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ContinuationWriting——howtodevelopthestoryreasonably(合理地謀篇布局)Whyshouldwehavethislesson?Sometypicalproblemsinyourwriting:1.文章走向有時跑偏2.走向正確時情節(jié)離奇3.情節(jié)基本到位時兩段之間銜接生硬Takeastoryasanexampletosolvethisproblem.ILeadinThisisawallet.Whatdopeopleusuallykeepintheirwallets?Haveyoueverlostyourwallet?Howdidyoufeel?Whatdidyoudo?IIReadformainideaWhenandwhere,whodidwhatandhowdidhefeel?mainidea:OnacoldJanuarynightinSanFrancisco,theauthorwalkeddownanemptystreetandlosthiswallet.Andhefeltveryanxious.Tipsforwriting#1Findoutkeyelementsofastory:WhenWhereWhoWhatHow/WhyIIIReadforplotandemotionBeginning(開端)Risingaction(發(fā)展)Climax(高潮)Fallingaction(情節(jié)緩延)Ending(結(jié)局)I
dealingwithmypart-timejobandacting.washavingtroubleAsI
emptystreets,I
running.walkeddownbeganNotuntilI
myapartmentdidI
mywalletwaslost.reachedrealizePara4:SoItookactionimmediately.Para5:Avoicefromtheinsideofthegarbagetruckcaughtmyattention.sick,tired,abandonedsmallnervous,anxiousTipsforwriting#2Drawtheplotandemotionlinethroughverbsandadjectives.Tipsforwriting:#3Bearthemainideaandwritingpurposeinmindwhensettingthetoneofyourstory.Wouldtheauthorgetthewalletbackandbepositive?Wouldtheauthorlosehiswalletandbenegative?IVReadtosetthetoneWhydoestheauthorwritethisstory?Toinspirereadersandhimselftoadoptapositiveattitudetowardslife.writingpurpose:orTheauthormaybeinspiredbysomethingpositiveintheprocessoflookingforwallet.setthetoneVReadtoplantheplot④SoItookactionimmediately.⑤Avoicefromthegarbagetruckcaughtmyattention.Tipsforwriting:#4Designyourplotbasedonkeywords(verbsandnouns)oftwogivensentences.WhatactiondidItake?WhatdidIthinkaboutwhenlookingformywallet?HowdidIfeelduringtheprocess?I
whereIheardthenoise,
thestreetcarefully.Theideaoflosingmywallet
inmymind.Iamstuckin
and
.rushedbacktosearchingbouncedarounddepressionanxietyVReadtoplantheplot⑤Avoicefromthegarbagetruckcaughtmyattention.Whydiditcomefromthegarbagetruck?Whatwouldtheauthordoafterwards?Whatkindofvoicewasit?Amanwitha
lookinhiseyescalledme
.kindinamildvoiceTheman
thathe
thewalletwhenhewas
andthathewaswaitingforsomeoneto
it.Ialmost
tomyfeet,extending
tohim.explainednoticeddoingcleaningjumpedsinceregratitudefetchVReadtoplantheplotIfinthefirstactyouhavehungagun
onthewall,theninthefollowingactitshouldbefired.Otherwisedon’tputitthere.契訶夫之槍:敘事中提及的每一個元素都應(yīng)該在后文出場,不然就沒有必要提及。Tipsforwriting:#5Findoutthegunsandfirethem!(Respondtothedetailsmentionedinthegivenmaterial.)VReadtoplantheplot④SoItookactionimmediately.WhatactiondidItake?Tolinkwithnextparagraph,inthelastsentenceofthisparagraph,youshouldmentiontheappearanceofthegarbagetruck!⑤Avoicefromthegarbagetruckcaughtmyattention.WhatwasIthinkingaboutwhenlookingformywallet?HowdidIfeelduringtheprocess?IrushedbacktowhereIheardthenoise,searchingthestreetcarefully.Theideaoflosingmywalletbouncedaroundinmymind.Iamstuckindepressionandanxiety.VIDesignyourendingTipsforwriting:#6Makesuretheendingiscoherent(連貫的)withplots.對話式結(jié)尾:Isaidtotheman,“it’syourgeneroushelpthatoffermehope.”感悟式結(jié)尾:Irealizedthatthecitycouldn’tbeabadplaceaslongaspeoplewerewillingtohelpeachother.環(huán)境襯托式結(jié)尾:Withthedimlightshiningonthestreet,awarmcurrentwelledupinmyheart.自然結(jié)尾:Immersedinthedelightofdiscoveringmeaningoflife,Iinspiredmyselftoadoptapositiveattitudetowardeverything.VIIWriteyourstorySoItookactionimmediately.
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_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Avoicefromtheinsideofthegarbagetruckcaughtmyattention.l
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Payattentiontodescriptionofactionandemotiontomakeyourplotsmorevivid.注意動作描寫和情緒描寫WhatactiondidItake?Inthelastsentenceofthisparagraph,youshouldmentiontheappearanceofthegarbagetruck!Whydiditcomefromthegarbagetruck?Whatwouldtheauthordoafterwards?Whatkindofvoicewasit?WhatwasIthinkingaboutwhenlookingformywallet?HowdidIfeelduringtheprocess?Thereisalwayslightattheendofthetunnel.Homework:PolishyourlanguagePolishyourlanguageandpayattentiontothetransition(過渡)tomakeyourstorydevelopsmoothly(流暢地)andreasonably(合理地).Thanksforyourlistening.VIIIAppreciateapossibleversionSoItookactionimmediately.Withbutterfliesinmystomach,IranoutofthedoorandbacktowhereI’dheardthenoise.Ibentdown,searchingthestreetcarefullybythelightofshiningstreetlight.AlthoughIsearchedthesidewalkwithgreatanxiety,mywalletwasnowheretobefound.Theideaoflosingmywalletbouncedaroundinmymind,makingmestuckindepression.IwasthinkingofgivingupthesearchwhenIheardthegarbagetruckpulluptothesidewalknexttome.Avoicefromtheinsideofthegarbagetruckcaughtmyattention.Thenamanwithanamusedlookinhiseyescameoutfromthetruck.“Isthiswhatyou’relookingfor?”heasked.Witnessingthisscene,Ialmos
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