（新課標）高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí) 專項技法10 應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信課件 外研版

技法10應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信

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建議信是寫信人向收信人對某事提出的建議和忠告。建議信可能是寫給個人，也可能是寫給某個組織或機構(gòu)。信的內(nèi)容要包括寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由。建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。具體寫作步驟一般是“三段式〞，通常以firstly,secondly,thirdly或tobegin/startwith,then,later,lastbutnotleast等依次陳述建議，具體為：返回目錄技法10應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信第一段：說明寫作意圖。陳述事由，簡單介紹自己，注意語氣。第二段：應(yīng)該首先肯定對方的優(yōu)點，然后再寫需要改進的地方或針對具體情況提出具體的建議或忠告。注意千萬不要讓別人以為你是在投訴，而不是提建議。第三段：對提出的建議進行總結(jié)。要注意有禮貌，使讀者容易接受。返回目錄技法10應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信

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1．段首常用語：(1)Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…(2)Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout…andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.2．表達“建議〞常用語：(1)Ithinkthemostsuitable…foryouis…(2)Iwouldliketosuggestthat…(3)You'dbetter…/It'sbetterto…(4)AsfarasIamconcerned…/Inmyopinion…返回目錄技法10應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信(5)Foronething…，foranother…(6)IfIwereyou,Iwould…(7)Itseemstomethatyoucould…3．段尾常用語：(1)Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…(2)Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/con－sideration.(3)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.返回目錄技法10應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信(4)Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.(5)Iwillbereadyforfurtherdiscussingthismatterintodetails.4．建議信格式模板：Dear________，Iam________．Yourcollectionofsuggestionson________is________.Asisknowntoall,________.Mysuggestionsareasfollows：First,________．(Peoplecan________．)Second，________.(Tomakeeconomicprofits,________．)返回目錄技法10應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信Third,________．(Asmanyofthem________．)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouintofurtherdetails.(Or:Yourkindconsiderationofmysuggestionswillbehighlyappreciated.)Goodluckwithyour________．(祝愿)Yourssincerely，LiMing返回目錄【活學(xué)活用】在緊張的高三備考階段，英語老師為了提高復(fù)習(xí)效率，廣泛征求學(xué)生意見。假設(shè)你叫張華，請根據(jù)以下提示，給英語老師寫封信，表達你們的需求和建議。?適當(dāng)放慢進度，留出思考時間?反復(fù)訓(xùn)練重要、易錯知識點?指導(dǎo)方法?減少作業(yè)量以保證質(zhì)量?給予更多鼓勵返回目錄技法10應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信注意：1.根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫；2．要準確使用語法和詞匯且使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達自己的意思；3．詞數(shù)：120～150。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearMrWang,We'resopleasedthatyouarewillingtoshareourviews.Inthecourseofthegeneralrevision,whatweneedissolidfoundation.__________________________________

返回目錄技法10應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信[解析]

Onepossibleversion：DearMrWang,

We'resopleasedthatyouarewillingtoshareourviews.Inthecourseofthegeneralrevision,whatweneedissolidfoundation.Asyouknow,wedidn'tlearnwellenoughinthefirsttwoyears,sopleaseslowdownandmakesurewehavereallymasteredsomething.Besides,weneedalittlemoretimetothinkforourselves.Asforthoseimportantpointswhichalsomakeusconfused,wouldyoupleasegiveusmorepracticeincaseweforget?返回目錄技法10應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信Meanwhile,weneedyourinstructions,forexample,inhowtowriteinnaturalEnglish.Istillhaveanotherrequest:assignuslesshomeworkinorderthatwecandoitmoreefficiently.Bytheway,weoftenfeelfrustrated,whichhasaverybadeffectonourstudy.Wewouldappreciateitifyouwouldgiveussomeencouragementfromtimetotime.Yours，ZhangHua返回目錄技法10應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信路漫漫其修道遠，吾將上下而求索。——屈原讀不在三更五鼓，功只怕一曝十寒。——郭沫假設(shè)學(xué)習(xí)必須與實干相結(jié)合。——泰