Unit 3 Sports and Fitness Reading for Writing 課件-高中英語人教版必修第一冊

Unit3SportsandFitnessReadingforWritingLearningobjectivesStudentswillbeabletodescribetheirhealthproblemandthesolutiontheyadopt;Studentswillbeabletodescribethedifferencesbetweenthepastandthepresent,finallytakingapositiveattitudetolife;Studentswilllearnhowtowriteacomparativeandcontrastivetext;Studentswillgivefeedbackontheirpartner’sdraftsfollowingthefirstdraftchecklistandrevisestheirownfirstdrafts.wellnessthegeneralconditionofbodyandmindphysicalhealthmentalhealthDoyouthinkyouarefit?

Thestudentsexchangeideasabouthealthandfitnessinawellnessbook.Lead-inGoingPositiveWhatproblem

didKaylahaveinthepast?Whatdoesthesentence“Ialmostwentbananas”mean?Whatmadeherchangeherthinking?ReadingforinformationShewasworriedaboutherweightandappearance.A.thefoodyouregularlyeatanddrinkB.alimitedorcontrolledamountoffood√5:2diet:toeatnormallyfor5daysoftheweek,butonlyeatverylittleontheothertwodays.shenearlywentcrazybecauseshewassoworried,andtriedvariousmethods.aturningpointproblemweightandlooksturningpointThepastThepresentactions(verbs)resultsanarticlethatsaidinsteadofasking“AmIfat?”peopleshouldbeasking“AmIfit?”worriedaboutmyweighttriedeverynewdietcutoutthefood…comparedmyselfwith…lookedforthings…wrongwithIalmostwentbananas.negativerun

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push-upsaddhealthyfoodstomakealistof…Ilikeabout…Ibecomebothhappierandhealthierpositivehealthyin________bodyhealthyin________mindGoingPositivemeansbecominghealthybothinbodyandmind.ReadingfororganizationPara.1Para.2Para.3changesinthinkingandactionsimprovementinwellnessgeneralstatementofproblemWritingtip1:Thetextiswell-organisedwiththeselinkingwords.what'smore,besides,thus,although,foronething,foranotherfirstly,…secondly,…lastly…MatchthemainideaHowdoestheauthorshowherpositivechanges?A.Bygivingexamples.B.Byaskingquestions.C.Byshowingdifferences.D.Bylistingsomedata.√Writingtip2:Describethepositivechangesbymakingcomparison.=makeacomparison(作比較)ReadingfororganizationUnderlinethewordsandphrasesusedinthetexttoshowdifferences.ratherthan，insteadofbut，instead…h(huán)owever/though,differentfrom,ontheotherhand…moreexpressions:ThenIreadanarticlethatsaidinsteadofasking“AmIfat?”Ishouldbeasking“AmIfit?”Ihadnoideaalettercouldmakesuchadifference!OnceIstartedthinkingaboutfitnessratherthanweight,thingsbegantochange.Insteadofsaying“Iwanttolosethreekilos”,Iwouldsay“Iwanttoruntwokilometresineightminutes”or“Iwanttobeabletodo30push-ups”.RatherthancuttingoutthefoodsIenjoyed,Iaddedhealthyfoodstomymeals.Icouldstillhaveaburgernowandthen,butIwouldaddasaladoranapple.Finally,Istoppedcomparingmyselfwithactressesandmodelsandlookingforthingsthatwerewrongwithmyfaceorbody.Instead,ImadealistofthethingsIlikedaboutmyself.Bybeingpositiveaboutmyselfandmybody,Ibecamebothhappierandhealthier.

Writingtip3:Makeacomparisonwiththeseusefulexpressions.Readingforlanguage

Whatdoyouthinkarethemostimportantchangesforhertobemorepositiveandwhy?wellnessproblemweightandlooksturningpointThepastThepresentactions(verbs)resultsGoingPositiveratherthan,insteadof,but，instead…Tip1:Describethepositivechangesbymakingcomparison.Tip2:Makeacomparisonwiththeseusefulexpressions.Tip3:Makethetextwell-organisedwithlinkingwords.languagecontent+++toliveahealthylifebothphysicallyandmentally.ConclusionFoodExerciseStressSelf-confidenceWhathealthproblemsdoyouhave?

Writinglackofexercise;hatesports;can’tsticktodoingexercises;toomuchjunkfood;Obesity(肥胖癥)toopickyaboutfood;nothaveabalanceddietNobreakfast;alwaysondiet;feeldepressed(沮喪的)can’tdealwithstress;can’tsleepwellbecauseofanxiety;Can’tbalancestudyandlifenotconfidentaboutthefigure(身形),thelook,andevenmyselfHowcanyoumakeyourmealshealthier?ExerciseStressSelf-confidenceDiscussion:Whatchangeswillyoumaketosolveit?FoodWhatcanyoudotomakeexercisemoreenjoyableandconsistent(持續(xù)的)?Howdoyoumanageyourstressandbalanceyourstudyandlife?Whatcanyoudotobecomemoreconfidentandfeelbetteraboutyourself?Writeaparagraphaboutchangesyouwanttomaketoleadamorepositivelifestyle,usinganappropriatetone.(50-70words)Structure:yoursituation1-2sentenceschangestomake3-4sentencestheoutcometoachieve1-2sentencesFirstDraft________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WordBanksInstead,…;insteadof;ratherthan;but/however/though;stillCriteria(標準)foryourcompositionYesNoDidyoustartwithgeneralstatementoftheproblem?

Didyoudescribethechangesinthinkingandactions?

Didyoutellthereaderhowthechangesimproveyourlife?Didyoumakeacomparisonwithusefulexpressionslearnedinclass?

Didyoumakethetextwell-organisedwithlinkingwords?Doesthewriteruseagoodstructure?(introduction,body,conclusion)Doesthewriterusethelanguagefromthewordbank?Doesthewritermakeanyspellingmistakes?Doesthewritermakeanygrammarerrors?ExchangethedraftsAssignmentforthewriterImproveyourfirstdrafttakingintoaccountthecorrectionsandcommentsmadebyyourpeer.Writeaseconddraftwithimprovement.ChecklistfortheeditorIalwaysfeltanxiousandstressfulatseniorhighschoolatfirstbecauseIwasafraidofbeingleftbehind.IwasworriedaboutsomanythingsthatIcouldn’tsleepwellandfocusonmystudy.Then,Ireadabookcalled“WhoMovedYourCheese”whichmademerealizethatmakingchangescanmakeadifferencetolife.Insteadofjustworryingaboutmystudy,Iwouldmakeascheduleformystudyandfinishtheto-dolist.Ratherthanbeinganxiousthewholeday,Iwoulddosomeexercisesregularlyandlistentomusictorelievemystressandtirednessafterstudying,whichalsohelpedmefeelmoreenergetic.Now,Istoppedfeelingupsetaboutsomethingnew.Instead,Iwouldalsoalwaysremindmyselftosmileasoftenaspossibleandstaypositiveabouteverythingthatisgoingtohappen.OnePossibleVersionHomeworkFinishyour

writing.makeadifference有作用或影響［熟讀深思］Changingschoolsmadeagreatdifferencetomylife.轉(zhuǎn)學對我的一生有著重大影響。Whatevershesayswillmakenodifferencetoourarrangements.無論她說什么，都不會對我們的安排有影響。WordsandExpressions[詞匯搭配]對……有影響/有作用______________________對……無影響/無關(guān)緊要_____________________makeadifferenceto…makenodifferenceto…［熟讀深思］Ibelieveanyonecanmakeitifhetrieshard.(詞義___________)Ithinkwe'lljustmakeitifwehurryup!(詞義______________)Itdoesn'tmakesensetoarguewithhim.(詞義_____________)Johnwasn'tmakingmuchsenseonthephone.(詞義____________)取得成功準時到達沒意義表述清楚[學以致用]KobeBryantisoneofmanyexamplesofyoungpeoplewhoaremaking____differenceintheworld.Whetheritrainsornotmakesnodifference____thegame.均衡飲食對你的健康很有作用。(翻譯)toaEatingabalanceddietmakesagreatdifferencetoyourhealth.Abalanceddietmakesagreatdifferencetoyourhealth.ratherthan而不是［熟讀深思］Heisanexplorerratherthanasailor.與其說他是一個海員，不如說他是一個探險者。Hewouldrathersufferdeaththanbetraythesecret.他寧死也不肯泄露機密。Hepreferredtostayathomeratherthangowithus.他喜歡待在家里，而不愿跟我們走。[詞匯搭配]而不是；與其說……不如說……_____________________寧愿做……而不愿做……_______________________________喜歡做……而不愿做……_______________________________ratherthanwouldratherdo…thando…prefertodo…ratherthando…[學以致用]Kaylawouldratheraddhealthyfoodstohermealsthan______(cut)outthefoodssheenjoyed.Iprefer________(work)outinthegymratherthanplaymobilephoneathome.湯姆喜歡打網(wǎng)球而不是慢跑。(翻譯)與其說邁克爾·喬丹是一名籃球運動員，不如說他是一個傳奇人物。toworkcutTompreferstoplaytennisratherthanjog.MichaelJordanisalivinglegendratherthanabasketballplayer.Thestudents,ratherthantheirteacher,aregoingtohaveapicnicthisweekend.

這個周末學生們要去野餐，而不是他們的老師要去。ratherthan連接兩個名詞或代詞作主語時，謂語動詞應(yīng)與ratherthan前面的名詞或代詞在人稱和數(shù)上保持一致。［拓展知識］Iwouldratherthattheywentwithme.

我倒希望他們和我一起去。I'dratheryouhadn'ttoldmyfatherthetruth.

我真希望你沒有把真相告訴我爸爸。wouldrather后的that從句要用虛擬語氣。表示現(xiàn)在或?qū)淼那闆r，從句用一般過去時；表示過去的情況，從句用過去完成時。stressn.壓力；緊張；重音vt.強調(diào)；重讀；使焦慮不安vi.焦慮不安［熟讀深思］Thingscaneasilygowrongwhenpeopleareunderstress.

人在壓力之下，辦事情就容易出差錯。Oneofthemosteffectivewaystoreducestressistotalkaboutfeelingswithsomeoneyoutrust.緩解壓力最有效的方法之一就是向你信任的人傾訴。[詞匯搭配]在壓力下_________