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Teachingaims2015.10.5Inthisclass,youwill1.learnsomeusefulwordsexpressionandsentencestructures.2.gettoknowhowtomakeupasentence.3.polishyoursentence..

2015.10.5StepI:Preview[積累常誦]

“痛苦”【n】sadness/sorrow悲傷；depression沮喪；抑郁frustration挫??；loneliness孤獨(dú)【adj】sad/sorrowful悲傷的；frustrated挫敗的；lonely孤獨(dú)的；upset心煩意亂的；depressed抑郁的；沮喪的【adv】sadly悲傷地“哭泣【n]tear眼淚【v】cry哭泣；sob啜泣；weep流淚【a】dv.]bitterly傷心地“安慰”【n】patience耐心；warmth溫暖【v】comfort安慰；hug擁抱【adj】warm溫暖的；comforting令人安慰的【adv】patiently耐心地；gently溫柔地常見詞塊staypositive保持樂(lè)觀；silverlining不幸中的一線希望；beleftalone被留下單獨(dú)一人；belostinsadness沉浸在痛苦中staypositive保持樂(lè)觀；silverlining不幸中的一線希望；beleftalone被留下單獨(dú)一人；belostinsadness沉浸在痛苦中2015.10.5StepII:Self-learning[小試牛刀]1.教室里的每個(gè)人都興奮地在聊天，而簡(jiǎn)（Jane）獨(dú)自坐在角落里。

2.我能感覺(jué)到她沉浸在巨大的悲傷中，這讓我心碎。3.我?guī)е鴾嘏男?，走近并坐在了?jiǎn)的旁邊。4.我剛開口說(shuō)話，簡(jiǎn)就抬起頭來(lái)，眼淚順著臉頰流了下來(lái)。5.我輕輕地拍了拍她的背，耐心地安慰她。6.她告訴我她因?yàn)槟w色而被人嘲笑，我鼓勵(lì)她保持樂(lè)觀。7.每一片烏云都有銀邊。2015.10.5StepⅢ:Group-learning/StepⅢ:Further-learning[句式升級(jí)]1.教室里的每個(gè)人都興奮地在聊天，而簡(jiǎn)（Jane）獨(dú)自坐在角落里。（while引導(dǎo)并列句，意為“而”；形容詞作狀語(yǔ)）EveryoneintheclassroomwaschattingwithgreatexcitementwhileJanewassittinginthecorner，

alone.

withgreatexcitement=excitedly激動(dòng)地sitlonely副詞修飾動(dòng)詞；或者形容詞作狀語(yǔ)，放于句尾；Jane...alone.2015.10.5StepⅢ:Group-learning/StepⅢ:Further-learning[句式升級(jí)]2.我能感覺(jué)到她沉浸在巨大的悲傷中，這讓我心碎。（which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）Icouldsenseshewaslostinenormoussadness，

whichbrokemyheart.

belostin/beimmmersedin沉浸于...feel/sense感覺(jué)breakmyheart=makemyheartbroken使我心碎2015.10.5StepⅢ:Group-learning/StepⅢ:Further-learning[句式升級(jí)]3.我?guī)е鴾嘏男?，走近并坐在了?jiǎn)的旁邊。（動(dòng)詞－ing短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)）Wearingawarmsmile，IapproachedandsatbesideJane.

帶著微笑：wearawarmsmileputonawarmsmilewithawarmsmile在...旁邊besidesbnexttosbatthesideofsb走近某人approachsb/cometosb2015.10.5StepⅢ:Group-learning/StepⅢ:Further-learning[句式升級(jí)]4.我剛開口說(shuō)話，簡(jiǎn)就抬起頭來(lái)，眼淚順著臉頰流了下來(lái)。（nosooner...than引起的部分倒裝；with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）NosoonerhadIbegunspeakingthanJanelookedup，withtearsrunningdownherface.

眼淚流下來(lái):withtearsrollingdowntheface/cheekwithtearsrunningdowntheface/cheek一...就:NosoonerhadsbdonesththansbdidsthHardlyhadsbdonesthwhensbdidsthThemoment/Theminute+時(shí)間狀從2015.10.5StepⅢ:Group-learning/StepⅢ:Further-learning[句式升級(jí)]5.我輕輕地拍了拍她的背，耐心地安慰她。（動(dòng)詞－ing短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)）Ipattedhergentlyonherback，comfortingherpatiently.拍某人：patsbonthe/sb’sback/shoulder/knee耐心地：withpatience=patiently2015.10.5StepⅢ:Group-learning/StepⅢ:Further-learning[句式升級(jí)]6.她告訴我她因?yàn)槟w色而被人嘲笑，我鼓勵(lì)她保持樂(lè)觀。（tellsbaboutsth/tellsbthat...）ShetoldmeaboutherbeinglaughedatbecauseofherskincolourandIencouragedhertostaypositive.

嘲笑某人：laughatsb/makefunofsb/mocksb咕嚕某人做某事：encourage/inspiresbtodosth7.每一片烏云都有銀邊（黑暗中總有一線光明）。（暗喻）Everycloudhasasilverlining.

each/every/everyone做主語(yǔ)時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)2015.10.5StepV:Evaluation[學(xué)以致用]1.Whilearrivingatthedoor,greatconcernandhorroroverwhelmedme.（用nosooner...than句型改寫）NosoonerhadIarrivedatthedoorthangreatconcernandhorroroverwhelmedme.2.Icouldn’tcontainmyselfandburstintotears.（用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)改寫）Icouldn’tcontainmyself,withteasrollingdownmyface.3.Momshedtears(流淚)aswell.Shetouchedmyhairandwipedmytearsgently.（用動(dòng)詞-ing短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)合并句子）Monshedtearsaswell,touchingmyhairandwipingmytearsgently.Whatusefuls