Unit2IntegratedSkills建議信讀后續(xù)寫課件高中英語新譯林版

英語應用文寫作英語應用文日記演講稿通知推薦信感謝信求職信慰問信求助信投訴信建議信道歉信邀請信謄寫查單詞拼寫、時態(tài)主謂一致等①用過渡詞(句)連接句子和段落②首尾段審體裁、人稱、時態(tài)抓住要點擴展要點應用文寫作Aletterofadvice高考應用文寫作之建議信

寫作步驟:1.審怎么審題？

建議信特點及寫作步驟題型特點：建議信是針對某事或某個問題向收信人提出建議和忠告的信件，建議信通常簡明扼要，目的明確，具有合理性和說服性。寫作思路與框架：“三段式”第一段：陳述事由+寫信目的第二段：提出具體建議及理由第三段：表達本人愿望【篇首句】①KnowingthatyouhavesometroubleinlearningEnglish,Iamwritingtogivesomeadvice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.②

YouaregoingtouniversityinBeijing,soI’d

like

to

express

my

warmest

welcome

to

you.Here

are

some

suggestions

about

choosinguniversityandpreparationsforit.1.You’dbetterdo/Youaresupposedtodo/Youshoulddo…2.Youneedtodo…3.Youcando…4.It’sagoodwayto…【篇中句】【篇尾句】Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.①Thinking(審題）②Outlining（列提綱,寫要點）③Expanding（擴詞成句）④Linking（連句成篇）⑤Polishing（潤色定稿）HowtoWriteacomposition

假如你是李華，你的網(wǎng)友英國交換生Lily正在中國學習漢語。她發(fā)郵件向你訴說了她的困擾：不適應新的學習環(huán)境，很孤獨。請給她回復郵件，內(nèi)容包括：表示理解給予安慰；注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫Thinking(審題）Step11、交換生anexchangestudent;2、做某事很困難：havetroubledoingsth./haveproblemsdoingsth;3、適應新的學習環(huán)境：adapttothenewlearningenvironment;4、很孤獨：Youfeellonely.（Youarealone你很孤單）Para.1開頭Para.2正文Para.3結尾Outlining（列出提綱，寫要點）Step2

假如你是李華，你的網(wǎng)友英國交換生Lily正在中國學習漢語。她發(fā)郵件向你訴說了她的困擾：不適應新的學習環(huán)境，很孤獨。請給她回復郵件，內(nèi)容包括：表示理解給予安慰；注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫表示理解并給予安慰+寫信目的建議，原因及相關做法表達愿望DearLily,Knowingthat

,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you’dbetter

（建議1）

.（建議1相關的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

（建議2）

.（建議2相關的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

（建議3）

.（建議3相關的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHua

正文：建議及原因Outlining（列出提綱，寫要點）Step21.Studying:（1）Planyourtimeandchangeyourhabits;（2）Askyourteachersandclassmatesforhelp;（3）Useadictionary.2.Life/Emotion:（1）Makefriendstosharefeelingswiththem;（2）TakepartinsomeactivitiestoknowaboutChinesecultures.（3）GoouttovisitsomeplacesandenjoyChinesefood;（4）Listentomusicandgoforawalk.

Knowingthatyouhavetroubleadaptingtothenewlearningenvironment,Iamwritingtogiveyousomeadvice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Para1（Beginning）Expanding(擴詞成句）Step31.Youshouldplanyourtime/takeadvantageof/makethemostofyourtimesothat

youwilladapttothenewlearningenvironmenteasily.2.Youcantakepartinsomeafter-classactivities,whichwillgiveyouanopportunitytorelaxyourself.3.Youaresupposedtouseadictionarythatcanhelpyouunderstandsomeunfamiliarwords.Para2：建議及原因Expanding(擴詞成句）Step3

Para.3（Ending）Expanding(擴詞成句）Step3Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.首先，……Tobeginwith,…Firstly…其次，……Secondly/ThirdlyWhat’smore,…Inaddition,…最后，……Finally/Lastbutnotleast,…Linking(連句成篇）Step4添加合適的過渡詞：DearLily,

Knowingthatyouhavetroubleadaptingtothenewlearningenvironment,Iamwritingtogiveyousomeadvice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,youshouldplanyourtime/takeadvantageof/makethemostofyourtimesothat

youwilladapttothenewlearningenvironmenteasily.Itwillbeagoodchoicetomakealistofallthehomeworkyouhavetodo.Afterquicklyfinishingyourhomework,youwillhavetimetodowhatyouwanttodo.Secondly,youneedtomakesomefriends,withwhomyoucanshareyourfeelings.Don’tbeafraidtotalktoothers.Theyarefriendlyandwillingtohelpyou.What’smore,youaresupposedtouseadictionarythatcanhelpyouunderstandsomeunfamiliarwords.Lastbutnotleast,askyourteachersandclassmatesforhelp,goouttovisitsomeplacesandenjoyChinesefood,whichwillhelpmesuittothenewenvironmentquickly.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Jack來信向你求助，說進入高中后因為考試壓力大。晚上常要難以入睡或半夜易醒，睡眼問題對健康和學習產(chǎn)生了不良影響。請你用英語給他寫一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示理解和安慰；2.提出至少2條建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJack,Knowingthat

,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you’dbetter

（建議1）

.（建議1相關的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

（建議2）

.（建議2相關的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

（建議3）

.（建議3相關的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHuaDearJack,Knowingthatyouarehavingtroublegettingagoodnight’ssleepasaresultofstressfromexams,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you'dbetterhaveabalancedlifestylewiththerightattitude.Gotobedandwakearoundthesametimeeachdayandavoiddrinksthatmaykeepyoufromsleeping,suchascoffeeandtea.Secondly,clearyourheadofstressandworryfromyourdaybeforebedtime.Lastbutnottheleast,an

examisjustawaytofindtheweaknessesinyourlearningprocess.Therefore,youdon'thavetoworrytoomuchabouttheresults.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHua假如你是李華，你的英國朋友San發(fā)來Email說，考試臨近時，他總會感到焦慮，請你給他回復，內(nèi)容主要包括：1.向Sam表示問候和安慰。2.提出建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJack,Knowingthat

,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you’dbetter

（建議1）

.（建議1相關的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

（建議2）

.（建議2相關的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

（建議3）

.（建議3相關的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,LiHua24DearSan,Knowingthatyoufeelanxiousbeforeexams,I’mwritingtogiveyousomeadvice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,youshouldplanyourtime.Onlyinthiswaycanyouarrangetimeefficientlyandknowhowlongasinglereviewingtaskwilltake.Ifyoucanreviewalltheknowledge,youwon’tbesoconcerned.Secondly,youneedtokeepapositiveattitude.Thatistosay,youneedtohaveconfidenceinyourselfandlookateverythingpositively.Thirdly,itisadvisableforyoutolistentomusic,takeexerciseandcommunicatewithyourfriends,whichhelpsyoutogetridofpressure.Inaddition,clearyourheadofstressandworryfromyourdaybeforebedtime.Lastbutnotleast,anexamisjustawaytofindtheweaknessesinyourlearningprocess.Therefore,youdon'thavetoworrytoomuchabouttheresults.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Jack來信向你求助，說進入高中后因為考試壓力大。晚上常要難以入睡或半夜易醒，睡眼問題對健康和學習產(chǎn)生了不良影響。請你用英語給他寫一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示理解和安慰；2.提出至少2條建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJack,Knowingthat

,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you’dbetter

（建議1）

.（建議1相關的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

（建議2）

.（建議2相關的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

（建議3）

.（建議3相關的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHuaDearJack,Knowingthatyouarehavingtroublegettingagoodnight’ssleepasaresultofstressfromexams,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you'dbetterhaveabalancedlifestylewiththerightattitude.Gotobedandwakearoundthesametimeeachdayandavoiddrinksthatmaykeepyoufromsleeping,suchascoffeeandtea.Secondly,clearyourheadofstressandworryfromyourdaybeforebedtime.Lastbutnottheleast,an

examisjustawaytofindtheweaknessesinyourlearningprocess.Therefore,youdon'thavetoworrytoomuchabouttheresults.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHua

假如你是李華，你的網(wǎng)友英國交換生Lily正在中國學習漢語。她發(fā)郵件向你訴說了她的困擾：不適應新的學習環(huán)境，很孤獨。請給她回復郵件，內(nèi)容包括：表示理解給予安慰；注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫1、交換生anexchangestudent;2、做某事很困難：havetroubledoingsth./haveproblemsdoingsth;3、適應新的學習環(huán)境：adapttothenewlearningenvironment;4、很孤獨：Youfeellonely.（Youarealone你很孤單）DearLily,Knowingthat

,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you’dbetter

（建議1）

.（建議1相關的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

（建議2）

.（建議2相關的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

（建議3）

.（建議3相關的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHuaDearLily,

Knowingthatyouhavetroubleadaptingtothenewlearningenvironment,Iamwritingtogiveyousomeadvice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,youshouldplanyourtime/takeadvantageof/makethemostofyourtimesothat

youwilladapttothenewlearningenvironmenteasily.Itwillbeagoodchoicetomakealistofallthehomeworkyouhavetodo.Afterquicklyfinishingyourhomework,youwillhavetimetodowhatyouwanttodo.Secondly,youneedtomakesomefriends,withwhomyoucanshareyourfeelings.Don’tbeafraidtotalktoothers.Theyarefriendlyandwillingtohelpyou.What’smore,youaresupposedtouseadictionarythatcanhelpyouunderstandsomeunfamiliarwords.Lastbutnotleast,askyourteachersandclassmatesforhelp,goouttovisitsomeplacesandenjoyChinesefood,whichwillhelpmesuittothenewenvironmentquickly.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua假如你是李華，你的英國朋友San發(fā)來Email說，考試臨近時，他總會感到焦慮，請你給他回復，內(nèi)容主要包括：1.向Sam表示問候和安慰。2.提出建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJack,Knowingthat

,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you’dbetter

（建議1）

.（建議1相關的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

（建議2）

.（建議2相關的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

（建議3）

.（建議3相關的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,LiHua33DearSan,Knowingthatyoufeelanxiousbeforeexams,I’mwritingtogiveyousomeadvice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,youshouldplanyourtime.Onlyinthiswaycanyouarrangetimeefficientlyandknowhowlongasinglereviewingtaskwilltake.Ifyoucanreviewalltheknowledge,youwon’tbesoconcerned.Secondly,youneedtokeepapositiveattitude.Thatistosay,youneedtohaveconfidenceinyourselfandlookateverythingpositively.Thirdly,itisadvisableforyoutolistentomusic,takeexerciseandcommunicatewithyourfriends,whichhelpsyoutogetridofpressure.Inaddition,clearyourheadofstressandworryfromyourdaybeforebedtime.Lastbutnotleast,anexamisjustawaytofindtheweaknessesinyourlearningprocess.Therefore,