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老學(xué)員老學(xué)員福寫作簡(jiǎn)單極致美用自己的邏輯對(duì)抗世界的邏輯鐘鐘平微信公眾號(hào)：有道邏輯英助理QQ鐘平老師微博：有道鐘寫寫作簡(jiǎn)單極致美美美簡(jiǎn)單復(fù)雜簡(jiǎn)單復(fù)雜YouwillalwaysbeinmyheartYouYouwere,areandwillbeinmyWeare,Weare,andalwayswillbe,theUnitedStatesofOurOurlivesareInInthisway,ourdreamwillnotbeaquestionof“if“but“when.?要求：1?要求：1，切題（）2思路清?3?4????2，思路清晰BB、原因段（論述原因+邏輯嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?S1：理論，數(shù)據(jù)，倫理三選S1：理論，數(shù)據(jù)，倫理三選1、數(shù)據(jù)類InaccordancewiththemostupdatedstatisticsconductedbyNewsweek（報(bào)紙、大學(xué)、著名雜志）,afamousnewspaperconernedwithpublichealthinAmericasmokingisthebiggestkillertodayforus（廢話插入語）,claimingover3millionlivesayear.22、理論類BasedonthemostwidelyacceptedtheoryconcerningpublichealthandsmokingbyprofessorAlexsandraCoffman(名字必須牛逼),aleadingexpertintheresearchofhealth,smokingiscausinghugedisasterforhumanbeingstoday.3、倫理類Respecting3、倫理類Respectingtheoldwas,isandwillbeacherishedvalueforchinese（過去現(xiàn)在和將來oldoryoung,richor?GayorFindingagoodjobwas,isandwillbeatargetforeverygraduatingMaleorfemale,or2in?加長(zhǎng)版：respectingthe2in?加長(zhǎng)版：respectingtheoldwasisandwillbeacherishedforeverychineseoldoryoungrichorpoor.(?Missgao,ateacherwhotaughtmeenglishwheniwasinafriendwhohelpedmealotwheniwasintrouble;aladywhoalwaysnicetoherstudentsdiednow.（下下策：MissGaoN,n1+從句1；n2+從句2；n3+從句=someone,或物原句，其中n1=n2=n3,或is?Eg：Teamworking,is?Eg：Teamworking,aspiritthatmakesthetaskperfectlydone;apersonalitythatgainyousenceofresponsbility;aqualitythatwinyoucherishedfriendship.Eg：Teamworking,amodelnecessaryforsuccess;amethodthatisusefulforourcareer;abeliefwhichishelpfulforustobeabetterperson,canbeagreatspirit?S2S2：實(shí)踐中，好處和壞處[*]目標(biāo)詞：environment；physicalandmentalhealth；economicdevelopment；publichealth；education；culturalheritage；socialharmony；careerdevelopment.Eg：SmokingEg：SmokingisaPandorabox,causingharmforeveryone,oldoryoung,richorpoor,menorwoman.It Eg： Eg：Smokingwillbringsomanyharms(benefits)inwhichhurtingyourhealth目標(biāo)詞isonlyatipofaniceberg.Eg：Eg：killingsmokingmayseemhardyetitisnothingbutablessinginEgEgSmokingisthelastthingayoungpersonshouldEgEg：Thenegative(positiveeffectthatsmokingmaybringisneverflashinpanbutlong-lastingandfar-reaching.ithelps(hurtsyour目EgEg：Ifayoungpersongetaddictedtosmoking,hewillbetrappedintheshellofhisownmaking.Eg：IfEg：Ifayoungpersonfallsintosmoking,itwillbecometheWaterlooofhislife.Eg：Ifsmokingcannotbecontrolled,abettertomorrowwillbenothingbutUtopia.EgEgWithyearsofsmokingyourphysicalhealthwillbedamaged(被動(dòng)),andwithityourabilitytofocusinstudyAisved,andwithitIfAisved,andwithitIfyoucanfindagoodjob,youreconomicstatuswillbeimproved,andwithityourlivingstandard.??Not,anymore后面一定是肯定??Eg：[否定比喻：a不是b就像c不是d一樣Acollectionoffactscannotbecalledscience,anymorethanapileofbrickscanbecalledahouse.??(2)Moneyisnotimportanttotheyoung,anymorethancombisimportanttothemonk.我無法理解作者的觀點(diǎn) (3)Icannotunderstandyourwords,any (3)Icannotunderstandyourwords,anymorethanthedaycanunderstandthenight.Eg：[肯定比喻：肯定lessthan+肯定?Timeisimportanttotheyoung,nolessthansunshineTeamworkingisnecessarytosuccess,nolessthanpetrolisnecessarytoacar.??S3：舉例：國(guó)家例、名人例、名人例（自編）；盡量使用簡(jiǎn)單句S4：對(duì)例子的虛擬反述（增S4：對(duì)例子的虛擬反述（增加文章豐富性）Eg：[if+過去完成時(shí)?iftheyhadn'tsmokedthatmuch,theywouldn'thavegonetosuchanearlytomb.?Iftheyhadnotpaidattentiontotheenvironmentprotection,thecitywouldnothavebeensoniceS5：?jiǎn)g：somethingneedstobedoneanditisnowornever.+ved，would+現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)Eg：Facingthechallenge（opportunity）of(主題詞）Eg：Facingthechallenge（opportunity）of(主題詞）,itisnotthetimetoaskwhatcanbedoneforyou，butwhatcanbedonebyyou.Agovernmentofpeople,forpeopleandbyEg：[人人為我，我為人人Abettertomorrowissharedbyyetmadebyeach,anditistimetodosomethingButonlyunderstandingthereasonisnottheend,noteventhebeginningoftheend,butpossiblytheendofthebeginning.?第?第一段,描述引出段：描述（=引出+描述）+觀點(diǎn)。（2~3句S1：引出[奧巴馬版]Ifthereisanyonewhostilldoubtsthevalueharm)of(*主題詞);whostillquestionsthepower(damage)of(*),the(picture\topic\table)aboveisyouranswer!?[莎士比亞版[莎士比亞版]To(*)ornotto,thatisaEg：[]To,ornotto,thatisaquestion,aquestionraisedinthepictureandaquestiontobeansweredbyallofusoldoryoungrichorpoor.(加入描述話題細(xì)節(jié)）Myanswertothatquestionissimpleanddefinite:+加觀點(diǎn)句.[專業(yè)版]Basedonthe[專業(yè)版]Basedonthetheoryofbutterflyeffect（蝴蝶效應(yīng)）,atinydefecttodaymayendupwithhugedisasterinfuture,andthisisexactlywhatthepicture（table)isshowingus:(加入描述細(xì)節(jié)).?Itissaidthetheonly4、[網(wǎng)絡(luò)版:最遠(yuǎn)的距離..]Thebiggestdistanceintheworldisbetweentruthandfalse,butwhentruthisbeforeyou,asclearcanseeinthepicture,yetsomefailto[文藝版:顧城]Adarknightgivesusdarkeyes,yetweusethemtosearchforlightasimplepictureshowsasimplestoryyetweuseittosearchfortruthS2：描述S2：描述：用簡(jiǎn)單句，三句以內(nèi)，現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)1?S3：觀點(diǎn)（簡(jiǎn)化）：suchastory(phenomenonpictureistellingus?(3第三段第三段方法（=態(tài)度+方法S1：態(tài)Butitishardlyinevitablethat--?Eg:[大勢(shì)所趨]Althoughthewaytobanningsmokingisfilledwithupsanddowns（充滿困難）thetideisunabletoreturn.（或：thedominoesarestartingtofall）.?Eg:[要有行動(dòng)]Theonlywayforthetriumphofmisledcauseisgoodpeopledonothing.?Eg:[從小事做起]Sometimesinlifewearecalledtodogreatthings,buteverydaywearecalledtodosmallthings,withgreatlove.Eg:[人人為我，我為人人]Abettertomorrowissharedbyall,yetmadebyIfIfyouarelookingforsomeonetoprovidesolutions,lookintotheEg：[言必行，行必果Eg：[言必行，行必果]Itistimetoputthoughtsintowordsandwordsintoaction.?理專家教育公眾、個(gè)人（前面加入人人為我句型）Abettertomorrowissharedbyall,yetrealizedbyeach,soeachperson,oldoryoung,richorpoor,hasthedutytotakepartinto(help,科技管Everyonethinksofchangingtheworld,butfewthinksofchanginghimself,yetanewnationsbeginswithanewneighbor.Eg:[Eg:[政府Thegovernmentisduetoplayapositiverole?Apositiveroleofthegovernmentislongoverdue,to---v-? 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