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身殘志堅男孩參加越野跑目錄CONTENTS1讀原文

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填表格2讀P1P2首句

定情節(jié)發(fā)展列大綱

兩段12句法3寫句式

招招升級45寫句式

招招升級

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填表格1Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.

Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路線)throughthickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn’twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.Whatwaswrong?He

hadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool’scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.“Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,”heexplaineduncomfortably.“Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.”2022年新I卷真題原文

Ibitbackmyfrustration(懊惱).Iknewthecoachmeantwell—hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbody

rockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger—that’sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.

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填表格n.特點

（adj./v./短語）（主要）角色1aspecialeducationteacher（主要）角色2Davida10-year-oldboywithabraindisease（次要）角色thecoach；hisclassmates背景事件

Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.微情節(jié)

動作(v.)/情緒(adj.)

Daviddecidednottorun(p2)Iwasshockedandaskedthecoachtofindthereason(p4)Davidcametome(p5)I12讀P1P2首句

定情節(jié)發(fā)展

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme._______________________________________________________IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners._______________________________________________________2Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.P1大意Iencouragedhimtorunandheagreed.P1角色續(xù)寫思路角色I

David

動作(v.)

情緒(adj.)

讀P1P2首句

定情節(jié)發(fā)展I;David①WhatdidIsay?②Howdidhefeel?2③WhatdidIdo?④Whatdidhedo?P2大意P2角色續(xù)寫思路角色

動作(v.)

情緒(adj.)

讀P1P2首句

定情節(jié)發(fā)展Davidfinishedthecross-countryrun.David;I;classmates;thecoach

DavidI

classmatesandthecoach

movedproudcheeredhimup2IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.

rantrippedovernevergaveup列大綱：兩段12句法3Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.

列大綱：兩段12句法

1）

2）3）4）5）6）7）

8）9）10）11）12）思考：12句話中，有哪幾句是固定內(nèi)容？

3

列大綱：兩段12句法1）固定

2）3）4）5）6）固定

7）固定

8）9）10）11）12）固定

結(jié)局/升華主旨續(xù)寫首段首句續(xù)寫二段首句承接首段首句3Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.

列大綱：兩段12句法1）

2）3）4）5）6）

7）固定

8）9）10）11）12）

Hefinallyfinishedtherun.IencouragedhimTheracestarted.Iwasrelieved.Helookedatme,sayingnothing.Iencouragedhimagain.Hewasinspiredbyme.Hedeterminedtorun.Davidran.Davidwastrippedover.ClassmatescheeredhimupDaviddidn’tgiveup.3寫句式

招招升級4

寫句式

招招升級e.g.:1）Isaidgentlyandquietly,...2）Iaddedwithasinceretone.3）...,theyshoutedenthusiastically.招式1：籠統(tǒng)動詞變具體動詞

“說”say

-----“輕輕地說”

say

gentlyandquietly

“又說”add

“激動地喊”shoutedenthusiastically

4

寫句式

招招升級

e.g.:4）Hearingmywords,Davidturnedtometremblinglywithtearsspillingoutofhiseyesandexpressedhehadmadeafirmdeterminationtofinishthecross-countryrun.5）Classmatesallappearedontheracingtrack,cheeringforhim.招式2：

非謂語動詞常用句式：①Doing...,.....②with+n+doing/done/todo

③...,doing...

4

寫句式

招招升級e.g.:6）Davidinsistedonrunningasifhehadforgottenallhisweaknesses,thoughhewastrippedoverwithintheafewkilometers.招式3：asif/asthough

asif+haddone虛擬語氣

表示與過去事實相反的事情

4Step4.寫句式

招招升級

e.g.:7）

Itwashisbraveheartandstrongfaiththatcouldmakesomethingunusualhappenfinally.招式4：

強調(diào)句

Itwas...that...

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范文賞析5Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.Isaidgentlyandquietly,“Noonecanchangeyourmind,exceptyourself.Ifyoudesiretochallengeyourself,thereisnothingtodowithothers’thoughts.”Hesatstillwithadeepbreath.“Youhaveafullpreparationbeforethisevent,whichisthemostimportantreasonwhyyoushowuphere”,Iaddedwithasinceretone.Hearingmywords,Davidturnedtometremblinglywithtearsspillingoutofhiseyesandexpressedhehadmadeafirmdeterminationtofinishthecross-countryrun.

范文賞析5I