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讀后續(xù)寫-樣題ContinuationWriting(讀后續(xù)寫)讀后續(xù)寫-樣題
讀后續(xù)寫:提供一篇350詞以內的材料,要求考生依據(jù)材料內容、所給段落開頭語及所標關鍵詞續(xù)寫一篇150詞左右的短文。(滿分25分)新高考考試說明讀后續(xù)寫-樣題評分原則本題總分為25分,分5個檔次給分第五檔
(21-25)與所給短文融洽度高,與所提供各段落開頭語銜接合理。
內容豐富,應用了5個以上短文中標出的關鍵詞語。
所使用語法結構和詞匯豐富、準確,可能有些錯誤,但完全不影響意義表達。有效地使用了語句間的連接成分,使所續(xù)寫短文結構緊湊。
讀后續(xù)寫-樣題兩個要弄明白的問題:原文有什么用?續(xù)寫要寫什么?原文理解續(xù)寫文模仿素材讀后續(xù)寫-樣題素材情節(jié)基調核心矛盾故事框架語言設定潛伏信息讀后續(xù)寫-樣題高融洽度
tone(情節(jié)基調)
languagecharacteristics(語言特征)
content(內容:plotdevelopment--“W&H”)
讀后續(xù)寫-樣題Step1.Readforbasicinformation1.tone(情節(jié)基調):?
AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday....funnyahappyending讀后續(xù)寫-樣題Step1.Readforbasicinformation2.Languagecharacteristics(語言特征):?
AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.......“Itlookslikeyou’vegotaproblem,”Arthursaid.“I’mafraidso.I’minabighurryandIcan’tstartmycar.”Storynarration(故事旁白)Conversation---directspeech(直接引語):simple(簡單)讀后續(xù)寫-樣題Step1.Readforbasicinformation2.Languagecharacteristics:
vivid(生動)Nowtheairwasfilledwiththesoundofthealarmandtheshoutsofpeoplerunningfromalldirections.....Arthur,stillcarryingthesuitcase,turnedtolookatthebankandwalkedrightintotheyoungwomaninfrontofhim....讀后續(xù)寫-樣題
Step1.ReadforbasicinformationonedayalongParkAvenueneartheFirstNationalBankArthur&ayoungman
Arthurhelped
ayoungmancarryasuitcasebutmadehimselfasuspectofthebankrobbery.
3.content(內容:plotdevelopment---“W&H”)
Howwillthestorydevelop?When:Where:Who:What:How:PassageAmainlytells: Oneday,ArthurhelpedayoungmancarryasuitcaseonParkAvenueneartheFirstNationalBank,butmadehimselfasuspectofthebankrobbery.
讀后續(xù)寫-樣題Step2.Readfor
plotdevelopmentclues
(情節(jié)發(fā)展線索)Findoutthekeyclues(線索)basedonthebeginnings:Para1:
Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”Para2:
Thetaxi
stoppedinfrontofthePoliceStation
andArthur...
______isinsidethesuitcase?What讀后續(xù)寫-樣題Step3.Predictpossible
plotdevelopmentInagrouppredicthowthestorywilldevelop:(tone:funny→ahappyending)
Theunderlinedwords:
ParkAvenue,theyoungman,suitcases,inthebackseat,loudnoiseofanalarm,thebank,robbery,theshouts,people,thebankthiefmoneyotherthings讀后續(xù)寫-樣題
箱子里所屬人Youngman身份可能情節(jié)發(fā)展1Moneytheyoungmanthief碰巧抓住搶劫犯(即結尾1)2notthief碰巧把剛從銀行取錢趕路的人當劫犯,最后到警局傳來抓到劫犯消息3anothermanthief碰巧碰到一個剛偷了其他人錢的小偷,最后到警局傳來抓到劫犯并找回銀行失錢的消息,最后在Arthur幫助下抓到另一個小偷4notthief路遇一個路人幫人搬運裝滿錢的行李箱,而Arthur錯把路人當劫犯,最后澄清消除誤會5Otherthingstheyoungmanthief錯把普通小偷當劫犯,最后幫助抓到該小偷6notthief錯把路人當劫犯(即結尾2)7anothermanthief碰巧碰到一個剛偷了其他人東西的小偷,最后到警局傳來抓到劫犯并找回銀行失錢的消息,最后在Arthur幫助下抓到另一個小偷8notthief路遇一個路人幫人搬運普通行李箱,而Arthur錯把路人當劫犯,最后澄清消除誤會讀后續(xù)寫-樣題Possibleversion1: Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”Arthurinstantlyrealizedthattheyoungmanmightbethebankthief.Soheranfaster.Themomenthestoppedataxi,hejumpedinwiththesuitcaseandsaidtothedriver.“PleasehurrytothePoliceStation.Themanshoutingbehindisthebankthief.”Thedriverfollowedhimandracedaway.讀后續(xù)寫-樣題
ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthurdirectlywentinandtoldthepolicewhathehappenedtohim.Obviously,thepolicehadalreadylearnedabouttherobbery.AsArthurexpected,theyfoundalargesumofmoneyinsideafteropeningthesuitcase.ThentheyaskedArthurtodescribetheyoungman.Later,withthehelpofArthur,thepolicesuccessfullycaughttherobber.Boththebank
andthepolicethankedArthuralot.(151words)
Possibleversion1:讀后續(xù)寫-樣題Possibleversion2:
Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”Suddenly,realizinghehimselfmightbemisunderstoodasthebankrobber,Arthurranfasteruntilhestoppedataxi.Hegotintoitwiththesuitcaseandsaidtothedriverinonebreath:“Themanshoutingbehindisthebankthief.PleasehurrytothePoliceStation.”FollowingArthur,thetaxiracedaway.
讀后續(xù)寫-樣題Possibleversion2:
ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthurrushedintotheoffice.JustashewasdescribingwhathadhappenednearthebankonParkAvenue,Arthurheardavoiceoutside,“Help!Help!”Tohissurprise,itwastheyoungman.HehadfollowedArthurinanothertaxi.Itturnedoutthatinsidethesuitcaseswerejustsomeclothesandtheyoungmanwasinnocent.Embarrassed,Arthurapologizedtohim,butthepolicementhankedhimanyway. (153words)
讀后續(xù)寫-樣題讀后續(xù)寫-樣題Howtowriteacontinuation?1.Readforbasicinformation
2.Readforplotdevelopmentclues3.Predictpossibleplotdevelopment4.Draftacontinuation5.Checkandcopyyourversion---tone,languagecharacteristics,content(“W&H”)
---thebeginning
---theclues,theunderlinedwords
讀后續(xù)寫-樣題Givecommentsonyourdeskmate’scontinuationaccordingtothecriteria.Writeacontinuationofabout150wordsforPassageBusingwhatwehavelearnedinthisclass.Assignment:讀后續(xù)寫,就這么簡單!讀后續(xù)寫-樣題讀后續(xù)寫-樣題讀后續(xù)寫-樣題
Theunderlinedwords:
ParkAvenue,theyoungman,suitcases,inthebackseat,loudnoiseofanalarm,thebank,robbery,theshouts,people,thebankthiefSortouttheunderlinedwords:Step2.Readfor
plotdevelopmentclues
(情節(jié)發(fā)展線索)Who:.Where:.What:
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