2016年10月高考新題型解析-讀后續(xù)寫樣卷專項練

第二頁，共12頁。第三頁，共12頁。寫作步驟①審題：速讀閱讀材料和寫作要求，明確寫作任務。②讀文：細讀閱讀材料，確定文章體裁和題材(話題)。注意文中的關鍵詞，也就是故事中的時間、地點、人物和事件，特別要標記能描述事件發(fā)展過程的詞和短語。③謀段：先仔細閱讀續(xù)寫部分所給出的兩段段首文字，再構思這兩段要寫的段落大意。根據(jù)確定好的段落大意，選出每一段可能要用到的原文中帶下劃線的關鍵詞。結合這些關鍵詞，確定每一段的寫作要點。這兩段加起來要能寫出10到15個句子，以滿足續(xù)寫詞數(shù)要求。④初寫：按照第三步謀段時確定好的寫作要點進行初寫。寫作時要注意所用的人稱和時態(tài)要與原材料一致.另外，還要注意盡可能地減少表達上的語法錯誤。如果遇到語言上的表述困難(kùnnɑn)，可多參考原閱讀材料中的有關語句。⑤定稿：寫好初稿后，考生要結合原材料中故事線索讀一讀自己續(xù)寫的內(nèi)容。既要確保不出現(xiàn)與原材料相矛盾的地方，又要做到內(nèi)容上前后連貫，語句通順。最后規(guī)范謄寫并標出使用過的原材料中下劃線的關鍵詞語。第四頁，共12頁。One

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policemen

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(90)第七頁，共12頁。詞語：細節(jié)拼音：xìjié解釋：無關緊要的小事小節(jié)?！逗鬂h書·班超傳》：“為人有大志，不修細節(jié)?！奔毿〉那楣?jié)。孫犁《澹定集·與友人論傳記》：“古代史家，寫一個人物，并不只記述他的成敗兩方面的大節(jié)，也記述他日常生活的細節(jié)?！币仓肝膶W藝術作品中的細小情節(jié)的描寫。2016年10月浙江高考英語作文解讀第一節(jié)應用文寫作真題回顧假定你是李華。下學期你將作為交換生(exchangestudent)去加拿大一所高中學習，住在Lynn家里。請給Lynn寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：介紹自己；告知到達時間；詢問應做何準備。注意：詞數(shù)80左右(zuǒyòu)；可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。2.內(nèi)容分析第八頁，共12頁。3.參考(cānkǎo)范文Dear

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I’m

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while

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Thank

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wishes,Li

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tónɡ解釋：不相同；不一樣。南朝梁劉勰《文心雕龍·定勢》：“所習不同，所務各異，言勢殊也?！鼻笆耥f莊《關河道中作》詩：“往來千里路長在，聚散十年人不同?！泵珴蓶|《在省市自治區(qū)黨委書記會議上的講話》二：“他們想問題做事情的方法，他們的歷史習慣，跟我們不同?！辈煌??！端螘埳蹅鳌罚骸疤鹃L史何勗不同，欲席捲奔鬱洲，自海道還都?！薄赌淆R書·鄱陽王鏘傳》：“殿下但乘油壁車入宮，出天子置朝堂，二王夾輔號令，粲等閉城門上仗，誰敢不同？”不和。《后漢書·孔融傳》：“﹝融﹞與中丞趙舍不同，託病歸家?！钡诙?jié)讀后續(xù)寫真題回顧題型解讀和以往的高考英語命題作文不同，讀后續(xù)寫要求考生首先要讀懂已有信息，不僅能讀懂字面含義，還要理清文章的脈絡和關系。續(xù)寫這篇短文時，考生需要明白故事的發(fā)展進程、前因后果、地理位置變化、人物特征和情感(qínggǎn)等。在此基礎上，考生順著文章的思路，根據(jù)線索，發(fā)揮想象，對其后的情節(jié)進行合理預測，并用英語表達出來。同時，在組織語言時，切記使用5個以上給出的提示詞。故事主線已知線索：吵架——出走——迷路——失聯(lián)——自救——思念——尋路——直升機——飛離……拂曉……可續(xù)寫線索：失望？堅信？曲折？直升機？Tom？自救？獲救？參考范文第十頁，共12頁。One

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