應(yīng)用文寫作練習(xí)講義-高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

應(yīng)用文寫作報告考生作弊題目假定你是李華，在外教課期末考試中發(fā)現(xiàn)有人作弊，你認(rèn)為這會影響考試公平。請你給外教John寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.情況描述；2.你的看法；3.你的請求。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。寫作解析這是一篇具有相當(dāng)難度的應(yīng)用文寫作任務(wù)，緊扣人與自我的話題語境，突出誠信做人和公平處事的價值觀。如果要比較全面準(zhǔn)確地把握出題者的意圖和要求（含詞數(shù)），考生在寫作這篇文章時，既要考慮到記敘文的特點（描述學(xué)生舞弊的情況，不能只簡單提及“有人”舞弊而沒有更細(xì)的介紹，不足以讓外教信服），又要考慮往議論文方向靠攏（對舞弊一事的看法不能只簡單地說它造成對考生的不公平，還可以拓展一點，如舞弊導(dǎo)致其它學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)積極性受挫，同時對老師也是一種不尊重等），還要考慮第三點：提出你的請求，并注意語氣使用（此請求不完全等同于向?qū)Ψ綄懡ㄗh，考生可以做到點到即止，具體該怎么處理，外教應(yīng)該自有分寸）。常見問題通過評分考場作文，大多數(shù)學(xué)生不能合理處理該信件提出的內(nèi)容三提示要點。有的考生受思維定式束縛忽視了第一個提示要點（情況描述），而把重點落在表達(dá)看法或發(fā)表議論。還有的考生連建議的點也抓得不準(zhǔn)，例如有的考生提到"建議外教加強(qiáng)紀(jì)律教育，考場應(yīng)安裝監(jiān)視器等、監(jiān)考老師需要加強(qiáng)監(jiān)考之類“。此篇文章在遣詞造句時要注意語言對象是自己的外教，在完成寫作要點二時，考生要嘗試高度概括自己的觀點。不提倡用過多篇幅去表達(dá)對舞弊的看法，畢竟外教也明白其中的危害。還有一點，就是寫信給外教時，要注意書信的基本禮儀，如開頭的問候，簡要介紹自己身份，還有期待回復(fù)等等。參考答案DearJohn,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.I'mLiHua,oneofyourstudents,andIamwritingtoreportanincidentofcheatingthatIwitnessedduringthefinalexam.Regrettably,Inoticedseveralstudentsengageindishonestbehaviorduringtheexam,suchasexchanginganswersandusingelectronicdevices.Inmyopinion,thesecheatingbehaviorhasthepotentialtoimpacttheoverallfairnessoftheexam.Therefore,Ikindlyrequestthatyoulookintothismatterandreconsiderthescoresalreadygiven.Thankyouforyourattentiontothismatter.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.(91)Yours,LiHua下水文DearJohn,How’severythinggoing?I’mLiHua,oneofyourstudents.Ihatetobuthavetotellyousomethingserioussomeofyourstudentscheatedintheexamination.Whentheexaminationwasgoingon,theytookoutthenotestheyhadpreviouslytakenintotheclassroomandcopiedsomethingontotheanswersheets.Ididn’treportitimmediatelysinceIdidn’twanttobelabeledasaninformer.ButIdon’twishthemtogounpunishedbecausethisshamefulconductleadstounfairnessoftheexamandaffectsthelearningatmosphere.Iwonderifyoucanreexaminethemaftergivingthemawarning.Yourearlyreplyishighlyexpected.(108)Yours,LiHua范文DearJohn,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.I'mLiHua,oneofyourstudents,andIamwritingtoreportanincidentofcheatingthatIwitnessedduringthefinalexam.Regrettably,Inoticedseveralstudentsengageindishonestbehaviorduringtheexam,suchasexchanginganswersandusingelectronicdevices.Inmyopinion,thesecheatingbehaviorhasthepotentialtoimpacttheoverallfairnessoftheexam.Therefore,Ikindlyrequestthatyoulookintothismatterandreconsiderthescoresalreadygiven.Thankyouforyourattentiontothismatter.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.(96w)Yours,LiHua下水文：119DearJohn,I’mLiHua,astudentofyourclass.I’mwritingtoreportthecheatingcaseintheendoftermexamination.Eithernotwellpreparedfortheexamornotwantingtolettheirparentsdown,someclassmatestooktheexamdishonestly,somecopyinganswersfromotherswhiletheteacherwasnotlookingandsomereferringtotheelectronicdevicesforhelp.Theseagainsttherulebehaviorsareachallengeagainstthefairnessofexamsandablowtootherstudents’

constantefforts.Ifnottreated/addressed,itwillencouragefurthermisconduct.So,Istronglyrequestthatinvestigationshouldbecarriedoutandthescoresshouldbereconsideredifthecheatingisconfirmed.Thanksforyourtimeandattention.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua范文：97DearJohn,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.I'mLi

Hua,oneofyourstudents,andIamwritingtoreportanincidentofcheatingthatIwitnessedduringthefinalexam.Regrettably,Inoticedseveralstudentsengageindishonestbehaviorduringtheexam,

suchasexchanginganswersandusingelectronicdevices.Inmyopinion,thesecheatingbehaviorhasthepotentialtoimpacttheoverallfairnessoftheexam.Therefore,Ikindlyrequestthatyoulookintothismatterandreconsiderthescoresalreadygiven.Thankyouforyourattentiontothismatter.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua安慰信試題呈現(xiàn)：假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Jim因為在上周的漢字聽寫比賽中成績不理想而心情沮喪，請你用英語給他寫一封信表示安慰，要點如下：1.表達(dá)安慰;2.提供幫助;3.給予鼓勵。參考詞匯：漢字聽寫比賽

ChineseCharacterDictationpetition注意：1.

寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.

請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。下水文：124DearJim,Sadtolearnthatyouarefrustrated/downheartedatyourfailuretodoagoodjobinlastweek’sChineseCharacterDictationpetition,IcanwellrelatetohowyoufeelandwouldliketosharesomeofmyideasaboutlearningChinesecharacters.LearningChinesecharacterscanbeatoughchallengeforforeignerslikeyouanditdoestakemoretimeanddevotion.SomeknowledgeofthestrokescancontributetoyourrememberingChinesecharactersandwhattheymean.Also,oftenwatchorlistentoChineseprogrammes,whichplaysanequallyimportantpartinyourlearning.Ofcourse,Iwillbealwaysthereforyouwheneverneeded.Ibelievewithyoureffortsinvestedandpracticalapproachesadopted,youwillsoonmakedesiredprogress.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua參考范文：110DearJim,Sorrytohearthatyoudidn’tperformwellintheChineseCharacterDictationpetition.I'mheretoofferfortandencouragementduringthischallengingtime.Firstly,asaforeigner,you'vealreadytriedyourbest,andit'spletelynormaltofeeldisappointed.Frommyperspective,itseemsliketheremightbeaneedformorepreparations.Perhapsdedicatingmoretimetopracticeandreviewingtoughcharacterscouldmakeasignifican