnottoletoutacry,whichisadmirable（定語(yǔ)從句）.Toourrelief,youhavebeendischargedfrom（dischargev.通知出院）thehospitalandarerecoveringwellathome.Asforthelessonsyouhavemissed,Iammorethanwillingtohelpyoumakethemup.

Iwishyouaspeedyrecovery.

Yours,

Sincerely

據(jù)報(bào)道，7歲的米國(guó)女孩AmyBruce得知自己身患肺癌(lungcancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中，米國(guó)抗癌協(xié)會(huì)（ACS）決定，每當(dāng)Amy收到一封慰問(wèn)信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。

假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)你用英文給Amy寫(xiě)一封慰問(wèn)信，主要內(nèi)容包括：1.自我介紹；2.得知的情況；3.表示鼓勵(lì)；4.打算為他做點(diǎn)什么；5.祝她早日康復(fù)。

注意：1.信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)情況；2.詞數(shù)100左右。

寫(xiě)作誤區(qū)：

1.Iamsorrytoheardthatyouarepainseverlytohave

alungcancer.

hear

painn.beinpain

painfuladj.bepainful

severely

2.Youshouldbelievethattherearemanypeoplehelpyou.

...becausetherehavemanypepletohelpyou.

therebesbdoingsth

helping

3.Youwillbefine,trustyouself,yourparentswillnotforgetyouandtheymustbeworriedaboutyou.

斷句

沒(méi)有安慰效果

4.IwasdeeplyconcernedwhenIheardthatyougotlungcancer.

am

hear

寫(xiě)作誤區(qū)：

1.Iamexceedinglysaddenedtolearnofthenewsthatyouhavelungcancer.IamLiHua,thestudentfromXinghuaMiddleSchool.

先介紹自己，再表示關(guān)心

2.Iwasdeeplyconcerned...IbelieveyouareIwouldbedelighted...Iwillletmyclassmates...

句法單一

英語(yǔ)是一門(mén)高度被動(dòng)的語(yǔ)言--多多使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。

滿分作文：漂亮的句型+關(guān)鍵詞

好句分享：

1.Consequently,I'llgotogreatlengthstodoyouafavor.

2.I'mconvincedthatanincreasingamoutofpeoplewillreachouttheirhands.

3.Wondersarealwaysinexistence.盧心怡

1.Youareabletofindthebeautyofthisworldandspendtherestofyourlifeworthfully.張戈雨

1.Knowingthatyouhaveaseverelungcnacerwhichcuasesthesharppainanddropsyoutoadillema

2.Iwouldsparenoefforttoassistyou.

金裔添

高分作文：

DearAmy,

Tobeginwith,I'mLiHua,aseniorstudentwhoiseagertohelpyou.Knowingthatyouaretorturedbythelungcancerandtendtosinktothepain,I'wwritingtoconveymysorrowandsincerecareforyou.

Althoughtheenemyissohorribletorobyourlife,youarestillabletofaceuptoit.Justasasayingsays,“Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.”Ansoonasyouwearasunnysmileonyourface,thedarkcloudisdrivenaway.Furthermore,I'llorganizemyclassmatestowriteletters.Becausethemorewewrite,themoremoneyfromtheACSwillbegiven.

Intheend,I'llpraytogodinthehopethatyouwillrecoverearly.

Yours,

LiHua

高分作文：

DearAmy,

IamLiHuafromXinHuaMiddleSchool.Iamexceedinglygrievedtohearthenewsthatyouaresufferingfromthelungcanceratjusttheageofseven.Asforme,itisnotonlytosympathizewithyou,butalsotoofferhelp.Sodon'thestitatetocontactmeifthereisanythingelseIcando.What'smore,youshouldhavefaithinyourselfandbelievethatyoucangetbetter.

TheACSsaysthemorelettersyoureceive,themoremoneytheywillgivetoyourforyourtreatment.Consequently,Iwillappealtomorepeopletowriteletterstoyou,raisingmoremoney.

Wearehopingforyourquickreturntohealth.

Yours,

LiHua

寫(xiě)作誤區(qū)：

DearAmy,

Iamexceedinglysorrowfultolearnofthenewsthatyouhavethelungcancer.MynameisLiHua,astudentfromXinHuaMiddleSchool.WhenIknowthatACSdecidedtogiveyouthreecentsaletter,soIwritetoyou.

Asweknow,thelungcancerisaveryseriousanddangerousillness.Butitisalsoachallengetoourlife.Soyoushouldbestrongertofaceitandbeatit.Sobehopefulandnevergiveup.DonothestitatetocontactmeifthereisanythingelseIcandonowandalways.

Ihopethatbythetimethisletterreaches,youwillfeellingmuchbetter.

Yours,

LiHua

先介紹自己，再表示關(guān)心

去掉so

句法單一

語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤

要點(diǎn)2：打算為她做點(diǎn)什么

好句分享：

1.Iwritethelettertoyouinordertomakeyourlifepassioncomealiveagain.

2.Thoughfacedwithsuchtrouble,onlywhenyouhavefaithinyourself,canyougetthroughthetouchtime.無(wú)名氏

1.Uponhearingthebadnewsthatyouhavealungcancerandareexposedtoextremelypain,楊心雨

1.Knowingthatyouhaveaseverelungcnacerwhichcuasesthesharppainanddropsyoutoadillema

2.Iwouldsparenoefforttoassistyou.

金裔添

練習(xí)2

假定你是李華，你的同班同學(xué)王剛的家鄉(xiāng)遭受了臺(tái)風(fēng)“彩虹（TyphoonMujigae)”襲擊，洪水毀壞了家園，你作為班長(zhǎng)代表班級(jí)給正在抗洪的他寫(xiě)了一封慰問(wèn)信，要點(diǎn)如下：1.對(duì)該同學(xué)表示關(guān)心；2.向其提供一些幫助，如捐助和補(bǔ)習(xí)；3.表達(dá)希望和對(duì)其重建家園的信心。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開(kāi)頭已給，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

DearWangGang,

We'resosorrytohearthatasevereTyphoonMujigaehityourhometown,leavingyourhouseinruins.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________