2024上海高考英語問題解決型寫作模板及方法指導(dǎo)（含名校真題）

山東高考英語指導(dǎo)寫作問題解決類專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練·模塊一問題解決型寫作·模塊二議論文（解決問題）常用句式·模塊三問題解決型作文模板·模塊四2020-2022年春季高考真題特訓(xùn)·模塊五2024屆上海名校模考題特訓(xùn)模塊一模塊一問題解決型寫作知識(shí)點(diǎn)一：?jiǎn)栴}解決型寫作【知識(shí)梳理】 此題型是先指出某一問題或現(xiàn)象,然后提出解決方法。此類型的論說文重心在解決問題上,但有時(shí)題目中也要求對(duì)問題產(chǎn)生的原因或引起的嚴(yán)重后果做相應(yīng)的描述,所以審題時(shí),要注意弄清作文段落間的合理比例。1. 寫作結(jié)構(gòu)指導(dǎo)問題陳述 分析(原因/后果) 問題解決 結(jié)論(期望/展望) 2. 常用句型問題陳述Recently/Nowadays,...hasbecomeaseriousproblemwehavetofacethephenomenon...hasarousedthepublic’sconcern. Thereisnodenyingthat...hasbecomeaseriousconcernamongpeople.分析(原因/后果) Thereareseveralreasonsfortheproblem. Thereareavarietyoffactorscontributingtothephenomenon.問題解決 Peoplehavefiguredoutmanywaystosolvetheproblem. Itishightimethatweshouldfigure/figuredoutwaystodealwiththeproblem.結(jié)論(期望/展望) Withthejointefforts,Iamconfidentthat... Aslongaswe...,wewillresolvetheproblemeventually.【例題精講】2020上海高考英語作文假如你是明啟中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，前幾日，你邀請(qǐng)你的好友王磊下周五去郊野公園一起欣賞露天音樂會(huì)。面對(duì)天氣惡劣、交通不便等原因，王磊一直猶豫不決。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)寫一封信說服王磊和你起參加。要求包括以下內(nèi)容：1.解決王磊的困擾2.音樂會(huì)的重要性01

題目綜述今年的高考作文題，基本延續(xù)了近年來上海高考英語作文的出題方式。作文話題以生活情境形式出現(xiàn)，同時(shí)需要借助信件寫作的模式來表達(dá)自己的一些看法和建議。02

審題要點(diǎn)①今年高考的話題依舊是圍繞著同學(xué)們身邊的生活來展開。同時(shí)也需要聯(lián)想一些細(xì)節(jié)來展開自己的描寫。例如，面對(duì)一場(chǎng)露天音樂會(huì)，同學(xué)們?cè)趯?shí)際生活中應(yīng)該不會(huì)陌生，但是關(guān)于露天音樂會(huì)的場(chǎng)景，有哪些有意思的方面，這需要大家在平時(shí)的生活中留意觀察。考試中時(shí)間有限，但是如果能夠展開合理的聯(lián)想，這對(duì)大家寫作非常有幫助。②寫作套用了近年來常用的信件套路，結(jié)合了實(shí)際生活的需要。這個(gè)和我們高考越發(fā)貼近實(shí)際生活場(chǎng)景這個(gè)大的方向是保持一致的。信件寫作的基本格式和結(jié)構(gòu)需要所有同學(xué)都能夠熟練掌握。

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③本質(zhì)上來看，這依舊是一篇議論文。高中英語寫作中，議論文的寫作同學(xué)們務(wù)必掌握清楚。細(xì)細(xì)讀來，這篇文章看似是在幫同學(xué)解決心中疑慮。如果落入這個(gè)陷阱，說明同學(xué)們?cè)趯忣}方面沒有看透本質(zhì)。其實(shí)這篇文章抓住議論文這個(gè)核心結(jié)構(gòu)就可以了：我們需要說服同學(xué)的點(diǎn)在于，

演唱會(huì)值得一看或者不可錯(cuò)過。這其實(shí)就是議論文的核心觀點(diǎn)，剩下的正文中寫出幾個(gè)核心理由并搭配補(bǔ)充的例子和解釋，那么這篇文章的基本脈絡(luò)就清晰可見了。

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實(shí)用結(jié)構(gòu)信件寫作的基本框架Greeting:Useanappropriategreeting(DearMr/Miss/Mrs/Ms...+lastname,orDear+firstname)Openingparagraph:

Usesetphrasetobeginyourletterandsaywhyyouarewriting(Howareyoudoing?Itwasnicetohearfromyou...etc)Mainpart:ThecontentofyourwritingClosingparagraph:Stateanythingyouwanttoemphasize.UsesetphrasestoendyourletterSignatureendings:Yours,allthebest,bestwishes...議論文的基本框架Introduction：Brieflyintroducethetopicyou'regoingtodiscuss.Sayhowyoufeelabout.Mainpart:(twoparagraphs)Choosetwomainaspectsoftheissueandwriteoneparagraphoneach.Explainyourideas/points,andgiveexamplesifpossible.Conclusion:Sumupbystatingyouroverallopinion.同學(xué)們只要把這兩個(gè)框架融匯起來合理使用，就是本文的基本大綱。04

參考范文DearWangLei,It’sbeenawhilesinceIheardfromyou.Lasttime,IinvitedyoutoattendtheconcertwhichwillbeheldnextFridayinthecenturypark.Thoughyoudidnotreplytome,thehesitationwearingonyourfaceofferedmeaglimpseofwhatwasgoingoninyourmind.Maybeitistherecentghastlyweatherortheterribletrafficthathinderyoufrommakingupyourmind.However,asfarasIconcerned,it’sstillworthourefforts.Thisconcertisnotapopmusicconcertbutaclassicmusiconewhereseveralprestigioussymphonyorchestraswillperformmanywell-knowncompositions.Itmustbeafeastforalltheaudience.Moreover,chancesarethatwemayhaveanalbumwithperformers’autographsonit.Youshouldnevermisssuchafabulousconcert!Intermsofdifficultiesyouareworriedabout,Ihavealreadyfoundsomesolutions.Myfatherwillbeavailableonthatdaysothathecandriveustothescene.Ihavemanagedtopersuadehimtomakehispromise.Inaddition,incaseofarainyday,Ihavepreparedtworaincoats.Iamconfidentthatwewillindulgeourselvesintotheelegantflowofnotes.Iamlookingforwardtohearingyourreply.Yours,LiHua例1.根據(jù)所給信息寫一篇關(guān)于JunkMessage的短文：目前垃圾短信泛濫,給人們的生活帶來困擾,分析這種現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因,談?wù)勅绾谓鉀Q這個(gè)問題。Junkmessagesareintheair.Peoplearecaughtupinaconstantrustlewiththem—youdeletewhiletheyarrive.Howunpleasant!Reasonsforsuchinconveniencevary.Somemaybecausedbybusinessbattleswherecompaniestakeadvantageofleakedpersonalinformationandusetextmessagesasawayofadvertisingwhileothersmayresultfromevilthoughts,includingteasingonesorevenblackmailingones.Stillothersareperhapsduetoineffectiveadministrationortechnologicalfailures.Whateverthecauses,theymustberemoved.Themostdirectsolutionistoturntophoneproducerswhomayequippedeachphonewithamessagefiltersoastoautomaticallyabandonthosejunkmessages.Butitmaynotbethemostfar-reachingsolution.Tohandletheproblemthoroughlywemayfirstsetupasupervisingnetworktodetectthespreadofjunkmessages.Secondly,lawsforpunishmentshallfollowtofightagainstthesebehaviors.Meanwhile,ourpersonalinformationmustgetbetterprotectiontoavoidbeingaimedataspotentialcustomers.Andfinally,thepublicshouldbeeducatedtorespectothersbystoppingthespreadofjunkmessages.Anti-junk-messagewarcanbedemanding,butitwillbeworththeeffortstofreepeoplefromtheconstantassaultpresentedbytheseunwelcomedvisitors.模塊模塊二議論文（解決問題）常用句式知識(shí)點(diǎn)二：議論文（解決問題）常用句式【知識(shí)梳理】IntroductionoftheissueWhenitcomesto____________,mostpeopleareinfavorof/maintain/hold/doubtquestion____________.Currently,thereisagrowingtendencythat___________________________.Withtherapiddevelopmentof___________________,anincreasingnumberofpeoplebegintonotice/realize/areaware______________________.Recently,thereiswidespreadconcern/controversyover___________________.Today,oursocietyiswitnessingmoreandmore______________________________.Standpointorpointofview.Asforme,Iamconvincedthat______________________________________________.AsfarasIcansee,itismoresensibleandreasonableto_______________________.Inmypointofview,nothingismore_________________thanto___________________.Manyofushavebeenundertheillusionthat_____________________.Acloseexaminationwouldrevealhowridiculousitisto_________________________.Contrarytowhatiswidelyaccepted,Imaintainthat__________________________.AsfarasIamconcerned,itmakesnosensetoarguefor_______________________.Facing(Facedwith.Confrontedwith)____________________,oneshould_______insteadof_________________.ReasoningoranalysisThereisadefinitelinkbetween_____________and_______________.________________willexert/produceaprofound(far-reaching)/undesirable/unimaginable/disastrouseffecton_____________________.Toomuchstress(emphasis)placedon____________inevitablywillleadto(giverisetoresultin)_______________.Manyfactorscontributetothephenomenon,ofwhich_______________playsaleadingrole.Comparedwith_____________,_____________tendto______________.Itisnotdifficulttounderstandwhythereissuchabigdifferenceif______________.Considering________________,itisnowonder________________________________.Speakingof________________,thedisadvantages(far)outweighitsadvantages.Unfortunately,______________hasbecomethevictimof_____________.SuggestionsandmeasuresGiventheseriousnessoftheissue,itismosturgentto__________________.Effectivemeasuressuchas________________mustbetakenbeforethingsgetworse._____________isworthatry.Tochange_____________,wecaneasily_____________________.Tochangethecurrentsituation,_______________isrequired/calledfor.Noeffectivesolutionisathandnow,butthegeneralawarenessofthevalueof____________mustbeenhancedatfirst.TransitionstructureTobegin/startwith,______________.Inaddition,____________.What’smore,______.Therearemanyreasonsbehindmydecision.Firstandforemost,______________.Ononehand,____________.lastbutnottheleast_____________________.Anotherequallyimportantreasonisthat__________________________._______________isacaseinpoint.Anotherexampleisthestoryof_______________.Whydopeople________________?Therootcauseis___________________.Otherreasonsinclude______________and________________.EndingItishightimethatweputanendto________________.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthat_________________.inaword/Inconclusion/Inshort/Tosumup/Toconclude,__________isthemosturgentthingatthemoment,whichrequiresusto_____________.Basedonthereasonslistedabove,noonecandenythefollowingideathat_____________.Withtheapproachof______________,_____________isboundtocome/happen/occurinthenearfuture.議論文（解決問題）注意事項(xiàng)問題解決型議論文的基本環(huán)節(jié)為：引出要解決的問題說明其嚴(yán)重性或必要性提出解決方案并分述理由提出可采納的建議以及展望前景其中1、3、5為核心部分；2、4根據(jù)題目要求和文章篇幅靈活變動(dòng)。文章務(wù)必做到中心論點(diǎn)明白扼要；分論點(diǎn)調(diào)理清晰并且有相應(yīng)的擴(kuò)展支持或?qū)嵗f明。在積累萬能句型、亮點(diǎn)詞匯的時(shí)候盡量避免陳詞濫調(diào)性的表述，能有選擇性的對(duì)好詞好句，進(jìn)行加工組合，形成自己獨(dú)一無二的“獨(dú)門秘籍”并在寫作訓(xùn)練中不斷磨練?！纠}精講】作文要求：你是王海,是學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)主席,最近你做了一次調(diào)查,發(fā)現(xiàn)你校學(xué)生都不愿在學(xué)校食堂(canteen)就餐,有的則把食物丟進(jìn)垃圾桶。請(qǐng)你以學(xué)生會(huì)主席的身份向校長(zhǎng)反映你調(diào)查的結(jié)果,并談?wù)勀愕目捶?。命題解讀：本文屬于多種文體綜合寫作,書信體的格式加上夾敘夾議,要求：1.書信體的格式; 2.對(duì)學(xué)生就餐情況作陳述或描述; 3.就此現(xiàn)象作議論。DearPrincipal,I’mWangHai,presidentoftheStudents’Union.Iamwritingtoyoutoreportanunpleasantphenomenonthatisgoingonintheschoolcanteen.Recently,I’veconductedaresearchandfoundthatmostofthestudentsinourschooldonotfeellikediningintheschoolcanteen.Someofthemeventhrowthefoodintotherubbishbin.Amongthefactorsthesurveypresented,themajorconcernslieintheslowpaceofthestaffsserviceandtheplaindishesoftheschoolcanteen①.Asstudentsintheseniorhighschool,we’reallbusywiththeschoolwork.Unfortunately,theinefficiencyofthecanteencostsustoomuchtime,whichmakesusturntofastfood.What’smore,wehavequitefewchoicesofdishes,andinfact,they’renotsatisfactoryinqualityandflavor,whichmayresultintheunpleasantwasteaswell.Inmyopinion,itishightimeforourcanteentomakesomeimprovements.First,thereshouldbemorewindowssellingfoodandamoreefficientmanagingsystem.Second,variousdishesshouldbeaddedtothemenuandthefoodqualityneedsimproving.Ontheotherhand,studentsshouldbeeducatedtorespectothers’laborandavoidwastingfoodinthefuture.Withthejointefforts,I’msurethatnexttime,thecanteenwillcomeasthebestchoicetosatisfythestudents’need②.Yourssincerely,WangHai結(jié)構(gòu)點(diǎn)評(píng)書信體的格式：日期、稱呼、正文、結(jié)束敬語和簽名五個(gè)部分完整正文部分先描寫現(xiàn)象后論述：1. 開門見山點(diǎn)明寫信目的：反映學(xué)生就餐情況,反映調(diào)查結(jié)果;2. 分析論述引起不良現(xiàn)象的幾個(gè)原因;3. 提出解決的措施;4. 對(duì)未來學(xué)生就餐情況進(jìn)行展望。語言點(diǎn)評(píng)第一段：一短一長(zhǎng)句(that引導(dǎo)的定語從句)交代了自己的身份和寫信的目的;接著用一長(zhǎng)(that 引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)一短句描述了學(xué)生就餐情況；第二段：①句總啟論述;用liein分析原因所在：食堂服務(wù)的慢節(jié)奏和食堂乏味的菜;用一 短一長(zhǎng)句(which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)分析第一個(gè)原因;What’smore連接兩個(gè) 并列的原因;用and連接的并列句和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句分析了第二個(gè) 原因；第三段：用“itishightimefor...todo...”提出解決的措施;用“First”“Second”論述食堂應(yīng)采取 的措施;“Ontheotherhand”表述從學(xué)生的角度應(yīng)采取的措施;三個(gè)并列的“should” 表達(dá)作者肯定的態(tài)度；第四段：“Withthejointefforts”承上啟下：概括第三段的三個(gè)措施;②句展望未來?！菊n堂練習(xí)】例文:1.目前盜版的現(xiàn)象比較嚴(yán)重2.造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因及危害3.我們應(yīng)該怎么做NowadaysitisgenerallyacceptedthatpiracyisbecomingmoreandmoreofaprobleminChina.Manyproducts,suchastape,CDandhi-techdevicescanbecopied.Shortlyafteranewly-developedproductisputonthemarket,peoplewillunsurprisinglyfinditspiratedcounterpartsinthestoresSpecialattentionshouldbepaidtothefactthatpiracyisbringinggreatdamage.Ononehand,piratedproductsoftencostfarlessthantheoriginalones,sotheyenjoyunbeatableadvantageinpriceinspiteoftheirrelativelypoorquality,andtheoriginalones,onthecontrary,sellpoorly.Ontheotherhand,inthelongrun,piratedproductsmayalsohavenegativeimpactsoncustomerssincethoseproducers’enthusiasmmaybegreatlyhurtasaresultofmoneyloss.Therefore,itishightimethatwesolvedtheproblemassoonaspossible.Manyawaycanbeadoptedtoreducethepiracyphenomenon.Firstofall,itisthedutyofthegovernmenttocalloneveryonetofightthebattleagainstpiracy.Inaddition,ascustomers,weshoulddevelopourconsciousnesstoresistpiratedproducts.Moreover,strictlawsanddecreesareofgreatimportance.Onlyinthiswaycanthisproblembesolvedradically.模塊模塊三問題解決型作文模板知識(shí)點(diǎn)三：?jiǎn)栴}解決型作文模板：【知識(shí)梳理】第一段：引出現(xiàn)象，并指出這種現(xiàn)象的后果引出現(xiàn)象的句型：[1].Recentlytheriseinproblemof/(phenomenonof)...hascause/aroused/capturedpublic/popular/wide/worldwideconcern.最近……現(xiàn)象的日益增多已經(jīng)引起了全世界/公眾/廣泛的注意。[2].Recentlytheissueoftheproblemof/thephenomenonofhasbeenbroughtintofocus.(hasbeenbroughtintopublicattention)最近……的問題已經(jīng)成為人們關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。[3].Nowadays,thereisgrowingconcernabouttheproblem/phenomenonthat……如今，越來越多的人開始關(guān)注……[4]Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofpeoplecometorealize／beawareoftheimportanceof…現(xiàn)在越來越多的人開始意識(shí)到……的重要性。[5]Nowadays,moreandmorepeopleareconcernedabouttheproblemof…現(xiàn)在越來越多的人開始關(guān)注……的問題。[6]Itisundeniable／Thereisnodenyingthefactthat…h(huán)asbecometheutmostconcernamongpeoplenowadays.不可否認(rèn)，……已經(jīng)成為人們最關(guān)注的問題。第二段：提出解決的辦法引出解決辦法的常用句型：[1]ConfrontedwithA,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething,(解決方法一).Foranother(解決方法二).Finally,(解決方法三).面對(duì)……，我們應(yīng)該采取一系列的措施來應(yīng)對(duì)目前的形勢(shì)。[2]Itisessential／indispensablethatproperactions／effectivemeasuresshouldbetakentoreversethissituation／trend.為了扭轉(zhuǎn)局勢(shì)，我們有必要采取有效的措施。[3]Itishoped／suggestedthatconsiderable／greateffortsshouldbedirectedto／focusedon…希望(據(jù)建議)我們?nèi)σ愿啊璠4]Thereisnoeasy／immediatesolution／approachtotheissueof…but…mightbebeneficial／helpful.并沒有很容易的方法來解決這個(gè)問題，……有可能會(huì)有幫助的。第三段：總結(jié)這樣做的好處常用句型：Only

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【例題精講】HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentobeIndependent？目前，不少父母為孩子包辦一切為了孩子的獨(dú)立，父母應(yīng)該。。。。。。

HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentobeIndependent？Nowadays,thereisagrowingconcernoverthephenomenonthatsomeparentstakecareofalmosteverythingconcernedwiththeirchildren,includingstudy,workandmarriage.Someparentsbelievethatthisislove,however,itisonlytodestroychildren’sindependencethoroughly.Forthefutureofthenextgeneration,moreeffortsshouldbemadebyparentstohelptheirchildrentobeindependent.Mostimportantly,parentsshouldhelptocultivatechildren’sawarenessoftheimportanceandnecessityofbeingindependent,whichissupposedtobeginfromchildhood.Inaddition,Childrenshouldbetaughtthatnoonecanbestrongerandmorehelpfulthanthemselvesinthisworld.Theimportanceofindependenceissoindispensableforusthatparentshadbetteractasatutor,notadictator.Andonlywithparents'trust,canthenextgenerationaccumulateconfidencestepbystep.【鞏固練習(xí)】TrafficintheCity1.交通是現(xiàn)代城市的一大問題2.噪音污染和堵車是兩大主要交通問題3.解決交通問題的手段有很多種Nowadaysitisgenerallyacceptedthattrafficisoneofthegreatestproblemsofamoderncity.Asmoreandmorepeoplebuytheirowncars,airpollutionaswellasnoisepollutionsbecomesmoreandmoreserious.Additionally,roadsarepackedwithcars,busesandbicyclessothattrafficjamisverycommon.Therefore,howtodealwithtrafficproblemisworthpayingmoreattentionto.Thefollowingwayscanbeadopted.Firstly,morestreetsandroadsshouldbeconstructed.Secondly,theprivatecarownershipshouldbelimited.Thirdly,undergroundtrainandcitytrainshouldbedevelopedquickly.Asforme,thenumberofprivatecarsshouldbeputundercontrol.Morecarsmeanmorepollution.Inaddition,morecarsareagreatchallengetoroads,asthebuildingofroadsisnotasspeedyadtheincreasingofcars.Inaword,itisadvisablethatlessmotorvehiclebeused.模塊模塊四2020-2022年春季高考真題特訓(xùn)2022年1月春考Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese假如你是明啟中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生李明。入冬以來，你們學(xué)校組織全校師生進(jìn)行晨跑，時(shí)間在7:30到7:50，休息5分鐘之后準(zhǔn)備上第一節(jié)課。但是有同學(xué)反映，晨跑后身體不適，因此校方委托學(xué)生會(huì)向同學(xué)們征集對(duì)晨跑的意見，請(qǐng)你向?qū)W生會(huì)寫封郵件。要求：你認(rèn)為晨跑安排中存在的問題；提出改進(jìn)的建議和理由。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________學(xué)霸作文（僅供參考）DearStudentUnion,Iamwritingthislettertoreflectontheschool'sorganizationofmorningrunningforallteachersandstudents.Gladthattheschoolorganizesmorningrunningforthehealthofstudents.However,somestudentsreflectedthattheywereuncomfortableaftermorningrunningwhichisanurgentproblemtobesolved.Tosolveit,myreasonsandsuggestionsareasfollows.Firstofall,itisinappropriatetosetthetimeformorningrunningfrom7:30to7:50inthemorning,becauseitisonly5minutesfromthefirstclass.Studentswillbeverytired,whichwillimpactthelearningefficiencyofthefirstclass.Meanwhile,justafterbreakfastinthemorningvigorousexerciseisnotsuitableforhumanbeings,otherwiseitwillcausestomachdiscomfort.Whynottrytoputthemorningrunningtimeinthebigbreakafterthesecondclass?What'smore.Ihold,beforeorganizingmorningrunning,weshouldgivestudentsacomprehensivephysicalexaminationtoensurethateveryone'sphysicalconditionissuitableforrunning.Wecanarrangesomeotherwarm-upexercisesforthesestudentsandteacherswhoarenotsuitableforrunningpreventingsomeunexpectedaccidents.Lastbutnotleast,theschoolshouldconsiderstudentswithphysicaldiscomforttoaskforleaveinadvanceandinformthereason.Inshort,whatmattersmostisthatphysicaleducationisacrucialpartofeducation.Onlybystrengtheningourbodycanwebetterprotectourcountryandbuildourmotherland.Ihopesincerelystudentscanexperiencehappinessinreasonablesports.Yours,LiMing2021年1月春考Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是明啟中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生王佳，你學(xué)校的教師Lucy準(zhǔn)備在高中開設(shè)關(guān)于“信息素養(yǎng)”（informationliteracy）的課程。課程包含以下四個(gè)板塊：“網(wǎng)站設(shè)計(jì)”、“大數(shù)據(jù)處理”、“辨別真?zhèn)涡畔ⅰ焙汀熬_搜索信息”?，F(xiàn)在向全體同學(xué)征求建議。請(qǐng)你給她寫一份電子郵件，要求：1.選擇兩個(gè)你感興趣的板塊；2.說明為什么選擇這個(gè)板塊的理由。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________審題:背景:學(xué)校將要開設(shè)“信息素養(yǎng)”課程(informationliteracycourse)任務(wù):作出選擇:(關(guān)聯(lián)性較強(qiáng)/自己有所了解的容易寫)“網(wǎng)站設(shè)計(jì)”(web-design)a“大數(shù)據(jù)處理”(bigdataprocessing)“精確搜索信息”(smart-internetsearching)“辨別真?zhèn)涡畔ⅰ?informationcredibilityevaluation)給出理由:(可以從興趣愛好、日常經(jīng)歷或社會(huì)現(xiàn)象寫起)“網(wǎng)站設(shè)計(jì)”:通過建立自己的網(wǎng)站來宣傳自己喜歡的事物或者推廣一些公益性的活動(dòng)，并且能夠在移動(dòng)設(shè)備上瀏覽?！按髷?shù)據(jù)處理”:課題研究要做調(diào)查、或者對(duì)于一些社會(huì)現(xiàn)象想要了解更多，甚至作為大學(xué)專業(yè)方向提前學(xué)起來?！熬_搜索信息”:平時(shí)接觸到太多無效、誤導(dǎo)或營(yíng)銷信息希望能夠省時(shí)省力、快速定位到自己需要的內(nèi)容。d.“辨別真?zhèn)涡畔ⅰ?讀新聞報(bào)道或科普文章不能確定真實(shí)性，僅靠權(quán)威信息源和常識(shí)未必夠用(可以提疫情期間和社交媒體)。參考范文：DearLucy,MynameisWangJia,asenior3studentattheschool.I’mdeeplyinterestedinthecourseininformationliteracythatyou'replanningtolaunch.SoI’mwritingthisemailtoinformyouofmychoiceofthetwosectionsI'dliketolearnabout,whichare“smartinternetsearching”and“informationcredibilityevaluation”.Tobeginwith,I'vebasedmydecisionontheexpectationthatthecombinationofthetwosectionscanleadmetomydesiredresults.Its,inmyview,self-evidentthatsearchingfortheinformationIneedandensuringtheauthenticityofitscontentareinterconnected.Inaddition,intoday'sdigitalizedworldandwiththeexpansionofsocialmedia,informationiseverywhereandmisinformationisprevalent.Thechallengethenistoseparatefactfromfalsehood，efficientlyandeffectively.TakepracticalpreventivemeasuresinthecaseofCOVID-19asanexample——thegeneralpubliccanbeeasilyoverwhelmedbyahostofseeminglyidenticalandpotentiallyfalsenewsreports.Consequently,ifproperlyinstructedinthebasicskillsofusinginformationtechnology,includinghowtopinpointwhatI’mlookingforandtoverilythatwhatI'vefoundisvalid,Imaybebetterpreparednexttimewheninurgentneedofaccurateinformation.Inanutshell,inthehopeofimprovingmyinformationliteracylevel,Iexpecttolearnmorefromyourcourseabouttheinformationworldandthewaysinwhichtosafelynavigatethroughitwithease.Thankyouforyourtimeandhaveagreatday.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Bestregards,WaneJia2020年1月春考Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese你是明啟中學(xué)李華，看到電視臺(tái)有報(bào)道說很多超市有大量臨近保質(zhì)期的食物，針對(duì)這些食物如何處理想征集觀眾意見，你很有感觸遂寫信給電臺(tái)，表達(dá)想法，信件內(nèi)容包含：1）對(duì)如何處理這些臨近保質(zhì)期的食品提出建議；2）提出這些建議的理由。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Towhomitmayconcern,Havingwatchedyourrecentreportaboutahugestockoffoodapproachingexpirydate,Vdliketooffersomesuggestionstohelp.TheChineseNewYearisaroundthecorner.Meanwhile,therearehousingandrailwayconstructionsitesrunningroundtheclock,wherehundredsofmigrantworkerssacrificetheirpreciousfamilyreuniontomeetthedeadline.IsuggestlaunchingaNewYearPurchasingProgramforthesebuildersofShanghai.Allowingthemaspecialdiscountonthefoodinthesesupermarkets.Shanghaicouldn'thavebeensuchacommercialhubandfinancialcenterbutforthesweatthesemigrantworkersshed.Thustheydeservesomefavorabletreatmentfortheirprimeyearsdevotedtothecity.Meanwhile,milk,bread,coffeeandsnacksareconsumedbymany,butareconsidereddearbythosewhosaveeverypennyfortheirfarawayfamilies.Thisprogramservesasatokenofourlocals*gratitude,respectstheirneedsandmaintainsthedignityofthem,fortheycandecidetheamountandsortoffoodtobuybythemselves.Lastbutnotleast,itservestheneedofsupermarketmanagersaswell.Bynomeanscantheyfindamoremeaningfulandaffordablewaytoaddressthisproblem.Isincerelyhopemyadvicecanhelpboththesupermarketsandthepeopleinneed.Thankyoufortakingitintoaccount.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua模塊模塊五2024屆上海名校模考題特訓(xùn)1．（2022秋·上海金山·高三上海市金山中學(xué)?？迹〥irections:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.你是明啟中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，最近在某雜志上看到一篇文章，文章里說到，現(xiàn)在的年輕人，包括高中生，只想過安逸的生活，他們習(xí)慣了索取而不是給與，也不會(huì)考慮到別人的需求和感受，請(qǐng)你給雜志社寫一封郵件，說說你是否贊成文章作者的觀點(diǎn)。你的文章需包括：1.你是否贊成作者的觀點(diǎn)；2.舉例說明你的理由。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Deareditor,I’mwritingtotellyouthatIquiteagreewiththewriterofthearticle.Firstly,Ithinkitisacommonphenomenoninoursocietynowadays.Withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingconditions,youngpeoplearegettingmoreandmorefromtheirparents,whichmakesthemjustwanttohaveacomfortablelife.Asaresult,mostyoungpeopleareusedtotakingratherthangiving.Inaddition,mostoftheyounggenerationaretheonlychildintheirfamilies,sotheygetmuchmorecareandlovefromtheirparentsthanfamilieswithseveralchildren.Sotheyareoftenthepersonswhoarecaredforbyothers,notthepersonswhocareaboutothers.Takemyselfasanexample,Iamtheonlychildinmyfamily.Myparentstakegoodcareofmeandletmeliveacarefreelife.Idon’tusuallyhavetocareaboutothermembersofmyfamilyinitiatively.Forthisreason,mostoftheyounggenerationseldomconsidertheneedsandfeelingsofothers.ThesearethereasonswhyIagreewiththeauthorofthearticle.

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Lihua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給雜志社寫一封郵件，就該雜志上的一篇文章發(fā)表一下自己的觀點(diǎn)，并陳述理由?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累首先：Firstly→Firstofall習(xí)慣：beusedto→beaccustomedto舒適的：comfortable→easy此外：Inaddition→What’smore2.句式拓展普通句變強(qiáng)調(diào)句原句：Forthisreason,mostoftheyounggenerationseldomconsidertheneedsandfeelingsofothers.拓展句：Itisforthisreasonthatmostoftheyounggenerationseldomconsidertheneedsandfeelingsofothers.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】I’mwritingtotellyouthatIquiteagreewiththewriterofthearticle.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)【高分句型2】Withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingconditions,youngpeoplearegettingmoreandmorefromtheirparents,whichmakesthemjustwanttohaveacomfortablelife.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句)2．（2022秋·上海·高三上海市敬業(yè)中學(xué)?？迹〥irections:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120