高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)易錯題專練18 書面表達(dá)-應(yīng)用文（含解析）

專題18書面表達(dá)應(yīng)用文備戰(zhàn)2023高考英語考試易錯題（新高考專用）（解析版）一易錯題類型一易錯題類型【易錯題01】不一致１．主謂不一致Whenhehavemoney,heoftenbuyswhathewantto.【答案】have改為has;want改為wants【錯誤分析】沒有注重英語中謂語動詞需要和主語保持時態(tài)，語態(tài)，人稱和數(shù)的一致。單純的按漢語意思來翻譯?！緦懽魉悸贰烤渥拥暮诵闹^語動詞時刻保持人稱一致，時態(tài)，語態(tài)合理運用，不可按漢語直譯。前后指代不一致Wecanalsoknowthesocietybyservingyourself.【答案】we改為you;或yourself改為ourselves【錯誤分析】句中人稱代詞we和反身代詞yourself指代不一致?！緦懽魉悸贰勘３智昂笾复恢隆ecanalsoknowthesocietybyservingitourselves./Youcanalsoknowthesocietybyservingityourself。３．句子不完整或者多詞Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.【答案】將for改為小寫，前面句號改為逗號?！惧e誤分析】“ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon”不是一個完整的句子，僅為一些不連貫的詞語，不能獨立成句。句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整會令意思表達(dá)不清?！緦懽魉悸贰縏herearemanywaystoknowthesociety，forexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.在句子寫完以后，想加些補充說明時需要考慮句子結(jié)構(gòu)和成分是否完整。Notonlythisactivityenrichyourschoollifebutalsoitcanbroadenyourhorizons.【答案】在only后面加can。【錯誤分析】本句屬于特殊句式中的倒裝句。助動詞漏用，，沒有倒裝?！緦懽魉悸贰縉otonly用于句子開頭時，句子使用部分倒裝句型。助動詞用于主語之前。故Notonlycanthisactivityenrichyourschoollifebutalsoitcanbroadenyourhorizons.Forthepeoplewhotheyarediligentandkind,theyusemoneyonlytobuywhattheyneed.【答案】去掉they【錯誤分析】定語從句中關(guān)系代詞充當(dāng)成分，重復(fù)使用句子成分?！緦懽魉悸贰筷P(guān)系代詞who充當(dāng)定語從句中的主語，定語從句中多了人稱代詞。故Forthepeoplewhoarediligentandkind,theyusemoneyonlytobuywhattheyneed.4．詞性誤用Sincere,Ihopethisactivitywillbeofgreatbenefittoyou.【答案】在only后面加can。【錯誤分析】詞性誤用一般表現(xiàn)為：介詞當(dāng)動詞用；形容詞當(dāng)副詞用；名詞當(dāng)動詞用等【寫作思路】遣詞造句時，需要考慮詞性與修飾的關(guān)系。故Sincerely,Ihopethisactivitywillbeofgreatbenefittoyou.Theoldmanwashitbyacarwhenheacrossthestreet.【答案】將across改為wascrossing【錯誤分析】across是介詞，不能誤用作動詞?！緦懽魉悸贰縏heoldmanwashitbyacarwhenhewascrossingthestreet.5．指代不清Lilywasfriendlytomysisterbecauseshewantedhertobeherbridesmaid.【答案】將her改為mysister【錯誤分析】本句話沒有明確兩位姑娘中誰將結(jié)婚，誰將當(dāng)伴娘。代詞與被指代的人或物關(guān)系不清或者先后所用的代詞不一致?！緦懽魉悸贰繉懽魇沁壿嬕馑家约熬渥忧昂笾复鷳?yīng)當(dāng)清晰一致。故Lilywasfriendlytomysisterbecauseshewantedmysistertobeherbridesmaid.【易錯題02】低級詞匯集中動詞類簡單詞匯attend，cause,help,consider,consider,happen,have,improve,master,realize,remember,should,thank,use,tend,understand,can’t,decide,liein,thinkof,tryone’sbest,高級詞匯takepartin/beinvolvedin/participatein;leadto/resultin/contributeto/giveriseto;dosb.afavor/lendsbahelpinghand;take...intoconsideration/account;occur/comeabout;possess/improve;promote;haveagoodcommandof;beawareof;bear/keepinmind;besupposedto;appreciate/begratefultosb.;makeuseof/takeadvantageof;haveatendencytodosth.;makesenseof/figureout;havetrouble/difficultyindoingsth;determinetodosth;bedeterminedtodosth.;belocatedin/besituatedin;sthoccurstosb.;sparenoefforttodosth.;【動詞分析】選詞簡單，不夠高級，漢語意思直白翻譯。【選詞思路】注重積累，短語優(yōu)先選擇。名詞類簡單詞匯chance;choice;people;result;shortcoming;moreandmorepeople;allkindsof高級詞匯opportunity;alternative;individuals;consequence;drawback;anincreasingnumberofpeople;awiderangeof;awidevarietyof典例剖析(2022全國高考乙卷滿分作文)Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroominvariousways.【高級詞匯】anincreasingnumber代替many【選詞思路】注重積累，選詞應(yīng)當(dāng)使用能夠吸引閱卷老師目光的高級詞匯和短語，使句子出類拔萃。形容詞類簡單詞匯good;difficult;enough;free;important;lucky;popular;proper;rich;tired;beangrywith;bebusywith;beboredwith;beveryhappy;beinterestedin高級詞匯outstanding/distinguished/brilliant;challenging;adequate;available;essential/vital/significant;fortunate;enjoygreatpopularity;appropriate;abundant;exhausted/wornout;beannoyedwith;beoccupiedwith/buryoneselfin;befedupwith;bewildwithjoy;haveagreatpassionfor;becrazyabout;sthappealtosb;befascinatedby副詞類簡單詞匯finally;hardly;immediately;nowadays;so;suddenly;very高級詞匯eventually/ultimately;barely;withouthesitation/delay;currently;consequently/therefore;allofasudden;extremely介詞類簡單詞匯considering;during;infact;inaword高級詞匯inviewof;inthecourseof;asamatteroffact;tosummarize/inconclusion/tosumup【易錯題02】句子呆板不生動1.運用介詞（短語）Becausehehelpedme,Ifinishedthetaskontime.→Thanktohishelp,Iaccomplishedthetaskontime.【原句分析】句型呆板，缺乏靈動性?！緦懽魉悸贰孔⒅胤e累，短語優(yōu)先選擇?？梢赃\用介詞短語對句子進(jìn)行轉(zhuǎn)化，可以使句子簡潔有新意?！局R拓展】常用介詞短語有becauseof,aswellas,bydoing;through,butfor,despite,inspiteof,on/uponthanksto等。典例剖析(2022年全國高考新高考I卷應(yīng)用文寫作)Theprogramwiththetheme“Culturedifferences”isintendedtoarousestudents’interestindifferentculturesespeciallywesterncultureaboutAmericancuisine.【選詞思路】介詞with短語作后置定語，增加句子的變化性，彰顯出靈活的句子結(jié)構(gòu)運用能力。2.運用定語從句和名詞性從句Hehastwosonsandbothofthemaredoctors.→Hehastwosons,bothofwhomaredoctors.Weallknowthatheisawarm-heartedman.→Whatisknowntousallisthatheisawarmheartedman.【原句分析】句型較為簡單，只運用了比較容易的并列句和賓語從句?！緦懽魉悸贰坎桓淖兙湟猓\用定語從句和名詞性從句可以對并列句進(jìn)行升華，可以使句子脫穎而出。3.運用非謂語短語對祈使句和從句進(jìn)行轉(zhuǎn)化Hewastoldmanytimes,buthedidn’tmemorizetherule.→Toldmanytimes,hedidn’tmemorizetherule.Theyenteredtheforestinsearchofthemissingboy.→Theyenteredtheforesttosearchforthemissingboy.AsIwaslyingonthegrass,Ithoughtofmybrotherwhowasstudyingabroad.→Lyingonthegrass,Ithoughtofmybrotherstudyingabroad.【原句分析】句型運用了比較容易的并列句和介詞短語，比較單一。【寫作思路】一篇高分文章應(yīng)當(dāng)多種句型運用豐富，非謂語的熟練運用是能體現(xiàn)高水準(zhǔn)的表達(dá)方式之一，可以轉(zhuǎn)化祈使句，并列句和從句。二舉一反三二舉一反三（2022年全國乙卷書面表達(dá)）......ItturnsoutthatstudentsattachgreaterimportancetointerestandentertainmentinsteadoftraditionalapproachessuchasreadingbookswhenlearningEnglish.However,frommypointofview,whatbenefitsstudentsmostisreadingEnglishbooks,foritisoneofthebestwaystoincreasevocabularyandtostrengthentheunderstandingofgrammar.【佳句賞析】句意：事實證明，學(xué)生在學(xué)習(xí)英語時更重視興趣和娛樂，而不是像閱讀書籍等傳統(tǒng)方法。然而，在我看來，對學(xué)生最有利的是閱讀英語書籍，因為這是增加詞匯量和加強對語法理解的最好方法之一。句型運用Itturnsoutthat靈活生動。動詞短語attachgreaterimportanceto代替payattentionto高級不單調(diào)，實為背誦佳句。下段運用介詞短語frommypointofview于主語之前，句子顯得很有新意。使用名詞性從句作主語，寫作中實為加分項。(2022年全國高考新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫)...Iquietlysaid,“David,ifyou’renotrunningbecauseyou’reafraidsomeoneisgoingtolaugh,that’snotagoodenoughreason.【選詞思路】熟練使用形容詞enough;副詞quietly;連詞if,because等引導(dǎo)從句，句子生動不簡單?！炯丫滟p析】句意：我平靜地說：“大衛(wèi)，如果你因為害怕有人會笑而不跑步，那是一個足夠好的理由?！眎f引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句，because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，以及句子中形容詞和副詞的運用都顯示出作者很扎實的基本功，適合背誦模仿。(2022年全國高考新高考II卷)Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.【選詞思路】句子中高級詞匯和短語熟練運用，amazing,share...with;havetroubleindoing;plentyof;dealwith。【佳句賞析】句意：這是一個很棒的項目，你可以與學(xué)生們分享你的想法?，F(xiàn)在，當(dāng)他們在學(xué)習(xí)英語方面遇到困難時，很多學(xué)生都很想知道如何處理它。where引導(dǎo)的定語從句先行詞表示抽象地點的program,這是高考中語法填空的?？贾R點，作者能將其運用于寫作中，實乃妙句。When后運用了省略句，以及句子中大量的短語，都為作文加分亮點。模擬題通關(guān)模擬題通關(guān)應(yīng)用文(2022年全國高考新高考I卷寫作)假定你是校廣播站英語節(jié)目“TalkandTalk”的負(fù)責(zé)人李華，請給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請她做一次訪談。內(nèi)容包括：1.節(jié)目介紹；2.訪談的時間和話題。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearCaroline,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【滿分范文】Onepossibleversion:DearCaroline, Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoattendourprogram“TalkandTalk”inourschoolbroadcastingstationat7:00p.m.nextFriday.Theprogramwiththetheme“Culturedifferences”isintendedtoarousestudents’interestindifferentculturesespeciallywesterncultureaboutAmericancuisine. Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youropinionwillbeofimportance.Intheprogram,youcancommunicatewithourschoolstudents,whichnotonlyprovidesaplatformforstudentstorelievetheirpressureandaddspicetotheirdullroutine,butalsoinspirestheirinterestinwesternculture. I’dappreciateitifyoucouldspareyourtimetojoinus.Anearlyreplyaboutyourfinaldecisionwillbehighlyappreciated.Yours,【佳作賞析】第一段開門見山表達(dá)寫信目的Iamwritingtoinviteyouto...。緊接著便是節(jié)目話題介紹Theprogramwiththetheme“Culturedifferences”isintendedtoarousestudents’interestindifferentculturesespeciallywesterncultureaboutAmericancuisine. 第二段第一句表明邀請參加的目的Asourdistinguishedfore....接著展開描寫參加活動的意義Intheprogram,youcancommunicate...。其中倒裝句notonly...butalso是一大亮點。 最后一段再次邀請.I’dappreciateitifyou...。2.(2022年全國高考新高考II卷)假定你是校廣播站英語節(jié)目“TalkandTalk”的負(fù)責(zé)人李華，請給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請她做一次訪談。內(nèi)容包括：1.節(jié)目介紹；2.訪談的時間和話題。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearCaroline,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【滿分范文】DearCaroline,ThisismyfirsttimethatIhaveinvitedyoutoattendourprogram—TalkandTalk.ItistenyearssinceTalkandTalkwasestablished.Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.IfyouareavailableonthisSunday,ItogetherwiththewholeTalkandTalkstaffamwaitingforyourcoming.I’dappreciateitifyoutakemyinvitationintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua【佳作賞析】1.句型“自從......以來多久了”ItistenyearssinceTalkandTalkwasestablished.省略句whenhavingtrouble的運用。短語搭配運用靈活share...with;havetroubleindoingsth;urgetodosth;beavailable;虛擬語氣句式運用I’dappreciateitifyou...3.（2022年1月浙江卷）假定你是李華，在“中國-愛爾蘭文化節(jié)”活動中結(jié)識了愛爾蘭朋友Chris，現(xiàn)在他已回國，請你給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.回憶活動經(jīng)歷；2.分享個人收獲；3.希望保持聯(lián)系。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearChris,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【滿分范文】DearChris,Howareyoudoingthesedays?IthasbeenayearsinceyoucamebacktoIreland.Imissyousomuch.IstillremembertheverydaywhenwemetatChina-IrelandCulturalFestivaltwoyearsago.Itwasatthatfestivalthatyousharedsomanyinterestingthingsaboutyourcountrytogether,throughwhichIlearnedalotaboutyourfood,cultureandhistory.Wereallyenjoyedourselvesthere.What’sfarmoreimportantisthatwebecamegoodfriendsthen.ThoughIfeltalittlesorrythatyouleftChinalastyear,Iampleasedtoknowyouareleadingahappylifeinyourhometown.Ihopewecankeepintouchoften.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【佳作賞析】句型表示“自從......以來多久了”IthasbeenayearsinceyoucamebacktoIreland.定語從句whenwemetatChina-IrelandCulturalFestivaltwoyearsago.強調(diào)句型Itwasatthatfestivalthatyousharedsomanyinterestingthingsaboutyourcountrytogether,非限制性定語從句throughwhichIlearnedalotaboutyourfood,cultureandhistory.名詞性從句中主語從句和表語從句What’sfarmoreimportantisthatwebecamegoodfriendsthen.讓步狀語從句ThoughIfeltalittlesorrythatyouleftChinalastyear,短語靈活運用如：share...with;ampleasedto；areleadingahappylife；keepintouch.(2022湖南雅禮中學(xué)測試卷）假如你是李華，你的巴基斯坦筆友Muhammad準(zhǔn)備明年來你校做交換生，寫信向你咨詢?nèi)绾螌W(xué)習(xí)中文。請你用英語給他回封電子郵件。要點：1.表示歡迎；2.提出學(xué)習(xí)中文建議；3.期待與祝福。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearMuhammad,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【滿分范文】DearMuhammad,Welcometobeanexchangestudentatourschoolnextyear.AstohowtolearnChinese,herecomemytips.First,youmightaswelltakeaChinesecoursetolayasolidfoundation.What’smore,itisawisechoicetopickupproperChineseTVprograms,whichwillenableyoutoaccessstandardandauthenticChinese.Plus,befriendingwarmheartedChinesefriendsaroundyouissuretobetteryouroralChinese.Meanwhile,itcanenrichyourknowledgeofChinesecustoms.Finally,Isuggestyoutrye-mailingmeinChinese.Ihopemysuggestionsabovemaybenefityou.HopeyouwillmakesufficientprogressinChinesesoon.Iamlookingforwardtoyourarrival.Yours,LiHua【佳作賞析】Plus,notonlyisbefriendingwarmheartedChinesefriendsaroundyousuretobetteryouroralChinese,butalsoitcanenrichyourknowledgeofChinesecustoms.2.What’smore,itisawisechoicetopickupproperChineseTVprograms,whichwillenableyoutoaccessstandardandauthenticChinese.(運用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)3.Finally,Isuggestyoutrye-mailingmeinChinese.(運用了省略that的賓語從句和虛擬語氣)4.詞匯積累：至于：asto→asfor；建議：tip/suggestion→advice；明智的：wise→advisable；此外：what’smore→besides6.（2022年全國甲卷書面表達(dá)）你校將以六月八日世界海洋日為主題，舉辦英語征文比賽，請你寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.保護(hù)海洋的倡議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.短文的題目和首句已為你寫好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【onepossibleversion】OurOceans，OurResponsibilityDoyouknowJune8,whichisnotonlyadayforthecollegeentranceexaminationtoChineseyoungsters,butalsoWorldOceansDay,designatedbytheUNtoarousepeople’sawarenesstoprotecttheoceans?Theoceanisthehometoalllifeonearth,richinnaturalresources,andalsoourbluehomeforahappylifeandhappygrowth.Tocarefortheoceanistocareforourfuture.Soweshouldshoulderresponsibilitytoprotectit.Tobeginwith,protecttheMarineecologicalenvironmentandadvocategreenenvironmentalprotectionactions.What’smore,tostrengthentheconsciousnessoftheseainaccordancewiththelaw,consciouslyprotectthebluelandandresourcesenvironment,startfromme,startfromnow,startfromaroundthings,takeanactivepartingreenvolunteeractivities,andadvocategreenenvironmentalprotection.Doyouagreewithme?Ifso,let’shandinhandtoprotecttheMarineenvironment,andinherittheMarinecivilizationfromhearttoheart.（165）【佳作賞析】運用定語從句whichisnotonlyadayforthecollegeentranceexaminationtoChineseyoungsters,butalso...，并在其中穿插關(guān)聯(lián)詞組notonly...butalso...。目的狀語Tocarefortheoceanistocareforourfuture.中todo不定式的運用。熟練運用短語arouseone’sawareness...;berichin;carefor;tobeginwith;what’smore;inaccordancewith;takeanactivepartin;handinhand等。7.（2022年全國乙卷書面表達(dá)）學(xué)校英文報正在開展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom為題的討論。請使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1．學(xué)習(xí)活動狀況描述：2．簡單評論；3．你的建議。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．短文的題目和首句已為你寫好。LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomTherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomTherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.RecentlyasurveyabouthowtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroomhasbeenconducted.Ascanbeclearlyseenfromthestatistics,appreciatingEnglishsongsaccountsfor65percentcomparedwith50%whochoosetowatchmoviesasawayofEnglishlearning.ReadingEnglishbooksprovetobethelesspopularwaysmakingup18%,togetherwithvisitingEnglishlearningwebsites,takingup12%.ItturnsoutthatstudentsattachgreaterimportancetointerestandentertainmentinsteadoftraditionalapproachessuchasreadingbookswhenlearningEnglish.However,frommypointofview,whatbenefitsstudentsmostisreadingEnglishbooks,foritisoneofthebestwaystoincreasevocabularyandtostrengthentheunderstandingofgrammar.Therefore,studentsbecomebestEnglishlearnersquickly.【佳作賞析】文中加分句型和短語都能運用自如。Therebe句型的運用TherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.As引導(dǎo)的定語從句Ascanbeclearlyseenfromthestatistics動名詞短語作主語appreciatingEnglishsongsaccountsfor65percentcomparedwith50%定語從句whochoosetowatchmoviesasawayofEnglishlearning.動名詞短語做主語ReadingEnglishbooksprovetobethelesspopularwaysmakingup18%...句型Itturnsoutthatstudents......的運用.名詞性從句中主語從句的運用whatbenefitsstudentsmostisreadingEnglishbooks,8.（2022重慶一中模擬）假定你是李華，你的英國網(wǎng)友James邀請你為他的同學(xué)拍攝一條短視頻，介紹你的高中校園生活。請用英語寫一封回信。內(nèi)容包括：1.表示同意；2.計劃拍攝的內(nèi)容（1~2點）；3.邀請對方提建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)増加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJames,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【滿分范文】DearJames,Howiseverythinggoing?It’smygreatprivilegetorecordashortvideoaboutmycampuslifeforyourclassmates.I’mwritingtotellyouwhatwillbeincludedinthevideo.Firstofall,asastudent,takingdifferentclassesismydailyroutine,soIwouldliketorecordascenefocusingononeofmyChineseclassestoshowmyacademiclifeandChineseculture．Inaddition,awidevarietyofextra-curricularactivitiesareheldeverydayinmyschoolandthereforeshowingmyafter-schoolactivitiesisalsoinmyplan,fromwhichyourclassmatescanlearnthediversityofChinesehighschoollife．Iwishsuchavideocouldliveuptoyourexpectations．Ifthereisanythingthatneedsimproving,pleasedon’thesitatetotellme.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【佳作賞析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假定考生是李華，你的英國網(wǎng)友James邀請你為他的同學(xué)拍攝一條短視頻，介紹你的高中校園生活。請用英語寫一封回信。Firstofall,asastudent,takingdifferentclassesismydailyroutine,soIwouldliketorecordascenefocusingononeofmyChineseclassestoshowmyacademiclifeandChineseculture．(使用了動名詞短語作主語和現(xiàn)在分詞短語作定語)Inaddition,awidevarietyofextra-curricularactivitiesareheldeverydayinmyschoolandthereforeshowingmyafter-schoolactivitiesisalsoinmyplan,fromwhichyourclassmatescanlearnthediversityofChinesehighschoollife．(使用了動名詞短語做主語和fromwhich引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句。)詞匯積累：榮幸：privilege以……為中心：focuson此外：Inaddition需要：need9.（2022湖南周南中學(xué)測試）假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Kim將于下周訪問你校，你想邀請他參與下周學(xué)校組織的“勞動實踐周”（LabourWeek）活動。請你給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.邀請Kim參加活動；2.介紹活動目的和內(nèi)容。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearKim,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearKim,It’sgreattoknowyouwillvisitourschoolnextweekandI’dliketoinviteyoutojoinintheactivity—LabourWeekinourschool.Theevent,whichwilllastaweekasscheduled,isintendedtoraiseourawarenessoflabourandremindusofhowvaluableandrespectablehardworkis.Variousactivitieswillbeorganized,rangingfromplantingvegetablesontheschoolfarmtosortinggarbageinaneco-friendlyway.Besides,eachclasswillholdameetingwiththethemeofadeeperreflectiononthisactivityattheendoftheweek.I’msurethatyouwillenjoythisunforgettableexperienceandbenefitalot.

Wishyouagoodjourneyandhopetoseeyousoon.Yours,LiHua【佳作賞析】which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句Theevent,whichwilllastaweekasschedule