Unit 5 Period 6 Writing Workshop 課件 高中英語新北師大版必修第二冊（2023~2024學(xué)年）

北師大必修第二冊Unit5(

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Let’stalkWhatdisastercanyouseeinthefollowingvideo?1.能掌握與災(zāi)難名稱和地震相關(guān)的詞匯；2.能靈活運用祈使句表達災(zāi)難中的求生建議；3.能掌握應(yīng)急手冊的結(jié)構(gòu)和語言特點，寫一篇應(yīng)急手冊。課堂學(xué)習(xí)GetreadyforwritingWhichdisasterdoyouwanttowriteabout?Whatadvicewouldyougiveonsurvivingit?

Youaregoingwriteabrochureaboutsurvivingadisaster.Discusswithyourpartner.ReadforwritingReadthepassage.Underlinewhatyoushoulddowhenyou’reindoors,outdoorsandinacar.2FocusonstructureandlanguageReadbrochureagain.Completethetable.3HowtoSurviveanEarthquakeSituation1Situation2Situation3Ifyou'reindoorsIfyou'reoutdoorsIfyou'reinacarDon'trun,butprotectyourself.Drop,coverandholdon.Moveawayfromanythingthatcanfall.Findashelterwhereyoucanstay.Waitbeforemovingtoanotherplace.Stop.Stayseated.Drivecarefullywhenthequakestops.LookattheSentenceBuilder.WriteafewsentencesthatyoumaywanttoincludeinyourbrochureaboutDosandDon’tsforsurvivingaparticulardisaster.4ImperativesforDosandDon'tsDosDropdownontoyourhandsandknees.Coveryourheadandneckwithyourhands,armsorhardobjects.Don'tsDon'ttrytorunoutofthebuildingduringanearthquake.SentenceBuilderPre-writing宣傳冊一、定義生活中各種宣傳冊隨處可見，例如：產(chǎn)品宣傳、節(jié)目介紹、旅游指南、操作指南、生活常識宣傳，還有各種自然災(zāi)害預(yù)防和救援知識宣傳等。這類小冊子屬于指導(dǎo)性說明文，旨在為讀者提供未知的知識和原理，或使讀者閱讀后對文章所闡述的事理有所了解，或使讀者掌握解決問題的方法。知識性和科學(xué)性是這類說明文的主要特點，是一種實用性很強的文體。二、注意事項

（1）正確運用時態(tài)。說明文的時態(tài)常用一般現(xiàn)在時。（2）突出寫作重點。在寫作時，要抓住對象的本質(zhì)特征，重點描述，做到“突出重點”。（3）優(yōu)化文章結(jié)構(gòu)?？刹捎谩翱傄环帧?、“總一分一總”等結(jié)構(gòu)以使文章層次分明、條理清晰。如在文章開頭先對需要說明的對象作總體介紹，然后通過舉例子、做比較、列數(shù)字等方法進行具體闡述。也可以附上圖形、圖片或簡筆畫等。（4）選好說明順序。根據(jù)說明對象的不同安排，可采用時間、空間、邏輯等說明順序，使文章通順、連貫，給人一種一目了然的感覺。（5）體現(xiàn)文體特點。說明文的語言要簡潔、準(zhǔn)確而且富有邏輯性。在寫作中可適當(dāng)穿插一些祈使句、省略句等句式結(jié)構(gòu)。UsefulExpressions三、

常用表達First,Second,Third,Atlast...First,Next,Then,Finally…Firstly/Firstofall/Tobeginwith...Secondly...Besides/Inaddition...Lastbutnotleast...Dos...Don'ts...Ifyouare...,do...Wecandrawtheconclusionthat...Inshort/Inbrief/Inaword...Itseemsclearthat…Wecanknow/learnthat.….ComposeyourwritingComposeyourwritingOutlining寫大綱Drafting撰寫內(nèi)容Editing修改潤色Howtowriteacomposition?OutlingComplete

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profilebasedonActivities3and4.5While-writing標(biāo)題式提綱：寫出行文各段的標(biāo)題DraftingUseyouroutlineandtheWritingHelptowriteyourfirstdraft.6WritingaBrochureIt'simportantto:beclearanddirect;usesimpleandclearlanguage.Maketheinformationeasytoremember;giveadvicewithreasonsforactionsindifferentsituations;usethepresenttenseandimperatives;includepicturesandkeywordstoshowtheimportantactions.WritingHelp根據(jù)提綱內(nèi)容，寫出每段小標(biāo)題。然后再進一步詳細闡述。Editing

Edityourbrochureinpairs.Thensharewhatyouhavewritteninclass.7Doesthewriterfocusonacleartopic?Doesthewritermakeclearanddirectpoints?Doesthewriterusesimpleandclearlanguage?Doesthewritergiveadvicewithreasonsfordifferentsituations?Doesthewriterusethepresenttenseandimperatives?SampleHowtosurviveatornadoItisoftensaidthattornadoesarenature'smostviolentstorms.Whenatornadostrikes,youreverychoicecanmeanthedifferencebetweenlifeanddeath.SurvivinginabuildingMoveimmediatelytoanundergroundshelter,wheneverpossible.Atthefirstsignofatornado,orifatornadowarninghasbeenissued,stopwhateveryou'redoingandseekappropriateshelterimmediately,evenifyoudon'tseeatornado.Awarningmeansanactualtornadohasbeensightedorindicatedbyradar.Stayinawindowlessroomonthelowestlevel,ifyoucan'tgounderground.Inabuildingwithnobasement,avoidwindowsandgotothelowestfloor.Alternatively,seekshelterinasmallroomthatislocatednearthecenterofthehouse,underastairwell,orinaninteriorhallwaywithnowindows.Regardlessofwhereyouare,crouchlowtothegroundorliedown,facedownandcoveryourheadwithyourhandsandarms.Takecoverunderastrongtableifpossible,andcoveryourselfwithamattress,cushions,orblankets.Knowwherenottoseekshelter.Notallhidingspotsarecreatedequally.Thefollowinglocationsshouldbeyourabsolutelastresortduringatornado,astheyallhavethepotentialtobeseverelydamagedbyhighwinds.SurvivingoutintheopenKnowthewarningsignsofpotentialtornadoes.Beingabletoquicklydetermineyourriskisoneofthekeystepstofindingshelterandsurviving.Unfortunately,therearefewprovenwaystostaysafeintheopenifcaughtinatornado,andthenumberoneadviceistofindshelterassoonasyouseethesewarningsigns.Mosttornadoesareaccompaniedbythunderstorms,hail,and,ofcourse,highwinds,butthereareotherthingstolookoutforaswell.Drive,ifpossible,tothenearestshelter.Ifyouhearthewarninganditisstillsafetodrive,gettotheclosestbuildingyoucanfind.Keepyourseatbeltonandgetofftheopenroadassoonasyoucan.Turnonyourhighbeamsandmoveimmediatelytosomesortofstructure,preferablywithabasement.Youarealmostalwaysbetteroffinabuildingthaninyourcar.PreparingforatornadoPayattentiontotornadowatchesandwarnings.Atornadowatchmeansthatthereisathreatoftornadoeswithinyourareaandthatyo