高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫誤會(huì)故事類+粗魯男孩

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)誤會(huì)故事——粗魯男孩1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文TheRudeBoyJamesSeltonwasoneoftherudestboysinthevillagewherehelived.Ifapersoninthestreetwaswelldressed,hewouldcryout,“Dandy(花花公子)!”Ifaperson’sclothesweredirtyortorn,hewouldthrowstonesathim,andannoyhimineveryway.Oneafternoon,justastheschoolwasdismissed,astrangerpassedthroughthevillage.Hisdresswasplainandsomewhatold,butneatandclean.Hecarriedacane(手杖)inhishand,ontheendofwhichwasabagandheworeabroad-brimmed(寬邊的)hat.NosoonerhadJamesseenthestrangerthanhewinkedtohisplaymates,andsaid,“Nowforsomefun!”Hethensilentlywenttowardthestrangerfrombehind,and,knockingoffhishat,ranaway.4續(xù)寫原文Themanturnedandsawhim,butJameswasoutofhearingbeforehecouldspeak.Thestrangerputonhishat,andwentonhisway.AgaindidJamesapproach,butthistime,themancaughthimbythearm,andheldhimtightly.However,hecontentedhimselfwithlookingatJamesamomentintheface,andthenpushedhimfromhim.Nosoonerhadthenaughtyboyfoundhimselffreeagainthanhebegantopelt(連讀投擲)thestrangerwithdirtandstones.ButJameswasveryfrightenedwhenthemanwasstruckontheheadbyabrick,andbadlyhurt.Alltheboysranaway,andJamesskulked(偷偷摸摸走動(dòng))acrossthefieldstohishome.Ashedrewnearhishouse,hissisterCarolinecameouttomeethim,holdingupabeautifulgoldchainandsomenewbooksforhimtosee.ShetoldJames,asfastasshecouldtalk,thattheiruncle,whohadbeenawayseveralyears,hadcomehome,andwasnowinthehouse;thathehadbroughtbeautifulpresentsforthewholefamily;thathehadlefthiscarriageatthetavern(客棧),amileortwooff,andwalkedonfoot,soastosurprisehisbrother,theirfather.5段首句Paragraph1：Shesaidwhilehewascomingthroughthevillage,somewickedboysthrewstonesathim.Paragraph2：Hisunclewentuptohim,butstoppedsuddenlywhenseeinghisface.6Part2題目分析7點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)8續(xù)寫思路分析本文以人物為線索展開(kāi)，講述了JamesSelton是他住的村子里最粗魯?shù)哪泻⒅?，他?jīng)常捉弄他人。一天下午，放學(xué)時(shí)，一個(gè)陌生人經(jīng)過(guò)村子，James開(kāi)始捉弄這個(gè)陌生人，用磚塊擊中陌生人的頭部并受重傷。James嚇壞了趕緊回家，妹妹告訴他，他們的叔叔離開(kāi)這里多年，現(xiàn)在回到家里，并給他們?nèi)屹I了漂亮的禮物。9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Shesaidwhilehewascomingthroughthevillage,somewickedboysthrewstonesathim.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“她說(shuō)，當(dāng)他穿過(guò)村子時(shí)，一些壞男孩向他扔石頭?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫叔叔受傷的情況和James的擔(dān)心和害怕，不敢回家。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Hisunclewentuptohim,butstoppedsuddenlywhenseeinghisface.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“他的叔叔走到他跟前，但當(dāng)他看到他的臉時(shí)突然停住了?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫James的叔叔認(rèn)出來(lái)他。James向叔叔坦白了自己的一切，如釋重負(fù)，決定改掉自己低賤無(wú)理的舉止。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索意識(shí)到——害怕——羞愧——坦白——改正12續(xù)寫素材可用詞匯：行為類①.意識(shí)到：realize/beawareof/becomeawareof②.交談：talkwith/chatwith/haveachatwith③.坦白：confess/acknowledge/admit情緒類①.愉快地：happily/merrily/cheerfully②.羞愧：shame/disgrace13續(xù)寫素材可用句型：[高分句型1].Hearingthis,Jamesimmediatelyrealizedthatitwashethathurthisuncle.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)和賓語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2].Insidetheroomsatthestranger,orratherhisuncle,withhisforeheadboundup,talkinghappilywithhisfather.(運(yùn)用了倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)，with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ))14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Shesaidwhilehewascomingthroughthevillage,somewickedboysthrewstonesathim.Hewasbadly/severelyhurtandthewoundwasjustovertheeye.Hearingthis,Jamesimmediatelyrealizedthatitwashethathurthisuncle.Shamefulandfrightened,hedarednotstepintothehouse.Atthattime,heheardhisfathercallinghimtocomein.“Whatmakesyoulooksopale?”askedCaroline,changinghertone.Withpalmssweating,hehadnochoicebuttoobey.Insidetheroomsatthestranger,orratherhisuncle,withhisforeheadboundup,talkinghappilywithhisfather.WhatasenseofshamedidJamesnowfeel!Hangingdownhishead,hewalkedtoward/approachedhisuncle.16范文呈現(xiàn)Hisunclewentuptohim,butstoppedsuddenlywhenseeinghisface.Thenhecried,“Oh!It’syou!”Butwhenhisunclesawthepuzzledfather,heimmediatelyexplainedthathejustmetJamesinthestreet.Inaflash,Jameslearntthathisunclewasreadytoforgivehim.Butfacingsuchakinduncle,hecouldn’tconcealhisguilt.Havingconfessedwhathehaddonetohisuncle,Jamesfeltrelieved.Heneverforgotthislessonsolongashelived.Itcuredhimentirelyofhislowandinsolent/rudemanners.17范文譯文她說(shuō)，當(dāng)他穿過(guò)村莊時(shí)，一些邪惡的男孩向他扔石頭。他受了重傷，傷口剛好在眼睛上方。聽(tīng)到這些，詹姆斯立刻意識(shí)到是他傷害了他的叔叔。他既羞愧又害怕，不敢進(jìn)屋。這時(shí)，他聽(tīng)到父親叫他進(jìn)來(lái)。“是什么讓你臉色這么蒼白？”卡羅琳改變了語(yǔ)氣問(wèn)道。手掌冒汗，他別無(wú)選擇，只好服從。房間里坐著一個(gè)陌生人，或者更確切地說(shuō)是他的叔叔，他的前額被捆起來(lái)，和他的父親愉快地交談著。詹姆斯現(xiàn)在感到多么羞愧??！他低著頭朝叔叔走去。18范文譯文他的叔叔走到他面前，但看到他的臉時(shí)突然停了下來(lái)。然后他喊道：