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寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題專(zhuān)題六社會(huì)與文化Ⅰ.應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作申請(qǐng)信(2019·全國(guó)Ⅰ卷)假定你是李華,暑期在倫敦學(xué)習(xí),得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國(guó)畫(huà)展覽。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封信申請(qǐng)做志愿者,內(nèi)容包括:1.寫(xiě)信目的;
2.個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì);3.能做的事情。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Sincerely,LiHuaDearSirorMadam,I'mwritingtoapplytobeavolunteerfortheChinesePaintingExhibitionwhichwillbeheldinyourartgallery.①I(mǎi)thinkIamqualifiedforthisjob,becauseIhavelearnedChinesepaintingsincechildhood.②Besides,IamfluentinbothChineseandEnglish,whichisbeneficialforintroducingChinesepaintings.③IfIamluckyenoughtobechosenasavolunteer,IcanshowvisitorsaroundthegalleryandgetthemtoknowmoreaboutChinesepainting.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldoffermetheopportunity.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Sincerely,LiHua1.詞匯美:文章運(yùn)用了很多高級(jí)詞匯,如apply,bequalifiedfor,besides,bebeneficialfor,bechosenas,showsb.a(chǎn)round等。2.句式美:①句becauseIhavelearnedChinesepaintingsincechildhood為原因狀語(yǔ)從句。②句whichisbeneficialforintroducingChinesepaintings為非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。③句IfIamluckyenoughtobechosenasavolunteer為條件狀語(yǔ)從句。(2022·福州模擬)假定你是李華,正在新西蘭讀書(shū),得知學(xué)校計(jì)劃創(chuàng)辦一份中文報(bào)紙并招聘編輯。請(qǐng)你給相關(guān)負(fù)責(zé)人寫(xiě)一封郵件,申請(qǐng)擔(dān)任編輯。內(nèi)容包括:1.寫(xiě)郵件的目的;2.申請(qǐng)緣由;3.你的優(yōu)勢(shì)。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearSir/Madam,I'mLiHua.LearningthattheschoolisplanningtostartaChinesenewspaperandisrecruitingeditors,I'mwritingtoapplyforit.I'mconfidentthatI'mqualified.Firstly,IamsokeenontheeventsofourschoolthatIamcapableofeditingthestorieshappeningintheschool.Besides,IhavesuchagoodcommandofChinesethatIhavenodifficultyineditingarticlesinChinese.Lastbutnotleast,Iamgoodatartandphotography,soIcanmakeabeautifulpageforthenewspaperandmakeitmoreattractive.Ifchosen,I'llbedevotedtothejob.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua(2021·浙江卷1月改編)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Pumpkin(南瓜)carvingisafavoritefalltradition.WevisitalocalfarmeveryOctober.Inthepumpkinfield,Icompetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin.Mydadhasarulethatwehavetocarryourpumpkinsbackhome,andastheeldestchildIhaveanadvantage—Icarriedan85-pounderbacklastyear.Ⅱ.讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)Thisyear,itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonechosenbymy14-year-oldbrother,Jason,wasthewinner.Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint.[懸念1]Allofuswerehardatworkatthekitchentable,withmymomfilmingtheannualevent.I'munsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmyheadinsidethepumpkinwouldsettlethematter,butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthetime.Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.AtfirstIgotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,unwillingtoquit,mynosebrieflypreventedentry.FinallyImanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit,likeacork(軟木塞)forcedintoabottle.Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders.Myexcitementwasshort-lived.[懸念2]Thepumpkinwasheavy.“I'mgoingtosetitdown,now,”Isaid,andwithJasonhelpingtosupportitsweight,Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewheretorest.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardthangettingin.WhenIpulledhard,mynosegotintheway.IgotintoapanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse.“Ican'tgetitout!”Ishouted,myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosedspace.[懸念3]注意:續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。It
was
five
or
six
minutes
though
it
felt
much
longer.Dad
was
summoned.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________Mum
posted
the
video
online.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、理清文章大意關(guān)鍵:Who:theauthorandherfamilyWhere:athomeWhen:inOctoberWhat:Whosepumpkinwasthebiggest?How:Theauthorgotstuckinthepumpkinandcouldn'tgetfree.大意:本文講述了作者將頭伸進(jìn)了南瓜里,被卡住了,無(wú)論如何也無(wú)法掙脫出來(lái)。二、挖掘文中懸念點(diǎn)懸念1思考:作者一家忘記在取出南瓜心之前稱(chēng)重,作者又會(huì)用什么辦法證明自己的南瓜最大呢?懸念2思考:作者的興奮勁兒為什么馬上消失了?懸念3思考:作者最后是怎樣將南瓜取下來(lái)的?三、分析段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)段首句1思考:①爸爸被叫來(lái)了,他會(huì)想出什么辦法解救作者呢?②媽媽在做什么呢,媽媽是什么時(shí)候開(kāi)始拍攝的?③父母又是怎樣幫助作者的?段首句2思考:①媽媽拍的視頻受歡迎嗎?②作者又因?yàn)檫@個(gè)視頻受到了怎樣的影響?通過(guò)以上思路,預(yù)設(shè)續(xù)寫(xiě)情節(jié)如下:Paragraph1:爸爸被叫來(lái)→媽媽將這件事拍攝下來(lái)→爸爸媽媽幫忙→作者得救Paragraph2:視頻被上傳→視頻走紅→視頻對(duì)作者和家人的影響It
was
five
or
six
minutes
though
it
felt
much
longer.Dad
was
summoned.Iheardhimproposecallingthefiredepartment.“Staytuned,”saidMum;she'dmentionedshewasgoingtouploadthevideototheInternet,butitwasonlythenthatIrealizedshe'dbeenfilmingthewholetime.Thevideocutsbeforemyrescue—DadgotmetopushmyheadfartherintothepumpkinsoMumcouldreachinandundotherubberbandroundmyponytail.Iemergedwithsquash-conditionedhair,asorechinandmynosepluggedwithpulp.Mum
posted
the
video
online.Bytheendofthatday,ithadover1,000views.Bythethirddayweweregetting5:00a.m.callsfromTVbreakfastshowsandthentheinternationalmedia—thevideostartedrackinguphundredsofthousandsofviews.WhenIwentonayouthcamp,IwasrecognizedbychildrenI'dnevermet.Thepumpkinalsobecameaminorcelebrity.Passers-byandtrick-or-treaterswouldknockandask,“WhichistheHOTpumpkin?”beforetakingselfieswithit.1.使用恰當(dāng)?shù)男揎椩~讓描寫(xiě)更加生動(dòng)。①第一段中形容詞squash-conditioned,sore的運(yùn)用形象刻畫(huà)出了作者狼狽的樣子。②第二段中時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)Bytheendofthatday的運(yùn)用,強(qiáng)調(diào)出了時(shí)間之短暫。2.詞匯與語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)豐富、準(zhǔn)確。①使用很多高級(jí)詞匯,如propose,emergewith,rackup等,措辭風(fēng)格與原文保持了一致。②itwasonlythenthatIrealizedshe'dbeenfilmingthewholetime是一個(gè)強(qiáng)調(diào)句型,這是一個(gè)增分點(diǎn)。③非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞pluggedwithpulp,takingselfieswithit等的運(yùn)用使得句式變得簡(jiǎn)潔、流暢。閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Balthazarismypride.ItisaFrenchbrasserieinNewYorkCity.Ihaverunitfortwentyyears.Thoughitisintendedtoattractpeoplefromallwalksoflife,mostofitsregularcustomersarethosewhoworkinthecompaniesalongsideWallStreet.OnenightatBalthazar,fourWallStreetbusinessmenorderedtherestaurant'smostexpensiveredwine:a$2,000bottleofChateauMoutonRothschild,themostfamousbrandofBordeaux.OneofthetwowaiterstransferredtheBordeauxintoafancyglasscontaineratthewaiter'scounter.Meanwhile,ayoungcoupleorderedtherestaurant'scheapestredwine,an$18pinotnoir.Usually,peoplewhoorderedpinotnoirpouredthewinedirectlyintotheirglasses,butthiscoupleinsistedthewinebepouredintoafancyglasscontainerbeforetheydrank.Thesetwoverydifferentwineswerenowinthesamecontainers.Mistakingthe$18wineforthe$2,000Rothschild,thefirstwaiterpouredthecheapwineforthebusinessmen.Thebusinessmanhostingtheotherthreeconsideredhimselfawineexpert.Hetookatasteofthecheapwineinthefirstplace,andshowingoff,heburstintodelightaboutitspurity.“Fantastic!”heclaimed.Theyoungcouple,whoorderedthe$18pinotnoir,werethenunintentionallyservedthe$2,000Rothschildbythesecondwaiter.Ontakingtheirfirstdrinkofwhattheybelievedwascheapwine,theyjokinglypretendedtobedrinkinganexpensivewineandcopiedallthebehavioursofawineexpert,shakingthewineglasses,observingtheliquidinsideandtastingitslowly,totallyfascinated.Fiveminuteslater,thetwowaitersdiscoveredtheirerror,andhorrified,phonedmeathome.注意:續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。I
rushed
into
my
restaurant.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________After
comforting
the
waiters,I
walked
directly
towards
the
businessmen
with
a$2,000Rothschild.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】I
rushed
into
my
restaurant.Thetwopartieswereapparentlyenjoyingtheirdinnertime.Theyoungcouplewerehavingsomuchfunpretendingtobedrinkinganexpensivewine,whilethebusinessmenwerealsoi
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