高二英語短文改錯

短文改錯十大思路一.一致關(guān)系1.Butthenthereisalwaysmoremysteriestolookinto.are2.Theirwordwereagreatencouragementtome.words3.Theydidn’twantmetodoanyworkathome.TheywantmetodevoteallmytimetomystudiessothatI’llgetgoodmarksinallmysubjects.Don’t4.Hesaidheisbusy.was5.IthinkIlikedthoseclassesbecauseIfeltthatithelpedmeunderstandhowtheworldworks.they6.Forexample,whenheboughtachocolatecake,heputtheminasecretplacethatIcouldn’tfind.it二.連接手段1.IthinkIlikedthoseclassesbecauseIfeltthattheyhelpedmeunderstandwhattheworldworks.how2.Itwasaboutnoonwearrivedatthefootofthemountain.^when3.IhavesogreatlyimprovedmyselfinEnglishthatsinceIattendeditforthefirsttime.4.Forexample,whenheboughtachocolatecakeheputitasecretplacewhereIcouldn’tfind.^it三．平行結(jié)構(gòu)1.Asweclimbedthemountain,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.visited2.It’seasiertogodownhillthanclimbuphill.^to3.IlookeduponlytofindmyteacherMrZhang,whowasstandingbesidemeandlookedatmekindly.looking四．非謂語動詞形式1.Butthentherearealwaysmoremysterieslookinto.^to2.Afterlearnthebasicsofthesubject,nothingelseseemedverypracticaltome.learning3.MyparentslovemedearlyofcourseandwilldoalltheycanmakesurethatIgetagoodeducation.^to4.Thatis,agameoftennismakinghimverybusy.made5.StayingwithanEnglishfamilywillprovideyouwithaobancetoPvactiseyourspeakingEnglish.spoken五.刪除冗言1.Likemostofmyschoolmates,Ihaveneitherbrothersnorsisters——inanyotherwords,Iamanonlychild.2.Wemaybeonefamilyandliveunderthesameroof,butwedonotseemtogetmuchtimetotalkabouttogether.3.Forinstance,ononenightheplayedstrongandloudmusictillfouro’clockinthemorning.4.Eveningcamedown.5.ThemainproblemwasinthatIalwaysthoughtinChinese.六.冠詞的使用1.Forexample,whenIwasachild,therainwasamystery.2.Wemaybeonefamilyandliveunderasameroof,butwedonotseemtogetmuchtimetotalktogether.the3.Aseveryoneknows,itisfamousmountainwithallkindsofplantsandanimals.^a七.名詞的數(shù)與格1.Iusedtolovescienceclass—allofthem—biology,chemistry,geography,physics.classes2.Theydon’twantmetodoanyworkathome;theywantmetodevoteallmytimetomystudiessothatI’llgetgoodmarksinallmysubject.subjects八.詞語搭配1.IwassotiredthatIfellasleepatthemomentmyheadtouchedthepillow.2.Myteacheradvisedmetokeepmydiary.a九.詞性分辨1.Heneverhelpedother.others或+people2.Butheisdifferencenow.different十.行文邏輯1.UncleBenwillalsogobackforChristmas.come2.Whatthingsareinotherhomes,IwonderHowBI胎牛血清/xueqing/BI-xueqing.htmlBI胎牛血清wrg63xua胎牛血清是一種性狀、外觀淺黃色澄清、無溶血、無異物稍粘稠液體。胎牛血清應(yīng)取自剖腹產(chǎn)的胎牛；新牛血清取自出生24小時之內(nèi)的新生牛；小牛血清取自出生10－30天的小牛。顯然，胎牛血清是品質(zhì)最高的，因?yàn)樘ヅ＿€未接觸外界，血清中所含的...群散去的差不多了，她依舊在充當(dāng)吃瓜群眾。看著正在相互交涉的買賣雙方，她又湊近了一些。(古風(fēng)一言)劍指山河兵臨城下，不為夙愿，只為守護(hù)你的安然。第076章嫌棄這馬真是可愛，慕容凌娢對馬的了解很少，自然不敢妄下斷言，但等到人群散去的差不多了，她依舊在充當(dāng)吃瓜群眾?？粗谙嗷ソ簧娴馁I賣雙方，她只是更仔細(xì)的觀察著這匹黑馬。正在她肆無忌憚的觀察時，那匹黑馬突然一扭頭，她們一人一馬四目相對，時間仿佛停頓了下來……一切都變得很慢很慢……“噗～”那馬看著慕容凌娢，打了一個響鼻，然后嫌棄的翻了一個白眼，滿滿地都是怨氣搖搖腦袋，甩甩尾巴，便再也不理睬她了。這……這也太尷尬了，慕容凌娢居然會被一只馬嫌棄！簡直是受到了1000點(diǎn)的暴擊！慕容凌娢感覺整個人都不好了，生無可戀啊～“算了算了，還是去別處看看吧?！蹦饺萘鑺位剡^神來，發(fā)現(xiàn)圍觀的人都已經(jīng)走光了。“唉！”那大漢重重的嘆了口氣，摸了摸馬的鬃毛，“如今這般落魄，留著你也是受罪，還不如給你個痛快……”他說著便要解開拴在木樁上的繩子，那黑馬似乎也明白了什么，開始焦躁不安的掙扎，無奈被繩子束縛，再怎么用力拽也無用。這是要?dú)ⅠR的套路?。‘?dāng)慕容凌娢腦子轉(zhuǎn)過來彎時，大漢已經(jīng)準(zhǔn)備把馬遷走了?！暗鹊?！”慕容凌娢攔住了他，大義凌然的擋在黑馬身邊，“這馬我要了?！薄岸畠摄y子，不能再少了！”在醉影樓呆了那么久，慕容凌娢已經(jīng)搞清楚了這個年代的物價，一兩銀子差不多是500RMB，二十兩銀子……大概就是1WRMB。這也太貴了！自己這回出來，總共就帶了四兩銀子，可是這馬，要是沒人要，就要慘死在街頭了……怎么辦？這個年代又沒有動物保護(hù)協(xié)會這樣的組織，她實(shí)在不想看見這只馬就這樣死掉……“我……”情急之下，慕容凌娢摸到了自己掛在脖子上的那塊血玉，就是穿越時拿著的那塊。“我用這塊玉來換可以嗎？”“這是……”大漢接過慕容凌娢的玉，擺弄了幾下，又丟了回來，“我又不知道這東西是真是假，萬一你給我個假的，我不就虧大了嗎！”“這個絕對是真的！”慕容凌娢著急著想解釋，可是那大漢始終不為所動?！岸畠摄y子是嗎？”“韓哲軒！”慕容凌娢驚喜的回過