2024屆高考英語英語讀后續(xù)寫素材-比賽活動類

專攻解題方法與技巧英語讀后續(xù)寫-比賽活動類一、活動/比賽前l(fā).努力準備1.Thesettingsunwitnessinghisunremittingefforts(不懈的努力），hekeptsharpeninghisskillregardlessofhisachingmuscle.2.Notuntilthedarknessswallowedeverythingonthehorizon(黑夜吞噬地平線上的一切）didhestoptraininganddraggedachinglegshome.（倒裝：notuntil...didhe..直到...才）3.Thefollowingdayswitnessedhimpracticingfreestylehard.4.Hedraggedhisachinglegsdowntheroadtohome,armstremblingwithfatigue.(獨立主格：疲憊的細節(jié)描寫）2.遇到困難/挫折（曲折性原則）1.Hardashetrained,hestillmadelittleprogress,whichputhimonthevergeofcollapse.2.Thefactthathemadelittleprogressthrewhimintolowspirits.3.受到鼓舞（人物B互動）1.Wheneverhewasexhausted/fulloffatigue,Eddie’swordsechoed/flashedinto/poppedintohismind,andsuppliedenergytohim/whichinstillpowerintohim.2.Hewasabouttoquit/giveupwhenmyteachercastanencouragingglanceathim.（beabouttodo...when...正要做某事的時候，突然...)3.Agustofexcitementsurgedthroughhimashemadeananotherattempt.二、比賽中（過程描寫）1.Thencamethebigday.（倒裝）2.Withthesoundofthestartinggunpiercing（穿透/刺破）throughtheair,theracebeganasexpected.3.Icouldfeelthatalltheeyeswerefixedonus.Astrongsenseofnervousnesssurgedthroughme.我能感覺到所有的眼睛都盯著我們。一種強烈的緊張感涌上我的全身。4.Thenthenextfewminuteswitnessedfiercecompetitionbetweenothercompetitors.5.Sodynamicwashethatheswamswifterthanever.Withhisarmwaving,hecutthroughthewatersmoothlylikeaflyingfish.（so+adj+謂+主+that...)他活力四射，游得比以前更快了。他揮動著手臂，像飛魚一樣平穩(wěn)地劃水。6.Sandrofoundhimselfflexiblelikeadolphininthewater,propelling（推動）himselfforwardswiftly.（比喻）7.Swiftlyadjustinghisbreath,heswamforwardlikeanarrowoffthebowstring.(像離弦的箭）8.150meterscovered，hewasleftbehindbytwocompetitors.Inthelast50meters，heswamtothefinishlinewithallhisstrength,withhisarmspushingforwardfastandhislegshittingthewaterhard.(游泳的過程）9.Myheartdropped,becauseIwasafraidallthetrainingthatIhaddonewasinvain.Yettherewassomethinginsidemepushingmetowinthecompetition.Myheartbeatingwildly,Itriedmybestandgotclosertotheotherrunners.三、比賽后（名次+互動+感悟）1.WhentheresultwasannouncedthatSandrowonfirstplace,otherplayersrushedtohimandcongratulatedhim,theaudiencesinthestadiumburstingintothunderousapplauseandcheers.(獲獎+祝賀）2.whentheracefinished,neverinhiswildestdream（做夢也沒有想到）hadheexpectedthathewonthefirstprize（倒裝）./hecamefirst/tookthefirstplace/clinched(贏得）thechampionintherace.（獲得名次）3.Withbeadsofsweatrunningdownmyfaceandmyheartpoundinginmychest,Iknewthatthegrueling（艱辛的）hoursofpractice/painstakingeffortshadpaidoffasIclaimedthetopspotonthepodium（領獎臺）.汗珠順著我的臉流下來，我的心在胸腔里怦怦直跳，我知道艱苦的練習時間得到了回報，因為我在領獎臺上占據了頭把交椅。4.Uponfinishingthetalk/competition,Itrotted（小跑）towardsMareyaandgaveherabearhug.Meanwhile,thunderous/astormofapplauserangthroughtheclassroom.5.Asthefinalwhistleblew,Thecheersfromthecrowdechoed/rangthroughthestadium,andIcouldn'thelpbutfeelarushofexcitementasIbasked/wasimmersedinthegloryofourvictory.（can'thelpbutdo不得不）人群的歡呼聲回蕩在體育場內，當我沉浸在勝利的榮耀中時，我不禁感到一陣興奮。6.Despitethephysicalandmentalexhaustion,Icouldn'twipethesmileoffmyfaceasIreflectedontheincrediblememoriesandlessonslearnedfromthecompetition.7.Itishishardworkandpersistencethatwonhimrecognitionandmorefriends.（結尾強調句：回扣主題）8.Thisexperienceservedasareminderthatthebestwaytogainrecognition/fitintoanewenvironmentistodisplay