讀后續(xù)寫歷險故事類出海釣魚遇險課件高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)品德故事——出海釣魚遇險1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文It’sabeautifulsunnyday.TheBondsboardedtheirboatforacarefreedaytriptoDoveIslandforsomefishingasafamilycustom.ThomasBond,a30-year-oldconstructionworker,lovedthesport,especiallycatchingbass(鱸魚)andhadimpressedonhisoldestdaughter,Lizzy,aloveoftheoutdoors,teachingherhowtobait(下誘餌)ahookandcastalineandbravethewaves.Thefamilyspentthedayfishinginthevastocean,andthenlefttheislandintheearlyevening.Uponsettingofffromtheshore,theyfoundthickfogrollingin.Lizzyfellintoalightsleepbesideherfive-year-oldsister,Molly,atatableontheboat’slowerdeck(甲板).Theirfather’ssharporderswokeherup:“Getoutoftheboat.Theboat’ssinking!”Lizzypushedhersisterintothecold,darkwater.Bothgirlsworelifejackets.Theadultsdidnot.Thegirlswerefollowedbytheirmother,PetraBond,whowasexpectingababyatthattime.Withinseconds,theboatwasdamagedandwasleftjustthetipofitsbowintheair.4續(xù)寫原文5段首句Para1：Afterseveralhours,Lizzyheardhernamecalledinthedistance.Para2：Onthecoast,anambulancewaswaitingforthem.6Part2題目分析7點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點8續(xù)寫思路分析本文以人物為線索展開，講述了Lizzy和妹妹跟隨爸爸媽媽出海釣魚，遭遇沉船落水，爸爸留下Lizzy照顧媽媽和妹妹，自己游去尋求救援，媽媽的妹妹體力不支快失去意識，只有Lizzy堅持著保護著她們，等待爸爸歸來。9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:Afterseveralhours,Lizzyheardhernamecalledinthedistance.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“幾個小時后，利奇聽到遠處有人叫她的名字?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫爸爸歸來，三人獲救。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Onthecoast,anambulancewaswaitingforthem.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“在海岸上，一輛救護車正等著他們”可知，第二段可描寫獲救后利齊與爸爸的對話。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索爸爸歸來——三人獲救——得到救助——父女對話12續(xù)寫素材可用詞匯：行為類①大喊：cryout/yell/scream②營救：rescue/save③在……的幫助下：withthehelpof/withtheaidof情緒類①疲倦的：exhausted/tired13續(xù)寫素材可用句型：[高分句型1]Finally,DadgotthreeofthemintotheboatwhereLizzyfinallyclosedhereyes,exhaustedandrelieved.(運用了where引導(dǎo)定語從句和形容詞作狀語)[高分句型2]Sheknewtheywererescued.(運用了省略連詞的賓語從句)[高分句型3]Wrappedinawarmblanket,Lizzysitbesideherfamily,lookingathermomonthebed.(運用了過去分詞和現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Afterseveralhours,Lizzyheardhernamecalledinthedistance.“It’sdad.”Lizzycalledoutandbegantoshakehersleepymotherandsister.Motheropenedhereyesandsqueezedoutafaintsmileandfellasleepagain.Throughthethickfog,awhitesmallboatslidingclose.Lizzycriedout,“Dad,here”,withtearsrollingdownherface.Finally,DadgotthreeofthemintotheboatwhereLizzyfinallyclosedhereyes,exhaustedandrelieved.Sheknewtheywererescued.16范文呈現(xiàn)Onthecoast,anambulancewaswaitingforthem.Withthehelpofthenurses,theyallgotin.Wrappedinawarmblanket,Lizzysitbesideherfamily,lookingathermomonthebed.Suddenly,Lizzyturnedtoherfatherandsaid,“Iknewyouwouldbeback,Dad.”“Iknewyouwouldkeepmotherandsistersafe”,herfatherhuggedher.Tearsrolleddowntheirfaces.17范文譯文幾個小時后，麗萃聽到遠處傳來她的名字?！笆前职帧！丙惼澓暗?，開始搖晃她昏昏欲睡的媽媽和妹妹。母親睜開眼睛擠出一絲淡淡的微笑，又睡著了。穿過濃霧，一艘白色小船緩緩靠近。麗茲哭著說：“爸爸，來了”，眼淚順著臉往下流。最后，爸爸把他們?nèi)齻€帶上船，麗萃終于閉上了眼睛，疲憊不堪，如釋重負。她知道他們獲救了。18范文譯文在海邊，一輛救護車在等著他們。在護士的幫助下，他們都進去了。裹著一條溫暖的毯子，麗姿坐在家人身邊，看著床上的媽媽。突然，麗