初考讀后續(xù)寫+個人成長類+講義 高三英語作文復(fù)習(xí)專項

初考讀后續(xù)寫個人成長類（照顧出車禍的母親）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ItwasachillyFridaynight,andIhadjustreturnedfromclimbingoneoftheredrocksofSedona.MyfathertelephonedmeasIwalkedthroughthearchestomydormroomandtoldmethatmymotherhadbeeninaterriblecarcrashandhadbeentakentotheintensivecareunit(重癥監(jiān)護病房)ofanearbyhospital.WhenIgottothehospital,myfatherledmedownawidehallwaywithmachinesallaround.Astrongsmellofmedicinebroughtasickfeelingtomyalreadyturningstomach.AsIturnedintomymother’sward,thecadaverous(形容枯槁的)conditionofherbodyshockedme.Herfacehadswollen,hereyeshadhugedarkbruise,andshehadtubesdownherthroatandinherarms.Gentlyholdinghercoldswollenhands,Isaid“hi”inacalmvoice,controllingmyurgetocryout.Shekeptlookingatmeasshepoundedherhandagainstthebed,lookingpainful.Iturnedmyfaceawayfromher,tryingtohidethetearsthatwererollingdownmyface.ThatwaswhenitstruckmethatIreallymightlosemymother.Fromthatnighton,mylifecompletelychanged.Uptothatpoint,I’dhadtheluxuryofjustbeingakid,havingtodealwithonlytheexaggeratedmelodramasofteenagelife.Asmymotherstruggledfirsttostayaliveandthentorelearntowalk,mysenseofprioritieschangedsharply.Mymotherneededme.Thetrialsandtroubleofmydailylifeatschool,whichhadseemedsoimportantbefore,nowappearedinsignificant.MymotherandIhadfaceddeathtogether,andlifetookonanewmeaningforbothofus.Afteraweekoftreatmentinintensivecare,mymother’sconditionimprovedenoughtobemovedtoaregularhospitalward.Shewasfinallyoutofdangerbut,becauseherlegshadbeencrushed,therewasdoubtwhethershewouldbeabletowalkagain.Iwasjustgratefulthatshewasalive.Twomonthslater,asortofhospitalsuitewassetupinourfamilyroom,andshewasallowedtocomehome.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Para1:Mymother’sreturnhomewasablessingforusall,butitmeantsomeunaccustomedresponsibilitiesforme.Para2:Mymother’srelianceonmechangedourrelationship.一讀懂原文1敘事視角：第一人稱2故事梗概我的母親發(fā)生了一場可怕的車禍，從那天晚上起，我的生活徹底改變了。在那之前，我只是個孩子，只需要應(yīng)對青少年生活中一些夸張的戲劇化問題。當(dāng)我母親努力活下來，然后重新學(xué)習(xí)行走時，我的優(yōu)先事項意識發(fā)生了巨大的變化。我和母親一起面對死亡，生活對我們倆都有了新的意義。經(jīng)過一周的重癥監(jiān)護治療，母親終于脫離了危險，可以轉(zhuǎn)到普通病房，之后，我們家的客廳里安裝了一個類似于醫(yī)院套房的設(shè)施，母親出院回家康復(fù)。二本文主題親情帶給人們愛的滋養(yǎng)和力量，促成我的成長。三構(gòu)建續(xù)寫情節(jié)1解讀首句，構(gòu)思情節(jié)Para1:Mymother’sreturnhomewasablessingforusall,butitmeantsomeunaccustomedresponsibilitiesforme.“unaccustomedresponsibilities”是第一段續(xù)寫首句的關(guān)鍵詞。其中“responsibilities”，可以寫對母親的照顧，如給母親準(zhǔn)備一日三餐、幫母親洗漱等；“unaccustomed”，可以寫自己不適應(yīng)角色的轉(zhuǎn)變，以致身心俱疲到逐漸適應(yīng)的過程。在此過程中，學(xué)會共情、安慰并照顧好母親。第一段尾句:要與第二段的“Mymother’srelianceonme”銜接，因此可以寫“我”對母親的照顧得到了母親的認(rèn)可。Para2:Mymother’srelianceonmechangedourrelationship.“changed”是第二段續(xù)寫首句的關(guān)鍵詞?！拔摇迸c母親在事件發(fā)生前后彼此關(guān)系的變化。這段續(xù)寫與通過人物動作、語言、心理、情緒描寫等推動情節(jié)發(fā)展的段落不同，主要通過概述對比，最后點出文章的主題。四：官方范文Mymother'sreturnhomewasablessingforusall,butitmeantsomeunaccustomedresponsibilitiesforme.

Iwouldfeedher,batheherandhelphertothebathroom.ItstruckmethatIwasprettymuchplayingtheroleofmothertomyownmother.Thedifficultpartformewastryingtobealwaysupbeat（樂觀的，積極向上的）,andtokeepmymother'sspiritsupwhenshebecamefrustratedwiththepainandherinabilitytodosimplethingsbyherself.Lookingaftermymotherwasn'tmuchfun,butitfeltgoodtobetherewhenmymotherreallyneededme.Mymother’srelianceonmechangedourrelationship.

Inthepast,wehadmorethanourshareofthestrains（緊張）ofmother-daughterrelationships.Theaccidentthrewusintoarelationshipofinterdependence.Togetmymotherback,Ihadtohelpregainherstrengthandabilitytoresume（恢復(fù)）anindependentlife.ShehadtoacceptmyhelpaswellasthefactthatIwasnolongerachild.Sincethen,wehavebecometheclosestfriends,genuinelylisteningtooneanotherandtrulyenjoyingeachother’scompany.五：補充素材1我承擔(dān)起的家庭責(zé)任：①Ibroughtmealstoherbedside,fedherandcleanedupafterwards.Also,Ishoweredher,supportedhertoandfromthetoiletandwashedherdirtiedclothes.②Itookontheresponsibilitiesoflookingaftermymotherandcopedwithwhatmymotherusedtotakeup.Ialmostdevotedallmytimetoattendingtoher.Icookeddishes,washedclothes,preparedmedicineandsoon.③AsItookontheroleofherprimarycaregiver,ourdynamic（相互作用的方式）shiftedfromthetraditionalmother-daughterrelationshiptooneofmutualdependenceandsupport.④Iembracedtheseresponsibilitieswithopenarms,knowingthatIhadtheopportunitytocareforthepersonwhohadalwayscaredforme.Iquicklyadaptedtomynewroleasherprimarycaregiver,assistingherwithdailytasksandprovidingtheemotionalsupportsheneeded.2有關(guān)unaccustomed的情節(jié)①Iwasoftenburntoutandexhausted,butIfeltsweetdeepinmyheartsincemymother’sconditionwasimprovingdaybyday.②Thereweremomentsofexhaustionanddoubt,butIneverwavered（動搖）inmycommitmenttoherwell-being.Ilearnedtoprioritizemytimeandmakesacrificestoensurethatshereceivedthecareshedeserved.Itwasachallengingjourney,butitwasalsoajourneyfilledwithloveandgratitude.3我與母親關(guān)系的改變①Previously,shewasalwaysthereformewhenIneededcomfortandcare.Sometimes,WhenIwasstressedwithmystudies,Iwouldtakeoutmyangeronher,whichalwaysledtointenseargumentsbetweenus.Now,however,Ibecamemymother’sstrongestsupporter,bothphysicallyandmentally.Theoccurrenceofourquarrelswasreducedenormouslyandourrelationshipimprovedsteadily.②Inthepast,Iwasanaughtykidwhoalwaysbotheredmymumanddad.Ilivedundermymother’sprotection.What’smore,Iwasignorantofresponsibility.Butnow,becauseoftheaccident,Ihadchangedtotally.Mymotherwitnessedmymaturityandmygrowth.ShegraduallyfoundthefactthatIwasnolongerakid.Shealwaysgreetedmewithgratefulandsatisfiedsmileswhichmadewarmthsurgingwithinme.4主題句①True,thisterriblecarcrashrobbedmymotherofherhealth,butitalsoshapedmeintoamorematureandindependentindividual,uponwhommymothercouldalwaysrely.

②Sincethen,wehavetrulyenjoyedeachother’scompanyduetothelovebetweenamotherandakid.六：考場作文高分賞析Mymother’sreturnhomewasablessingforusall,butitmeantsomeunaccustomedresponsibilitiesforme.Dailymedicalroutinesandcleaningproceduresbecameapartofmyduty,whichwasanarduous（艱難的）andstrenuous（耗費精力的）process.EverytimeIwentbackhome,theinitialmatterwastocheckmymotherifshehadanyprogressforrecoveringwhilepeersofminewereprobablyinextra-curricular（課外的）activities.Thereweremomentsofaccountingitasabotheringtask,butafterIwitnessedheruneasy（不安的）expressionsandwobblingfigure（搖晃的身影）,theannoyanceperished（湮滅）forever.Atdawn,Iaccompaniedhertoundergo（經(jīng)歷）thetoughexercisetorelearntowalk;atnight,Icleanedherskinwithawettowel,withcautionofeverymovement.Therewardwasmymother’stinge（一絲，少許）ofsmile.Mymother’srelianceonmechangedourrelationship.AsifIhadbeenaparent,shewasatoddler（學(xué)步的幼兒）indesperateneedofloveandcare.Simultaneously（同時）,theaffectionbetweenusdeepened.Gripping（抓緊）tightlyatthehandle,mymotherinchedherway（緩慢移動）littlebylittle,sweatglistering（閃亮）onherforehead.Herstony（冷冰冰的）eyesboreinto（盯?。﹎ine,rendering（使變得）mebothtouchedandheartache.Iwasaside,cheeringupforher.Atimeportal（大門）wasopened,remindingmeofmymemoryoflearningtowalk.Oneday,wewereintoxicated（極其興奮的）bybliss（幸福）andhappinessbecausemymothermadeit,exuberantvitality（生機勃勃）radiating（散發(fā)）fromourhouse.Thespringarrivedasourlovedissipated（驅(qū)散）coldnessandgaverisetomiracles.【點評】此篇續(xù)