【核心知識(shí)精講+能力提升拓展】高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫友情故事類+旅程中結(jié)下的深厚友誼課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)友情故事——旅程中結(jié)下的深厚友誼1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文ItwasaJanuaryafternoon.Mywife,SavitriandIsatontheSahyadriExpress.Asthetrainpulledoutofthestation,wecouldbarelyhideourexcitement.WewerefinallyonthewaytoahoneymoontoMatheran!Thiswasthefirsttimewehadenoughsavingstogoonatriptogether.ThetrainstoppedatNeral,wherewewereforcedoutofourreverie(白日夢(mèng)).Aswesteppedoutandstartedmakinginquiries,werealizeditwasunlikelythatwewouldfindatraintotakeustothemistyhillstationwehadbeendreamingofformonths.Theafternoongraduallysettledintoapinkduskaswesatinacorneratthestation,waitingfornewsofthetrainservicesasthecoldwinterbreezerattled(使緊張)ourbones.Weunwrappedsomebiscuitswhenalittlegirl,nomorethanfiveorsix,wentpastus,screaming,“ButIwantfood!Iamhungry!”Savitri'seyesturnedtothegirl’sfamily.Smiling,shecalledout-hernamewasMehrunisa，weoverheard-andaskedhertoseekherparent’spermissiontoacceptbiscuitsfromus.Leftwithnooption,herfamilyaccepted,Andwebeganchatting.4續(xù)寫原文Afterseveralhours,thetrainfinallyarrived.Weenteredalongside.Astheshortuphilljourneyprogressed,SavitriandIsoftlydiscussedourtrouble.ItseemedunlikelythatourreservationatRagdiHotelwouldstillbeheld.Asthetrainarrivedandwerosetobidthefamilygoodbye,Mehrunisa’sfather,Viraaz,suggestedthathewouldaccompanyustomakesurethatwehadaplacetospendthenight.Hehadoverheardouranxiousexchange.HisfamilyheadedtotheirguesthouseandViraazcamewithustolookforahotel.Tonoone’ssurprise,RagdiHotelwaspackedwithpeople.Themanagerofferedassistancebyplacingafewbedsinthecoalstorageroombutthecoldmadeituninhabitable.Agradualdread(恐懼)startedtoappearinmymind.5段首句Para1:Sensingourhelplessness,Viraazofferedtoputusupintheiraccommodationforthenight.Para2:Ourfriendshiphassincecontinuedfordecades.6Part2題目分析7點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)8續(xù)寫思路分析本文以乘坐火車旅行為線索展開(kāi)，講述了作者和妻子一起乘坐火車去度蜜月，在火車上因?yàn)樽屢粋€(gè)女孩吃餅干結(jié)識(shí)了Viraaz一家，到達(dá)目的地之后，由于當(dāng)?shù)刭e館已滿，無(wú)處可住，作者和妻子在Viraaz家的客房度過(guò)一夜，并從此結(jié)下深厚的友誼的故事。9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Sensingourhelplessness,Viraazofferedtoputusupintheiraccommodationforthenight.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“察覺(jué)到我們的無(wú)助，Viraaz提出讓我們?cè)谒麄兊淖√庍^(guò)夜?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼慥iraaz一家慷慨積極地為作者兩口提供居住服務(wù)。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2:Ourfriendshiphassincecontinuedfordecades.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“從那以后，我們的友誼延續(xù)了幾十年。”可知，第二段可描寫作者和Viraaz一家的友好往來(lái)。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索積極不知疲倦地——干活準(zhǔn)備——感謝——友誼發(fā)展——快樂(lè)——感悟12續(xù)寫素材可用詞匯：行為類①.干活：work/labour②.聚會(huì)：gottogether/meeteachother情緒類①.積極不知疲倦地：positiveattitude/positively/tirelessly②.快樂(lè)：behappy/feeljoyful13續(xù)寫素材可用句型：[高分句型1].Uponourarrival,Viraaz’sfamilyworkedtirelesslywithsuppliestomakeusfeelathome—foodwasquicklyheatedandsharedandblanketsbroughtoutforus.(運(yùn)用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ))[高分句型2].Itwasquiteawonderthatthisrichfriendshipbetweenfamiliesstartedwithjustahalf-eatenpacketofbiscuitsatatrainstation.(that引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句，it作形式主語(yǔ))14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Sensingourhelplessness,Viraazofferedtoputusupintheiraccommodationforthenight.“It’llbecrowdedandsmallbutIhopeyouwon’tmind,”hesaid.Iwassurprisedathisgenerosity.Necessityforcedustoagreeandwesetoffbyfoottowardstheguesthouse.Uponourarrival,Viraaz’sfamilyworkedtirelesslywithsuppliestomakeusfeelathome—foodwasquicklyheatedandsharedandblanketsbroughtoutforus.Theguesthousewasfilledtothreetimesitsusualcapacity,buteveryonemanaged.16范文呈現(xiàn)Ourfriendshiphassincecontinuedfordecades.Wephonedeachother,traveledtogetherseveraltimesandgottogetherregularly.ViraazevencametolivewithusinAhmedabadwhenheshiftedtothecity.Wefrequentlywentfishingtogetherontheweekend.Itwasquiteawonderthatthisrichfriendshipbetweenfamiliesstartedwithjustahalf-eatenpacketofbiscuitsatatrainstation.We’vebeenhappyaboutit.17范文譯文維拉茲感覺(jué)到我們的無(wú)助，主動(dòng)提出讓我們?cè)谒麄兊淖√庍^(guò)夜。他說(shuō)：“這里會(huì)很擁擠，很小，但我希望你不要介意?！?。我對(duì)他的慷慨感到驚訝。迫不得已，我們同意了，于是步行前往賓館。我們抵達(dá)后，維拉茲的家人不知疲倦地為我們提供物資，讓我們有賓至如歸的感覺(jué)——食物很快就被加熱和分享，毯子也被拿來(lái)給我們。賓館的客流量是平時(shí)的三倍，但每個(gè)人都能應(yīng)付。18范文譯文